FF:Romeo and Juliet Pg12 P12 Updated 18/1

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I am back with a third FF:ROMEO AND JULIET
FAMILIES
V.poor family
1.Little Ranbir-A young boy. He is very sweet and nice. Age-6 years.
2.Mallika-Ranbir's mom. Doesn't believe in religions interacting. She is very orthodox and believes only in the Hindu religion.
3.Anoop- Ranbir's father. He is a street hawker who sells apples. The stay in a shed outside the rich McDell Enclave.
McDell Family- Super rich
1.Little Kanya McDell- She is super rich. Loves apples. She is a girl with a golden heart. She has no problems with the poor. As long as they are around her age everything is okay for little Kanya. Age- 5yrs.
2.Rosa McDell-Kanya's mother. Kanya is actually Rosa's adopted daughter. Rosa loves Kanya with every fibre of her living.
3.Jeffrey McDell- An Italian man who fell in love with an Indian lady Rosa. They adopted Kanya who was parentless.
BASIC PLOT OF THE FF:
My 3rd FF:Romeo and Juliet is about two kids Ranbir and Kanya who fall in love with each other. Since little Ranbir's mom dusn't believ in different religions comin together she dusnt allow the lovers to meet. And ofcourse Kanya's father is super rich and cudnt bear to c his darling daughter falling in love with a street hawker. So the young lovers are separated. So will the lovers meet again?
Please lemme noe whether I shud continue or not.
Hope u had a happy reading.
Nidheya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kids in luv
so cute
contnue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww kids in luv r soo cute!
gro plot
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Actually I am thinking of killer opening to the unique plot. But maybe by friday I'll have put up a nice cute intro part 1.
Nidheya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i'll put up the first part by friday...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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FF: Romeo and Juliet

Part 1:

Kanya- Papa please buy some apples for me na.

Jeffrey- Sweetheart I'll definitely buy some for you but not now.

Kanya- Papa pleasee. I love apples. Don't you know that?

Jeffrey- Kanya I told you I'll buy some for you. Now please don't irritate me. Go down and play in the park. Go sweetums!

Kanya- Ok papa. I know that you don't love me.

Jeffrey- Of course I love you baby but now no apples. I'll buy you some for you by Sunday.

Kanya- Okay papa. I'll go and play down. Bbye.

Jeffrey- Bbye sweetie.

Kanya is a 5yr old Indian girl born to Indian parents. But since she was orphaned a couple consisting of Italian Jeffrey and Indian Rosa adopted Kanya. Kanya was a beautiful girl with curl long hair. She was presently wearing a cute white dress. She runs down and meets her mother Rosa in the hall.

Kanya- Mama. (She leaps onto Rosa's lap)

Rosa- Hello Kanya baby. What are you doing?

Kanya- See na mama papa isn't buying me apples.

Rosa- I'll tell him to buy apples darling. Not to worry.

Kanya- Thank you mama. You are the best!!!!!

Rosa- Thanx darling!!

Kanya- Okay mama. I'll go and play in our park now. Okay?

Rosa- Sure baby.

Kanya runs down and goes to her park. Jeffrey McDell was a super rich man. They were staying in a big mansion which had a swimming pool, park and all. Kanya goes to the park. She loves playing on the slide and starts playing.

Kanya- I love playing on the slide. It is so much fun and it is so thrilling the way we go weeeeeeeeeeeee down the slide. I so love it.

Kanya- Weeeeeee Weeeeeee all the way I go. Papa and Mama must love me so much. There are so many slides in my park. I also love them a lot!!!

A voice- Seb! Taaze Taaze seb!!! Fresh fresh apples!!! C'mon buy them. Sabse acche prices mein.

Kanya- Apples! Wow! Koi apples bhej raha hain. If I ask mama and papa to give me the money they'll refuse. I think I'll buy apples with my own pocket money itself.

She rushes inside and goes into her room and takes Rs.50 from her pocket money and runs down and goes near the gate. A beautiful sight met her eyes there. There was a boy standing near a cartload of tasty apples. The boy was wearing a dirty shorts and a torn top. He was a little cute boy. He is Ranbir our hero.

Kanya- How much for 10 apples?

Ranbir- Kya?

Kanya- Dus apples ke liye kitna hoga daam?

Ranbir- Phipty rupees. (Fifty)

Kanya- Kya? Fifty?

Ranbir- Haan.

Kanya- Yeh lo fifty rupees. Ab mujhe sabse tasty dus apples do.

Ranbir- Saare apples bahut hi tasty hain.

Kanya- Ok. To mujhe dus apples dona.

Ranbir- Yeh lo. Jee bhar ke khao.

Kanya (taking a bite from an apple)- Wow! It is really tasty. Tum yahaan roz apples bhjete ho kya?

Ranbir- Ha memsaab. Aap yahaan rehti ho kya?

Kanya- Haan. Meri naam Kanya McDell hain. Tumhara naam kya hain?

Ranbir- Ranbir.

Kanya- Koi surname nahin hain kya?

Ranbir- Matlab?

Kanya- Jaise mere naam Kanya ke baad McDell hain. Tumhare naam ke baad kya hain?

Ranbir- Nahin hain. Sirf Ranbir hi hain.

Kanya- Okay Ranbir. Tum aaj shaam saade paanch bhaje ghatr aajao. Tab mama-papa ghar pe nahin honge. To hum dono park mein our swimming pool mein khel sakenege.

Ranbir- Shukriya memesaab. Hum koshish karenege.

Kanya- No koshish. You have to come. Mujhe Kanya bulaao. Not memsaab!!

Ranbir- Theek hain Kanya ji.

Kanya- Ab mein chalti hoon. Bbye.

Ranbir- Tata! Shaam ko milte hain!!!

Kanya runs inside her room and puts the apples in her personal refrigerator. She starts deciding what to wear in the evening when he new friend Ranbir will be coming to meet her.

Thats all for now guys...

Will post the next part as soon as poosible...probably by sunday!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2:

The part opens at Kanya's house. One month has passed since Kanya and Ranbir first met. Kanya has already fallen in love with Ranbir and so has Ranbir. Kanya's parents are not at home so they(Ran-Kan) plan to meet secretly. The bell rings and Kanya rushes to open the door.

Kanya- Ranbir!!! Na jaane mein tumhara intazaar kabse kar rahi hoon.

Ranbir- Sarry Kanya ji. Mein aap ke liye taazi seb apples le rahi thi.

Kanya- So sweet darling.

Ranbir- Kanya ji mein appse bahut pyaar karti hoon.

Kanya- I too love you Ranbir. Chalo baahar khelte hain!!!

Ranbir- Chaliye ji!!!

They both go outside and start playing.

Ranbir- Kanya ji aao. Hum jhoole pe khelte hain.

Kanya- Yes Ranbir!!!

Ranbir- Pehle mein baitthoongi phir aap mere oopar.

Kanya- How romantic!!!

Ranbir- Matlab??

Kanya- Kuchh nahin!!

She sits on his lap and they start swinging together. Kanya turns back and gives Ranbir a kiss on his cheek. This makes him lose his concentration and both of them fall back. Kanya falls onto him and they start rolling. Finally they gain balance and gets up!!!

Kanya- Chalo lets go onto the slide. I'll go up and come sliding and you will catch me okay?

Ranbir- Jee.

Kanya- C'mon let's go.

ON THE SLIDE.

Kanya- Ranbir mein a rahi hoon. Mujhe tum khas ke pakadna okay? Girana nahin.

Ranbir- Khud gir jaoonga par aapko kabhi nahin giraaongi!!

Wheeeeeeeee

Kanya falls right into Ranbir's hands and he holds her. She hugs him tightly and he also hugs her back tightly.

Kanya- I love you.

Ranbir- I also love you.

Saying this they hug tighter with full passion!!!!!

Kanya- Let's go to the swimming pool!!!

Ranbir- Achhi idea!!

They run into the pool and jumps in. They have loads of fun by splashing water at each other and all!!! They are having the ball of their lives.

Kanya- Ranbir jab hum dono bade ho jayenge na humari ghar mein bhi ek aisi hi swimming pool banayenge.

Ranbir- Par mere paas itni paisa kahaan se aayega ji?

Kanya- I will ask daddy!!

Ranbir- Good idea!!.

Kanya runs over to him and hugs him passionately. She then cups his face in her hands and is about to kiss him on the lips when-

Jeffrey- KANYA McDELL!!!! What the heck do you think you are doing? Who the heck is that???

Rosa- Kanya??

Kanya lets go of Ranbir quickly and grabs his hand and they come out of the pool.

Kanya- Papa he is Ranbir my friend.

Jeffrey- You don't smooch your friends.

Kanya- I love him papa.

Jeffrey- Isn't he the guy who sells apples?

Kanya- Yes.

Jeffrey- Don't you have any sense you kid? Can't you think about your father's status before falling in love with a street hawker?????

Kanya- Love is blind papa.

Jeffrey- Don't you dare try to teach me what love is!!!!

Kanya- Papa please I love Ranbir.

Jeffrey- SECURITY!! Come here and throw this filthy creature from here.

Kanya- He isn't a filthy creature.

Jeffrey- You just shut up you......Come with me. I'm going to punish you for what you did.

Kanya- Papa please don't throw Ranbir away. I can't live without him.

Jeffrey- Then don't live damn it.

The security guards come and take Ranbir away. He looks back at Kanya sadly.

Kanya (shouting)- Ranbir I love you and always will!

Ranbir- I love you too Kanya ji.

Jeffrey- Shut up and come with me you kid.

Kanya- Papa please.

Jeffrey takes Kanya away into the empty ground. He goes inside and comes out with a tin of petrol and pours it over Kanya.

Kanya- What are you doing Papa?

Jeffrey- Burning you you fool!!!!

Kanya- But Papa I love you please don't do this.

Jeffrey- If you loved me you wouldn't insult me.

Kanya- I didn't insult you Papa.

Jeffrey- Shut up.

Jeffrey lights a match stick and starts coming over near Kanya. She starts sobbing uncontrollably and cries out for help.

Kanya- Help!! Somebody help me!! Ranbir save me, your Kanya ji. Please.

Jeffrey- You still can't stop thinking of that rat can you?

Suddenly Rosa comes running.

Rosa- No Jeffrey! Don't do that to our baby. She's just a kid.

Jeffrey- Rosa let go of me.

Rosa- Listen you will be doing harm like this. We will think of something and will make our baby forget that guy.

Jeffrey- Are you sure Rosa?

Rosa- Yes Jeff! Please don't harm Kanya. Kanya baby go inside and have a bath. After that you come down to the hall and we will tell you our decision.

Kanya- Thank you mama.

Saying this Kanya runs inside her house and inside her room. There she has a bath and comes down to meet her parents. She wonders what they have to say.

Rosa- Come here baby.

Kanya- No.

Jeffrey- Listen Kanya your mother and I've decided to move to Italy for some time.

Kanya- Why?

Rosa- So that you'll forget that guy.

Kanya- Mom I'll never forget my Ranbir.

Jeffrey- Your Ranbir my foot!!

Rosa- Jeff don't get angry. Baby we are going to Italy tomorrow itself.

Kanya- Mama but.

Jeffrey- Not buts. Go inside.

Kanya- Okay Papa.

Kanya goes inside and her room. Her parents make more plans about their migration to Italy.

END OF PART 2.

NIDHEYA
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really cute😳 but i hate her father for separating them
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aww tht was so cute
i hate kanya's father!!
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3:

This part is only about Kanya's flight to Italy. She is in the flight and is sitting between her parents. She is sobbing quietly.

Jeffrey- Rosa I'm so happy to go to Italy. Mom-Dad are waiting for our arrival. We will be staying with them.

Rosa- Oh no!!

Jeffrey- What?

Rosa- You know darling that your parents are always bossing me around.

Jeffrey- Rosa sweets I know everything. They are waiting to see Kanya. Baby why are you crying?

Rosa- I aint crying.

Jeffrey- Not you sweets our baby is crying.

Rosa- Kanya kya hua?

Kanya- Nothing mama.

Jeffrey- Tell us baby why r u crying?

Rosa- Yes Kanya dear tell us. We love you.

Kanya- If you love me you woudnt try to burn me alive just for falling in love.

Jeffrey- Don't you dare bring that up Kanya.

Kanya- I love Ranbir. I'm missing him a lot mumsie!

Rosa- Beta chill! This is just a small crush. You'll surely get over it.

Kanya- I wont mama. I have loved Ranbir more than I've ever loved you both.

Jeffrey- I'm disgusted with you.

Kanya- I don't care. But I know that if my love for Ranbir and his love for me is true even you cant separate us.

Rosa- Kanya please.

Kanya- What please mumsie? What please? I love Ranbir from the bottom of my heart and I always will.

Jeffrey- I cant believe that you are fighting with us just for a wretched creature!!!

Kanya- How dare you insult my Ranbir????? Papa please if you don't have anything nice to say about him you don't say anything. That's better.

Jeffrey- You insolent brat.

Kanya- Yes I'm an insolent brat. I don't care what you call me. I love Ranbir and that's all.

Rosa- Baby understand your parents. They know whats good for you and what is not.

Kanya- You don't anything mama.

Jeffrey- You'll get a better guy. When you reach your teens you will have guys who are rich and handsome swarming over you darling. After all you are a beautiful girl.

Kanya- I only want Ranbir.

Rosa- Now dear. Don't get so difficult.

Kanya- Whatever you say I'll still love Ranbir. Bye. I'm feeling sleepy. Let me sleep.

Jeffrey and Rosa- Okay baby.

Kanya goes off to sleep. She has a wonderful dream. The following is the dream-

Kanya is sitting in her garden and playing with the flowers when Ranbir comes there and gives her a bunch of apples. She is very happy to see Ranbir and kisses him right on the lips. He says- Kanya ji I love you. Then---

Kanya- Ranbir I love you too.

Jeffrey- Is she talking in her sleep?

Rosa- I think so. Let her be. Don't disturb her darling.

Jeffrey- Okay. Lets also sleep.

Rosa- You are right.

Saying so Rosa and Jeffrey also go to sleep. I dunno what they r dreaming abt though.

END OF PART 3:

If you guys want me to pm you when I update the FF pls mention-

@nidheya I want an update PM

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