The Prince & His Kohinoor.P26,04/03/10,Pg-61

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THE PRINCE & HIS KOHINOOR

Brig. Chandok,Captain Dr. Shalini Singhal,Subedar Surindar Suri...yeh log pahle se hi the...

Ab hui hai KMA me ferbadal...3 Officers ne faculty ka charge samhala hai..

Major Vaibhavi Sharma,Captain Gunraj Singh Randhawa and Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan.

KMA me aaye hain 2 aur log...Special duty aur Specified Training k lia..

Major General R.S. Gaur jo ab KMA k Commanding Officer hain..aur hai Team Commander Shlok Burman.

Burman ko Commando Training Centre se specially bulaya gaya hai KMA k Cadets k lia..


aur aai hain ek nai Member...Shona Das..Psychoanalyst in Indian Army.

jin Cadets par sab ki nazar hai..woh yeh log hain..

Cadet Vidya Saxena--An Ordinary Girl..from Sangrampura..she is finding the reason of death of her fiance.

Cadet Purvi Bisht--Ex--Supermodel

Cadet Akriti Bhatt--Stunt Woman...bas itna hi pata hai..baaki iske Parents kaun hain..koi nahi jaanta.

Cadet Sameera Shroff--Daughter of a Heavy weight Minister

Cadet Peter Sabnis--Son of Maj. Gen. Sabnis

Cadet Rummy Gaur -Son of Maj.Gen Gaur

Cadet Markand Mallah.--Son of a Surrendered Decoit Maakhan Mallah.


another invisible character EAGLE..the main curlprit..Major Sharma,Captain Chauhan and Captain Randhawa ..they have a Mission to Expose EAGLE.

Shona Das is their suspect.

and Captain Chauhan is hitting her constantly...

but when Akriti had come in KMA. in earlier days..she snatched all the attention of Captain Chauhan..

but after the entry of Shona Das..Chauhan has gone totally for Shona.

so the story begins...



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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeh raha intro..agar log isko pasand kare..toh 28th July ko isko start kia jaayega...this is a fic..about Abhimanyu and Akriti.😉
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Very nice.
I like it.
Plz continu.👍🏼
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& Title of fic is also too nice.😎
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hey thz also gud,plz contn,

simply super,


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gr8 goin..............i'm waiting for dis to start........
as u say abhi-akriti r tickhi mirchi
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achha laga..replies dekh kar....bas..Monday ko hi start hogi yeh fic...
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PART 1




BC--Captain Chauhan..aapne promise kia tha..k aap Cadet Bhatt ko sahi raah par laayenge..and I must say..you have done very well..Akriti ka gussa kaafi kum ho gaya hai..and she is doing well in the drills.


Captain Gunraj Singh Randhawa urf Gunny,jo Abhimanyu k paas hi baitha tha,usne Abhi ko elbow se hit kia meaningfully.

ARC--thank you Sir...abhi humare lia aur kyaa Orders hain?

BC--Eagle...koi clue mila?aap dono ko?

Gunny--We are working on this case..Major Sharma humari incharge hain..we will work it out..

BC--ok..the meeting is over now.

BC k Office s nikal kar Capt. Chauhan aur Capt. Randhawa corridore se guzar rahe the..

Gunny--kyaa baat hai Chauhan..aap ka dhyaan Cadet Bhatt se hat kar Shona Das par kaise gaya?

ARC--well..Akriti Bhatt is my student...jaisa aap soch rahe hain ..waisa kuchh bhi nahi...

Gunny--toh Cadet Bhatt ko Salwar Kameez gift karna..usko dance sikhane ki koshish karna..woh sab kyaa tha?


ARC--kyaa bakwas kar rahe hain aap?

Gunny--meri aankhe charo taraf dekhti hai..


ARC--humare dil me aisa kuchh bhi nahi hai..Cadet Bhatt k lia..hum teacher hain..woh student ..that is all...

Gunny--haa..ab toh Shona aai hai..but Cadet is a better option than Eagle..ishque ladane k lia..

ARC--Shona Eagle hai..is baat ko abhi tak saabit nahi kia hain humne Captain Randhawa..

Gunny--oohh..aap safe side me khel rahe hain..hmm..agar Shona Das innocent nikli..toh aap unhike saath..aur agar kahi woh hi Eagle nikli..toh Cadet Bhatt ko fir se chase karenge aap?

ARC--you have a big misconception..about me..

Gunny--time will say..anyways..aapki beloved Shona Das aa rahi hai...main chala..
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ARC--haa...Cadet Vidya bhi toh library ki taraf hi gai hai na... jaaiye ..aap bhi kuchh padhai kijiye..Lovelogy..


Gunny ko gussa aya..par kuchh nahi kar sakta woh..kyonki pahle usne shuru kia tha pinch karna...

Gunny chala aya Major Sharma ki Office ki taraf...

udhar se vakei me Shona Das aa rahi thi....

Chauhan usiki taraf gaya...


ARC--hii..

Shona--hey doll....what is going on?

ARC--nothing special...par agar aap chaahe toh special ban sakta hai..aaj shaam ko Ambala k town hall me Magic Show hone wala hai..chalna chaahengi aap?

Shona--I wish I could make it..yaa..I will make it..

ARC--ok..today..1700 hrs..sharp..on the main gate..

Shona--yaa..

Shona chali gai apne class ki taraf....Shona ko second year k Cadets k class lene the...

1st year k Cadets k ek batch ko drill ground me bulaya gaya hai...1 baje..

Gunny gaya Major Sharma ki Office me...latest progress reports dikhane..


Sharma--hmm..but Captain Randhawa...Shona Das ko expose karne k lia yeh proofs kaafi nahi..sirf ek signal k basis par toh bilkul bhi nahi..

Gunny--I understand..par yeh kaafi sabut hai..jinko dikha kar Shona Das par aur pehra hum laga sake..

Sharma--yes..yeh ho sakta hai..Maj.Gen. Gaur inkaar nahi kar sakte is baat se..ok..you please carry on...aur haa..1300 hrs par drill ground par aap aur Captain Chauhan aa jaiyega..

Gunny--us waqt toh humara class nahi hain...

Sharma--Burman ka circus dekhna hain hum sab ko...


Gunny muskuraya..yeh Burman aur Sharma k bich ki takraar ko woh aur Abhimanyu kaafi enjoy karta hai..aur saare Cadets bhi.

udhar Canteen me..1200 hrs par..

Vidya,Akriti,Sameera,Purvi,Mallah,Peter aur Rummy..sab log jama hue..lunch k lia..

par aaj unko light diet dia jaayega..1300 hrs ko unhika special drill hai...Burman Commander hoga is drill ka..

Maj. Gen. Gaur bhi honge ground par..


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Mallah--heeyy Bajrangbali..raksha karna us rakshas Burman se..pata nahi ab woh kyaa karega..

Rummy--Mallah..yeh Card select kar..main bata sakta hoon..k aaj teri band bajegi yaa nahi..

Mallah--Rummy bhaiya..tum toh chup hi raho...yeha sab ki jaan jaa rahi hai..aur tumko mazaak sujh rahi hai?


Peter--well Mallah dude..mujhko aisa lagta hai..aaj Burman humko Sword Fighting ..what you call it..haa..Talwarbaazi sikhayega..

Mallah--Talwar toh humare Baba bhi achha chala lete hain... humko bhi thoda thoda ata hai..

Sameera--Ohh..my god..Sword fighting..main jab Spain ghumne gai thi..tab maine dekha tha Spanish Sword Fighting...woh thin shape k jo swords hote hai na..wahi..


Purvi--well..I don't think ..k usi type ka sword hoga...

Vidya--Vidya ko bhi yehi lagta hai..k Indian Sword hi use ki jaayega..bhaari wala...

Akriti chup chaap baithi thi...uske dimag me kuchh aur hi baatein chal rahi hai..jo woh kisi se nahi keh paati...

kuchh aisa uske dimaag me chal raha hai...agar baat saamne aa gai..toh hungama khada ho sakta hai...



Peter--Akriti..tum kis what you call it..aa..kin khayalon me khoi hui ho?

Akriti--kuchh nahi..


Mallah--Akritijee..aapko darr nahi lag raha hai?


Akriti--chal..pahle set par pahuche..fir scene samajh lete hai.. ho sakta Cadets k badle me kisi faculty member ko hi scene ki shooting karni pade...

Purvi--well..Rummy ko toh main moral support karungi hi... Mallah..hope Akriti tumko support kare...

Akriti--fir se tumhari bakwas shuru?tumhare dimag me humesha aisi Bhojpuri film k ideas hi aate hai kya?

Sameera--please..ab ladna bandh karo...

Vidya--Vidya ko yeh lagta hai..k SD ko bhi bulaya jaayega..

Akriti--kaun sa bakwas karne ko bula rahe hai usko... khamokha me KMA ki rotian tod rahi hai kameeni..

Vidya--come on Akriti...

Purvi--haa..Akriti toh jalegi hi..akhir kaar Captain Chauhan aajkal SD k pichhe jo bhaag rahe hai..

Akriti ka man kia k woh zor se Purvi ko punch maare..par usne apne gusse par kaabu kia..

shuru me is gusse ko dikha kar socha tha..k usko jaldi hi KMA se baahar nikaal dia jaayega..aur fir woh azad ho jaayegi..par Abhimanyu ne usi zimmedari li..k woh uske nature ko change karega...varna Akriti bahut pahle hi is bakwas KMA se baahar chali jaati..dugni saza kaat rahi hai woh KMA me..uski azadi chheen gai hai..

upar se aise log hai is KMA me..jinko dekh kar dimag jal jata hai Akriti ka...

ek hai Vidya..apna naam khud hi japti rehti hai..aur Captain Randhawa ko ishare karti rehti hai..

Purvi Bisht..the make up box..jiska top floor khaali hai..aur Sameera..Minister Shroff ki Barbie Doll..Cadet Sabnis...ullu ki doom..aur Cadet Gaur..Maj. Gen. Gaur ka useless beta..aur Cadet Mallah...uff..agar Bajrangbali prakat ho paate to aakar Mallah ko kum se kum 10 jute maarte..pakka idiot hai..

Team Commander Burman..aur ek dharti par bojh...Major Sharma..ufff..Crystal..Crystal kar k..dimaag khaa jati hai..aur Maj.Gen. Gaur...orders dene k ilava..aur khaas kuchh to karte nahi hai....Brig. Chandok...uske saath toh pahle hi din se..

bache 4 log aur..Captain Dr. Singhal..aur Subedar Suri..thik hai....

Captain Randhawa bhi itna bura nahi hai..Vidya ko like karte hain...


par Captain Chauhan..yaar,admi itna bhi tharki ho sakta hai.. Akriti ko Chauhan ko dekh kar pata chalta hai...aur din raat 'hum..hum' karta rehta hai...dhaatt..Indian Army ko ho kyaa gaya hai?


udhar SD ki baatein bhi abhi tak kaano me gunj rahi hai...

SD ka yeh kehna hai..k Akriti ko Indian Army se koi lena dena nahi..usko Officer ban k Free Incentives aur Allownces k maze uthane hai..aur Handsome and Dashing Officers ki company se matlab hai..

yeh baatein sun kar..zaahir hai..Akriti ka man me yeh ichha nahi jaagi k SD ko kiss kare woh...uska man kia SD ka sar fodh dene ka..par..faculty member jo hai..


"Akriti..Akriti..."

Akriti ne chauk kar dekha...Vidya usko bula rahi thi..

Akriti--haa..bata..

Vidya--Vidya ko aisa lagta hai..k tumhe koi baat sata rahi hai..

Akriti--haa..sata rahi hai..yaar tu din me kitni baar apna naam japti hai?

Vidya--yeh Vidya ki aadat hai..

Akriti--uff..fir se...!!

aise me Orderly aya...

Peter,Mallah,Rummy,Vidya,Sameera,Purvi..aur Akriti ko.. drill ground me report karna hai...

ground par BC,Maj.Gen. Gaur,Capt. Randhawa,Capt. Chauhan, Major Sharma..aur Capt.Dr. Shalini hai..

aise me Team Commander Burman ki entry..unke typical clown wale attitude me..



SD zara door khadi thi...Abhi ki nazar uspar padi...

Gunny--Captain,Combat fight udhar hone wali hai, ..... concentrate..please...

ARC--jee..zaroor..Cadet Vidya bhi hai us side..aapke lia sab se interesting nazara hai...


Sharma--both of you..shut your mouth..



Cadets bhi baatein kar rahe hai...


Rummy--Burman..sala joker hi rahega..

Mallah--humare gaaon me aisi shakal wale logo ko Ramleela me vaanar sena me role milta tha..

Peter--aur..woh 10 heads wale..what you call it..Raavan ka role kisko milta tha?


Mallah--woh log bahut dino se achha Raavan dhundh nahi paa rahe hain,,,soch raha hoon..aapka pata de doon unko.. kab jana chahenge aap?

Rummy hansne laga....

Sharma--Cadets..behave yourselves..

Rummy--sorry Ma'm..

Purvi--pura jallad hai yeh admi...

Vidya--Vidya ko lagta hai..yeh pichhle janam me bandar tha..

Akriti chup chaap khadi thi..

Sameera--Please God..mera naam naa le yeh Burman..

ab hua Burman ,The Great ka bhaashan shuru..

"toh mere pyaare kabootaron...aaj hum sikhenge hand to hand combat k methods..pahle hum sword fighting sikhenge... fir properly hand to hand fight..aap Cadets me se koi aayega ya aayegi...Volunteer ban kar..taa k mujhe demo dene me aasaani ho.."

Major Sharma--sorry to interrupt you Team Commander..yeh Cadets kuchh bhi nahi jaante hand to hand combat k bare me.. aap faculties me se kisi ko bula sakte hain...

Burman--aapka nishana toh hum pahle hi dekh chuke hain.. aur dono Captains ka bhi jalwa humne dekha hai..but Major.. yeh Cadets sikhne aaye hain..kabhi na kabhi toh shuruat karni padegi na?

Maj.Gen. Gaur--Major Sharma...Burman thik keh rahe hain.. unko unka kaam karne dijiye..

Major Sharma ne haar maan li...

Gunny--ab hoga asli bawaal...Cadets zaroor kuchh gadbad karenge..

ARC--let's pray to God...

Cadets k bich hulchul..


Mallah--mar gaye..

Rummy--mere cards kaha hai?

Peter--dude..mere dad ko khabar kar dena..aur Tina ko bhi..


Sameera--please..mujhe mat bhejna..main mar jaaungi..

Vidya--Vidya ko laga tha Captain Randhawa ladenge..

Purvi--ooh God..ab kyaa hoga?

Akriti apne khayalon me khoi hui thi..man hi man sab ko gaalian de rahi thi...

Burman--kabootaron...yeh practise hain..par mat samajhna k khel hai..real war samajho isko...this is a battle field..not a play ground..ghoos gaya dimag me..yaa ghusaaoon?

Akriti ko chhod kar sab ne bola.."yes sir.."

Burman--Cadet Bhatt..kaha khoi hai aap?

Akriti--sorry Sir..kyaa keh rahe the aap?

Burman--war me apna concentration khona kitna dangerous ho sakta hai..malum hai aapko?


Akriti--yes..


Burman--toh fir kaha khoi thi aap?abhi aap humse co-operate karengi..is method ko sikhane me..aap hongi volunteer...


Akriti--ohh..ok...

Sharma--yehi hona baki tha..

ARC--dono aafat ek saath...

Gunny--interesting...


Burman--is Method k kuchh rules hote hain..that..there this no rules..kisi bhi tarha jeeto..kaise bhi humla karo..kaise bhi humla roko..bas jeeto...ghoos gaya dimaag me?yaa ghusaaoon?

Akriti--haa..dimag me ghusa lia...

ARC k sar par haath...

Gunny--bhagwan hi maalik hai..

Sharma--yeh ladki..uff...

fight shuru hui...

Akriti ne talwar uthaya....Burman ne bhi...


Burman--pahle main Cadet Bhatt par attack karunga..woh defend karengi..aur fir woh attack karengi ..main defend karunga..

Burman ne Akriti par attack kia...Akriti bina talwar chalaye ..bachti rahi...aur fir Burman k vaar se bachte hue woh pahuch gai ground k paas taalaab k kinare..bas ek kadam aur pichhe legi aur..Akriti paani me..

baaki k Cadets apne daanto se apni unglian chabane lage...

Burman ne apne talwar se Akriti ko bent kar hi dia hai...aur fir zabardast twist is fight me..


Akriti ne apni puri taakat lagai...aur Burman k vaar ko roka usne...aur paas jo iron se bana hua khamba bana tha ..usual drill set up k lia..usko pakad k..hawa me apne pairo ko failate hue..ek turn le kar woh Burman k pichhe aai..ab Burman taalaab k kinare tha..aur Akriti k haatho me control tha.. Akriti chaahe toh Burman ko dhakka de kar paani me fek sakti hai..

Cadets aur baaki sab k muh khule k khule reh gaye...


fight par break laga...ab Akriti attack karegi..

aur Akriti ne attack kia..par bahut hi ordinary style se...

dhire dhire usne attack par apna grip jamana shuru kia...


SD aai..

ARC--kaisa lag raha hai aapko?Cadet Bhatt..unke baare me kyaa opinion hai aapki?


Gunny--yes Miss Das..ab mujhe bhi jaanna hai..


SD--yeh un logo me se hain..jo pahle dushman ki chaal ko samajhte hain aur unko apni chaal chalne dete hai..jab dushman ki chaal khatam ho jaaye..tab yeh puri taakat k saath vaar karte hain..aap dekh sakte hai..Burman ne humla kia.. Cadet Bhatt chaahti to..rok sakti thi..par usne is tarha roka taa k..Burman dubara humla karne k haalat me hi naa rahe..

ARC--interesting..

SD--abhi bhi aap dekhiye..Akriti attack kar rahi hai...par puri taakat k saath nahi..Burman ko apna khel khelne de rahi hai...

Gunny--hmmm..

SD--mujhe nahi lagta dolls..k yeh ladki utni garam dimaag ki hai..jitna usko log samajhte hai isko..she is a difficult girl..

Mallah--Bajrangbali..Akritijee ki raksha karna..


Sameera--Ohh my god Vidya...yeh Burman toh kaise attack kar raha hai..dekho..

Vidya--Vidya ko lagta hai..k aaj Akriti infirmary me jaayegi...


Purvi--nahi yaar..usne Burman ko first half me kaise maza chakhaya..

Rummy--Cards kahte hai..yeh fight tie rahegi..


Peter--no dude...Akriti is going to win...Burman k sare methods..what you call it..haa tariko ko samajh rahi hai..par Burman ko samajhne ka mauka nahi de rahi hai..

Burman aur Akriti ki talware ab takra rahi hai...

kabhi Burman par Akriti bhaari padh rahi hai..kabhi Burman Akriti par..


ARC--aaj kuchh anarth hoga...


ladai is kadar shuru hui..k aas paas se sab hath jaane lage....

aise me...Akriti k pair patthar se takra gaye..aur haath me talwar lia hi woh pith k bal geeri zameen par...

Burman ne uspar talwar saadhaa...

sab ko laga..Akriti gai kaam se...


par aisa hua nahi...

Burman ne ek ghalati ki...usne Akriti k chehre par talwar rakha..aur Akriti ne talwar ko apne daanto se pakad lia...aur Burman k right wrist ko pakda apne left hand se..aur Burman ko muh k bal pachhaad dia zameen par...Burman geera..aur Akriti k haatho me dono talware thi...


fight was Over...

Akriti jeet gai..



kuchh pal k lia har koi shocked ho gaye..k actually Burman ludhak gaya tha..aur bahut zor se uska sar jaake takra gaya zameen se..

Cadets clap karne lage...

Maj.Gen. Gaur aaye Akriti k paas...


Gaur--that was brilliant Cadet Bhatt...

Akriti--thank you Sir..

Gaur--keep it up..

BC--great victory Cadet...

Akriti--real war time toh nahi tha Sir...

BC--fir bhi..it was excellent...

Akriti--thank you Sir...

Major Sharma k saamne aai Akriti..

Sharma--great job Cadet...

Gunny--brilliant..no other word for you Cadet...


SD--it was a nice trick...Cadet...

ARC chup chaap khada tha..

Akriti--trick hai toh hai..Burman Sir ne hi kaha tha..k jeetna zaroori hai..kaise bhi jeeto...

aise me Suri jee aaye..."Puttar..you have done a great job.."

Shailni Akriti pichhe aai thi bahut pahle...

Shalini--Cadet..aap k muh se khoon nikal raha hai..

Akriti--haa..daant se pakda tha talwar ko..muh k andar zara sa kat gaya...

Sharma--isse aap zara sa cut keh rahi hai?aapki zuban bhi kat sakti thi Cadet..

Akriti--jeetna zaroori hai...maine jeetne k lia kia...


Akriti ko infirmary me le gai Shalini...



Burman ko hospital me bheja gaya..Ambala me..

Maj. Gen. Gaur aur Brig. Chandok ki meeting...

Gaur--I must say...Cadet Bhatt...brilliant...

BC--yaa..she is the blue eyed girl of Major Sharma...Akriti ko upar se daanta hain unhone kai baar..par Akriti training me achhi kare..is baat ka khaas khayal hain unko..aur female cadets me se..Cadet Vidya aur yeh Cadet Akriti hi kaabil hai... Cadet Sameera aur Cadet Purvi..itni ummeed nahi hai unse..

Gaur--par isi Akriti Bhatt ko aap kuchh maheene pahle KMA se nikaalna chaahte the...iski badtameezion ki wajah se...

BC--belagaam ghodo par pahle lagaam daalna hi padta hai Sir..

Gaur--bahut aage jaayegi yeh ladki...


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Akriti infirmary se nikli..aur corridore me Abhi mila usko...

Abhi--Cadet Bhatt...nice job..

Akriti--koi bada teer nahi maara hai maine...


Abhi--fir bhi..aapka method mujhe pasand aya..jab dushman ki chaal khatam ho jaaye..tab vaar karo..puri taakat laga k..

Akriti--yeh aapki analysis nahi hai..yeh SD ki analysis hai.. haa sahi hai..main pahle samnewale ko chaale chalne deti hoon..fir apne patte fekti hoon..

Abhi--par..Burman toh aapki chaal nahi samajh paaye?

Akriti--woh toh ullu ka pattha hai... sword fighting k basic techniques nahi janta...

Abhi--aur technique kyaa hai?

Akriti--kisi chees ko..kisi insaan k dimag ko padhna ho..toh uski ankho ko samjho..ankho ko samjho..dimag apne aap saamne aa jaayengi..k kaun se direction se humla hoga..

Abhi--great..

Akriti--anyways..have a good day..

Akriti chali gai..

Abhi(man hi man)--Shona se zyada mysterious hai yeh.. Akriti...jo dikhti hai..woh hai nahi...there is something about her..


Mess me gai Akriti..toh saare Cadets ne usko kandhe par utha lia...

"3 cheers for Akriti...hip hip hurrah..."

Akriti--relax...yeh batao..tum log mujhe alert nahi kar sakte the..k Burman kuchh bak bak kar raha tha..naa main dhyaan khoti..naa yeh haal hota..

Peter--Akriti...yaar tum aajkal bahut absentminded..what you call it..aaaa..khoi khoi si rahne lagi ho..

Vidya--Vidya ko lagta hai..k Akriti ko pyaar ho gaya hai..

Sameera--yaa..I too think so..

Purvi--kaun hain woh Akriti?


Akriti--kuchh kehna hi nahi hai mujhe..mujhe khana hai.. hatho...

Akriti khana khaa kar chali gai...apne kamre me...

udhar Major Sharma ne Capt. Randhawa aur Capt. Chauhan ko yeh instruction die..k Cadet Akriti par nazar rakhi jaye.. uske kadam bahekne na paaye..she is a promising Cadet..ek shak Major ko hua hai..k kahi Akriti hi Eagle toh nahi..varna itne trained tarike se combat fight karna...ek Cadet k lia.. thoda ajeeb toh hai..

Edited by yakkudimag - 17 years ago
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Superb,mindblowing.
Fic padhte hi jaise sare charecter aankho ke saamne aa gaye.
Bahut bahut bahut maza aaya.
👏
Edited by appi4291 - 17 years ago
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Anu ki fic to sab se alag hoti hi hai.

Too good update aur kahani aage badegi to aur acche se clear hoga sab.
So waiting for next update.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 17 years ago

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