Hi everyone. I am Sonia, I used to read the FFs written by the IF
members and I was soo impressed by them. I wanted to write my own
FF since long time. Finally I started this FF. This is my first FF. So it
is going to be a short one. I hope you like this. Plz read and comment
even if it is bad. I will try and improve in my next parts.
I am starting with the intro(character sketch) and depending on the
comments and suggestions I get I am going to continue the next parts.
Right now I am planning to write 4-5 parts. Depending on the
response I will try and increase the number of parts. DMG and
shararath are my one of my favorite shows. So my ff has characters
from these two.
INDEX
Intro, part 1,2,3A - page 1
Part 3B - page 3
Part 4 - page 5
Part 5 - page 8
Part 6 - page 9 Part 7(END) - page 11
Intro (character sketch)
Our Dmg 6 interns team
The characters in my ff are same as in DMG. I am giving a brief intro
to their present situation. After reading the letter AR decided to be
friends. They still love each other but don't confess. Rahul and
Muskan started feeling for each other but they don't know what this
feeling is. Atul loves Anjali and she ignores him as usual.
Nani, jia, dhruv, radha , sooraj are same characters as in shararath. I
am giving a brief intro here for the people who don't watch
shararath.
Sooraj (sorry. I couldn't get his picture.)
He is a doctor. Radha is his wife. Jia and Jai are their children. Nani is
Radha's mother. She lives with Radha. Sooraj has a hospital in kulu
manali. He lives along with his family and Nani in kulu manali. He
hates Jadu.
Nani
She is a pari. She loves Jia very much. She is expert in doing jadu.
Jia.
She is also a pari. She loves her family (her mother-Radha, father-
Sooraj, brother-Jai and Nani). She is very close to her Nani. She is
very sweet and lovable. Dhruv, Raja, Metha are Jia's best friends. Jia
and Dhruv love eachother.
Dhruv
Dhruv, Raja, Metha, Jia study in the same college and they are best
friends. Dhruv loves Jia.
PART 1
There is an epidemic in kulu manali. So Sooraj requires extra doctors
in his hospital. He calls up Dr.Shashank and asks him to send some
doctors to his hospital in kulu manali. Shashank decides to send 6
interns. So our 6 interns leave to kulu manali.
After reaching kulu manali they go and meet sooraj in his hospital.
Sooraj thanks them for coming. He asks our interns team to stay at his
guest house. They goto the guest house, fresh up and report at the
hospital for duty. The whole day they help sooraj and treet the
patients. They become very tired.
Sooraj asks them to join him at dinner.
Here is the 2nd part. I hope you enjoy reading this part.
PART 2
Scene at hospital :
Sooraj calls up radha.
Sooraj: radha, the new interns who came from Mumbai are coming to
our house for dinner. So plz cook dinner for 6 people.
Radha : janu how can I alone prepare dinner for 6 people, that with
such short notice.
Sooraj : plz radha, they came from Mumbai on my request.
Radha : its ok. I will manage with jadu.
Sooraj imagines nani making dinner with jadu and the dinner
disappearing while eating. He also imagines the food items, plates
talking to each other. Finally he imagines all of them falling ill
because of the dinner. He comes out of his dream saying
Sooraj : nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!! Plz atleast for my sake don't use jadu.
Tell sasuma also not to use jadu.
Radha : ok janu. Mai dinner khud banathi hoon.
Sooraj cuts the call with a sigh of relief. Thank god maine Radha ko
jadu karne se rokliya. Nahi to pata nahi kaya hojata.
Sooraj calls our interns.
Sooraj : are your duties finished.
Interns : yes sir.
Sooraj : so you all may to the guest house, fresh up and join me for
dinner at my house.
Interns : ok sir.
Sooraj : my house is very near to the guest house. After you get ready
call me. I will send someone to pick you.
Interns : ok sir.
Sooraj : you may leave now.
Interns leave. They reach the guest house in 20 mins.
Scene at the guest house:
They go to their respective rooms to fresh up.
AR
Ridhima is the first one to get ready and she goes to the lawn and sits
in the swing. Armaan also gets ready and comes to the lawn. He sees
ridhima sitting in the swing and looking into the sky.
Cool breeze is blowing which makes ridhima's hair to fly. Armaan
stands there mesmerized by her beauty. (Imagine ridz siting in the
swing and armaan looking at her in the lonavala scene. Here is a pic to
refresh your memory.)
He looks as though he is jealous of the wind for touching his Ridz.
He remembers all the beautiful moments they spent together. Then he
remembers how they broke up. A lone tear rolls down his cheek which
brings him back to reality. Ridhima is still looking into the sky
folding her hands tight and rubbing them as she shivers because of the
cool breeze. Seeing her Armaan has an urge to go and pull her into his
arms and give a warm hug and careness her. Cutting his thoughts he
goes near Ridhima. They look into eachothers eyes for few mins.
(Ridhima breaks the scilence saying )
Ridhima : armaan this place is so beautiful know.
Armaan remembers their lonavla dancing scene and smiles.
Armaan : ya, this place is very beautiful.
Armaan : Ridhima, I guess we should go inside. The breeze is very
cool. You may fall ill.
Ridhima smiles at his concern and says
Ridhima : ok. Lets go.
Atul and Anjali on the teras
Atul : anjali tum kise ho. Aaj bahut kaam tha na.
Anjali : I am fine.
Atul : this place is so nice. We get fresh air to breathe. Pata hai taza
hava khane se sara thakan door hojayegi. (atul to himself. Anjali hum
shaadi ke baad aise jagah me hi rahenge)
Anjali : stop it atul. I am very tired. I don't want to here your
nonsense.
Atul : anjali, mai tumhara sar dabadu? You will feel beter.
Anjali : cant you just shut up atul? Why do u always be at the back of
me. Just leave me alone and let me enjoy this atmosphere.
Atul feels bad and goes off. Anjali realizes that she hurt atul. So she
goes near atul and says
Anjali : sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you.
Atul feels happy that anjali is not angry with him.
Atul : its ok anjali. You have full right to scold me.
Anjali gives an you can never change look and goes into the hall. Atul
also comes to the hall following anjali.
Rahul and Muskan
Rahul and Muskan are sitting in the hall watching ZNKD on star one.
Muskan takes girls side and Rahul takes boys side.
Muskan : dekho hum ladkiyya kitne achi tarah se nach rahe hai. When
all girls did group performance boys faces are worth watching. It was
as if you already accepted your defeat.
Rahul : tumhare group performance keliye tarif milne ka matlab ye
thodi na hai ki hamara performance kharab tha.
Muskan : Dekho kise sare ladke hamareliye tali baja rahe hai.
Rahul : ye to hum ladko ka badappan hai ki hum tumhe cheer kar rahe
hai. Tum ladke nakhre dikhane ke alava karthe hi kya ho. Hamare
tarah nachna to tumhare baski baath nahi hai.
Muskan : nakhre dikhana to ladkiyo ka haq hai. Agar tumhare paas
dimag hai to hamare khubsurati se bach ke dikha. Zip your lips, move
your legs aur zara nach ke dikha.
Rahul : dekhlena. Agle hafthe jab marks aayenge, tub pata chalega ki boys are the best.
Muskan : no girls are the best.
Rahul : boys are the best.
Muskan : girls are the best.
Rahul : boys are the best.
Muskan : girls are the best.
(atul and anjali enter)
Anjali : ya, girls are always better than boys
Atul : ha, meri anjali best hai.
Rahul : boys are best.
Armaan and ridhima enter the hall. AR try to stop their fight.
Armaan : ye to bahut purani ladai hai. Is ka jawab milega girls vs boys
dance ka thadka-ZNKD ke dance floor par.
Armaan, Ridhima, Atul, Anjali, Rahul, Muskan say ' don't miss
ZNKD mon-tue at 9.30 pm only on starone.
They call up sooraj and tell him that they are ready. Sooraj says that he
will send a driver to pick them up.
Scene at sooraj's house :
After the interns left, sooraj also went home.
Radha : janu, you look very tired.
Sooraj : there were lot of patients in the hospital, so I am tired. The
interns who came from Mumbai helped me a lot. Otherwise I couldn't
handle so many patients.
Radha : I prepared dinner for all of them. When are they coming?
Sooraj : they will come in an hour.
Nani : (to sooraj) tum mere beti se kitna kaam karate ho. Tum ko
sharam nahi aati?
Sooraj : sharam to aap ko honi chahiye sasuma. Aap to pura din koi
kaam nahi kathe hai. Aur radha ko madat bhi nahi karti.
Nani : mai to pari hoon, pari. Mujhe koi kaam karne ki zaroorath nahi
hai. Mai jadu se sab kaam kar sakti hoon.
Sooraj : maine aap ko kitne baar kaha ki mujhe jadu se nafrath hai.
Aaj hamari ghar ko 6 interns aa rahe hai. Aap uske saamne koi jadu
nahi karenge. Radha, apne mom ko samjhado.
Saying this, sooraj goes to his room to fresh up.
Interns arrive and sooraj greets them. He introduces his family to
them. They all talk for some time while radha sets the table for dinner.
As sooraj warned nani not to do jadu in front of interns, nani and jia
decide to be invisible. Radha calls for dinner and all of them start their
dinner. Nani and Jia plan to do small shararath to irritate sooraj.
Sooraj feels thirsty while eating so he takes a glass of water. He puts
the glass in his mouth but before he drinks water, the water
automatically diappears. The same thing happens with 2nd and 3rd
glass of water.
Atul : sir, you should not drink that much water while eating.
Sooraj : (thinks) when did I drink water. He doesn't understand what is going on.
Sooraj eats palak paneer as it is his favorite. But nani makes it taste
salty. He makes angry face.
Armaan : mam, palak paneer is very tasty.
Radha : thank you.
Sooraj thinks palak paneer is very tasty?? But I found it salty. Why is
all this happening to me?? Then he understands and shouts
sasumaaaaa!!!!!!!
All the interns look at him with wired expression. Sooraj understands
the situation and smiles saying sorry. Nani and Jia disappear thinking
this was enough shararath. After they left sooraj completes his dinner
peacefully.
After the dinner ridhima, muskan, anjali go to jia's room to talk with
her while armaan, atul, rahul sit and talk with sooraj.
Sooraj, armaan, atul, rahul
Sooraj : thanks for coming and helping my patients.
A,A,R : its our duty sir.
Armaan : if you don't mind, I have a suggestion sir.
Sooraj : you can express your views freely.
Armaan : sir, it would be better if we give preventive medicines to the
people so that more people will not be effected.
A,R : we also feel the same way sir.
Sooraj : you are right. I was also thing the same thing. But we don't
have sufficient stock of preventive medicines. I have ordered for
them, but I didn't get them till now. You know, I can't leave the
hospital and go to fetch the medicines.
Rahul : that is not a big problem sir. I will go and get the medicines
tomorrow. Then we can put up a camp in the hospital itself for giving
the preventive medicines.
Atul : sir, how long will it take to fetch the medicines?
Sooraj : it will take 3-4 hours. It will be better if all 3 of you go to
fetch the medicines.
Armaan : ok sir. We will leave tomorrow early morning and reach the
hospital by afternoon.
Rahul : sir, I think it will be better to start the camp with the
medicines we have.
Sooraj : ok. We will start the camp in the morning with the medicines
we have. I will talk with girls and ask them to take up this
responsibility. Boys, make sure that you return before afternoon.
Boys (A, A, R) : ok sir.
Nani also enters Jia's room and Nani, Jia, ridhima, muskan and anjali
chat for a long time. Jia, ridhima, muskan and anjali become good
friends. Nani likes ridhima very much because of her innocent face.
She senses that ridz has some problem, but she puts her thoughts aside
for the time being.
Sooraj calls them down. He asks the girls to take up the responsibility
of setting up a camp near the hospital to provide preventive medicines
to the people.
Girls : we will surely take up the responsibility of setting up the camp
sir.
Sooraj : ok then. Boys will go to fetch more medicines, while you
will start the camp with the medicines we have. The boys will return
by afternoon.
Girls : ok sir.
Boys, girls leave to the guesthouse.
Next day morning the girls get ready and find that boys already left.
Girls also leave to the hospital. They set up the camp and start their
work. Boys join them in the afternoon.
After 2 days they finish giving preventive medicines to all the people.
The patients admitted in the hospital were also recovering fast. After 2
more days many patients recovered and were discharged.
Sorry, for this boring part. I thought I should first finish off with the
hospital work so that we can have fun in next part. i promise you that
next part will be full of fun. Sorry for my spelling mistakes. And plz
comment whether you like this or not. Plz give me sugessions
regarding how to improve my ff. If you want me to include any
particular scenes, plz tell me so that I can include them in my next
part.
Thanks for reading my FF. Now plz comment whatever you feel after
reading this. Atleast press thank u button. plz reply if you want me to
continue this FF.Sonia.
Edited by sonia-kashian - 16 years ago
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