Just 4 lines!!!!!

~ Prem and Heer ~

Barish se shuro hui thi ek prem kahani

Ek premi aur auske sapno ki rani

Lafzon se na bol sake kuch dono

Dhadkane aise bholi ke Khud ko rok sake na dono

- Happe

Originally posted by: happe

~ Prem and Heer ~

Barish se shuro hui thi ek prem kahani

Ek premi aur auske sapno ki rani

Lafzon se na bol sake kuch dono

Dhadkane aise bholi ke Khud ko rok sake na dono

- Happe

Awwwwwwwww Happoo🤗
Aik tou nice to see u..
I was just kinda gloomy-ish...Just having u here.. made me shmile.. thankoo😳
Lovelyyy Lines Bacha👏... esp the last😳

Originally posted by: -Faith-

Awwwwwwwww Happoo🤗
Aik tou nice to see u..
I was just kinda gloomy-ish...Just having u here.. made me shmile.. thankoo😳
Lovelyyy Lines Bacha👏... esp the last😳

Hi Di,

I am glad I was able to put smile on ur face. Why u feeling gloomy glommy? If u are gloomy then what is gonna happen to rest of us? 😆

Originally posted by: shafaq92

Those are beautiful lines indeed 😊 and the way they've managed to
describe Prem and Heer's relationship so well is incredible 😳. That certainly
did cheer me up...so thank you 😃!

Thank you Shafaq for u r kind words and u r welcome. I am glad that lines fit Prem and Heer but it wasn't actually written for them 😆 i had this written for over a year now, those were the days when i wanted to be a shayar 😆😆 but it turned out that i should stick my feet to where they are now meaning studies 😆

Originally posted by: happe

Lafzon se na bol sake kuch dono

Dhadkane aise bholi ke Khud ko rok sake na dono

wooow this two line are perfectly written and suits our Premeer very well...
no words needed jus two hearts binding.....
loved the way you portrayed Premeers love through fours lines....
Well done hun... loved it ....