Chori Chori Chupke Chupke- prt 3 pg 4

fanfic by me and arfa

here is the intro and let us know wat u guys think of it.., the first part will be up soon

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Chori Chori Chupke Chupke

some of the parts in the story actually occurred in real life =]]

K ere goes:

The Kapoor:

Dilip Kapoor: a very successful businessman who lives with his only three sons and a second wife. He is very rich and is currently living in Mauritius and is on a world tour with his wife. His first wife died in a car accident. Many people say she was planed to be killed! Dilip loves all three of his boys and is always there for them.

Komolika Kapoor: she is the second wife of Dilip and is currently living with him in Mauritius. She doesn't like his three sons because they always end up playing a trick on her. She is plain evil and only wants glory and money. She thinks that she has all three sons in her fist but it's actually the other way round. She purposely makes Dilip stay away from his sons.

Angad Kapoor: he is the eldest of the three. He's 18 yrs old and he's a senior in America's school of heroes. He wants to become someone big like his father and is very close to him. Deep down inside he has a thing for singing because all his past girlfriends have told him that he has a charming voice and he sometimes hums to himself. He looks after is two other bothers and terribly misses his mom who died in a car accident. However, when he grows up under komolika, his true self is somewhere hidden and he is often rude to other people.

Prem Kapoor: he is younger than Angad and is very mischievous. Is 17 yrs a junior in America's school of heroes. Like playing pranks on others and wants to do something big in life. He hates talking about long life relationships and has truly never seen love. He has only seen hatred in koromiko's eyes and thus this made him a cold hearted person.

Armaan Kapoor: he is the youngest bro and is very spoiled. Wants to become a basketball champ. He's a sophomore (16 yrs) in the same school as Angad and prem. One reason no one messes around with him is that he has two very strong brothers in the school and they all have girl's lol. They are quiet famous and popular in the school and none really has the guts to go against them. Armaan is sometimes seen as the apple of koromiko's eyes and she tends o take him the wrong way but he is always saved by either Angad or prem.

Prem and angad take extra care of armaan because they are scared of komolika and her wrong doings. All three brothers are living in New York city and are taken care of by their house maid who is an old lady but very familiar for some reason… the three brothers are very well known in the neighborhood but soon something happens and they lose it.

The Mehras:

Rajesh Mehra: a very fun-loving father and a husband. He is currently living in India with his family. He isn't that rich but is from a middle class family and but soon gets a promotion from his work and is send to live in New York City. His family is excited yet sad about leaving. They will be leaving soon and will live in the Mason's house for rent which is directly in front of the Kapoor mansion.

Urmi Mehra: she is the funny, caring, and a hardworking wife of Rajesh. She loves all three of her daughters and never dreams of having a son because her daughters fulfill all qualities of a son. Urmi is very excited as she hears that her family will be going to New York City to live there as it would be their first time going out of country.

Kripa mehra: the oldest of the three. She is 18 and will going to study in New York as she is told by her family. She adores her family and will do anything for them. She doesn't miss on having a brother because she has two other sisters who are as much irritating as brothers. She dreams of becoming an actress or a singer. Kripa hates it when someone else wants to rule others. She is more of a leader and a trouble maker with her sister ridhiima.

Mukti mehra: mukti is younger than kripa but has more sense then her. She is 17 and is a full nerd. Reads every day and doesn't really care about her looks. Normally, shopping for her will be shopping for school supplies. Mukti is very quiet and understanding. She remains quiet, listens to what others have to say, and waits for the best to happen. She is often referred to as the second "rajesh" while her other two sisters are more like "urmi". If anything goes wrong, it is mukti to take kripa and ridhima out of trouble.

Ridhima mehra: is the youngest and the bubbliest. She is very fun loving and also very humble. Her dream is to become a doctor and help others. Her excitement increases as she is told that she will be doing her studies in USA. Ridhima loves all of her family and admires her kripa di for always getting in trouble but never been punished. She also admires mukti for being the official nerd and helping out with her studies.

These three sisters didn't know what's waiting for them in New York. They will face new challenges and new threats will be given. Jokes will be played upon and hearts will be broken.

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?bisma?arfa?

Interesting intro guys!! Cont. soon!

gr8 intro
cant wait for their 1st time meeting
cont soon

awesome intro can't wait 4 the 1st part

Luv,

Saniya

It was a bright suunny day in India and Urmi was preparing the breakfast table for her family. "chalo sab hi jaldi ajaooo" she called out to her three daughters and husband.
Rajesh came with a towel around his neck and looked at the table. "Hmmm baara acha khana lagra hai..kis khusi mey itna saraa khana banaya hai?" he asked as he greedily looked at the food settled on the table. "kiyon kea ajj apko apni teen maharaniyon ko USA jaane ke liye manana hai.," Urmi replied. "Wo sab toh thik hai lekin yeh teen han khahan?" "Oh wo log to abhi tak nahi uthi, mey abhi jakey unko utha ti hou" said Urmi as she left to her daughters' rooms.

Urmi knocked on Kripa's door. When no reply came, Urmi decided to go inside. She saw that the whole room was messed up and Kripa was listening to rock and roll music with high volume. She was busy exercising and didn't notice her mother. Urmi was mad at how her room was and turned off the music. "Kripa!," Urmi yelled. "Huh? oh, mama app? app yaha kese ayien?,"kripa was kind of afraid of what her mother was going to say about her room. "yeh saab kiya hai kripa? Kitni bar bola hai ke apna room clean rakha karoo!" " lekin mama wo …ummm… ridzi hai na wo kal merey paas ayi raat mey or hum logo nay pillow fight ki oor phir jab hum thak gaye to soocha ke mukti ko disturb kaaren lekin wo to sogayi thi par phir bhi hum log usko disturb kerney gaye or phir usne hamey bohut mara :D" Kripa finished in one breath. " awww so sorry ke tum dono ko mar pari thank you so much Mukti! Or ye log hain kahan?" "uhh apney room mey mama" "mey abhi jari houn unko utha ey or tum jaldi say apna room saaf kerkey ao nichey hameey kuch zarori baat kerni hai" and with that Urmi left the room… "zarori baat? Kiya meri shaadi hori hai?? Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii" screamed kripa.

"Ridzi! Uthoo naa!,"mukti yelled at ridhimaa. "c'mon di!bus ek or minute orrr please!mujhe sone do naaa!," ridhimaa said. "Ridhimaa!!!utthh!!!!mama or papa ko humse ek zarori baat kerni hai!or time dekho! 8:15 hore hain! Humme college bhi jana hai." Mukti scolded ridhmaa. "ok.grrrr!!," ridhimaa growled," Apko toh sirf mujhe sone se uthanaa ataa hai… gosh u r so boring!" "yea and u r so cute!!" finished mukti.

All three of them walked down on the wooden stairs to the kitchen and were ready to hear the news. "ji mama papa!apko hum se kya baat kerni hai?," ridhimaa said as she gave a back hug to her mother. "hum tum teeno ko ek surprise dena chati hain," thir dad said to his daughters. "please papa mujey abhi shadi nahi kerni!," kripa siad sadly "shadi?" said both urmi and rajesh and laughed at their daughter. "han hadi… normally important baat larkiyoun sey shadi ki hi hoti hai …hai na?" kripa looked at ridz and mukti ffor help. "nahi beta…actually hum dono ye khena chatey they ke…" "keeee??" the three said at the same time. "key hum sab USA jarey hain or wahan per hi rahen gey", answered their parents. Mukti choked on her food and spilled her water.
"KIYAAA?" kripa and ridima jumped up and started dancing around the kitchen table. "yay I'm not getting married yay!" said kripa happiliy and ridhima replied "yea yay us key hum lo wahan jary hain..just imagine my best worst friends' expressions…kitna jalenegey wo log naa?" however, mukti was upset because one thing sahe hatred the most was meeting new people and always had a feeling no one would like her there. Sshe hted change in her regular life style. " no mama hum yahin sahi hai na" she said to her mother. "kiya kehri ho mukti …dekho beta Zindagi mey agey bardna seeko… dehko apni bheno ko or seekho kuch insey" said her mom. " insey kiya sikhon mama ..balkey abhi mujy kuch sikhana hoga…by the way hamey ccollage jana hai na chalo kriipa aor ridhi" mukti said aand took her bag and left outside. "iski problem kiya hai mama?" kripa asked. "beta tum nahi sanjo gi usey wo bohut seedhi hai or chalo abb tum log bhi jao yahan sey kitna taang kerti ho hum ko" said her papa. "Whatever hum jarey hai or thanks for the good news!!" ridhiima gave each of her parent a sweet kiss and left with kripa.

"wo samjey gi na?" urmi asked rajesh. " wo samaj gayi hai urmi" rajesh answered. Just then mukti poped her head inn to the room and yelled back "mey nahi jaon gi!!" and left.

"Pagal hain sari teeno ki teeno tumhari betiyann" both urmi and rajesh said to each other.

Back in NEW YORK CITY…the night life was just started for the three Kapoor brothers. You see a huge mansion and phone bell is heard ringing. However, there is no one in the house to answer it. The call goes on a message. "hey peeps this is me your homie ARMY just leave a msg and we'll get back to you…some day hahah buh bye love you" *BEEP* "hey guys this is your dad here kahan ho tum log please return my call after you have received this msg." finished Dilip Kapoor and knew his three sons were probably at a party or in a club.

hey guys the firs part is up and don't forget to leave your comments ndd yea if you are having problems seeing the text since its in limee green lol then jst hightlight the text and you'll be able to read it hope i helped

?bisma?

nice update dear but could you please use a different color...it was hard to read the part...anyways nice character intro and first part...continue soon 👏 👏 👏

nice intro n d part was too gud...luvd it...plz use different color 4 text...continue soon....n pm me...
luv
*vini*

hmmm...ok we'll use a different text color...i think black will be ok...maybe me or arfa will continue or post the second part soon and don't forget to read it...only 2 comments...thats kind of pretty rude...145 views and only 2 comments..i don't think anybody liked it....

?bisma?

hey hey hey bisma...don't get mad...maybe the people didn't see the post because it was on the 4th page...you know..don't be angry..i'm sure they'll coment when we post the second part...just dont get angry at them..its ok...they'll love our ff..soon, our fanfic will be the toppest one! 😉
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?Arfa?