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Chapter 8

Singhania Mansion

Ravindra Singhania's brows furrowed in disbelief as he stared at his son.
"What do you mean, Deep? You've just met her—and already you've decided she's going to be your life partner?"

Deep turned around, a calm smile playing on his lips.
"I know, Dad, it's sudden. But from the very first moment I saw Tara, I knew. There's an eternal kind of beauty in her—one I haven't seen in any woman before. A beauty so striking, it could wound the eyes that dare to admire it." His voice dropped to a reverent tone. "And you know how much beauty means to me."

Ravindra let out a disappointed sigh. "Yes, Deep. I know your obsession. And I've never objected to your choices before. But this is different. This is your life. Don't you think you should understand more about Tara before making such a decision?"

"I don't need to know her character," Deep interrupted firmly. "I only need to know that she's the most beautiful woman I've ever seen. That's all that matters to me."

Ravindra's concern deepened. "Still, Deep... for my sake, at least try to get to know her. You're turning 29 in three months. Take this time seriously before committing."

Deep hesitated for a moment before nodding, somewhat half-heartedly.

Deep and Tara's Dates

Deep began seeing Tara frequently, swept away by her beauty during every encounter. He barely listened when she spoke, never probing beyond her appearance. Her elegance was enough to enchant him—no questions asked.

Meanwhile, the media buzzed with excitement. Deep's mysterious relationship with a stunning woman became the talk of the town. Paparazzi tailed him, desperate to uncover her identity. But Deep brushed them off, saying only, "All will be revealed on my 29th birthday."

He liked the attention. It fed his vanity—being known as the man dating the most beautiful woman in the country.

Streets of the City

Fate had its own cruel sense of irony. Every now and then, Deep's path crossed with Aarohi's. They exchanged cold, distant glances, neither acknowledging the other. Aarohi had begun wearing the maroon mouth organ around her neck like a silent shield. Each meeting reignited a flicker of unresolved hurt.

One afternoon, as Deep and Tara walked down a street together, Aarohi spotted them approaching. She quickly mounted her bicycle, only to realize the tyre was punctured. Frustrated, she got down to inspect it.

Deep momentarily excused himself to pick something up from a nearby store, leaving Tara to stroll ahead. As fate would have it, Tara walked directly toward Aarohi—who stood up abruptly and, without realizing, collided into her.

Both women stumbled. Aarohi looked up, startled, and froze. She had seen glimpses of Tara before, but this was the first time they stood face-to-face.

"I'm so sorry," Aarohi muttered, extending her hand.

Tara accepted it gracefully, brushing dust off her dress. Aarohi couldn't take her eyes off her. She murmured, almost to herself, "Now I understand... why you're Deep Singhania's choice."

Tara looked at her, puzzled. "Huh? What did you say? Do you know Deep Singhania?"

Aarohi stiffened and replied curtly, "No."

Tara raised a brow. "That's strange. The whole country knows him—and his talent for enhancing beauty."

She narrowed her eyes, studying Aarohi. "Wait... I think I've seen you before."

A brief flashback flickered in Tara's mind—the night a shooting star passed, a locket soared through the sky, and an explosion lit up the stable near Mr. Kashyap's house. The image vanished as quickly as it came.

"I'm Tara Raichand," she said finally. "And you are?"

"Aarohi. Aarohi Kashyap," she replied coolly. "I don't think we've met before."

But then Aarohi's eyes caught something around Tara's neck—the lamp locket. Her expression hardened.

"Where did you get this chain?" she asked.

Before Tara could respond, Deep returned. Aarohi stepped back. "I need to go. Maybe we'll meet again."

Without waiting for a reply, she walked away briskly, pushing her cycle, leaving Tara watching her retreat.

"I've definitely seen her somewhere," Tara murmured. "But I can't recall where."

Deep scoffed. "That bony girl is a pain to the eyes. Not worth remembering."

Tara turned to him, intrigued. "Do you know her?"

"No," Deep replied quickly.

Tara laughed softly. "That's funny. She said the exact same thing about you."

She leaned closer and whispered with a teasing smile, "Seems like there's an unknown connection between you two."

Deep's heart skipped a beat.

Tara walked ahead with a knowing smile, leaving Deep standing still, her words echoing in his mind. He turned slightly, eyes lingering on Aarohi's disappearing figure.

"Connection between me and that bony girl?" he muttered under his breath. "Never."

Still, something about Tara's words lingered, unsettling him.

Meanwhile, Aarohi glanced back from a distance. She pulled the mouth organ from around her neck and clutched it tightly, shaking her head in silent dismay.

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Chapter 9

Singhania Mansion – The Eve of the 29th Birthday

As dusk fell over the grand mansion, Deep prepared to mark not just another year of his life, but the beginning of a new chapter. Over the past few months, his bond with Tara had only deepened. With each passing date, his obsession transformed into what he believed was love—because never in his life had he encountered a woman whose beauty rivaled Tara's.

He had decided: on his 29th birthday, he would make Tara his forever.

Deep's Secret Date Spot

As the sun dipped low into the horizon, bathing the sky in warm tones of red and amber, Deep led Tara—blindfolded—into a secluded space adorned with soft petals and a small, trickling fountain. The air smelled faintly of roses and dusk.

When he removed the blindfold, Tara gasped at the sight before her. "Why have you brought me here, Deep?"

He smiled mysteriously. "You'll find out soon enough."

Singhania Mansion

Back at the mansion, Ravindra Singhania busied himself overseeing the grand preparations. "Faster, everyone! My son's birthday isn't just any event—it's a celebration of a legacy."

As his gaze fell upon a framed photograph of Chhaya—his late wife—memories flickered. He walked over and softly whispered to the portrait, "You left when he was just 14, and now... look at him. Handsome, charismatic—your beauty lives in him. And he has my gift too—the ability to beautify others."

Turning to the household temple, he folded his hands in reverence. "God, you took Chhaya away... but gave me Deep. On behalf of both of us, I thank you for this shining lamp in our lives. May he continue to glow, always." He lit a ceremonial lamp and bowed his head in prayer.

As he stepped away, the flame flickered... and quietly extinguished.

Deep's Proposal

At the secluded spot, the sun now a golden ribbon on the edge of the sky, Deep dropped to one knee, holding out a single blood-red rose.

"I love you, Tara," he said, eyes fixed on hers. "From the moment I saw you, I knew. I've always dreamt of having the most beautiful woman in the world beside me—and that woman is you."

Tara's eyes widened in surprise. She brought her hand to her lips and slowly bent forward to accept the rose. As her fingers brushed his, a thorn on the stem pierced his skin. Blood trickled down, but Deep didn't flinch.

"I will accept your love," Tara said with a soft smile, "on one condition."

"What is it?" Deep asked.

"You must give me your heart."

Kashyap House

Elsewhere, Aarohi entered her room, distracted. As she stepped forward, her foot struck something—a small button. She bent down to pick it up, and the mouth organ hanging around her neck swung forward.

She froze.

A memory stirred.

Deep's Secret Spot

Back in the fading light, Deep replied without hesitation, "My heart hasn't belonged to me since the day I met you. It's been in your control all along, Tara Raichand. From now on, it's yours—completely."

Tara stepped closer. Gently, she placed her palm against his chest, over the rhythmic thud of his heartbeat. Deep looked into her eyes with a smile... until her hand pressed harder—then deeper.

His smile vanished.

Shock replaced it as her hand entered his chest—effortlessly, unnaturally—and clasped his heart.

Pain exploded through Deep's body. His eyes widened, his breath choked. He screamed, but the winds carried his cries into the emptiness of the isolated clearing.

This was no ordinary woman.

The Celestial Revelation

Tara's serene expression remained untouched as she tightened her grip. This act was not human—it was celestial.

Tara and her father, Mayank Raichand, were not of this world. Beings of the cosmos—Tara, a star; Mayank, the moon. Their divine purpose: to transform the hearts of cold, stone-hearted humans into literal stone—eventually ascending as new stars in the universe.

And Deep Singhania, who had built his life upon a pedestal of superficial beauty, was their next target.

The Transformation

Tara subtly signaled toward the sky.

Instantly, the last rays of the setting sun turned sharp—piercing, merciless beams that focused solely on Deep. As she began to extract his heart, the solar energy ravaged him.

His body convulsed. His skin burned, blistered, blackened.

Hair erupted from his face, arms, and legs. His ears elongated and curled grotesquely. Two horns pushed through his scalp, tearing his skin.

With each passing second, he became less man and more beast.

He screamed in agony before collapsing, unconscious, as the sun finally disappeared.

Arrival of Mayank

In the hush that followed, moonlight bathed the spot. A figure materialized from its glow—Mayank Raichand. Dignified, calm, otherworldly. He walked up behind Tara and placed a hand on her shoulder.

"Good job, Tara," he said with quiet pride.

Tara simply nodded, her eyes fixed on the beastly form of Deep lying crumpled before them—burned, disfigured, unrecognizable.

Closing Shot

The scene froze—Tara and Mayank standing tall and celestial on either side of Deep's ruined form. His face scarred, covered in coarse hair, monstrous yet tragic.

"Iss Ishq Mein Marjawan..." played softly in the background—haunting, echoing with love, betrayal, and the agony of beauty turned curse.

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Chapter 10

Kashyap House – Aarohi's Room

Under the soft glow of her bedside lamp, Aarohi opened her cupboard and gently pulled out a large cardboard box wrapped with care. The wrapping was old but neat—handled with love and stored with intention. She slowly lifted the lid.

Inside lay several gift-wrapped packages. On each, she had written a milestone in her life: 16th Birthday, 18th Birthday, 21st Birthday, 25th Birthday. Her fingers hovered above the packages as memories came rushing back—each gift unopened, each year passed without celebration, each reminder of a promise left unfulfilled.

Deep's Secret Date Spot – Moonlit Clearing

In the silent night, bathed in dim silver light, Deep stirred. His eyelids fluttered open slowly, and through a foggy vision, he saw Tara's face—radiant, celestial. As clarity returned, he found himself no longer alone. Tara stood by his side... and beside her, an unfamiliar figure.

"Good evening, Mr. Singhania," the man said with an unnerving calmness. "We were waiting for you to wake up."

Confused, Deep tried to piece together his fragmented memories. A flash flooded his mind—the proposal, the rose, the blood, Tara asking for his heart. And then... the sensation of her hand entering his chest.

Panicked, he clutched at his chest. "My heart... What did you do?" he gasped, his voice trembling.

Tara didn't speak. Instead, with a subtle snap of her fingers, a glass jar shimmered into existence in her hands. Inside, a heart—his heart—throbbed rhythmically.

Deep stared in horror. "Is that... mine?"

"Yes," Mayank replied evenly. "The moment you offered your heart to Tara, she took it—just as it was meant to be."

Deep scrambled to his feet and lunged at the jar, but Tara pulled it away with a sly smile. "Not so fast, Deep Singhania."

He stumbled, falling against the edge of the fountain. As the water rippled beneath him, he caught sight of his reflection—and froze.

His eyes widened.

His once-glorious face was now twisted, scarred. Thick hair covered his arms and legs, his ears were grotesquely pointed, and from his forehead jutted two curved horns. He touched his face, chest, arms in disbelief.

"What... what have you done to me?" he whispered hoarsely, turning toward Tara.

Kashyap House

Aarohi opened a drawer and pulled out a makeup brush labeled "Best Make-Up Artist of the Whole World." She stared at it, then at the ticking clock. The hands pointed to 11:45 PM.

The Moonlit Clearing

Mayank stepped forward, his voice calm and ancient. "I am a part of the moon, a guardian of the night. And she—" he gestured to Tara "—is a child of the stars. My brightest, most capable daughter. Together, we bring balance to the universe."

Deep stared at them, stunned. "What does that even mean?"

Mayank continued, "We collect the hearts of stone-hearted beings—those who have lost all touch with humanity—and transform those hearts into stars in the night sky."

Tara held up the jar. "This—" she said, lifting it slightly "—is your contribution to the sky."

Deep's voice cracked, "Then how am I still alive?"

"Because your heart still beats," Tara replied. "As long as it does, so will you. But it no longer belongs to you."

"Why?" Deep demanded. "Why take my heart? Why this... monstrosity?"

Tara began to circle him slowly. "Because you had become a man without emotion. You judged people by their appearances, discarded them for not fitting your aesthetic ideal. You had no love, no empathy—only obsession. You became a beast on the inside... now, you look like one."

She stopped in front of him and met his gaze sharply. "This—" she gestured to his form "—is who you are."

Deep roared in frustration. "Give me back my heart! Return me to who I was!"

Tara stepped forward. Her voice was soft, but her words sliced like a blade. "There is only one thing that can restore you. Only one thing that can return your heart and your form."

Deep's eyes narrowed. "What is it?"

She took a breath. "True love."

As her words echoed through the night, a haunting melody floated in the background—
"Iss ishq mein marjawan... tu jo kahe woh kar jawaan..."

Kashyap House – Aarohi's Room

The clock struck midnight.

Aarohi looked up, the mouth organ around her neck catching a glint of light. She softly whispered to herself, "Happy birthday... D."

Final Montage

The music continued as the scene split into three:

Tara, ethereal and calm, her fingers curled protectively around the jar. Deep, disfigured and broken, his eyes filled with disbelief and suppressed rage. Aarohi, quiet and resolute, staring at the brush in her hands.

The frame slowly froze—Deep in the center, Tara and Aarohi on either side—each holding a piece of his past and perhaps... his future.

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Chapter 11

The Date Spot – Moonlit Clearing

Deep stared blankly, trying to make sense of Tara's words. "What do you mean?" he asked, confused. "I don't understand."

Tara began circling around him, her voice laced with clarity and calm. "You always believed that beauty was the definition of love. That because you were beautiful, the world would offer its love to you unconditionally. But now, if you truly want your heart back—if you wish to reclaim your old self—there's only one way: you must hear the three magical words, 'I love you', spoken out of true love... from someone who shares no blood relation with you."

"You mean someone outside my family?" Deep asked, taken aback.

"Yes," Tara confirmed. "Because blood always protects its own. Family love is given, not earned. But love from someone who owes you nothing? That's real."

She suddenly snapped her fingers, and in a soft shimmer, a sand timer appeared in her hands. She placed it in Deep's.

"This is yours," she said. "A reminder that time is running. You have exactly 365 sunsets to find that kind of love—one year until your 30th birthday."

Deep's eyes followed the falling grains. Tara pointed to it and added, "When the last grain touches the bottom, if no one has looked past your beastly form and loved you—the stone-hearted Deep Singhania—you will never get your heart back."

Kashyap House – Aarohi's Room

Aarohi continued to stare at the foundation brush in her hand, inscribed with "Best Make-Up Artist of the Whole World." Slowly, she tied a delicate tag around it: 29th Birthday.

"This year..." she murmured, her voice breaking, "I thought we'd celebrate your birthday together. I wanted to give this to you with my own hands... but fate had other plans."

She gently placed the brush inside the box, alongside the other unopened gifts, and whispered, "This will be the last time I remember your birthday."

She closed the box and pushed it away.

The Date Spot

Back in the clearing, Deep let out a mocking laugh. "You're telling me I need to hear 'I love you' from one human within a year? I could get 365 people to say that to me—one for each day!"

Tara raised a brow and smirked. "Your pride is your downfall, Mr. Singhania. Anyone can fake love. But I said it must be true love. Someone who falls for you—not your looks, not your name. And remember—" she leaned closer "—you've lost both."

Deep scoffed, "True love? Please! If I could win over a girl like you, who turned out to be made of stone, then trust me—I can woo any girl."

Tara's smile turned razor-sharp. "You didn't win me, Deep. I won you. I played the game—and took your heart."

Mayank stepped in. "Don't forget, Mr. Singhania. This is no longer your game. You gave your heart willingly, and now it's completely under Tara's control. Even when you were human, your temper and selfishness made you a beast. Now your body simply reflects your soul."

Tara's voice was firm. "You are now a beast—and with that come consequences. Your tears, if ever shed from true despair, can heal the gravest of diseases... even bring back the dead. But your anger? It can burn the world. If you lose control, fire will erupt from your mouth. And if humans discover you, they will destroy you."

Deep narrowed his eyes. "So I can't even use these powers or I'll die?"

Tara nodded. "Correct. You are cursed to remain hidden. But... if you want to return to your old self now, you can. There's a catch, though."

He straightened. "What catch?"

"If you choose to regain your human form now, you'll lose half your time. You'll have only six months to find true love. If you wait six months and then return to your old self, you'll have just three months left. If you choose the final moment, say four days before your deadline, you'll be left with only two."

Deep's tone turned serious. "And if I don't succeed?"

Tara's face darkened. "Then your time on Earth ends. Your heart will be turned into a star—one of these."

She reached for the necklace on her neck, just beneath the lamp locket. Tiny star-shaped charms glittered like diamonds.

"These," she said, "are the hearts of 24 others who once believed they were invincible—just like you."

Deep smirked. "Well, my heart won't join your collection. I can get someone to say 'I love you' in less than a day."

Tara raised an eyebrow. "Flat words won't save you, Deep. The heart must speak them. With feeling."

He stepped forward, locking eyes with her. "I'll get my form and heart back. Just watch."

Tara leaned closer. "I've never lost a challenge, Deep. Twenty-four hearts turned into stars—and yours will be the 25th."

Mayank placed a hand on her shoulder. "Let's leave him for now."

Tara agreed. But before turning away, she pointed to the sand timer. "Remember, 365 sunsets. And if you give up... if you surrender to death... your heart becomes a star instantly."

Deep, his voice unwavering, declared, "Deep Singhania doesn't give up."

Mayank gave him a parting glance. "Then may luck be on your side."

Tara gave Deep one last look before walking away. He watched them until they vanished into the shadows of the retreating night.

Alone now, he looked at the sand timer in his hand.

"365 sunsets?" he murmured. "Then my journey for true love begins... now."

"Iss Ishq Mein Marjawan... tu jo kahe woh karjawan..." played in the background as the camera zoomed in on Deep's beastly reflection in the fountain—haunted, prideful, and uncertain.

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Chapter 12

Outside Kashyap House – Early Morning

The golden sun had just risen, casting a soft glow over the quiet lanes. Aarohi rolled out her cycle from the porch, a basket full of milk bottles balanced at the front and a tightly folded newspaper secured at the back. Mounting her cycle, she began pedaling through the peaceful streets, her expression calm but focused.

She hadn't gone too far when a voice called out from behind.

"Excuse me! I need a bottle of milk!"

Aarohi halted, turned around, and said politely, "I'm sorry, all these bottles are already reserved—" Her words trailed off as her eyes widened in surprise.

Standing in front of her was none other than Tara.

"Oh... it's you?" Aarohi said, a little stunned.

Tara smiled lightly. "Yes, it's me. I really needed a bottle of milk—I'm feeling strangely hungry this morning." (In her mind: Every time I take human form, hunger attacks me like it does to humans.) "So... we meet again."

Aarohi frowned slightly, surprised by her presence. "It's odd seeing you here so early. Aren't you supposed to be somewhere else today?"

"Somewhere else? What do you mean?"

Aarohi reached for the newspaper from her backseat and unfolded it, pointing at the front page headline: "Deep Singhania to Reveal His Lady Love on His Birthday."

Tara chuckled, amused. "So... you do know quite a bit about Deep Singhania, even though you claim not to know him."

Aarohi flushed, clearly embarrassed. She stumbled over her words. "It's not like that. I just... I know what everyone else knows. That's all."

Tara narrowed her eyes playfully. "Really? Do you secretly have a crush on him?"

Aarohi gripped the mouth organ around her neck tightly and closed her eyes, memories flashing behind them.
Flashback: A younger Deep's cruel words echoed in her ears—"A bony, ugly creature like you has no place in my heart!"
Flashback ends.

Tara noticed the change in her expression. "Did I ask something difficult?"

Aarohi looked straight at her. "No. It's just that... I know I could never be Deep Singhania's choice. His heart already belongs to someone else. And I don't think that will ever change."

Tara's smile grew, unreadable.

Aarohi glanced at her watch. "I'm running late. I'll bring you a bottle once I finish my deliveries."

She got back on her cycle but paused for a moment and turned to Tara. "I hope your love story turns out just the way you want."

Tara nodded graciously.

As Aarohi pedaled away and disappeared into the distance, Tara stared after her thoughtfully. Slowly, she took the lamp locket from around her neck and held it tightly in her palm.

"There's something about that girl... something that ties her to my destiny—and Deep's."

Her grip tightened.

"Deep is mine. And I'll never let anyone come between us."

Cue: "Iss Ishq Mein Marjawan..." fades in.

Singhania Mansion – Deep's Bedroom

Deep slipped quietly into the house, avoiding the bustling staff decorating for his grand birthday celebration. Unnoticed, he locked himself in his room.

He caught a glimpse of himself in the mirror.

And froze.

His reflection was no longer the suave, flawless Deep Singhania. It was a grotesque, beastly form—scars, fur-covered limbs, elongated ears, and protruding horns.

Rage surged within him. The very deformity he had once mocked in others was now staring back at him.

With a roar, he smashed the mirror with a single blow.

Crash!

The sound reverberated through the mansion.

Startled, Mr. Ravindra Singhania looked up from the hall. "What was that?" he exclaimed.

He rushed toward Deep's room with the servants. "Deep! Are you alright?" he shouted, banging on the door.

Inside, Deep lost control of his emotions. His fury erupted—quite literally—as flames burst from his mouth, igniting the chandelier and quickly spreading across the room.

Thick smoke filled the air.

Mr. Singhania panicked. "Deep! Open the door, there's fire inside!" He banged harder, heart pounding.

Still no response.

"Break it open!" he ordered the servants.

Hearing that, Deep, desperate to hide his monstrous form, rushed to the corner of the room and crawled inside the tall cupboard, slamming it shut.

The door burst open just as flames raged across the space. The staff jumped into action, throwing buckets of water everywhere. After several frantic minutes, the fire was extinguished.

Mr. Singhania stood amidst the soaked, ruined room, gasping. "Deep? Where are you?" He searched desperately.

Hidden in the cupboard, Deep shakily pulled out his phone and typed a message:
Dad, please ask the servants to leave. I need to talk to you alone.

Ravindra read the message. "Everyone, out! Now!"

Once the door shut behind the last servant, he called out, "The room's clear, son. You can come out now. Tell me what happened."

A gruff, unfamiliar voice echoed from the cupboard. "Dad..."

Mr. Singhania stiffened. "Who... who is it?"

"It's me, Dad. It's Deep."

"That voice... What's happened to you, Deep?" he asked, his voice trembling. "And why are you hiding?"

Deep's voice cracked. "You've always said I have Mom's beauty and your gift for transformation. But... what if I told you I've lost all of that?"

"What are you saying? Come out and talk to me properly!"

Slowly, the cupboard creaked open.

Ravindra's eyes widened. His breath caught in his throat.

Standing before him was not the son he remembered—but a beast. Scarred. Mutated. Barely human.

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Chapter 13

Deep's Bedroom – After the Fire

Mr. Ravindra Singhania staggered back a step, his eyes fixed in horror at the creature emerging from the cupboard.

It had Deep's eyes—those unmistakable, sharp hazel eyes—but the rest of him... was unrecognizable. Thick, coarse hair covered his limbs. His face was disfigured, scarred and beastly, his ears unnaturally pointed, and from the crown of his head, two cruel horns jutted out.

For a few seconds, silence engulfed the room—except for the faint dripping of water from the extinguished flames.

"D–Deep?" Mr. Singhania's voice trembled, barely above a whisper.

Deep lowered his head in shame, unable to meet his father's gaze.
"Yes, Dad... it's me."

Mr. Singhania's knees buckled slightly. He gripped the edge of the scorched table for support.
"What... what happened to you, my son?"

Deep took a step forward, his movements hesitant and labored—as if the weight of his transformation bore down on his very soul.

"I don't know how to explain it... but last night, everything changed. I thought I was proposing to the woman I loved... I thought I was gaining the most beautiful part of my life... but instead, I lost everything."

Ravindra looked at him, dazed. "You were supposed to reveal her identity tonight! What happened to Tara?"

Deep's fists clenched.
"Tara is not who we thought she was, Dad. She's... not even human. She's a celestial being. A star. Her father is the Moon himself."

Ravindra blinked in disbelief, unsure whether his son had lost his mind or was speaking some impossible truth.

Deep continued, his voice cracking.
"She... she took my heart, Dad. Literally. She pulled it out of my body and trapped it in a glass jar. It's still beating, but it's not inside me anymore."

Mr. Singhania stumbled backward. "W-What? This... this doesn't make sense, Deep!"

"I didn't believe it either!" Deep shouted, his guttural voice echoing through the charred walls. "But she showed it to me. My heart, pulsing in her hands. She said I don't deserve to have it because I'm stone-hearted. That I never valued true love—only beauty. That I've become a beast because of what I had become inside."

Ravindra's hands trembled. He slowly approached Deep and placed a cautious hand on his shoulder. His eyes filled with tears—not of fear, but of helplessness.

"My son... what have they done to you?"

Deep's voice broke.
"They gave me a challenge, Dad. I have 365 sunsets to find someone who will say those three words to me—I love you—with true emotion. And not someone from our family. A stranger. A human."

He showed his father the sand timer Tara had left in his hands.
"If I don't find that kind of love before the 365th sunset, my heart will be turned into a star in the sky... just like the 24 others Tara has already claimed."

Mr. Singhania sank onto the edge of the scorched bed, the weight of the revelation pressing down like stone.

His voice was barely audible. "And if you do?"

"Then I get everything back—my heart, my form, my life."

"And if no one says it?"

Deep looked at the claws that were once his hands.
"Then this body dies. And my heart becomes another sparkling light in her necklace."

Silence returned once more—haunting, aching.

But Mr. Singhania was not ready to surrender. He stood up abruptly, wiping his tears and firming his voice.
"No. I won't let it come to that."

Deep looked up, confused. "Dad?"

"We'll fight this. There must be a way—if not through faith, then through science. I'll call the best doctors, the best scientists. We'll run tests. Scans. Everything. There has to be an answer. A cure."

The Search for a Cure

The next few hours passed in hushed secrecy.

Mr. Singhania flew in world-renowned physicians, geneticists, neurologists. Deep was examined under extreme confidentiality—behind closed doors, under false names.

MRI scans. Blood tests. Tissue samples.

No diagnosis matched.

No cell mutation, no virus, no hormonal imbalance. It was as if Deep's body had rewritten its own rules—his physiology no longer human.

One doctor, visibly shaken after an examination, murmured to Mr. Singhania,
"I'm sorry, sir. This isn't science. This is... something else. Beyond us."

Another simply walked out without billing. "What your son is... it's not curable. It's mythical."

Mr. Singhania watched them leave one by one, his faith in the rational world unraveling with each departing specialist.

Back to Deep's Bedroom

Mr. Singhania returned to Deep's side, heavier than before. The flickering light of the sand timer caught the tiredness in his eyes.

"There's no science that can explain what's happened to you," he said softly.

Deep nodded slowly, unsurprised. "Because it's not a disease, Dad. It's a punishment."

Mr. Singhania sat beside his son, placing a hand on his beastly back. "Then we'll look elsewhere. We'll search for that one soul. That one heart that can save you."

Deep looked ahead, gaze hardened but hollow.

"And if I can't find her?"

His father met his eyes.

"Then we keep searching. Until the very last sunset."

Kashyap House – Aarohi's Room – Morning

Sunlight warmed the quiet room as Aarohi returned from her paper and milk route. Her eyes lingered on the top shelf of her cupboard.

She pulled down an old gift box and opened it slowly.

Inside—memories, wrapped in years.

"16th Birthday"
"18th Birthday"
"21st Birthday"
"25th Birthday"
"29th Birthday – For the world's best makeup artist"

Her breath caught.

"I really thought I'd give this to you today... and maybe, just maybe, we'd talk like we used to."

But the memory that rose was far from gentle. That day at the beauty pageant. Deep's cruel words:

"...a bony, ugly creature like you has no place in my HEART!"

She bit her lip, blinking back the sting.

A knock on the door.

"Rooh, are you alright?" her father asked.

"I'm okay, Pa," she lied, quickly pushing the box back into the cupboard. "Just... cleaning."

He smiled. "Something in the air feels different today."

Aarohi looked away. Something did feel different.

She sat on her bed and touched the mouth organ hanging from her neck.

"Why do I feel like... he's in trouble?"

She shook her head. "No. I won't go back. Not again."

Singhania Mansion – Later That Day

Deep stood at the balcony, hidden in layers. The sand timer glowed in his clawed hands. The first grains were already falling.

"365 sunsets," he murmured. "Let's see if a beast like me... can be loved."

A sudden wind knocked over a lamp. The flickering mirror caught a glimpse—just for a second—of a softer, almost human reflection.

He stared, breath halting.

"Was that... hope?"

Kashyap House – Evening

Aarohi sorted the evening newspapers absentmindedly.

Tara's face flitted through her mind—her glowing skin, her words about Deep, her strange light in the sun.

Then Deep's old words returned, slicing through her heart:

"...a bony ugly creature like you..."

She took out the brush labeled "Best Makeup Artist of the World" and laid it gently in the box.

"I can't care anymore," she whispered.

But her heart murmured otherwise.

The First Sunset – Unmasked

The sky outside Singhania Mansion had begun to burn orange as the first sunset approached. Clouds drifted low like ash, and in the silence that followed his father's parting words, Deep made a choice.

He would go out—uncovered.

No scarf.
No hoodie.
No beanie to hide the horns.
No gloves to veil his claws.

He had worn masks his entire life, even before this curse. Today, he would not.

He descended the charred staircase like a shadow. A servant in the hallway gasped and dropped a tray. A scream nearly broke from her throat, but she bit it down and ran.

Mr. Singhania, watching from above, clutched the railing but said nothing. His son had to face the world—raw, scarred, real.

The mansion gates creaked open.

Deep stepped into the outside world.

Marketplace – 5:46 PM

It began the moment his feet hit the crowded bazaar.

Gasps. Whispers. Then screams.

"He's deformed!"
"No—he's cursed!"
"Don't look at his face!"
"Monster!"

A woman shielded her child, dragging her away.
A man threw a rock. "Go back to hell!"

The stone hit Deep's shoulder. He didn't flinch.

Another shouted, "He'll curse us all—look at his eyes!"

A fruit vendor upended a basket of apples trying to flee. A group of college students began filming on their phones.

"Guys, look! It's a real-life horror show!"

Laughter. Mockery. Hatred.

Deep didn't speak.
He didn't run.
He just walked—slowly, calmly—past the crowd, past their fear, their cruelty.

Until someone spat at him.

It hit his cheek.

And that broke him.

He turned around, eyes burning, voice hoarse:

"Do I look like I chose this?"

But no one listened. No one heard the pain beneath the beast.

Children cried. A man lit a matchstick, threatening to throw it. Another cursed him in God's name.

Deep backed away slowly. Then faster.

And finally—he ran.

Abandoned Alley – 6:22 PM

He collapsed near a crumbling wall, heart pounding despite not being in his chest. His lungs heaved. Tears streamed silently down his rough, scarred face.

His claws dug into the earth. His horns scraped the bricks as he leaned back.

"This is what they see now," he whispered. "Just this."

His reflection in a shattered window stared back—eyes red, fur matted, mouth twisted in grief.

He pulled his knees to his chest and sobbed. Not just from pain—but shame. Humiliation. The unbearable echo of truth Tara had spoken.

"You were always the beast. This curse just made it visible."

A soft thump caught his attention.

The sand timer in his pocket had slipped out. The grains inside glowed brighter—faster.

He picked it up. There was no celestial hum. Just silence.

And as the final rays of the first sunset vanished from the sky...

Deep whispered to the stars above:

"If no one ever says those words to me... will I even deserve to live?"

Singhania Mansion – That Night

Mr. Singhania waited at the main gate long after dark.

When Deep returned—mud-streaked, trembling, his eyes sunken and wild—Ravindra stepped forward and embraced him. The beast didn't resist. The father did not flinch.

Deep's Room – Midnight

The sand timer glowed faintly beside the bed.

One layer had fallen.

One sunset gone. 364 to go.

Deep stared at the ceiling, his voice barely audible:

"They hate me, Dad. All of them."

Mr. Singhania sat beside him, eyes glistening.

"Then we'll find the one who doesn't."

Kashyap House – Midnight

Aarohi couldn't sleep. The sky outside was quiet. The wind still. She looked at the mouth organ. And then... she played. A soft, mournful tune flowed from her lips, trembling, aching. Notes filled with unspoken love, pain, and all the years she wished she could forget.

Across the City – Singhania Mansion Terrace

Deep stood in the shadows, alone, his body still heavy with shame. Then—he heard it.The tune.So distant. So familiar. His breath caught.

The melody curled through the wind, wrapping around him like warmth in winter. And suddenly...he was six years old.

His mother—gone too soon—playing the same mouth organ as he fell asleep in her lap. He wasn't a beast in that moment. He was a boy. He was loved. The pain in his chest dulled. His claws unclenched. His eyes welled. "Ma..." His lips trembled. For the first time since the curse began...he smiled.

Scene Freeze

Aarohi, eyes closed, mouth organ pressed to her lips. Deep, eyes closed too, standing beneath the stars, face softened, remembering love. Tara above, her fingers tracing her glowing necklace... pausing as one star pulses—not dimming, but glowing brighter.

Iss Ishq Mein Marjawan... tu jo kahe woh karjawaan...
Iss Ishq Mein Marjawan... (melancholic reprise)

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To be continued.

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Chapter 14

Singhania Mansion – Deep's Bedroom – The Morning After

The room was dim, but not dark. The sand inside the celestial timer had now formed a slender mound at the bottom—only one sunset spent, and already, the burden felt eternal.
Deep stood in front of the mirror once again. This time, not to mourn what he had lost, but to confront what he had become.

He pulled a dark hoodie over his head, tugged the sleeves down to hide the coarse fur on his arms, and wrapped a scarf loosely around his neck to mask his jawline and the edges of his distorted face. His horns, thankfully, could be tucked beneath a beanie. Then he put on thick gloves to hide his grotesque, clawed hands, and laced up heavy boots to conceal the beastly feet beneath.

He looked at himself—half beast, half man—and muttered,
"If true love is the only thing that can save me... then I'll go looking for it, even if I have to search the ends of the earth."

Mr. Ravindra Singhania stood behind him, watching. His voice was low, almost trembling.
"Do you know where to start?"

Deep turned, his eyes burning with a strange mix of hope and defiance.
"No. But if there's even one heart out there that's different from mine... one that still knows what it means to love selflessly... then I'll find it."

Ravindra walked forward and slipped something into Deep's hoodie pocket—a tiny gold locket.
"Your mother's. She always believed that love wasn't found... it was earned. Maybe it'll help you remember what really matters."

Deep blinked, nodded slightly, then turned and walked out into the world that once adored him... now forced to hide from it.

The Search Begins – A Week of Sunsets After the First Sunset

Sunset 1 – The Frightened Florist

A quaint flower stall by the temple gate. A girl with braided hair, stringing jasmine and humming a bhajan.
Deep approached slowly, cautiously.
"Your garlands smell like childhood," he said, trying to sound human.
She smiled—until his scarf slipped, revealing the gnarled corner of his jaw.
She gasped. Jasmine scattered. Her lips trembled.
"Please... don't hurt me!"
Deep froze. His hand lifted in apology, but she was already backing away, whispering a prayer.
He turned and walked on.

Sunset 2 – The Café Encounter

At a roadside café, Deep sat with an untouched coffee. The waitress came by, cheerful.
"Would you like sugar with that?"
"No, thank you," he replied gently.
But when he smiled, the tension in his voice cracked. She tilted her head, confused.
Then she saw the edge of his beastly fingers—blackened nails curling under his gloves.
She blinked. Then stepped back.
"Sir... I think there's a takeaway option."
Deep nodded, voice tight.
"Of course."
He left before the next customer noticed.

Sunset 3 – Music in the Churchyard

A young violinist played in the courtyard of a crumbling chapel. Deep stood and listened, mesmerized.
When the music ended, he dropped a gold coin into the case.
"You play like the rain," he whispered.
The boy looked up, about to thank him—then saw the glint of a horn peeking from under Deep's beanie.
He froze. The strings of the violin quivered in his trembling hands.
Deep nodded once.
"I'll go."
And he did.

Sunset 4 – A Phone and a Prayer

A woman on a call dropped her phone into a drain. She panicked.
Deep rushed forward, removed his gloves, and carefully used his clawed fingers to retrieve the device from the grates.
"Here... you dropped this."
She reached out—then stopped.
Her eyes locked on his monstrous hands.
She took a step back.
"I—I'm sorry... I... I need to go."
He left the phone on the bench.
She didn't come back.

Sunset 5 – A Library of Silence

In an old public library, Deep browsed the shelves, drawn by the smell of paper and stillness.
He asked a young volunteer,
"Do you have books on forgiveness?"
She smiled faintly and pointed, but when she walked closer to assist, a flicker of his fur-lined neck caught her eye.
Her smile faded.
"Sorry, sir... we're closing now."
It was only 4 p.m.
Deep left without protest.

Sunset 6 – The Temple Diyas

An old woman tripped while carrying diyas in the temple courtyard.
Deep caught the tray before it shattered, but the scarf over his face slipped.
She gasped, clutched her chest, and looked up.
Their eyes met.
She dropped the remaining diyas.
"Rakshas," she whispered. "God save me!"
Deep stepped away slowly, eyes filled with grief—not for her reaction, but for the reflection of himself in her fear.

Sunset 7 – The Children's Laughter

Children played near a broken school wall, hopping across chalk-drawn patterns.
One girl saw Deep crouched behind a tree, watching silently. He was sitting there completely unmasked, thinking no one would notice him.
"Hey! Look!"
The other children turned—and screamed.
"Monster!"
They ran. One fell. Deep moved forward instinctively.
The boy wailed louder.
Deep paused, then slowly walked back into the shadows—alone.

Singhania Mansion – That Night

The door creaked open softly. Mr. Singhania stood with a tray of food. Deep sat by the window, back turned, silent.
"They all ran," he said finally, voice gravelly. "Every single one."

Mr. Singhania placed the tray down gently.
"Not everyone will. Keep going. You still have 357 sunsets left."

Deep's eyes flicked to the sand timer. One eighth of it was already gone.
He didn't speak. Just pulled the gold locket from under his hoodie and held it tightly.
"I'll keep trying," he whispered, to no one—and to everyone.

Riverside Bridge – Midnight

Aarohi walked her cycle slowly along the old bridge that crossed the sleepy river beyond Kashyap Lane.

Moonlight spilled across the cracked pavement, casting long, silver shadows. Her bag rustled with leftover newspapers and stale buns from the day's route. But her mind was elsewhere—adrift with thoughts she couldn't quite name. A strange heaviness had followed her all week. As if someone, somewhere, was calling out... without a voice.

She paused at the edge of the bridge, letting the cool breeze whip through her braid. Her fingers tightened on the handlebar.

Then—
A faint creak. A whisper of movement.

Someone else was there.

Her gaze shifted—and froze.

A lone figure stood on the narrow railing, silhouetted against the silver moon. Arms slightly spread. Head bowed. Cloaked in layers—hood pulled low, scarf wrapped high, as though hiding from the world. From himself.

And from this distance, he looked like he was one breath away from letting go.

Her stomach clenched.

No. Not on her watch.

She dropped her cycle with a clatter.

"Hey! Don't do it!" she shouted, her voice cutting through the stillness.

The figure didn't respond.

She ran, feet pounding the cracked pavement, dodging potholes, breath ragged.

"Listen, I know life sucks sometimes, okay?" she called out, nearing him. "But no one ever climbed their way out of hell by jumping into a river!"

Still nothing.

She growled. "Seriously? This is how you go out? Hooded mystery man drowns in a nameless river? Come on! If you're gonna die, at least leave behind a dramatic poem or something—'The world broke me and I broke back'—you know, be memorable!"

At that, the figure shifted. Sighed. Irritated.

But before he could reply, she acted.
Aarohi grabbed the back of his hoodie and yanked.

Startled, he lost balance—not forward, but backward—stumbling off the railing. Aarohi tripped in her momentum, her hands instinctively grabbing his scarf to steady him, and the two of them spun.

One awkward step. Another. Her foot caught on the concrete edge.

They toppled.
Hard.

She landed first—on her back with a gasp.
He landed above her, bracing himself just in time.

Their bodies froze.
The world did, too.

Then... their eyes met.

Hazel. Sharp. Haunted.

His face was still buried in shadow—but his eyes...

Those eyes.

Aarohi blinked. Her breath stilled.

Because something inside her recognized him.
Not his face.
Not his voice.

His gaze.

It was like hearing a melody she used to hum as a child.
Like a name she once knew, but forgot.
Like something written in her soul before she ever understood what longing meant.

Neither of them moved.

The breeze tugged at her braid.
His breath—barely audible behind the scarf—fanned her cheek.

And then, just as time dared to start moving again, Aarohi whispered,

"I know you."

He flinched. Almost imperceptibly.

She didn't know where the words came from.
Only that they were true.
She knew those eyes.
Not from stories. Not from dreams.
From life.

He broke the moment, tearing his gaze away, scrambling to his feet, adjusting his scarf like armor.

"Go home," he said gruffly, voice rough with something that went far deeper than cold.

But Aarohi stayed on the ground a second longer, heart racing.

"Who are you?" she asked quietly.

A pause.

Then, without turning, he murmured,
"No one you'd want to know."

And with that, he vanished into the mist—
Like a ghost the night had coughed up.

But the moment didn't vanish with him.

Aarohi sat up slowly, her hand closing around something—
A scrap of scarf, coarse fabric still warm from where it had rested against him.

She brought it to her chest. Her heart thudded—fast. Loud. Hopeful.

The moon watched in silence as Aarohi stared down the path he'd taken, eyes wide.

And something inside her stirred. Not fear. Not confusion.

A beginning.

An Isolated Hilltop – Celestial Realm Overlap

Far above the mortal realm, past clouds woven in stardust and silence, Tara stood at the edge of a glowing cliff. The valley below pulsed faintly with the rhythm of something not quite alive—and not quite dead.

In her hand: a glass jar.
Inside it: a still-beating heart.
Deep's heart.

For weeks, it had pulsed with nothing but despair.

Until now.

Suddenly, the beat inside faltered—Not in pain. But in... confusion.

Tara's fingers tightened. Her silver robes flickered like moonlight caught in anger.

"Dad!" she called out sharply.

A second later, a figure appeared behind her. Radiant. Ageless. Calm.

Mayank.

He walked to her side, his expression unreadable.

She thrust the jar toward him. "It's started."

He observed the pulse. Slower. Not weaker—but stirring.

"So," he murmured, "the beast has crossed paths with something that stirs the remnants of humanity within him."

Tara's jaw tensed. "There's a presence near him. A girl."

Mayank lifted a brow. "A human girl?"

Tara didn't answer. Her grip on the jar tightened until the glass nearly cracked.

"I won't let another girl come between me and the heart I claimed," she hissed. "Not after what I've done. Not after what I've waited for."

Mayank studied her carefully. "Tara... remember what we vowed. If the love is true—"

"Then we must let it happen." She finished bitterly.

But her eyes glinted with something darker.

"True love doesn't exist," she said. "Not for beasts."

She turned her back to the horizon, holding the heart close.

"I won't lose Deep."

Behind her, the heart pulsed once—stronger.

Not just because it had seen something. But because something had seen it. And remembered.

Scene Freeze

• Deep, walking alone through a foggy lane, clutching the gold locket in his pocket, breath uneven.
• Aarohi, on the bridge, hand against her heart, the scrap of scarf clutched tightly.
• The celestial timer glowing faintly... the sand slowing.
• And far above, Tara's constellation flickered—one star pulsing brighter than the rest.

Iss Ishq Mein Marjawan...
"Tu jo kahe woh karjawaan..."
(Soft, lingering mouth organ melody fades into silence.)

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To be continued.

Edited by Aleyamma47 - 4 days ago
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Chapter 15 (When the Rain Remembered)

Riverside Bridge – The Next Night – 11:57 PM

Aarohi stood where the moonlight pooled over the worn stone, one foot on the cycle pedal, the other tapping the bridge's edge. She was early—but her heart wasn't.

It had been racing since last night.

The stranger's eyes still haunted her. Not in fear. In memory.

She didn't sleep. She couldn't.
There was something unspoken in that moment when their eyes locked.
Something unfinished.

Now she had returned—with a flask of tea, a folded blanket, and a nervous heart she couldn't quite explain.

She stared at the spot on the railing where he had stood the night before, half-expecting he wouldn't return.
But something told her... he would.

11:59 PM

A rustle in the shadows.

She turned, alert.

A tall figure emerged at the far end of the bridge, the same layers, the same scarf and beanie. The same hidden presence. He paused, as if unsure whether to approach.

Aarohi lifted the flask. "Tea?"

He blinked.

She added, "No poison, I promise. Unless you like that sort of drama."

Still, he said nothing.

"Okay," she said, taking a sip herself. "Tastes like overboiled regret and soggy hope. But warm."

That almost—almost—made the corner of his eye twitch. A smirk? A memory? She couldn't tell.

She sat cross-legged on the stone, patting the blanket beside her. "I won't ask questions. Just company."

A long silence.
Then... he walked forward.

Slow. Guarded.

He didn't sit. But he did lean against the railing, a few feet away.

It was something.

Aarohi sipped her tea. "This bridge's cursed, you know."

He glanced at her.

"People say you lose something when you cross it alone after midnight," she added. "Me? I lose my filter."

He looked away. "I didn't come for stories."

She raised an eyebrow. "Then why did you come back?"

That silenced him.

She didn't press further.
Instead, she looked at the stars.

Then, softly: "Do you believe two people can feel something... before they even know why?"

Deep tensed.

Aarohi glanced sideways, careful not to look directly. "Because last night, when you looked at me... I felt like I knew you."

His voice, low and gravelly: "You don't."

"I didn't say I do. I said I felt like I did."

Silence.

And then, she did something unexpected. She pulled out the piece of scarf she'd clutched all night.

"This was yours."

He didn't take it.

She folded it back. "I'll keep it till you want it back."

At last, his eyes met hers again.

That same storm. That same ache. But something else now—conflict.

And then... the wind shifted.

Aarohi stood slowly, stepping toward him. "You're not going to jump, are you?"

"No."

"Good. Because next time I pull you back, I won't be this graceful. You're heavier than you look."

A grunt. A breath that might've been a scoff. Or a laugh. He turned away.

But she stepped closer—gently. Not too close. "You don't have to talk. Just don't disappear again."

He didn't nod. Didn't reply.

But he didn't walk away either.

And that was enough—for now.

Singhania Mansion – That Night

Ravindra looked up as Deep entered. His scarf and hoodie still on, but his gait... lighter.

"Long walk?" his father asked.

Deep paused at the doorway. Then, softly: "Someone offered me tea."

Ravindra stared.

"And?"

Deep placed the scarf scrap gently on the table, next to the sand timer.

The grains inside shimmered faintly—slower. Softer.

Deep didn't smile. But for the first time in days, his chest didn't ache quite so much.

"She remembered me," he said under his breath. "Even when she didn't know it."

Kashyap House – Aarohi's Room

Aarohi played her mouth organ again.

Not mournful this time.

Hopeful. Questioning.

Her eyes lingered on a notebook beside her pillow.

She opened it.

A single line written across the page:

"Eyes don't lie. And yours... once promised me forever."

Riverside Bazaar – A Few Days Later – Just Before Sunset

The clouds were heavy with unshed tears as the city bustled around Aarohi. She adjusted her jumpsuit and wiped her forehead with the back of her hand, scanning the fruit stalls for fresh oranges and murmuring her grocery list under her breath. She hadn't been sleeping well lately—those hazel eyes kept returning in her dreams.

Every time she tried to sketch them, her hands shook. And yet, the page remained filled with only one word:
"Why?"

As she moved toward the bakery lane, a sudden gust of wind rattled the tin rooftops.

And then the first drop fell.

One.
Two.
A rush.

Within seconds, the sky broke open. Rain poured in sheets, turning the dusty ground into a mirror of puddles and panic.

Stall owners scrambled. Shoppers ran for shelter.

But not Aarohi.

She stood still, her arms open just slightly, as if welcoming the sky.

Until—

A body brushed past her.
Fast. Familiar.
Clad in the same hoodie. The same scarf. The same quiet storm.

Her breath caught.

"Wait!" she called out.

He didn't.

She followed.

They weaved through the rain-slick alleys, her sandals skidding slightly against the cobblestones. Finally, he ducked into an abandoned verandah near the old clock tower.

She reached seconds later—soaked, breathless.

"You really need to stop running into me like a mystery novel," she gasped, stepping into the shade with him.

He turned away, silent.

The rain thundered on.

Aarohi stepped closer. "You're not here for groceries, are you?"

He didn't move.

She crossed her arms. "I get it. You're a riddle wrapped in a hoodie wrapped in a scarf. But those eyes—"
She stopped. Caught herself.

Too much.

Too soon.

But he turned.

Very slowly.

And this time, he pulled the scarf just low enough to speak clearly. His voice was rough, like wind scraping a cliff.
"You should stay away from me."

"Why?" she whispered.

"I'm not what you think I am."

"I never said I thought anything," she replied.

"I'm cursed," he said simply.

Aarohi blinked.

She should've laughed. Mocked. Walked away.

But instead... she stepped forward.

The hoodie was soaked now. The fabric clung to him in strange ways, outlining angles and bulk that weren't quite... human.

But her gaze didn't drift.

It remained locked on his eyes.

Hazel. Stormy. Hurting.

She felt something strange stir in her chest.

And then it happened.

The thunder cracked. Lightning flashed—

—and her hand reached for him just as his slipped, trying to steady himself against the slick pillar.

She caught him by the arm.

And as their fingers touched through his gloves—

FLASH!

A jolt. A memory.
A stage light. A voice. A glittering tiara.
And then—a cruel sentence whispered into her ears.
"...a bony, ugly creature like you has no place in my heart!"

Her eyes widened. Her body reeled back.

He stiffened. "What did you see?"

She stared at him. "Who are you?"

"I told you," he said softly. "No one you'd want to know."

She took a breath. "But I already do, don't I?"

Their eyes met again.

This time, it wasn't a recognition of the present.
It was the memory of pain.
Of a heartbreak too long buried.
Of a connection too strong to break.

"I... I know those eyes," she whispered. "I've cried over them."

And in that moment, a tear slipped down his hidden cheek.

Not from sadness.

But because she didn't run.

She remembered.

Singhania Mansion – That Night

Mr. Singhania watched Deep enter—soaked from head to toe, trembling. But in his eyes... something burned anew.

"Did something happen?" he asked.

Deep nodded slowly, clutching the gold locket under his hoodie.

"She saw a glimpse."

"Of you?"

"No," Deep said. "Of us."

He turned to the sand timer. The grains inside shimmered... and for the first time, slowed.

Kashyap House – Aarohi's Room

Aarohi sat by her window, drenched and shaking.

She held the sketchpad in her lap.

This time, the page wasn't blank.

It was filled with hazel eyes.
Outlined in shadow. Framed by tears.
And below them—one word:
"Deep?"

Old Bus Shelter – The Next Day – Dusk

The rain had passed, but the city still smelled of wet leaves and old secrets.

Aarohi sat on the cracked cement bench beneath the rusted roof of the abandoned bus stop, fiddling with her pencil. Her sketchpad lay open beside her, filled with incomplete eyes, unfinished memories.

She wasn't waiting.
But she hadn't gone home either.

Then came the soft shuffle of boots.

He was here.

Same hoodie. Same scarf.
Same silence.

He leaned against the old pole opposite her, not speaking. But she felt his presence settle into the space like fog.

She didn't smile. Didn't greet him.
Instead, she asked plainly,
"Why do you always hide?"

No answer.

She turned fully toward him now. "You walk around like a ghost, and I'm not sure if you're haunting the world... or if it's haunting you."

He looked down. The scarf shifted slightly.

Aarohi's voice softened. "If I'm not scared... why are you?"

His gaze met hers. A flicker of hesitation. Then he spoke—low and rough.
"I'm on a vrat."

Aarohi blinked. "A vrat?"

He nodded.

"Like a maunvrat?"

"No," he said. "Not silence. Secrecy."

She tilted her head. "A vrat to stay... hidden?"

"Yes."

"Why?"

He looked up at the sky, avoiding her eyes.
"To break the curse."

The air shifted. The sound of a scooter whirred past in the background, but in the quiet between them, that word lingered.

"Curse," Aarohi repeated, the syllables trembling on her lips.
"What kind of curse needs... hiding?"

He didn't answer.

So she stepped closer. Carefully.
"You say strange things. You speak like you've lived a hundred lives, but you flinch like you're afraid of the next minute."

Then, gently—
"By the way, I'm Aarohi Kashyap. And you are?"

A pause.

Then, after a breath far too long to be casual—

He said, "Raavan."

Aarohi blinked. "Raavan?"

He turned slightly, eyes unreadable. "It means... beast."

Her eyebrows lifted. "That's not your real name."

"It's the only one that fits," he said, turning his face away again.

Silence. Thick and damp.

Finally, Aarohi stepped forward, her voice steady but sad. "Do you think that hiding your face will hide the truth? Because it won't. Not from me."

She reached toward his scarf—but didn't touch. Just hovered.
"Your eyes already gave you away."

He didn't stop her. But he didn't move either.

Still, she dropped her hand.
"Fine. I won't force you. But if you keep calling yourself a beast, one day you'll forget that you were ever anything else."

A crack of thunder somewhere far away.

Deep flinched—but not from fear. From recognition.

Aarohi whispered,
"You said you're cursed. Is that why you've buried yourself under layers?"

His throat worked, like he wanted to say something but couldn't. Or shouldn't.

Then he replied,
"If someone sees me... truly sees me... the curse might break. Or it might finish what it started."

She took a slow breath.
"And which do you fear more?"

He didn't reply.

Aarohi picked up her sketchpad and handed it to him. On the page were hazel eyes. His.
Beneath them, a scribbled word had been scratched out. Again and again.
Deep.

He stared.

"I don't know your name," she said. "But I know your eyes. They've lived inside me longer than my questions."

The scarf rose and fell with his breath.
He handed the sketchpad back.
And before walking away, he murmured,
"Be careful with what you remember, Aarohi. Some memories burn when they return."

She didn't stop him this time.
She just stood there, clutching the sketchpad, her heart thudding painfully against a truth half-said.

As he disappeared into the dusk once more, she whispered to the wind,
"Raavan isn't your name.
And you... aren't a beast."

Singhania Mansion – That Night

Deep stood before the sand timer. The grains trickled slower now, as if even time had paused to listen—for footsteps, for a name, for a fate yet unwritten.

Mr. Singhania entered quietly, his presence more shadow than sound.
"She asked about your name?" he asked softly.

Deep didn't turn. "I lied."

"Why?"

Deep's hand hovered over the timer before curling around the locket hidden beneath his hoodie.
"Because if she says my name aloud... the curse might choose."

Mr. Singhania stepped closer. "Choose what?"

Deep's voice was low. Unsteady.
"Whether to free me... or destroy her instead."

The locket around his neck felt heavier than ever. He clutched it tighter, as if the memory it held could shield her from the weight of his truth.

Kashyap House – Aarohi's Room

The rain had long stopped, but droplets still clung to Aarohi's sleeves as she sat at her desk, scribbling furiously into her journal. Her hands were shaking.

Raavan is a lie.
But his eyes? They hold something older than pain.
Something I knew once... before I forgot.

She stared at the words. And then, after a heartbeat of hesitation, she wrote beneath them:

If he's hiding to break a curse...
Then maybe remembering is how I'll break mine.

Outside her window, the wind whispered, catching a loose page from her notebook and lifting it into the dark.

Celestial Watchpoint – Later That Day

High above, where time flowed differently and stars kept secrets, Tara stood atop a glimmering ledge, her lamp-shaped locket glowing dimly against her chest. In her palm hovered a delicate glass jar—inside it, a flickering heart beat unevenly. Faster now. Stirred.

Her gaze fixed on Earth, sharp and unblinking.
"She's already stirring something in him," she muttered, her voice laced with venom. "No... I won't allow this."

A soft pulse shimmered beside her, and Mayank appeared, arms folded, his eyes tired.
"The more you resist fate," he said, "the more it will pull you toward it."

Tara didn't flinch.
"I don't believe in fate," she spat. "I believe in claiming what's mine."

Mayank turned his gaze to the stars around them. "If you tamper with what is meant to be... you'll lose more than you know, Tara."

But she wasn't listening. Her fingers tightened around the jar. Then, with a flick of her wrist, she summoned a trail of celestial smoke—thin, sharp, and aimed like a curse—directed straight toward the world below.

The jar pulsed.
So did the sand timer.
And far away, a girl's journal page fluttered through the breeze... the name Deep scrawled across it in trembling ink.

Scene Freeze

• Deep, looking at his beastly reflection—his jawline still rough, his horns still hidden—but his eyes alive.
• Aarohi, sitting with the sketchpad, whispering to the wind, "Was it really you all along?"
• Tara, floating in celestial silence, watching the necklace glow—one star pulsating, not fading.
For the first time... it seemed to flicker not in countdown. But in hope.

Iss Ishq Mein Marjawan... tu jo kahe woh karjawaan...
Soft reprise... swelling like a heartbeat.

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To be continued.

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Chapter 16

Flashback – Many Years Ago – Kashyap Gully, Old Town

The summer sun glinted off rooftops, and the scent of tamarind and mango candy filled the air. Two little heads popped out from behind a stack of milk crates.
"Shhh, Deep," Aarohi whispered, barely able to suppress her giggles, her pigtails bobbing.
"You shhh," Deep grinned, holding a slingshot made from broken cycle rubber and a bottle cap. "If Kallu Uncle sees us, he'll make us mop the whole shop."
Aarohi rolled her eyes. "You promised we'd only aim at the mangoes!"
"I lied," he said with the devilish grin of an eight-year-old hero. "Now duck!"
The mango flew. So did the cap.
And five seconds later, Kallu Uncle's loud curses echoed down the lane.
They ran, tumbling and laughing—knees scraped, elbows bruised, hearts breathless with joy.

From across the alley, Rakesh Kashyap and Ravindra Singhania sat sipping chai on old stools, laughing like brothers. They had built their lives together—drivers, clerks, hustlers in the same mechanic's lane.
Rakesh looked at the children and said, "One day, these two are going to rule the world."
Ravindra smiled, eyes warm. "They already rule mine."
Back then, Ravindra was just another man in love with his wife and in debt to destiny.

Inside a Tiny Blue-Walled House

Chhaya Singhania hummed softly as she combed Deep's hair, her features glowing with a kind, understated beauty. Deep leaned into her lap, fiddling with the edge of her saree.
"Maa," he whispered, "do you think I'll grow up to look like Papa?"
Chhaya laughed gently. "You'll grow up to look like your soul, beta. That's what truly matters."
"And Rooh?"—he called Aarohi that, just like her father did—he asked innocently. "Will she always like climbing trees with me?"
Chhaya smiled. "She will... as long as you don't forget to help her down."

Backside Terrace – That Same Evening

Aarohi and Deep sat with their legs dangling over the edge, a small radio playing old songs nearby.
Aarohi nibbled on her guava slice, eyes distant. "Do you think Maa would've sung lullabies like the ones on the radio?"
Deep stopped chewing.
"She would've," he said after a pause. "She would've oiled your hair, told you stories with monsters and fairies, and made your favourite tiffin every day."
Aarohi smiled sadly. "How do you know?"
"Because your Papa always says, 'Aarohi's Maa loved dreams.'" He offered her the last piece of guava. "You love dreams too."

She looked at him.
He looked back.
"I'm your Maa's substitute till you grow up," he declared proudly.
"And then?" she asked, teasing.
He blinked, shrugged. "Then I'll still stay."

Rainy Day Memory – Age 9

It poured like the sky had cracked open.
Most kids stayed home. Not them.
Deep held a broken umbrella over both their heads as Aarohi stomped through puddles.
"Your mother will scold you," she teased.
"She only scolds me when I lie," Deep said, tossing his slipper like a boat into the drain.
"What do you lie about?"
He grew quiet.
"That I'm not scared when she coughs too much."
Aarohi reached over and squeezed his fingers. "You can lie to the world. But not to me."

Aarohi's 10th Birthday – Singhania Kitchen

Chhaya had spent the entire morning baking a small almond cake for Aarohi—because Aarohi was allergic to cream but loved almonds.
Deep helped, sneezing flour and licking batter.
Later, when Aarohi blew out the single candle, Chhaya kissed her forehead and said, "Today, you're my daughter too."
Aarohi beamed.
Deep sulked. "She's been mine since forever."
They argued for twenty minutes.
Chhaya just smiled. "One day, you two will realize—you never needed to be mine or his. You belonged to each other."

Three Years Later – Singhania House

The walls were quiet. Too quiet.
Chhaya lay in her room, the golden hues of her skin faded, her smile thinner, her eyes ringed with pain. Cancer had crept like a thief into her blood.
Deep sat beside her, his hands shaking as he read comic books aloud, refusing to see the truth in her silences.
Aarohi tiptoed in with a guava and salt—Chhaya's favorite.
"Maa..." Deep whispered hoarsely, "don't go."
Chhaya reached out, touching his face. "Even when I do... I'll live inside you."
Aarohi wiped her eyes and hugged Deep from behind. "We'll remember her. Together."

But "together" didn't last.
The funeral pyre glowed.
Deep didn't cry.
He didn't move.
He didn't speak to Aarohi.
Not that day.
Not the next.
Not ever again.

Present Day – Kashyap House – Aarohi's Room

Rain tapped gently at the window. Aarohi sat cross-legged on her bed, flipping through the worn pages of her sketchpad.
She stopped at a childlike drawing—two stick figures, one with spiky hair, the other with pigtails, standing on a tree platform under stars.
Her fingers traced the faded ink, her throat tightening.

FLASHBACK – The Sky House

Behind the temple courtyard, half-hidden by overgrown vines, was their secret world—a crooked wooden platform nailed into a neem tree.

They had called it The Sky House.

Once upon a time, it held everything sacred to two children who believed in dreams.
Inside a rusted tin box: scribbled notes, a broken friendship band, a small clay Ganesh idol, and a prized mouth organ Deep had once stolen from the local fair and handed to Aarohi like a crown.

That night, lying on their backs, gazing at constellations through leafy gaps, she had whispered,
"Promise me you'll never forget this place."

"I promise," Deep replied, his eyes serious under the moonlight.

"And me?"

He turned to her and smiled the way only a best friend could.
"I'd forget my name before I forget you."

She hesitated, voice trembling. "What if I forget everything?"

He rolled to her side, gently tapping her forehead.
"Then just look into my eyes... you'll remember everything."

Just a week before Chhaya's death

The sky above the Sky House looked different—heavier, older. The neem leaves barely rustled. The laughter of yesterday had turned into silence, thick and echoing with grief.

Deep sat cross-legged on the treehouse floor, fingers fidgeting with something hidden in his palm.
Aarohi, quiet for once, traced circles in the dust with a twig, her eyes distant—numb from the funeral, from the ache of watching Chhaya fade like mist.

He cleared his throat. "Rooh..."

She didn't look up.

"I have something for you."

Still, silence.

He gently placed the item between them: a silver chain with a tiny bronze locket, shaped like an old oil lamp. It shimmered faintly in the twilight, catching the dying light like an echo of everything they'd lost—and everything they refused to let go of.

Her eyes flickered. "What's that?"

Deep's voice was quiet. "It's called Deep. Like me."

She blinked. He offered a small, broken smile. "Not me-me. I mean the lamp. 'Deep'—the kind that lights up temples. This one doesn't glow... but maybe it will when you need it to."

She picked it up gently, her thumb brushing the curved spout, the tiny handle. It was beautiful in its own quiet way—handmade, imperfect, loved.

"I got it from Chhoti Dargah Market," he said. "Saved lunch money for weeks. Maa said... you always find light again, no matter how dark the world gets."

Her voice cracked. "Why now?"

He looked away. "Because if I lose you too... I'll forget what light even looks like."

The words hit her harder than any goodbye.

She slipped the chain over her neck. The little lamp settled just above her heart.

"Keep it with you always," Deep said—more command than request. "Even if we fight. Even if we get lost. That locket means... we're never really apart. Not you. Not me. Not Rooh and Deep."

Aarohi nodded.

And for the first time since Chhaya's illness, they hugged—a fierce, shaking, wordless hug that said everything the silence couldn't.

PRESENT – Tara's Neck

Now, years later, the same locket rested like a stolen vow against Tara's collarbone—gleaming under the cold light of the Celestial Watchpoint.

The chain had been reforged, but the lamp—Deep—remained unchanged.

She touched it absently as the Mirror Mist slithered from her fingers, memory and magic woven together.

"They gave this to each other," she whispered, "and still thought fate wouldn't rip them apart."

Her lips curled into a smirk as the mist spiraled downward—toward Earth, toward erasure.

PRESENT – Kashyap House, Aarohi's Room

Aarohi blinked hard, pushing away the sting behind her eyes.

She whispered into the dim, rain-touched quiet,
"You lied, Deep.
You forgot.
But I didn't."

She reached beneath her pillow and pulled out the old mouth organ—the metal dulled with time, but still whole. Still hers.

She brought it to her lips and played the notes of their childhood—broken, hesitant, but hauntingly familiar.

Outside, the rain fell harder.

And far away, in the shadows of an alley, a hooded figure paused......as if hearing a tune that once lived in his bones.

Present Day – Aarohi's Journal Entry

He was my best friend.
He promised he'd always remember me.
But grief changed him.
Took his heart... made it hollow.
Made him chase reflections of beauty instead of the truth of love.

Flashback – A Few Years Later, After Chhaya's Death – The Distance Grows

Ravindra, now clad in a crisp linen shirt and gold watch, stepped out of a black car and signed a property deed.
Rakesh approached, hesitant. "Ravi... what's going on? Why are you cutting us off?"
Ravindra didn't look him in the eye. "My son is healing. That's all that matters."
"But Aarohi and Deep—"
"There is no Aarohi and Deep," Ravindra said coldly. "That chapter is over."
And with that, he turned away from his oldest friend.

Kashyap House – Aarohi's Wall of Memories

Pictures. Scribbled notes. A broken slingshot. And a fading photograph of two kids eating ice cream on a broken bench.
She never tore it down.
Not even when he stopped remembering her.
Not even when she watched him on TV, transformed—handsome, polished, unreachable.

Beauty Pageant Day – Backstage, Velvet Curtains

Aarohi stood behind the curtain, hands trembling as she peeked at the crowd. Her name had made it to the finalist list—barely. But her heart was there for only one reason.
Deep Singhania.
Now a youth icon, social media heartthrob, and the chief judge of the event.

He entered the auditorium with a blinding smile, trailed by stylists and applause.
He didn't look at her.
Didn't recognize her.
When her name was called and she walked the ramp—simple dress, natural face—he didn't blink.
Instead, he humiliated her. Threw her off the stage.

And when another contestant, draped in sequins and cosmetic perfection, won the crown, Deep leaned into the mic and said,
"Now that's what real beauty looks like."

Aarohi was heartbroken.
Her palms clenched.
And in that single moment, every shared sunset, every whispered promise, every laugh by the gully's edge turned into a sharp ache lodged behind her ribs.
He had forgotten.
He had erased her.

Back to the Present – Later That Day – Kashyap House – Courtyard

Aarohi finished her deliveries and paused to braid her hair. The sun warmed her face, but something in her chest felt cold.
She looked down at her mouth organ—the same one Deep had once gifted her.
"Why do I feel like... someone's watching me?"

A gust of wind flipped an old newspaper open. The headline read:
"DEEP SINGHANIA TO REVEAL HIS LADY LOVE ON HIS BIRTHDAY."
She stared. Then whispered:
"I wonder why Deep never revealed her name.
Still chasing fairytales, this world."

She turned and went inside—unaware that a hooded figure stood just beyond the crumbling wall, watching her silently.

Narrow Alley – Just a Few Lanes Away

Deep exhaled. He didn't know why he had followed her. He only knew that when she had looked into his eyes that night...she hadn't seen a beast.

He reached into his hoodie and pulled out the sand timer.
"...sunsets left," he whispered.
And for the first time since the curse began...the monster didn't feel so alone.

Celestial Watchpoint – Somewhere Beyond Time

The stars hung heavy, as if listening.

Tara stood atop the glassy ledge, a realm unseen by mortal eyes—part sky, part memory. Her lamp locket pulsed against her chest, faint but insistent. In her palm, the Heart Jar flickered—its glow a shade warmer than yesterday.

She narrowed her eyes.

"She's already stirring something in him," she said coldly.

From behind the silver arch, Mayank emerged, arms folded, footsteps silent.

"You were warned," he said. "Fate doesn't like being tampered with."

Tara's jaw tightened. "Fate didn't lose him. I did. I bled for that boy when he didn't even know he was cursed."

Mayank sighed. "You don't own his story, Tara."

"I carved his path in my bones," she snapped. "When that curse devoured his mother, I stitched his soul back together. I kept him from turning into a void. I held the grief when Ravindra couldn't."

She clutched the jar tighter. The glow inside trembled.

Mayank's voice softened. "And yet... she holds his memories."

"That's why I must erase them."

A beat of silence.

Then, with a flick of her wrist, Tara summoned the Mirror Mist—a forbidden stream of celestial smoke.

She whispered into it:

"Take her smiles.
Take their treehouse.
Take every mango, every secret, every promise whispered under the stars.
Leave nothing."

The mist slithered toward Earth.

Meanwhile – Kashyap House – Aarohi's Room

Aarohi stirred in her sleep.

Her sketchpad slid off the bed.

The mouth organ rolled to the floor.

Outside, the wind howled strangely.

And in the air—
something shimmered.
Something ancient.

The faintest thread of memory... snapped.

Singhania Mansion – Deep's Room – Same Time

Deep jolted awake, sweat clinging to his brow.

He grabbed the sand timer from his desk.

The grains had stopped.

No falling.
No rising.
Just stillness.

Like time itself had been... interfered with.

He stood up slowly.

And for the first time in years, he said her name aloud—quietly, like a prayer.

"...Rooh."

The name echoed in the silence.

But he felt something else too.

A pang.
A pull.
And a strange sense of loss—
—as if someone had stolen his childhood while he wasn't looking.

Celestial Watchpoint

Mayank watched Tara silently as she stared into the starscape below.

He didn't speak.

Because what Tara had just set in motion...was forbidden.

Not even curses were meant to rewrite memory.

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To be continued.

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We have a man who is proud of his looks and hates the lack of good looks. A little narcissist.

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