Ariya FF: Tera Mera Rishta Purana {Part 12, P. 12} - Page 13

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Posted: 1 months ago
Really enjoying Riya and Arjun’s interactions! Arjun needs to earn her forgiveness. Excited for the next part! 😊
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Posted: 1 months ago

Nice update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 1 months ago

I was just discussing with a friend on forum that Arjun needs to be brought a peg or two down from his self built pedestal.

I love how Riya doesn't stay to listen to his BS. And the line "You hide behind the story of your pain" was hands on the best way to describe that man. The makers decided, angsty cop with a dead wife ? Let's make sure the audience never forgets that. And let's make sure Arjun can get away with any lack of mannerism with the sole justification of his broken self and dead wife.

Shouted unnecessarily? Pain from dead wife. Too smart for the team? Painful past. Can't seem to utter two syllables of respect? Dead wife.

I liked how Choree are speculating from a far and not pressuring Riya to reconcile and "forgive" him because he's had a rough past.

Arjun better be on his knees shouting he loves her and would die without her and that he needs her to be whole and whatnot.

Riya should be like "get on your knees and translate your thoughts with words and not grunts and silence. And make sure a stupid two year old can understand what you mean. Because so help me if you said something like 'i pushed you away so Sik won't hurt you' or the martyrdom act or even just 'My dead heart or life needs your color'. I'll hit your with a bludger."

anyways update soon and thanks for tagging me.

Ps. I found you have 4 incomplete Ss. And by Gods, I stumbled on them only. I'm sure you have complete ones too. But I'll need these finished before jumping on them. So kindly share an upload schedule or something so I know what to wait for.

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Posted: 1 months ago

a man is holding a baby in his arms while a woman stands next to him .

There should be one fic which is like


Arjun saying all kinda bs dur raho mujhse

Riya is like okay. No change in behaviour but no googly lovey eyes to him

Arjun confused

Riya comes with invitation card "guys meri engagement hai ana zaroor"

Arjun is 😲 😳 pikachu face. Brooding. Stewing in question

Riya is same smiling to others normal with him

Arjun is like after a long drama of jealousy jaw clenching - mat karo usse shadi Riya

Riya be like - why not? Handsome hai. Rich hai. Shadi ke bad iceland mein rahenge. 60000 sqft penthouse. 5 houses in world. 10 foreign vacation in a year. Parents bhi nhi hai for further drama. No sister as well. + Respectful hai. Scope for romance is A+++++


Arjun is like okay what else can I say 🤣🤣🤣🤣

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