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Posted: 11 months ago
#71

nah nah nah!

vaishvik is a brother?? story ka main cupid ko brother zone mat karo yaar!!

the equation of him and riya will be revealed soon!

it will be lit! i promise...

i appreciate that someone appreciate the work behind the dressing and styling that goes around the characters.....

damn man ! it takes time even to decide!

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Posted: 11 months ago
#72

Originally posted by: Lekha_Acharya

well! Even i have read such fanfics!

overbearing writings on scenery that the story does not reflect anything!

typical bollywood vibes!!


anyway i do have a serious question!

will people appreciate if i have to including smut scenes in the story?

I have the topics like scenes were those can be included, but if its not appreciated then i will just write hawa ke upar se nikal gaya like scenes...


i am confusing...

because there is a scene coming soon... like not a proper smut yet!!

but you can say a prologue kinds...


what are your thoughts?

people are adult here they can read smut. write whatever u want


lol i m staunch bw supporter so no comments


vaishvik is cupid huh interesting


waise do you have any plan how many chapters or till what point you want to continue this story?

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Posted: 11 months ago
#73

well... how many chapters is not planned ...

the happy ending obviously!


maybe 2-3 thread will be happening based on response!

and for the smut - planning both soft and hardcore one!!

then again, based on the response and platform guidance..


because even i have read some hardcore smuts in this platform for ariya itself!!


so i am excited to give my version to this one!


p.s. btw what is bw supporter means? and wattpad access hora hai? mera toh band araha hai ek week se! looks like everyone has that problem!

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Posted: 11 months ago
#74

Originally posted by: Lekha_Acharya

well... how many chapters is not planned ...

the happy ending obviously!


maybe 2-3 thread will be happening based on response!

and for the smut - planning both soft and hardcore one!!

then again, based on the response and platform guidance..


because even i have read some hardcore smuts in this platform for ariya itself!!


so i am excited to give my version to this one!


p.s. btw what is bw supporter means? and wattpad access hora hai? mera toh band araha hai ek week se! looks like everyone has that problem!

wattpad opening for me. maybe try in incognito mode


cool looking forward to how story progress

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Posted: 11 months ago
#75

nahi ho raha hai yaar!


sab try karliya maine! issue tak raise karli.. bas i cannot even open wattpad home page on browser...

mobile app toh pucho hi mat... its blank.. bus home page open oh raha hai but books open nahi ho raha hai!!!

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Posted: 11 months ago
#76

I'm in love with ur writing style yaar..... fab, fantastic, awesome.

I love it how u describe emotions... though the case is known but still u make it so so interesting....

Ufff Arjun is hit hard by cupid.... would love to read how his emotions take shape. He is both physically as well as emotionally drawn towards her....

As for ur question... it's ur story, u write it ur way... infact I would really love to read some bold stuff happening between Ariya...

u know what I mean right 😉

Plz update soon.

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Posted: 11 months ago
#77

absolutely dear!

i understood exactly what you meant!

and thanks for your comment!

would love to have your comments on each and every chapters of mine!

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Posted: 11 months ago
#79

oh! its been 2 days writing these 2 chapters and a day in fine editing the script and now it's posted!


all though the last minute final check for this chapter is pending which i will do tomorrow yet it's been fulfilling doing this chapter!

and i hope it gets lot's of love too!


p.s: the first intimate scene will be coming next chapter most probably! Any guesses on what is it? and how it is going to be?

i would love your comments.... and ideas too!smiley2

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Posted: 11 months ago
#80

the shopping scene, arjun buying anklet and making her wear it was so pretty


its refreshing to read arjun isnt going through she dont matter to me phases, straight he declared and others knew he likes her more than anything, even shree chotu knows it. its been what 1-2 weeks?

the stalker note is so creepy i wanted to take a shower to forget it. just yuck.


her pilot identity comes out and i think high time sameer questions and tries to find out about her. he declared himself as her brother, knowing abt her ye to banta hai. this pilot thing should come out- i thought its a creep from past trying to bring out old things. but its a creepy sex addict loser so there... lets see


arjun's tu mil to sahi epic the moment he gets it the person is dead.


your hindi command is so great each line is beautiful, i specially loved shree chotu saying ankhon se baat karna about arjun towards riya.smiley27

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