Awesome update
These emotions of Riya, ETF men were so raw yet so touching
Continue soon
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Awesome update
These emotions of Riya, ETF men were so raw yet so touching
Continue soon
Very very very sad .. honour killing is so so sad
Kani should not have cheated the husband who funded her edu and lifestyle despite everything..rest was ok ..even wanting to walk out to joy ...yet no one can take a life for such a thing..
Drug mafia, rapists, child abusers, terrorist , traitors against country or army deserve death ..rest deserve a trial a chance to repent after first offence
Amazing update
Love how the four ETF men felt jealous of Vaishvik's presence in Riya's life
Sameer's equation with Riya was amazing, their Raakhi bond is quiet beautiful
LoL Shree's main bhi kisi ki princess hu was awesome 😂
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the best scene was sam and riya definitely. some glimpse into sam's darkness and his sisterly bond. it feels like in front of him riya truly lets loose
vaishvik is brother i guess all the jealosy for nothing
. but shes been working there for a while kinda surprising team knows so much yet so little. its like she shows what she wants to.
the description of her dress, hotel, the manager was brilliannt
through others we see riya. shes shaken cause she believes in humanity. seeing awful cases doesnt mean shes steel.. but disagree with arjun thinking he or others need to be her protectors. in field thats her responsibility foremost. no killing is fine but injury is doable
arjun falling very very fast aag ek side lagi hai interesting
Fabulous update
Love it
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Thanks for tagging
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i love your commentry yet i was waiting for your commentry on vaishvik's and riya's comments!
those were my favorite part in the chapter!
it took me nearly half of the evening to perfect those parts!
Kanika case ke further investigation ke liye team jaipur nikli yeh vaishvik kaun tha riya ke sath all four men shocked ki riya ke life mein yeh kaun hai finally sab jaipur pahuch gaye yeh vaishvik kam tha jo rajpurohit bhi aa gaya arjun jealous to lag raha hai riya ke room mein woh note kisne choda feeling sad gor raghav woh yeh deserve nahi karta tha Kanika murder case solved uski maa aur bhai ne mara izzat ke liye joy is alive fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for tagging me
Originally posted by: Lekha_Acharya
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i love your commentry yet i was waiting for your commentry on vaishvik's and riya's comments!
those were my favorite part in the chapter!
it took me nearly half of the evening to perfect those parts!
I like the details aren't overbearing
Way back when the show was on air I had a girl gang here. There was another girl Priya she and I used to make fun of sone fics where description were soo elaborate, eg a red curtain hanging in a room somewhere. Priya used to say - it's a damn curtain. Move on give me the story 🤣 i remembered that thing yesterday when I was reading but it wasn't that things went on and on for no reason. It shows you really worked on it 👏👏
well! Even i have read such fanfics!
overbearing writings on scenery that the story does not reflect anything!
typical bollywood vibes!!
anyway i do have a serious question!
will people appreciate if i have to including smut scenes in the story?
I have the topics like scenes were those can be included, but if its not appreciated then i will just write hawa ke upar se nikal gaya like scenes...
i am confusing...
because there is a scene coming soon... like not a proper smut yet!!
but you can say a prologue kinds...
what are your thoughts?
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