Maan Geet One Shot: || The Heartbreak || - Page 2

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Hi there

thanks for posting the OS


Emotional OS.... beautifully written

sad that Geet misunderstood Maan

well Maan being distant did make Geet insecure

Geet's frustration was anticipated

of cos she confronted Maan

great that Maan explained to her

but she was not unconvinced

as expected he tried to assure

oh she wanted him to prove her love

he told that he is dead without her

Gosh she told him to die

Maan was indeed heart broken and hurt

unfortunately Maan met in an accident

Geet got to know what happened

glad hat she realised the weight of his words

at least she felt guilty

not surprised she was shattered and refused to leave Maan's side

hmm she read his diary and was remorseful

now she hates herself

liked that she is praying for Maan's recovery

pleased that she is not willing to give up

wonderful that she is willing to wait for Maan no matter what

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

hope Maan survives

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Originally posted by: TangledThoughts

Hello everyone!

I have come back to the forum after a long time. I wanted to try my hand at writing for Maan Geet. Did you guys like my one shot?? Please tell me in comments.


So I have been planning a SS on Maan and Geet Amritsar track. The infamous part where Geet had gotten angry at Maan due to the Holi scene of her forgiving Dev and Maan calling her "begairat" and "safed khoon".


Is anybody interested. It would have minimal Maasi and her family members. It would be all about Maaneet. Also, I am slightly biased in Maan's favour.


Is anybody interested?? Please tell.


Thank you.


welcome back

please post the SS

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Hi how are you?

still waiting for you to post the SS

thanks

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