Ariya : Destined to Love - Page 6

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

Dude is 99% at the other side of door and he can fight all he wants he's gone case and I like how you wrote it. Each small details each emotions. Kudos do you write professionally? Do we have a book author star within us???

I think they missed the hint in her words when she said she's trained for balance...on the edge of rooftop? What kind of training is this? Did she mean her martial arts and the men brushed it aside?

It's hard to understand Riya. On surface she's simple girl too good for world. Underneath all she has another thing going on. Maybe she's both. Duality exist in people.

Thanks for the tag. I was thinking since morning when the next update will come lol

Thanks and yes I don't write professionally, it's just my passion.

I was eagerly waiting for your comment too.

I simply can't understand how you could find out the intricacies in which the suspense is woven into the story when most of them fail....

Yes, they had missed when she said balance because they thought it was her martial arts training... they did not delve deeper...

now it's not surprising that she could have balance considering she could beat arjun and make him bleed.. is it?

yes.. riya is a paradox waiting to be uncovered... i promise by the end of the story you will suprised at how riya is revealed and how her characters are been shown..

p.s: i will love to see your comments on my stories' chapters

Originally posted by: Lekha_Acharya

Thanks and yes I don't write professionally, it's just my passion.

I was eagerly waiting for your comment too.

I simply can't understand how you could find out the intricacies in which the suspense is woven into the story when most of them fail....

Yes, they had missed when she said balance because they thought it was her martial arts training... they did not delve deeper...

now it's not surprising that she could have balance considering she could beat arjun and make him bleed.. is it?

yes.. riya is a paradox waiting to be uncovered... i promise by the end of the story you will suprised at how riya is revealed and how her characters are been shown..

p.s: i will love to see your comments on my stories' chapters

Hehe I love reading stories. Especially fanfics which has so much potential. If I like a story i would follow it...unless writers leave it midway. But then can't fault them too real life and creativity becomes an issue + response from fandom is problem too. Sometimes good stories get buried

I mean brute strength which hurts people vs very delicate thing like balancing is quite different isn't it. Also I like how you take the same cases from show and write your own spin. Riya standing on the edge is a scene even I had thought so many times and it's nice to incorporate It beautifully in the story

Amazing update

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks for tagging

Riya aur uska hygiene ho gai behas shuru arjun ke sath aur debate kis per chai versus coffee agar rathod beech mein nahi aata to yeh kabhi khatam hi nahi hota Kanika case ko solve karne ki koshish jari hai aaj Riya ka Kai roop dekhne ko mila jaha case ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tayar dusri taraf itni soft side cat dog ko khana khilane paudho ko paani dena watchman aur vendor se family ki tarah baat karna all etf boys ne yeh tai kar liya riya ko kabhi kuch hone nahi denge ek baar fir Arjun Riya ka hi soch raha hai dheere hi sahi woh riya ke taraf attract to ho raha hai fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for tagging me

Plz update the nxt part.

I love how u have weaved the honour killing case bits into so .any layers ..

I cried for ri more amd but for others ...

It's not arj fault as such he is oblivious to ri depth of love and running behind his own demons

Sometimes even if u know u ignore coz u don't want your demons on back of your loved one ..both emo and physical

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for tagging

It's so nice each suspect comes and keeps the case mysterious. Most likely the husband killed her

Did Riya lie or she was in love with someone? I wonder if the person will come back

She not understanding casual disgusting relationships is something interesting..there are shades of love and I assume in her past she has seen all sorts , so I guess when she was joy once upon a time all these negativity is something hard for her to imagine

Once again they missed the source like what kinda source is this who knows about affair?

Riya made a home in ETF quite literally, the team mates worry and Arjun is happy she's out of this like a warrior but till how long?

Ek casr ke andar itne sare mysterious part ek ek jis tak etifians pahunchi adhiktar involve kuch na kuch crime mein dusri taraf riya ka kuch na kuch naya dekhne ko milta hai sabse alag sabse different fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for tagging me