Sunn Mere Dil (GEO) #13 - Wahaj Ali, Maya Ali, Hira Mani - Page 22

Originally posted by: unicornhugs

Like the date scene that came out of nowhere but we saw every bit of what led up to each and every interaction between Ammar and Dania.

I don't think krq wrote anything about date scene set up. In krqs script, ammar is more important cktr than Bilal. So Ammar gets lots of attention in the writing itself but Bilal doesn't get a lot of set up or follow through in the writing. Remember the birthday conversation. We never got bilal's birthday party, because that call was jusr a plot device to get Sadaf to react and show her interest in Bilal. Bilals whole cktr is plot device to further sadaf's arc. Same with bilals backstory/trauma. If it doesn't further sadaf's story then anything to do with Bilal is not covered by the writer.

Originally posted by: hypnotoad

I was confused. What did Humsha mean by we both have our parts to play, and later she says Sadaf will now go back and talk to Ammar. Sir you are a very good actor. I thought Humsha was implying that it was Bilal who set up the whole thing to get Sadaf to stop pursuing him and talk to Ammar instead.

It’s confusing because sometimes Humsha looks genuinely sad for Bilal…or is she sad that he’s still not over Sadaf? I can only assume it was her talking to the maid because Bilal didn’t know about the details of Ammar and Sadaf’s meetup until Humsha briefed him. The maid was in talks with her and was the one to tell Sadaf that Bilal wasn’t in Singapore and he lies when he’s usually done with someone. We know that Bilal doesn’t usually lie and we know that Bilal didn’t want her to know that he wasn’t in Singapore. The maid was also the one the insisted on opening the door for Ammar because she was aware that he was coming. The maid also encouraged Ammar to go outside and talk to Sadaf. The way Humsha relayed the story to Bilal was that Sadaf let Ammar in and went outside to talk to him. Bilal looked a bit taken aback and hurt. It didn’t look like he orchestrated that.

Originally posted by: hypnotoad

I don't think krq wrote anything about date scene set up. In krqs script, ammar is more important cktr than Bilal. So Ammar gets lots of attention in the writing itself but Bilal doesn't get a lot of set up or follow through in the writing. Remember the birthday conversation. We never got bilal's birthday party, because that call was jusr a plot device to get Sadaf to react and show her interest in Bilal. Bilals whole cktr is plot device to further sadaf's arc. Same with bilals backstory/trauma. If it doesn't further sadaf's story then anything to do with Bilal is not covered by the writer.

Maybe it’s a blessing for Wahaj. I may disagree with some people because I actually like his character and found that only drawback to be lack of focus and screen time…it started out strong and then fizzled. But maybe he remained likeable because his screen time was limited. I feel bad for Usama and although I believe his performance is to be blamed too, he had a lot of very mundane scenes and the rest were of him crying. It really just made people hate seeing him on screen. Maybe if his scenes didn’t drag on so long, we wouldn’t be complaining about him as much.

Seriously they have cut all the important scenes but they didn't cut Usama’s scenes lol.

It seems like they are rushing things because of the backlash.

I am in doubt..I think the rain dance and those post marriage scenes will also be cut

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

I am in doubt..I think the rain dance and those post marriage scenes will also be cut

Those scenes won’t be cut but Ammar and Hamsha’s fates might be left ambiguous

Originally posted by: unicornhugs

I really felt for her when she was facing issues in her marriage. I felt for her right after too even if I didn’t agree with what she was doing.

I think Sadaf was supposed to have an empowering moment. After her father’s death, Bilal was taking care of everything for her. After he backed off, or rather lied and backed off, she felt she is alone and handled things in her own way without anyone else’s involvement or influence. Her mom told her to try and reconcile with Ammar. With Bilal giving her the cold shoulder, he is no longer someone she can lean on and most importantly not someone who is there as just another option. Ammar is constantly playing victim and she was meant to just take charge and just enjoy once and for all. She’s being praised on YouTube and they’re usually hating on her. I don’t get it.

Anyways I feel like in theory it isn’t a terrible story but the dialogue and execution just ruined it. It’s a sensitive topic both for those who have lost people to suicide and to those who face this type of emotional manipulation. You hear about stories where one partner tries to control the other one through these types of tactics using self harm. Sensitive topic overall. Dedicating that much time on her pushing him to take the pills is triggering for many. Yes the pills were fake but it wasn’t done well. What was with the look of disappointment after? It gave it psychotic vibes, it was like she enjoyed that control of having someone want to take their own life for her but was disappointed when he didn’t. That isn’t what it’s supposed to be but it is how it came off.

Plus her coming over and getting upset with Bilal in itself wasn’t wrong but her dialogue didn’t really make sense. She’s been trying to get with him since she separated with Ammar. Again, even though I don’t agree with how she handled that, I empathized with her because many people behave this way in this situation. She’s been flirty on the phone, wanting to meet with him at 1 am even when he is discouraging her and then she storms in acting like he needs to get over himself because she just wants to concentrate on work. I think she’s always had feelings for him but she’s never expressed this so you can’t help but understand why he would assume that he’s just a rebound.

I never felt for Sadaf even though I wanted to feel for her...the main problem lies in the story execution..because Sadaf herself rejected BA and married Ammar...so she is facing consequences of marrying the wrong person...but the way post divorce track was handled that was very absurd and confusing..they literally made Sadaf borderline psychotic..it didn't make sense at all..and no one could relate to her.

The problem is with the way Sadaf's character has been shaped up...only for confusing people she has been doing lot of absurd things.

Is there any logical story in this show? Very regressive, and domestic violence, ridiculous dialogues, yuck yuck yuck show.

Wahaj should be more careful in taking new dramas. I'm still watching for him though our big cry baby Ammar is the main lead.

Am I the only one here who feels that the post marriage scenes and rain dance will be edited out from the episode and those were only for OST?

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

Am I the only one here who feels that the post marriage scenes and rain dance will be edited out from the episode and those were only for OST?

It will be there. It will be 3 to 5 mins max anyways.

Originally posted by: hypnotoad

It will be there. It will be 3 to 5 mins max anyways.

Looking at the level of betrayal we faced I dont trust geo and 7th sky.