Akdha FF - Embers of Fate - Chp5 Pg 5 / 12 Feb 2025 - Page 2

Interesting start dear 😍

Just amazing

It was crisp precise & to the point specifically Jodha she was strong firm & even soft hearted

Well I really appreciate that she took initiative & though it was dangerous but it was equally important that things are managed ... This wasn't expected by her brother but she made him understand

Jalal is carrying on with this war & now things are going to be bit interesting hopefully this war ends on time

Thanks for the Tag ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

Originally posted by: Gold.Abrol

Interesting start dear 😍

Just amazing

It was crisp precise & to the point specifically Jodha she was strong firm & even soft hearted

Well I really appreciate that she took initiative & though it was dangerous but it was equally important that things are managed ... This wasn't expected by her brother but she made him understand

Jalal is carrying on with this war & now things are going to be bit interesting hopefully this war ends on time

Thanks for the Tag ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

Thanks so much ... stay tuned

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Prologue

The battlefields were quiet now, but the war wasn’t over.

Jalaluddin Muhammad stood alone, staring out at the horizon, the weight of his crown feeling heavier than ever. The air was thick with dust and smoke, and the land lay in ruins. He’d won today, but something didn’t sit right. He could feel it in his bones...this war wasn’t going to end the way he expected.

And then, there she was.

Jodha Bai. Registan ka Gulab.

She appeared from the smoke, riding through the wreckage like she belonged here, her eyes focused, unflinching. He didn’t know why she was here, or what she wanted, but one thing was clear...nothing about her was ever simple. Not then, not now.

The space between them was filled with questions, unspoken words, and a tension neither of them could escape.

Could there be peace between them?
Could there ever be peace at all?

The answer wasn’t in the battle.
The answer wasn’t in the crown.
The answer was somewhere in the quiet.

But finding it... was another fight entirely.

Wow, the prologue seems exciting

Please post next chapter soon

Originally posted by: talesmith

Wow, the prologue seems exciting

Thank you ... 😊

Glad u liked it

Originally posted by: talesmith

Very interesting, thrilling right from the start

Hey thanks...means a lot dear

Originally posted by: talesmith

Please post next chapter soon

Yes dear will update soon..stay tuned

Originally posted by: Fieristic

Amazing chapter nushhkiee Your take is interesting and intriguing will be waiting for more ...... Hopes are high

thank youuuu

will update soon