Veerzara-fanfic - Page 5

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Part-13....Anjali weeps:pammi,i was mistaken.yug is
not veer. P:what? A:yes,recently only i realised that.
P:then..who's the real Veer? A:kavya. P:what? A:yes,he
is the real Veer. pammi gets confused:i understand ur
feelings...but now its too late since ur wedding is
fixed with yug & the wedding is so near.its 2morrow.
A:i no that.i can't bear it. P:if u luv kavya that much
then why did'nt u tell him ur luv immediately?is it bcoz
of ur pity 4 yug? A:yug wants me 2 go with
kavya.but i told him not 2 tell kavya anything about my
luv. P:dammed,why?u luv kavya very much & yug
does'nt care about it.then whats the problem?why did'nt
u tell like that 2 yug? A:bcoz kavya luves another
girl. P:what? A:yes,so i don't want 2 destroy his
peace by telling him about my luv 4 him. P:these rock
starts hav many female fans.kavya may be having a soft
corner 2wards 1 girl.that dies'nt mean that he loves
her. A:kavya is not that sort of a character.he loves
that girl so much that his luv poems r inspired by his
luv.P:now u sleep anjali.pammi makes the crying
anjali lie down. she covers her body with a sheet.then
goes out of the room. she thinks a lot about what anjali
told.then she calls up yug. Y:hello. P:yug,i'm
pammmi speaking. Y:ya ...in this midnite?tell
pammi,anything serious? P:where r u now? Y:at the
bachelor's party. P:i want 2 talk 2 u seriously.very
urgent.so i'm cuming there now. pammi dresses & goes 2
the bachelor's party.full of dance,music,drinks...there
her eyes search 4 yug in the crowd.but she does'nt
find him.suddenly sum1 touches her from behind.she truns
back. WHO IS THAT PERSON?

wow interesting
nice story jas
i am loving it

yes its cool yaar please
continue
i am waiting from yesterday 😳

its really good post next part soon. 😊 😊 😊

Jas, the tension is killing me, you know for a minute i seriously thought Kavya just gave up and let Anjali and Yug marry! Thx god it was a dream, i think you incorporate the songs frm the film very well into the story so well done. 😊

So you finally brought back Pams huh, 😆 i dnt mind her tht much in this coz she actually helps KA out! I wonder if that person tapping her is a drunk Kavya 😆 we all know he does crazy things when he is drunk!

Plz update soon as i actually not sure how they will work things out now coz it seems more could happen to complicate things but the wedding is only a day away! 😲 Why is Yug not stopping it, even if Anjali doesn't tell Kavya, Yug doesn't need to marry someone he dont love! I all confused! 😕 😆

Part-14....It was yug. pammi:thank god..i cud'nt see
u. Y:whats the matter misty? P:yug...don't feel
bad.but i hav 2 say.anjali does'nt luv u. Y:i no
that.she luved me thinking that i;m veer.but veer is
kavya bhayya.her heart was broken.i told her that i'll
tell kavya bhayya about it.but she did'nt want 2. P:its
bcoz she feels that it hurts kavya.bcoz kavya luves sum1
else. Y:yes,b ut i think anjali is the best person 4
him.he has'nt even seen the girl whm he loves.no
guarantee that she'll luv him. P:who is she?
Y:kavya bhayya luves the poetess Zara whom he has never
seen. pammi was surprised:what?poetess zara?wow!
Y:what? P:yug,its kripa. Y:what? P:really.anjali
writes poems.her pen name is zara. Y:that means kavya
bhayya's beloved whom he is waiting 4 is anjali?
P:ya...they r made 4each other by god.bcoz thats why
they loved each other without knowing each other. Y:what
a sweet news.i want 2 tell this 2 kavya bhayya. P:i
want 2 inform this 2 anjali. Y:2morrow they'll wed.
P:yes. they shake hand. pammi goes home.she sees the
sleeping anjali.so she won't make her get up. yug
reaches home.but does'nt see kavya in his room. Y:where
did kavya bhayya go? nitya:he is a responsible
brother.has gone 2 do sum wedding arrangements. yug
gets irritated.he thinks:everything is spoiled.kavya
bhayya has selected the correct time 2 go. pammi opens
her eyes in the morning.she was shocked 2 see the
clock:oh god,i'm so late 2 wake up 2day.where is anjali?
anjali's mom gayathri cumes:ah pammi,u got up?get ready
fast. P:aunty,where is anjali? G:she is getting ready.
pammi thinks:i've 2 tell anjali everything now. WILL
PAMMI & YUG B ABLE 2 STOP THE WEDDING?

oh my GOD PLZ cont it really intresting. 😊 👏

hey jas really interesting
continue
waiting for next part 😳