Is the show loosing its charm?

I have been watching this show since day 1 and liked the characters and the lead pair chemistry but just like all other shows they are just dragging the story line without a ray of hope that the leads are gonna be together anytime soon. There is always a threshold beyond which it's too much and you loose interest.  Also the script and dialogs are going down the drain and becoming inconsistent and incoherent.  Like what happened to Tara? Did they not act on her confession? There is no talk of that. The gas leak,no body is interested that how such a blast happened? What about the live streaming of Amvira on holi day? Did it not stream until the phone broke ? If not , then what was abhirajs plan anyway? And if it did stream, then till now no one saw or the writers conveniently forgot? The writing and the dialogs have become so sloppy that they don't connect the emotions of fl and ml. This is becoming so frustrating and upsetting that they are not using the full potential of the leads because of poor writing. This has become just another pride and prejudice story just like all other Indian shows, a rich family , controlling mother, rich businessman son ( Darcy like) , poor fl with tons of atma samman , eye locks, falls and catches. 90% of shows are like that, only few show are different.  Atleast they should try to churn a better way to use the lead pair and draw a good story progression.  Here it feels like a rubber band being stretched as much as possible.  How will you get highest rating if you don't do things differently?  Whatsay??

- Screenwriting has been sub-par since Ep 1. 

- Too many villains is another down side - at least one of them is missing all the time.  [Jayesh and Rajeev go missing many times.] 

- There was no need to bring in the two new villains, when the existing villains were enough to do what was intended to be done. (Replace what Abhiraj does with Rajeev... it still fits - Rajeev has better reasons to avenge Amruta and Virat along with her.)

- The villains getting let go off without any problem is another. The way it is done is really bad, even if I can understand that this particular villain is not meant to be exposed right now. attempted molestation and murder, kidnapping, fraud.... nope.... none of them are punishable offences. 

- Virats misunderstanding could've been avoided - that really set the show on a downhill path. Even if they wanted to do it, it could've been toned down quite a bit. The things he said and did, made Virat not the 'One' for Amruta. Needs a growth in character. 

- I dont have much complaints about the leads not being together - ideally it should take time - him being a divorcee and having his own bad past and reservations. Forced eyelocks and fall and holds should've been avoided - at least the quantity of it. Their scenes look better w/o these forced eyelocks and fall and holds. 

- While some say its 'better than other shows' etc. If they have to do well, they need to have something unique (or good) of their own to offer, without any comparisons to other shows, to leave a mark. They do have Sriti who can hold the fort for a long time if needed but without a good screenplay, even she wont be able to do much. 

PS: Did forget the ML's family, who has been cringe from day one. 

If Mukta, her writers/director just peep into the forum daily and read the feedbacks, they can make a U turn and go in the right direction with an interesting story. They need to plan plots/execute them well, complete each plot logically such that the viewers are satisfied the antagonists have been put in place even if not exposed or punished.

AmVira should be given time to understand each other/gaining trust/developing a strong friendship/falling in love only later and gradually. Amurta needs to sort out her parents' divorce issue, get a home of their own, a good job, safeguard their financial status to support Harsh in his medical career until he becomes a professional who can take care of his family well. Until then, she will not be inclined to develop any romantic notion towards Virat. Further, Virat's character needs to shape up strongly/maturely/reliable at all times to become a suitable partner for Amruta.

The Ahuja family should be filtered of all unwanted characters/Dildaar made sronger/reliable and some new good/sensible female relative imported to balance the number of female villains they have currently

Everyone in the show is behind amruta character without any big reason.Unnecessary target of character should be reduced.

Execute ur story properly so we can relate to character or can sympathize with them.

Stop showing professional and legal matter in wrong way in a show.Audience are not uneducated and even ur character are shown educated.

Tell ur editor to chop scene properly lol.

Also reduced the background music when they speak imp stuff something i can't hear dialogue may be it can be my personal issue too.

Just see how foolish, in today's episode abhiraj conveniently changes home ownership papers and puts babitas name . How is that possible? This is just slack writing to stretch story. They really think audience is so dumb?

Originally posted by: soniyas

Just see how foolish, in today's episode abhiraj conveniently changes home ownership papers and puts babitas name . How is that possible? This is just slack writing to stretch story. They really think audience is so dumb?

Daily drama is stretch of story but stretch it sensibly and legally or show the audience the procedure of doing fraud humme bhi pata chale how you guys did it.

Raj is shown as delhi guy but he has contacts in mumbai that too for doing fraud.

Originally posted by: Adiandsid

- Screenwriting has been sub-par since Ep 1. 

- Too many villains is another down side - at least one of them is missing all the time.  [Jayesh and Rajeev go missing many times.] 

- There was no need to bring in the two new villains, when the existing villains were enough to do what was intended to be done. (Replace what Abhiraj does with Rajeev... it still fits - Rajeev has better reasons to avenge Amruta and Virat along with her.)

- The villains getting let go off without any problem is another. The way it is done is really bad, even if I can understand that this particular villain is not meant to be exposed right now. attempted molestation and murder, kidnapping, fraud.... nope.... none of them are punishable offences. 

- Virats misunderstanding could've been avoided - that really set the show on a downhill path. Even if they wanted to do it, it could've been toned down quite a bit. The things he said and did, made Virat not the 'One' for Amruta. Needs a growth in character. 

- I dont have much complaints about the leads not being together - ideally it should take time - him being a divorcee and having his own bad past and reservations. Forced eyelocks and fall and holds should've been avoided - at least the quantity of it. Their scenes look better w/o these forced eyelocks and fall and holds. 

- While some say its 'better than other shows' etc. If they have to do well, they need to have something unique (or good) of their own to offer, without any comparisons to other shows, to leave a mark. They do have Sriti who can hold the fort for a long time if needed but without a good screenplay, even she wont be able to do much. 

PS: Did forget the ML's family, who has been cringe from day one. 

The thing is nowadays the shows produced don't have that star quality or content which the earlier shows used to have.This serial is purely running on that actresses charm who was the hallmark of Kumkum Bhagya that's it.

Since the FL is a fine actress in her own right that's what grabs the eyeballs though the ML is also putting his 100% effort but the character is stoic lacks substance and the proper emotions to begin with.

The days of fine shows like Astitva or Tara are long gone.Its all about the TRP ratings now but even this serial has failed to generate the same.

Virat could have been shown as helping Amruta in getting a new job or providing an alternative accomodation to the  Chitnis family neither of which has been done by Virat.

I won't say that the old serials were great some of them even might not have been good but nowadays there is no difference between watching a Savdhaan India or a regular Saas Bahu Saga like the Bhagyas or the current serial.

Everytime plottings everytime arguments this does not even happen in real life also perhaps.Even the Horror series were watchable and quite good.

Virat is always shown as living in the house does the guy even go to office? Why he is not shown in Tuxedos or Formal Business attire? He's shown as wearing casuals and informal clothes everytime and the guy is a Business Tycoon of the Year.

He has no clue about his business forget what's going on behind his back in the Ahuja house.

Why does Viraat's mom hate Amruta so much? No logic here.Amruta has not even started her relationship with. Virat.

Entry of too many villains it's like too many cooks spoil the broth.The villain side is locked and loaded what about the good characters?

How much time will the CV's rely on eyelocks-Fevi Kwik scenes between Amruta and Virat?