KMTMG EDT # 5 - Page 110

Originally posted by: ambsug

It looks like the writers just decided to do a show with Sriti/Arjit without any detailed planning of the story or characters.

Yes, been feeling this right from the first few episodes itself. Scenes and tracks are focused mostly on them and the others are made to act around.. especially all the dances and the confrontation performances. Either Ammu is accused or Virat.

Now when Babita was accused of illegally annexing Jahan's house, she could have clearly denied it rather than the guilt tripping she was trying to make Virat do. No logic why she wouldn't outright deny everything other than to yet again make the villains go scot free. the trp has decreased and not showing any chance of increasing, yet they are still playing clueless chickens in all the tracks.

That’s nice. I never paid attention in KKB also.

I know it’s just a set so does not matter, producers don’t have budget to pay much attention to the architecture. As long as the drama is there to attract TV viewers , they don’t care.

Originally posted by: flutterby

Yes, been feeling this right from the first few episodes itself. Scenes and tracks are focused mostly on them and the others are made to act around.. especially all the dances and the confrontation performances. Either Ammu is accused or Virat.

Now when Babita was accused of illegally annexing Jahan's house, she could have clearly denied it rather than the guilt tripping she was trying to make Virat do. No logic why she wouldn't outright deny everything other than to yet again make the villains go scot free. the trp has decreased and not showing any chance of increasing, yet they are still playing clueless chickens in all the tracks.

I can see all zee show trp going down not just this.I can agree that chalo in this show story is not going strong so its happening but what abt other shows unko kya hua.Now all the show are not interrelated.I didn't even knew bhagya lakshmi it too ekta show lol

They have to focus what they want to show going back and forth regarding track shown.Like divorce was first track of the show other then cheat rajiv and amu working for peanut.Still i am not aware as viewer abt divorce status?

Bab was more like my son doubting me more then anything else that too for amu.And what will she get by buying that kabad sa ghar she can buy better place they are Ahuja's lol.Virat should have shown paper's to his mom and asked what is this? Why her name is there on this.Rather then all that melodrama,

Originally posted by: Annu.

I pay attention 😉 They spend so much on set and decoration so attention dena padta hain. The candles shown in drama are burning real not fake.We do pay attention.

In kkb still today i am not able to figure out Abhi ki room ki balcony ke entry kahan se hain ? Wadrobe ke inside bathroom ki entry thi so where exactly was balcony lol

Earlier years drama they use to even shoot in real locations and house now mostly they are shooting on set.

SRK ka current house mannat is shown in many movies before he bought it 😉

That's what writers thinks 😂

Me too... but dont complain unless it's really weird. Wont have cared about this common terrace or 2 wings if they hadnt shown the cgi pic. Had thought until then that the two wings are connected.

Btw did look like Ishika's house looked different in the last ep. Havent rechecked.

Yeah... kkb... in the early days of marriage Pragya would walk towards a non existent door in the direction of the TV when she had to sleep in the balcony.

One scene that I loved but made me wonder where the couch has gone was the one where Pragya cries and feels Abhi is around in the room after his arrest in Simo track. No idea why they removed the couch that scene... but made it a 9/10 scene in what was an otherwise perfect one. (Esp since the couch had a big role to play in their lives.)

[Ep 126 Apr 15th]

Virat-Babita convo. was okay.. some mention of Priyanka... but Virat ended with saying there is no point in talking to you now (not in a bad way... sad way).

Chitnis' convo was fine too. Good point here was Babita deserves bad for what she did but not for what she didn't.

Ammu suddenly walked out and said she will come back... making the rest wonder why she left... [I actually thought she wants to have a serious convo with Virat.... BUT....]

and looking at her going to talk to Babita, made me wonder why she went to meet her too! Nimmi and Babita gave her an earful. will say the idiot Ammu deserves it... kya socha tha? aarti utarenge??? really why did she go there??? Virat sees her leaving. [totally unnecessary and forced scene. There was no match in how she walked out and how she walked in to the convo.] Badly written and unnecessary scene.

Bone comes back on a bike.. talks with Poem about fixing some plan with the union leader to mess things up in the construction site... Ammu sees them... She does mention to them Babita didn't do it, though she doesn;t give away any details ... Virat sees her with them... peabrain got angry and left.

Ammu leaves to meet Virat. him saying sorry was a nice one. [@ishaan2... this is a nice scene for the jodi fans. expect many tweets.]

Chai...

well... got to say... fights between Abhigya were cute... this one may be cute too... but makes me want to slap them both and get to the point without dragging things.... [guess the main reason for me is 'they aren't married... so dikhana kya chahte ho?? making them fight to keep them away from the topic isn't working here.]

Abhiraj - loves destroying anyone who is close to Virat.

Next morining:

Precap scene... Bhavani wants to move away from the terrace... leading to the precap convo... Nice points from Ammu.

Also felt good that Bhavani was not convinced / had her own doubts... felt natural.

Ammu plans to go to go to the movies... sends Bhavani up to bring Harsh and Jahan... guess to get insulted... Ammu thinks 'its mom's battle to fight but if she isn't ready, I cant force her to'. Appreciate her maturity here, though sending her up was since she could easily call up then downstairs... and let Harsh take the bags upstairs. [The illogical ways they have to bring in a forced scene!]

Felt they did write the scene well.. Ammu didn't feel preachy... also felt Bhavani's response was natural and justified. well written.

This was the only scene worth watching. rest.... skippable ... unless you are a jodi fan, in which case you have one more. [over here I'd also think her 'mature' avatar, that she shows in her scene with Bhavani, doesn't go well with the forced nokjhoks they write with Virat. Fits Virat's pea brain but not Amruta. Perhaps another reason I didn't like the scene as much.]

Well... okay ep... skippable too perhaps... dragging ep... unnecessary scene in the kitchen. Didn't like Ammu justfying Babita's actions to both Virat and Jahan (may be okay here).... will even say, aisa sochti ho to you deserve everything that is told to you. bhukto. ... of course, life long since she will be your MIL after all!

Main thing is Nothing happened... as usual. Boring screenplay. Good dialogues for the last scene.

Precap: Virat taking Bhavani on a date to "drama queen Ishubaby's" mehndi.

Seems like it is pretty easy to write VA scenes these days... A sample draft:

Ammu having learnt there is more to Raj than she thought about and she has to pass on the new info to Virat, meets him downstairs.

A: Sir mujhe lagta hai raj Sir...

V (interrupts): Haan... gao.. tumhare "Raj Sir" ke gun gao... sun ne ke liye main hu na..

A: Aap sun to lein!

V: Sun na kya hai... Raj Sir kitne ache hai, kitne tameez se baat karte hein... mere jaise nahi hein.... naya kuch hai kya? Tumhe "AmrUtaJI" "AmrUtaJI" kehke bulate hein... mere jaise AmrIta nahi...

A: Sun to lijiye!

V: Yahi sun na tha to bulaya kyu? mujhe to sab pata hai... Saari khoobiyaan tumhe "Raj Sir" me dikhti hein... Mein to immature, nalayak, irresponsible hu na?

A: Aise maine kab kaha?

V: Kyu.. tum ne hi to kaha tha!! maine tumhri job cheen li, ghar cheen li.... ekdum lambi list hai tumhari.

A: Woh isliye na kyu ki inme se kuch aapne wakahi me kiya hai... mujhe jail bhi bheja hai aapne... yaad rakhiye...

V: Haan... meri maa... yaad rakhunga... aur tum bhulane dogi bhi nahi na... zindagi bhar sunati rahogi na...

A:Mein to Banglore jaa rahi hu.

leading to an long eye lock.... kaise mujhe tum mil gaye bg....

Ammu leaves.... he stops her..

V: Matt jao na.

Another eye lock... kaise mujhe tum mil gaye bg...

Ammu also forgets why she came to meet him... Meanwhile Abhiraj takes care of whatever proof she had got.

[him calling her 'meri maa" ... their eyelock and the bg... the pain on learning she will leave to Bangalore. ... giving husband wife vibes already. ] The writer me: "Job done".

I didn't like amu scene when she went to speak to bab its matter between mom and her son.She gives suggestion to peanut fine but why to bab?

When you know the person doesn't like you giving them suggestion...Its like Aa bail mujhe maar.

The more she interfere the more bab won't listen to her son as simple as that.

Went to pacify her khud sun kar aagayi with tears too 😕

Tell Amu to join NGO as in she is free 😂

It would be better raj aur amu ko scene dikha dete thod bada atleast peanut ko gussa samaj aata.

Originally posted by: Adiandsid

Precap: Virat taking Bhavani on a date to "drama queen Ishubaby's" mehndi.

Yeh peanut bahut baby bulata hain mistress ko uspe amu ko koi problem nahin but woh video jisme kuch nahin tha she was jealous 😂

Aaji ne to peanut ka naam drama queen raka tha lol.

@Adiandsid

Wah kya scene lol u can apply to the production house :)

Originally posted by: Annu.

Yeh peanut bahut baby bulata hain mistress ko uspe amu ko koi problem nahin but woh video jisme kuch nahin tha she was jealous 😂

Aaji ne to peanut ka naam drama queen raka tha lol.

@Adiandsid

Wah kya scene lol u can apply to the production house :)

The Ishubaby thing has a background - he had heard Jayesh calling her that and also knows she calls Jayesh "baby"... So even Ammu knows he is using it in a mocking way.