Teri Meri Doriyaann Episode Discussion Thread - 58 [DT Note: pg-73] - Page 138

Originally posted by: shanakanj

Manveer never gave the importance to Inder so as a viewer you can not feel emotional with her , they are just crying no dialogues, I felt something was off today in hospital scene. Daarji jaa ka scene alag se liya hai he is not in hospital. I don’t know whether they will show Inder scene completely bcoz their editing team cut lot of scenes . Actually as a viewer you should feel l like crying in death scene but it did not give me that feeling. Original version had much better screenplay .

Mereko toh hasi aa rahi. Sabse bada wtf moment yeh tha that he served his wife divorce the day she miscarried.

Idhar toh daily same karta hai. Kaunsa rani ki tarah rakha hai ki ab shock ho jaayenge aise kaise kiya. Idhar toh routine hai, sabka bhala karo toh bhi servants quarters main raho.

Bas kaahe ka reunion. Co parenting is a solution too. Ajeeb jabardasti hai.

Waste of our time, talking about this track. It looks so forced to leap. Today, everything looks so forced. Isn't Manner accompanying Sahiba to the hospital? They want to jump. That's it. They are giving wage scenes.

Orphanage call/ Sahiba going / and the fake goons fighting 🤢🤢🤢what a crappy direction.

Did Sahiba forget that she is pregnant, it's insane to take this route.

There is no point of discussing who will blame whom. Whose mistake in this..

Crappy direction / crappy script.

Originally posted by: Anu_02

Inki script bohot kharab h ya ye bolun koi script h hi nahi jis wajah se inka TMD itna nahi chala

Ghum to ek saal tak kusum dola ka copy paste tha inki khud ki koi creativity nahi thi or jab tak copy paste tha tab tak 3+ trp di jaise hi kusum dola ko drop karke ye apni khud ki creativity daali show 2+ tak aa gaya

Or sara credit ye ph le gaya

Sach ye h ki kami script mein h or log phir actors ko dosh dete h ki iski wajah se trp nahi mil rahi

Sach batao kya seerat ki wajah se trp doobi thi

Ya phir

Seerat ko lekar jo script likhi vo trp lekar doobi

Warna seerat ka khulasa rumi track k baad 2 tak trp diya tha

Or wahi seerat ko BM se out ki trp 1.9 thi

What audience wants is justice naaki evil ki jeet

Inki script ne trp doobayi kisi actor ne nahi

Agar seerat ko uske karmo ki saza milti dikhatey to trp zaroor milti jaise seerat ko paise ka laalach tha to dikhatey ki seerat gareebi mein reh Rahi h

But seerat ko asho aaram se maharani banake rakha kisko acha lagega kisi ko nahi

Jaise dyuti ko uski saas ne naukrani bana diya tha

Agar same waise hi Jasleen agar seerat ko naukrani bana k rakhti to sabko maza aata

Or angad seerat ka angle nahi daaalna chahiye tha wahi trp lekar dooba

But ph ne seerat ko evil ko sab kuch diya yahan tak ki uske crimes ki saza nahi milne di usne inki trp kharab Kiya

Or abhi bhi dekho saari script copy paste h vo bhi zyada toxicity k sath

Sahan ki story nahi dikhayi kabhi jiski wajah se mahino tak trp 1.5 p hi atki rahi tab bhi makers ne crime petrol dala trp badhane ko lekin couple ki story nahi dikhayi itni zidd bhi achi nahi hoti

Log characters ko blame kartey h ki but sach yehi h ki kami script mein h evil ki jeet koi bardasht nahi kar sakta yehi wajah thi ki 3.5+ dene wala ghum aaj 2.5 bhi mushkil se de pata h kyunki inhone evil ko jeetaya logo ne show chod Diya Aaj bhi jo trp milti h uske liye bhi jootey promo ka Sahara lena padta h

Leap k baad dusre shows mein changes aatey h but TMD mein kuch nahi badlega

But TMD mein same h look at sahiba kya badla kuch nahi doormat thi or doormat hi rahegi

Yahan tak ki uska look hi dekh lo wahi gareebo wala h jo ek saal pehle tha kapdey tak nahi badley upar se itna bada bacha dikha diya

Lead ki koi proper story nahi dikhayi

Ghum mein to sairat ki love story dikhayi thi ek saal tak

But yahan to koi story hi nahi h leads ki to koi kya dkehega

Ab angad sahiba sath rahye ya dur ho jaaye kisi ko kya farak padega kuch nahi

Character ko side karne se ya gayab karne se trp nahi milegi balki apni script ko sudhare se milegi lekin inke paas khud ki koi story hi nahi h to script kahan se hogi sab kuch to copy paste h sirf negativity toxicity bhari padi h

All I can say is there is no shock value. Sahiba was blamed and assaulted for Garry's death too. She is consistently blamed. Ek baar aur sahi.

Bas jaldi wrap karo.

Aur reunite last episode par hi karo kyunki karna toh hai hi.

And the way they showed, Sahiba doesn't want to go to the hospital because she promised Angad, 🤯🤯🤯 she forgot that promise as soon as she got a call from the orphanage. Way to justify her actions??

They should have shown some scenes of Sahiba alone being connected to the kid , when a lady becomes pregnant how a women feels about baby no such scenes . Today also when Sahiba suffered cramps her eyes are closed. I felt more connection of Angad with the baby than Sahiba. Aksh** scenes when she suffers the cramp it was so good first thing she thought of baby safety but here nothing like that. Even when Angad got to know about his father shock was not to maximum. Today the whole episode direction was crappy. Copy karna hai to dhang se karo . Every scene was looking so forced .

Sahiba is not there at BM's birthday celebrations means. I guess she will leave from hospital writing a letter or something.

Originally posted by: shanakanj

Gauri acting is much better I felt she was more emotional than Manveer. They will use Manveer only to blame Sahiba. It’s such a bad direction . Himanshi is saying it’s an emotional track but I know every scene will be rushed like today except blaming scenes will be in detail. TRP is going to tank. I had high expectations from Manveer being emotional but they used only Gouri, Angad and Sahiba.

Yes, TRP is going to tank, these people never showed Sahan's romance, what they showed is 18th century consummation scene, where a guy touches a girl and she becomes pregnant....Love story ke naam pe Crime story dikhaayi.

Audience waited for the whole year for Sahan's romance, and they gave shit.

Evil is never punished in this show.

They had even edited out Saheba beating seerat with a hammer and now without any romance, you show an extremely toxic Angad slapping Saheba and then after few days consummating with her without even a proper sorry or confession.

There is no introspection of Angad shown for eg realizing his errors in judging Saheba, him misunderstanding Saheba upon hearing seerat's words.

And now makers are bringing leap in their story, where they show such a big child so obviously there is no connection whatsoever.

I am yet to watch the episode.

Originally posted by: arnavkushi14

Sahiba is not there at BM's birthday celebrations means. I guess she will leave from hospital writing a letter or something.