Teri Meri Doriyaann Episode Discussion Thread - 58 [DT Note: pg-73] - Page 137

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Originally posted by: Cloud93001

Nothing to watch..

mostly YT clips

inder takes sahiba to hospital. doctor gives all okay.

girl calls sahiba frm orphage.. sahiba calls police.

sahiba inder reach orphage. inder tries to stop gunde.

they shoot him twice.

police arive. sahiba take inder to hospital.

all family in hospital.

Angad arrives

Doctor says inder wants to meet Angad. all goes inside room to. meet inder.

sahiba outside.. has stomach cramps and collapses.

end

Originally posted by: shanakanj

Sahiba suffer cramps in stomach. Everyone is inside Sahiba is outside suffering with pain. Mostly miscarriage will be declared. Abuse will start tomorrow. Family does not know the reason. Sahiba recall all the incident that happened with girl calling her and Inder death. Angad recalls the promise the he took from Sahiba for not crossing the line. Inder is dead everyone crying inside the ward. I did not feel anything emotional , it was much better in rish**. The Inder death scene will be continued tomorrow. Rather than feeling emotional they will start blaming session. Other than Sahiba no bidy felt so emotional. Makers should have focused more on Manveer rather they focused on Sahiba and angad. Bad direction

I think they will show inder death scene tomorrow. today's last scene was a precap of that. elaborate scene will be shown tomorrow.

inder saying goodbye and all.. it will be emotional one.. manbeer n angad was crying in last scene.

Originally posted by: apuni88

So blame game starting tomorrow!!

blame game mostly from Tuesday i think

Inders death scene yet to be shown..inders goodbye scene. he called for angad na.. there'll be a scene.

then probably sahiba having miscarriage.. then funeral..

then blame game.. or during funeral will have blame game..

like in samrat funeral in Ghum1

Originally posted by: Cloud93001

blame game mostly from Tuesday i think

Inders death scene yet to be shown..inders goodbye scene. he called for angad na.. there'll be a scene.

then probably sahiba having miscarriage.. then funeral..

then blame game.. or during funeral will have blame game..

like in samrat funeral in Ghum1

Funeral scene main hi hoga, like Garry shok sabha only. Phir room main divorce.

Kal second half shayad funeral start hoga.

Inki script bohot kharab h ya ye bolun koi script h hi nahi jis wajah se inka TMD itna nahi chala

Ghum to ek saal tak kusum dola ka copy paste tha inki khud ki koi creativity nahi thi or jab tak copy paste tha tab tak 3+ trp di jaise hi kusum dola ko drop karke ye apni khud ki creativity daali show 2+ tak aa gaya

Or sara credit ye ph le gaya

Sach ye h ki kami script mein h or log phir actors ko dosh dete h ki iski wajah se trp nahi mil rahi

Sach batao kya seerat ki wajah se trp doobi thi

Ya phir

Seerat ko lekar jo script likhi vo trp lekar doobi

Warna seerat ka khulasa rumi track k baad 2 tak trp diya tha

Or wahi seerat ko BM se out ki trp 1.9 thi

What audience wants is justice naaki evil ki jeet

Inki script ne trp doobayi kisi actor ne nahi

Agar seerat ko uske karmo ki saza milti dikhatey to trp zaroor milti jaise seerat ko paise ka laalach tha to dikhatey ki seerat gareebi mein reh Rahi h

But seerat ko asho aaram se maharani banake rakha kisko acha lagega kisi ko nahi

Jaise dyuti ko uski saas ne naukrani bana diya tha

Agar same waise hi Jasleen agar seerat ko naukrani bana k rakhti to sabko maza aata

Or angad seerat ka angle nahi daaalna chahiye tha wahi trp lekar dooba

But ph ne seerat ko evil ko sab kuch diya yahan tak ki uske crimes ki saza nahi milne di usne inki trp kharab Kiya

Or abhi bhi dekho saari script copy paste h vo bhi zyada toxicity k sath

Sahan ki story nahi dikhayi kabhi jiski wajah se mahino tak trp 1.5 p hi atki rahi tab bhi makers ne crime petrol dala trp badhane ko lekin couple ki story nahi dikhayi itni zidd bhi achi nahi hoti

Log characters ko blame kartey h ki but sach yehi h ki kami script mein h evil ki jeet koi bardasht nahi kar sakta yehi wajah thi ki 3.5+ dene wala ghum aaj 2.5 bhi mushkil se de pata h kyunki inhone evil ko jeetaya logo ne show chod Diya Aaj bhi jo trp milti h uske liye bhi jootey promo ka Sahara lena padta h

Leap k baad dusre shows mein changes aatey h but TMD mein kuch nahi badlega

But TMD mein same h look at sahiba kya badla kuch nahi doormat thi or doormat hi rahegi

Yahan tak ki uska look hi dekh lo wahi gareebo wala h jo ek saal pehle tha kapdey tak nahi badley upar se itna bada bacha dikha diya

Lead ki koi proper story nahi dikhayi

Ghum mein to sairat ki love story dikhayi thi ek saal tak

But yahan to koi story hi nahi h leads ki to koi kya dkehega

Ab angad sahiba sath rahye ya dur ho jaaye kisi ko kya farak padega kuch nahi

Character ko side karne se ya gayab karne se trp nahi milegi balki apni script ko sudhare se milegi lekin inke paas khud ki koi story hi nahi h to script kahan se hogi sab kuch to copy paste h sirf negativity toxicity bhari padi h

Manveer never gave the importance to Inder so as a viewer you can not feel emotional with her , they are just crying no dialogues, I felt something was off today in hospital scene. Daarji jaa ka scene alag se liya hai he is not in hospital. I don’t know whether they will show Inder scene completely bcoz their editing team cut lot of scenes . Actually as a viewer you should feel l like crying in death scene but it did not give me that feeling. Original version had much better screenplay .

Og version had much better characters on paper who actually bonded with eo. The mom adopted her husbands child out of wedlock, so her grief on losing him would hit more.

True.. foundation of a good show is good script.

Good script +Good cast +Good crew(direction editing PH) makes a show.

TMD has only good cast.. rest everything is bekhar..

Gauri acting is much better I felt she was more emotional than Manveer. They will use Manveer only to blame Sahiba. It’s such a bad direction . Himanshi is saying it’s an emotional track but I know every scene will be rushed like today except blaming scenes will be in detail. TRP is going to tank. I had high expectations from Manveer being emotional but they used only Gouri, Angad and Sahiba.