Originally posted by: Adiandsid
Her independence kind of stayed back in the auto rikshaw that she took to the hotel the other night. What came with her is her boldness. If she were independent, she wouldn't have gone the next morning to talk to her dad. Also depends on what she means by independence - 'yea... I have a job'???.. and anniversaries or special occasions are places one can have good sounding special words said. So cant take them too seriously.
Didnt help that it was mentioned that (from Sriti too) that the character is independent. Yes she is... but with a huge * and 'conditions apply'. Events particularly in that ep where she went to dad and then to Virat asking him to reinstate her job... were mistakes. They could've found better ways to not let that 'independent' nature seem questionable. Connecting their lives could've taken a better route.
Exactly, if I were the writer and of course the makers I would've done this for the main part:
-Take time to introduce each character, espe Amvira, their parents, and their actual status. Here the only thing we got was Jayesh's issues and A being Rich but no further details (not clear on the initial promos). I mean what went wrong between Amu's parents? Why is Jayesh so angry with Bhavani? Why is Babita ruling the A house and no one dares resonate with her? And blablabla.
-The EMA, would've not introduced that on eps 1 or 2, I mean it came out of nowhere, one phone call the father didn't attend, and hop! Mister has an affair???? Wow, I would've waited maybe one week to through that bomb (and that would be more of a surprise because I guessed it right away). And that would've given us time to understand Bhavani aware of it too.
-Ishika, the main "villain" as of now, could've been introduced when she showed the house to the A Clan, and after a moment got some clue about her and Jayesh. And taking advantage of Amu's encounter with the A (after she hears about it) to plot her Dad against her.
-Now on the independence and graduate side, after Virat tried to punish her and her getting to know about her Father's affair, I would've made Amu move out (like here), let her Mother and Harsh to Jahan Aunty and go out to seek for a new job (after seeing what she get with Shengdana becoming a PA and all). I know it's not easy to get a job or a new one, but with her attitude, she would've got one easily. Then she saved money and opened her app, maybe on women empowerment ya something else, and alongside her Mama, made it an empire, The Bhavani Empire.
In between, they met udar udar, and nok jhok but nothing serious until her business became a threat to A Business (whatever it is) Phir rivalry between Amvira and here is the love story. And voilà!
I know some details are missing but aisa kuch hona ta aur hona chahiye. I don't want her to get married and then sab easily mile, it doesn't suit her character because she would rather take her own money than use her Rich husband's even if she is "broke".