MG FF - The Burnt - Chapter 23 - Pg 87 Oct 3 - Page 37

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Anu, trust that you are well. Thanks for the pm and update.

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Wonderful update… brilliantly written

well Meera and Adi spoke regarding Geet

of cos she does not want Dev to know what she is doing

Dev and Annie’s views on Maan and Geet were reasonable

cannot blame them

after all they have witnessed Geet’s humiliation and pain

Meera’s curiosity regarding Geet’s past was anticipated

so Adi could not get the details of Geet’s past

they feel Geet has moved on

they are oblivious to the fact that Geet still loves Maan immensely despite what he did to her

Geet’s love is pure and selfless.

Dev was certainly upset that Meera is going to London

great that Meera handled the situation in her way

glad that Maan went with dadima for her check up

ha ha she is so dramatic

at least Maan has his dadima with him

dadima was indeed amazed seeing the changes in Maan

nice that Maan has made his family priority

Gosh Advay was hurt

liked Maan’s concern for Advay

he thinks that Jenny is Advay’s mom

not surprised that Maan decided to stay at the hospital

as expected Geet was tensed and worried

feeling for Geet

she should not be angry at herself

nice that Jenny assured Geet

but Maan was adamant in staying despite Jenny's assurance

Maan is clearly drawn to Advay and is affected seeing him in pain

its natural cos Advay is his son

he is unaware of this fact

Jenny's thoughts were understandable

Thank God Advay is fine

oh Advay was happy seeing Maan

loved that Maan got Advay ice cream

Maan's dilemma was understandable

aww Advay thanked Maan

ahh Jenny stopped Advay from revealing anything further

finally Geet arrived at the hospital

hmm Maan thought it cannot be Geet noting her dressing

angry how Maan treated Geet

hate him for this

she just loved him and silently accepted everything

nothing can justify his behavior

why did he believe that she tricked him into this marriage?

upset that she had to bear the brunt of his anger

hearing that Geet has a family emergency, Meera assumes Geet has moved on

Meera's question was justified

good that Maan answered

pleased with Maan's response

however he knows Geet has not moved on

appreciate that Maan wants to Geet to punish him for his sins

wonderful that he wants to fill Geet's life with happiness

he is aware that he has hurt her so much

he is now repenting

he has to replace each pain with happiness

sad that Geet blames herself for not taking care of her son

admire that she wants to go Advay everything

she is an amazing mom

dismayed she feels that she is not capable

her fears were understandable

when has Maan shown her differently

thanks for the note

update soon

Originally posted by: babelicious

Aww loved it.. loving this story. Felt very emotional.. Meera braves herself to ask the important question to Maan. What would he do if he sees her, or that she’s moved on?! He is clear on what he wants, punishment for breaking her innocent heart, & a chance to replace all the pain he gave her with happiness.. even if she has moved on, his love on her is so deep that he is ok with it, as long as she is happy. That itself will be his punishment.
Advay gets into an accident! Maan again runs into him. He feels very strongly for this boy! Got desperate also to see him once, surprising himself..

Maan gets a glimpse of poshly dressed Geet, and cannot believe his eyes! But he is in denial immediately coz Geet could never dress like that. I feel he’s getting closer to the truth! The past that he recollected was very painful as always. He used her and then kept insulting her for her love for him. My god I can’t wait to read the rest, pls consider giving updates of these stories also in between…

@Bold - yes I will keep giving these ones in between at the start because the story is taking shape.

Originally posted by: WaveTeal

[Sorry for the late, have been very occupied so commenting at once]

Ok, so from where do I start? Last few chapters has been quite hell of an emotional ride.

First of all what a brilliant carving of the story so far. This story is quite heart wrenching at the same time I know there are so many women who goes through a similar situation. Just the difference is that this is fiction and we in the end may see the best outcome/version of such scenarios. But really each chapter strikes the heart's cord with Maan's insufferable disposition & Geet's vulnerability. One may see Geet as the obedient naive(borderline foolish to some extent) girl in love but being in that position with a man whom you have loved your entire life, the realization itself comes very late depending upon how one's personality is. Geet is rather resilient in that she has endured until she knew this illness is spreading to the nucleus. It's easy to judge each side(Maan - Geet) but I will trust the words that you mentioned. Yes, it won't exonerate him of his cruelty but at least hope would give a layer to his side.

While Meera might play the role of a mediator but Dev's views are perfectly understandable. Maan has already shown immense care for the boy who he met only once, so I can only imagine how he will react when he learns Advhay is his own son.

Feeling for Geet that somewhere deep inside feels Advhay deserves the best which perhaps his father might have granted. Though this introspection gave me a mixed feeling but from a mother's perspective she obviously wants the best for her son. And being a single mother not only wealth but there are so many other aspects that are involved(which a father's role can fulfil), so kudos to Geet.

I wish I could tell her, it's not easy, but you are doing awesome.

As for the past.... Hmmm.... The abuse camouflaged under the marital bond made me question Maan's mental sanity level. It's so appalling that I want to ghuso in the FF and scream at him. Well, that's how intense it is and that's how you nailed the emotions in these disturbing events.

Lovely going Anu.

Anticipating the next chapters as the story moves forward. I am very curious about how Geet is going to react when all the main characters face each other.

I fully enjoyed it.

Both Maan and Geet have their own guilt. Geet is in guilt of snatching family from her son for her fear. And he is not getting father's love because she took it away from him. And that is the reason she is always judging her upbringing

And Maan of course for his deeds.

They will soon come face to face - stay tuned.

Just to let you know - This story will go at slow speed

Maan is restless after seeing Advay in pain…

He is repenting badly but needs to work harder…

Geet is still in love with him..

Still feels scared of his anger..

Still cares for his wishes… Just hope to see her happy..

Amazing update.

Advay got hurt n seeing like that maan got restless..

Meera n Adi thinks that geet has move on in her life n has her own family.

Adi is finding geet past but not getting satisfying results.

Dev is upset meera is going to london n staying with maan.

Geet blames herself that she is not taking proper care of advay n working day n nigth so advay got very good life which he deserves.

Maan is giving priority to his family 1st.

Geet bored too much humiliation n hurt in past.

Maans act cannot justify in past what he did with geet.

Maan doesnt believes that he saw geet in hospital as her dressing style is completely different from past.

Invisible strings are pulling him to his son. They nearly meet each other.

Penance make someone pure and humble. I think maan is sincere now. Lets see how he respect and understand her. She is by soul his and only his.

Awesome update. Very interesting. Waiting for password for part 2

Plz password for burnt plz chapter 2

Very nice . Waiting for the next updates

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