DevRa OS - Jungle Main Mangal

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Posted: 5 months ago
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I don't read novels so my OS will majorly contains dialogues smiley1


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Instead of trapping DevRa in the freezer Palash Takes them to a jungle and keeps them in a cottage in the middle of the jungle. 

DevRa both are unconscious and Palash has kept his friends to monitor DevRa. 

Tara regains her consciousness and slowly opens her eyes. 

She seems Deva tied with the rope to a wooden chair. 

Tara : Mr malik.. uthiya mr malik 

Deva hears some voice which is calling him. He slowly opens his eyes to see Tara sitting in front of him. Initially the visual is blurred but slowly he realizes that both are tied and held captive in the room.

Deva: Tara Ma'am, Hum kaha hai. 

Tara : Mr Malik lagtha hai inlogone hame kaid karliya hai. 

Deva looks around the place looks so different. 

Deva: Hum kaha hai. 

Tara : Mujhe kya patha.. Aap toh mujhse aise puch rahe hai jaise main koi google map hun jisse button press karthe hi aapko patha chal jayega aap kaha hai. Bhooliye math main bhi kaid hun. 

Deva: accha theek hai .. isse accha ye boldethi nahi patha ithna bashan dene ki kya zaroorath thi. 

Tara makes faces. 

Deva: ab aise ghusse main baithne se hum yaha se nikalne nahi wale. Hame badshah ko bhi dhoondhna hai abhi. Koi tareeka sochiye. 

Tara realizes that the situation is a bit more serious. She tries to look around. All doors seems to be locked and only windows can be opened but those have grills and there is nothing to open them.

Deve sees that the wooden chair to which he is tied is very weak. He tried to break the chair by banging on the ground and fortunately the chair breaks. He frees himself and moves towards tara to free her up. 

They both feel happy that finally they are free. 

Tara: ab yaha se kaise niklenge. 

Deva sees from the window all guards seem to be drunk. 

Deva: sab nasheli ha-lath main hai. 

Tara: rukiye mr malik main kuch karthi hun. 

Tara goes towards the back door opens a window and screams in a different lady voice to woo those men. Those men think some lady needs help and move towards the back door. 

Tara and Deva escape from the front door.  

Tara: yahan toh ek gaadi bhi nahi hai. Kaise jayenge wapas hum aapke pairon pe chot bhi lagi hai aur khoon bhi beh raha hai. 

She takes her dupatta and cuts it into half to tie it to her wound.

she looks at him. 

Deva: Main theek hun Tara Ma'am. Aapko meri fikr karne ki koi zarorrath nahi hai. 

He makes his kadwa karela face to make it clear to her.

Tara murmurs to herslef: Raho aise hi kadwa karela bankar mujhe kya. Main hi buddhu hun. Janthe hue bhi tum kadwa karela ho phir bhi tumhare liye care karne lag jaathi hun. Ab nahi karungi. 

Deva: Aapne kuch kaha. 

Tara: Kuch nahi Mr Malik, Maine kaha aapke zakhm aapko mubarak ho.  Agar kal Pair kaatna pade toh mera ek doctor dost hai uske pass chale jaana. Free main kaat dega 

Deva: Pair ? 

Tara : Jiss tarah se aap khooni pair se mitti pe aise chal rahe hai usse dekh kar lagtha hai pakka infection hoga tab toh pair hi toh kata jayega na mr malik. Haan aap chinta math keejiye, Aapke agle janam din par main aapko wheel chair gift karungi aur aap uspe baith kar mujhpar hukum karna theek hai. 

Deva gets scared as his order on the wheelchair will not have an impact. How will he take his badhla?

Deva: accha theek hai baandh deejiye. Ye sab bolkar darane ki zaroorath nahi hai. 

He goes and sits below a tree and Tara sees there is a river she drenches her dupatta to wipe the wound and ties the other half to the wound. 

Deva sees her so religiously tying the her dupatta on his wound.

Tara: hogaya. 

Her face lit with a smile.

Deva still looking at her and smiled remembering how tara was so caring about chota Deva.

Tara: kya hua ab chale wapas ? 

Deva comes back to reality. 

Deva gets up.  he seems tara is bit uncomfortable as it's too cold outside and now that her dupatta is gone too. 

Deva removes his jacket and offers her. 

Tara hesitates a bit. 

Tara: nahi mr malik main theek hun 

Deva: Theek hai mujhe kya jab sab Machar aapko kaat kaat kar malaria hojayega tab bula lena hospital aajunga aapko mosquito net dene. 

Tara laughs and takes the jacket.

Tara: Aap mere taang kheechna nahi chod sakthe na

Deva : Kabhi nahi. Jaise aap mera taang kheechna nahi chod sakthe.

Both laugh looking at each other. 

Deva: Ab chale? Kaffi rath hogayi hai woh log abhi drunk hai badhmain jaag gaye toh problem hogi. 

They both walk in the jungle for some time. 

Tara: Mr Malik mujhe lagtha hai hum ghoom ghoom kar ek hi jagah arahe hai. 

Deva: mujhe bhi yahi lagtha hai. 

Tara: ab kya kare. 

Deva  takes a stone and marks trees 

Every time he takes a different direction. Finally they both reach a river bank where DevRa saw fire flies last time. 

DevRa : Ye toh haveli ke peeche ka jheel hai. 

They both feel so happy that finally they reached some familiar place. 

Tara: Ab yaha se waha kaise jaaye ? Boat bhi uss taraf hai. 

Deva: Ab hame kaka hi bacha sakthe hai. Woh har subah jheel ke kinare aathe hai  safai ke liye. Kal bhi ayenge. 

Tara : toh aaj rath hame yahi rukhna padega. 

Deva nods. 

Deva goes and sleeps below the tree. 

Tara walks towards him and decides to sleep on the opposite side facing him. 

Tara is scared as she scared of darkness. Tara recalls deva's words. 

Tara murmurs : Jab bhi dar lage dar ki ankhon main ankhen dalke dekho dar khud bhag jayega. 

Jab bhi dar lage dar ki ankhon main ankhen dalke dekho dar khud bhag jayega. 

Deva hears her saying that. 

Deva: Kya kaha aapne? 

Tara : kuch nahi mr malik

Deva realizes that she is feeling scared so he walks towards her and sleeps next to her. 

Tara : aap idhar kyun aaye mujhe andhere se dar nahi lagtha. 

Deva : Par mujhe lagtha hai toh socha aapka sahara lelu. 

Tara looks on and Deva sleeps next to her. she smiles looking at the caring side of Mr. Malik. 

She closes her eyes and is almost about to fall asleep. 

Deva: Tara ma'am aapne toh kaha tha aapka koi dost nahi hai toh woh doctor dost? 

Tara: Woh mera khaas dost nahi hai, Unhone apna ghar hame diya toh hame dosti karni padhi. Mera sirf ek hi khas dost hai.

Deva: Kaun? 

He sees Tara is silent and when he looks at her she seems to have fallen asleep while talking to him. Deva feels happy that he is still her khas dost and she still remembers those childhood moments and sleeps peacefully next to her.

The next day Tara wakes up early and calls out kaka to rescue them. He comes with a boat and take them to the other side of the jheel. 

Deva while on the boat. 

Deva : Kaka Badhsha? 

Kaka : woh agaya beta. Woh bhag agaya kal. Main tum dono ke liye pareshan tha

DevRa takes a deep breath. Deva looks at tara.

Deva: Waise Kal aapne mera sawal ka jawab nahi diya 

Tara : Kaunsa sawal? 

Deva sees Ananya and Tara's family on the other side. 

Deva: Kuch nahi chodiya kisi aur din puch lunga. 

Tara goes and hugs ananya. Deva smiles seeing Badshah and goes and hugs him. DevRa exchange thanks through their eyes. 

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Posted: 5 months ago
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thanks for tagging me diyasmiley27smiley31

Can you please add subtitles smiley2

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will add by tonight smiley1

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Very beautiful os.

I can imagine all scenes happening in front of my eyes.

Even I want Tara to tell Deva Arjun is not her khass dost...she has just one khass dost that is Deva๐Ÿ˜.

Beautiful.. keep writing more stories on our Devra.

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Posted: 5 months ago
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beautifully written Diya your words and writing style are really vivid and visual felt like watching the show and its scenes..amazing really enjoyed reading their fun banters,dialogues and the jokes,humor in between too..waiting for the next part since it left some mystery..๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•

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Thank you for reading smiley31

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Love your writing..โค๏ธ beautiful and detailed...I could visualize these scenes๐Ÿ˜Š..will look forward to more..if you can plz  write on Deva complex emotions on seeing this Arjun guy and Taras getting affected by Deva ki berukhi and anger...

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