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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: naaheean

Sorry Sorry Sorry...Extremely Sorry for being soooo late in commenting on your last 2 updates.

Now, coming to the update of last week, I've already read this one that day only, but couldn't comment instantly, because of some internet issue was going on here. Then, I got caught up with some personal priorities. But, I've read this once again, just for commenting on this.

Yeh Ayesha ki toh buri tarah se watt laga diya usski apni hi solve ki hui case ki paperwork ne...bechari!!! Thanks to Riya that she helped her out. However, knowing Riya's characteristics, I was sure from the previous chapter that, she will be going to help Ayesha anyhow sooner or later. But seriously, Ayesha behaved here soooo childishly & dramatically just for completing her paperwork, which I couldn’t imagine here in this story neither in the show. Also, Riya = Mandodri, this was really the epic one here(Though I didn’t understand the meaning of that reference earlier, but why fear when google is always available at anytime anywhere?). Ek aur request hai, Marathi dialogues ka hindi version translations bhi parenthesis pe de diya karogi please? Ek toh mujhe nahi samajh aati yeh language aur dusra yaha se dekhke google pe type karke search karna padta hai meaning samajh ne ke liye.

Nonetheless, I'm very much loving this gang war case investigation part as well as the new version of Sheen case and as always you are nailing it by your writing & presenting style. This case is also going to be a really tough one, I guess. Again, a new thought came into my head while reading this for the second time, which is - Kahi Sameer ko tum iss Alpha Gang ki leader toh nahi banane wali ho na???

Last but not the least, many many many soo many thanks to you, for fulfilling my request of a double update just after Dipawali, as well as for the announcement of a new OS. Tnx for pm and keep writing like this.

Ha sure! I'll add translations going forward. my bad smiley9

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Posted: 2 years ago

Laal, peela, etc colors ke naam ke baad joh pathaan lala ke naam ka dialogue was the best in the updatesmiley36

I cracked up so bad at thatsmiley37

Reading the last lines is Arjun's daughter dead?!!

Nice update

Cont soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

Waiting for next update dear

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Posted: 2 years ago

Will we get an update today?

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: naaheean

Will we get an update today?

Os wale ka update milega aaj

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomie

Os wale ka update milega aaj

Ok, jo bhi miley chalega, par isska kab milega, yeh bhi toh batado?

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Posted: 2 years ago

Will be curiously waiting for this one ☺️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: naaheean

Ok, jo bhi miley chalega, par isska kab milega, yeh bhi toh batado?

Most probably os/ts khatam hone ke baad

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomie

Most probably os/ts khatam hone ke baad

Par mujhe toh dono eksaath hi chahiye thi.......smiley19smiley19smiley19


Dipawali gift mein double update toh request karne par de diya.... Par ab yeh unexpected OS/TS wali bonus gift ke saath, new story khatam na hone tak ongoing story na padh pane ke saza bhi free me mil jayega yeh nahi socha tha.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Awesome updates....

Sorry for late reply..

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