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Posted: 2 years ago

Raghu ko arjun ke kaam pe doubt ho raha hai commissioner ke samjhane per maan gaya firauti ki maang woh bhi galat paisa ksmane ka jariya moti ne jo jawab diya riya samajh gai pathan lala fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: RainOfDew

Awesome updt

Arjun is Arjunsmiley36 Loved his banter wid Raghu🤭

Lol laal peela harasmiley37

Where is Arjun's daughter? Bata do nasmiley18

Cont soon

Itni bhi kya jaldi hai?

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Posted: 2 years ago

Ye ek update dete hi meri kitni band bajti hai

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Posted: 2 years ago

Raghu skills I think that is instinctive..as a reflex your skills kick in ..u practice so much that it becomes a habit ..

Waiting for rescue of sheen from pathan

What happened to arj daughter

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Posted: 2 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks for pm.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Sorry Sorry Sorry...Extremely Sorry for being soooo late in commenting on your last 2 updates.

Now, coming to the update of last week, I've already read this one that day only, but couldn't comment instantly, because of some internet issue was going on here. Then, I got caught up with some personal priorities. But, I've read this once again, just for commenting on this.

Yeh Ayesha ki toh buri tarah se watt laga diya usski apni hi solve ki hui case ki paperwork ne...bechari!!! Thanks to Riya that she helped her out. However, knowing Riya's characteristics, I was sure from the previous chapter that, she will be going to help Ayesha anyhow sooner or later. But seriously, Ayesha behaved here soooo childishly & dramatically just for completing her paperwork, which I couldn’t imagine here in this story neither in the show. Also, Riya = Mandodri, this was really the epic one here(Though I didn’t understand the meaning of that reference earlier, but why fear when google is always available at anytime anywhere?). Ek aur request hai, Marathi dialogues ka hindi version translations bhi parenthesis pe de diya karogi please? Ek toh mujhe nahi samajh aati yeh language aur dusra yaha se dekhke google pe type karke search karna padta hai meaning samajh ne ke liye.

Nonetheless, I'm very much loving this gang war case investigation part as well as the new version of Sheen case and as always you are nailing it by your writing & presenting style. This case is also going to be a really tough one, I guess. Again, a new thought came into my head while reading this for the second time, which is - Kahi Sameer ko tum iss Alpha Gang ki leader toh nahi banane wali ho na???

Last but not the least, many many many soo many thanks to you, for fulfilling my request of a double update just after Dipawali, as well as for the announcement of a new OS. Tnx for pm and keep writing like this.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Sorry once again for being late both in reading the last chapter as well as in commenting on this on Wednesday itself, due to my too much busy schedule. This time commenting for this week's update.

Just only from my side - I'm right now feeling mesmerizingly spell-bounded by reading this chapter.....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Jitni bhi world's best adjectives hai woh saari ki saari meri taraf se tumhe dedicate kar rahi hoon. Ek remarkable episode of one of the most loved show of ITV ko puri ki puri ek new version dena aur usse justify kar pana as a writer bohot hi achhi kabiliyat hone ki nishani hoti hai. Honestly speaking, even if I would have intersected each & every part of this chapter to point out which was/were the most lovable scene/scenes, I'm very sure, I couldn't have been able to do that. Why didn’t you choose writing as a profession, yaar? You would have really been very much successful in writing career, if you chose it for yourself.

Tnx for pming me...Just now, another thought struck my mind that, waiting till next Wednesday going to be too much hard for me.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomie

Itni bhi kya jaldi hai?

Ha, Ha, bilkul sahi toh kaha tumne, hum readers ko itni jaldbaz nahi honi chahiye, itminan se intezaar karna chahiye. Woh kya hai na tumhe toh suspence ko hold karke readers ko tang karne aur intezaar karwane mein bohot zyada maza aata hai par jab tum khud as a reader kisi aur ki suspense se bhari story padh rahi hoti ho tab toh tumse bhi yeh intezaar sehen nahi hota hai, sahi kaha na maine?

But, jokes apart, to be honest, main toh bina aisi suspense aur revelation ke lamba intezaar ke bina tumhari stories ko soch bhi nahi sakti.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Superb loved it thnx for pm update soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

I read this update last Wednesday... The minute it was posted. But Darn my Goldfish memory. I had to read the story again to remember what I was reading. Meanwhile also keeping up with "Second Chance" ff.




Anyhoo. The report part is taking too long. It's like Arjun found a way to cage our wild lioness while everyone else is having fun. I mean gang war and possibly trafficking case?? Right up Ayesha's alley. At this point the day she manages to complete this report would be celebrated every year😂

How much is the time gap between she joined etc and this report again? I'm bad at maths.


Loved how Arjun asked for Riya's stats. I adore their mutual respect and how they work without stepping on each other's toes.


It seems we'll be meeting Pathan Lala soon and maybe that Sikandar angle with a twist. Also I'm curious about Arjun's daughter and wife. It seemed either his wife or mom were abusive. Also Ariya's past is shrouded in mystery and it's feeling like an itch I can't seem to scratch.


Hopefully you will pity on me and post a double update someday 😞


Update soon. Stay safe and happy. Give your grandpa my wishes for a speedy recovery and healthy long life.

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