Fichain #4: [Start date 18 July 2023] - Page 23

16 tak parh liya...this Nadia is creeping me out 😭

Is the story complete yet??

Originally posted by: MochaQueen

16 tak parh liya...this Nadia is creeping me out 😭

Is the story complete yet??

Yup, about a week ago😅

Finally caught up to 21 I really enjoy the chemistry between Darshan and Ishaan!

I'm still confused about Aarav's age though. Is he a kid or an adult?

Originally posted by: MochaQueen

Finally caught up to 21 I really enjoy the chemistry between Darshan and Ishaan!

I'm still confused about Aarav's age though. Is he a kid or an adult?

28😅 to the rest of them, he is a kid. Kinda like me, people born before 2000 think I am a kid😅

I wanted to show that despite being an adult, he still is kind of naive and in his head because of his privileges and how they cushion him. Any mess, daddy's got it sorted, go back to playing video games, you needn't worry about it and learn a thing or two about responsibility

segment 22 - I love your dialogues Nehu!

I loved 22 and 23

Oooh I loved segment 25 shibu...the way you described Ishaan's feelings was so nicely written!

26 and 27

Aarav seems to be having the time of his life while everyone is out looking for him?

Shibu, I loved the way you ended yours at a cliffhanger!

Caught up to 31

Confession hogaya finally

im upto 35 now...almost there i think