Phone love AbhiRa SS - Page 7

Akshara's elopement plan has been revealed. The parents are all set to beat up the guy.

Of course Suraj is happy to step in and marry the girl left at the mandap. The snake he is.

Naksh and Neil reveled Suraj's reality to Abhimanyu. But Suraj has already plotted in advance.

Suraj saved Akshara now and she will believe him. Will Suraj continue the charade?

Nice update. Waiting to see if abhimanyu will be able to save akshara from ending her life 😊

Thanks a lot.please read the last scene again.i think you missed it.

Originally posted by: firewings_diya

Nice update. Waiting to see if abhimanyu will be able to save akshara from ending her life 😊

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanks a lot.please read the last scene again.i think you missed it.

Its ok.

Originally posted by: firewings_diya

oh yeah 😊 suraj saved her. I guess it's abhimanyu as akshu thinks abhimanyu is suraj. I am not sure why i didn't read last two lines 😊

Phone love Part 8

Thank you very much my dearest friend ingenuity_phoenix for the lovely cover page.

I dedicate this chapter specially to ingenuity_phoenix because she wanted me to show the wedding of the new generation through the POV of Neil in the last part.The cast of the new generation is decided by her.

Akshara walked towards the railway track to end her life.Both Suraj and Abhimanyu saw her from different sides.A train started coming.The boys got scared and ran towards Akshara to save her.Suraj reached there first and pulled her backward.

Akshara looked at Suraj.

Akshara remembered meeting Suraj at the gym.

She was surprised:Suraj!

Suraj nodded:Yes.

Akshara:You were the one who was talking to me on the phone.Right?

Abhimanyu who reached there got tensed hearing this.Because he remembered Suraj saying that he will lie to Akshara that he is her Suraj.

Suraj:No.It was my best friend Abhimanyu who was talking to you as Suraj.Abhimanyu is standing behind you.

Akshara turned back in excitement to see her lover.She could not believe her eyes as he was the same guy who had come to see her.Abhimanyu was smiling at her emotionally.

Suraj:Don't get confused.Your phone lover is none other than your fiance.

Akshara stared at him in shock.

Suraj explained everything to her.Akshara got angry.

Akshara:You are so cruel!I feel like slapping you.

Abhimanyu became upset.

Suraj:You can slap me.I deserve all your slaps.

But trust me.I have changed.Seeing you deciding to end your life for Abhimanyu I realised that my so called love for you was nothing.I realised that true love should win and both of you should unite.I am ashamed of myself for what I did.I really repent.

Abhimanyu:I believe you Suraj.I believe that you have changed.You proved that but saving Akshara's life and telling her the truth.

Suraj wept and hugged Abhimanyu.

Abhimanyu looked at Akshara.They both looked at each other emotionally.

Karthik,Naira,Manjari,Advay and Chandni reached there seeing them.

Abhimanyu:I love you Akshara.

Akshara:I really love you Abhimanyu.

They embraced each other.

Suraj smiled seeing Abhimanyu and Akshara's union.

The others were surprised.

Manjari:I think this boy only saved my life.

Naira:It means that Abhimanyu is the phone lover of Akshara.

Karthik:Oh no....I misunderstood their love.

Chandni:But why the hell they had to elope when their marriage was going to take place normally?

Advay:Because it was written in his horoscope that he will elope and get married.

They all laughed.

Abhimanyu looked at Akshara and asked:Why did you do the blunder of suicide attempt?What if you were not saved on time?

Akshara:I am sorry.I did a blunder.I was scared whether something happened to you and that's why you could not come.I could not imagine a life without you.

Abhimanyu:I have come for you and from now onwards we will be always together.So don't dare to attempt suicide again.

Akshara:I promise you that I will not repeat that nonsense.

They smiled emotionally.

Abhimanyu and Akshara got married.

At the wedding place Neil told Arohi:Arohi...till now I remained as a coward who did not open his heart to the girl he loves.But now I realised that it can only cause problems.

Neil:I love you Arohi.

Arohi was surprised and expressed her happiness through a smile.

Arohi:I also suppressed mu feelings fearing whether my love would get rejected.I also love you Neil.

Neil became very happy.

Abhimanyu and Akshara shyly looked at each other in the bedroom.

Abhimanyu:You are looking more beautiful than I expected.

Akshara blushed.

Akshara:You are also more handsome than I expected Abhimanyu.

Abhimanyu:Earlier you used to call me Suraj.Now when you called me by my real name,I feel very nice.

Akshara:If you had not lied to me about your real name,I would not have called you 'Suraj'.

Abhimanyu:It's my fault.I am sorry.

Akshara:Look at the surprise Abhimanyu.We were lovers.Our marriage was arranged by our parents.

Abhimanyu:Still we eloped to get married.

They giggled.

Akshara:It's all because we are made for each other.

Abhimanyu:Yes.

Abhimanyu pulled her closer passionately.They shared a intense eye lock.

Tumhi dekho naa yeh kya ho gaya
Tumhara hoon main aur tum meri
Main hairaan hoon tumhen kya kahu
Ke din mein hui kaisi chaandani
Jaagi jaagi si hai phir bhi khwaabon mein hai
Khoyi khoyi zindagi
Tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya
Tumhara hoon main aur tum meri

They had sizzling romantic moments.

Behke behke se mann
Mehke mehke se tann
Ujli ujli fizzaon mein hai
Aaj ham hai jahaan
Kitni ranginiyan
Chhalki chhalki nigaahon mein hai
Neeli neeli ghataaon se hai chhan rahi
Halki halki roshni

Tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya
Tumhara hoon main aur tum meri
Main hairaan hoon tumhen kya kahu
Ke din mein hui kaisi chaandani

Main toh anjaan thi yun bhi hoga kabhi
Pyar barsega yun toot ke
Sach yeh ikraar hai sach yahi pyar hai
Baaki bandhan hai sab jhuth ke
Meri saanson mein hai ghul rahi pyar ki
Dheemi dheemi raagini

Tumhi dekho naa yeh kya ho gaya
Tumhara hoon main aur tum meri
Main hairaan hoon tumhen kya kahu
Ke din mein hui kaisi chaandani

Jaagi jaagi si hai phir bhi khwaabon mein hai
Khoyi khoyi zindagi
Tumhi dekho naa yeh kya ho gaya
Tumhara hoon main aur tum meri
Yeh din mein hui kaisi chaandani(KANK).

Seeing the rain drops falling down Akshara said to Abhimanyu:Abhimanyu...see..it's raining.

Abhimanyu:Ya...

They both enjoyed in the rain cutely holding the umbrella.

Suraj went to Chakor's house to meet her.She was shocked,so as her parents Neil and Avni.

Neil:Why have you come here?To hurt my daughter again?

Avni:Control Neil.What if Suraj came here because of realisation of love?

Neil was still confused.

Avni:Let us give them privacy.

She took him to another room.

Suraj and Chakor looked at each other emotionally.

Suraj:I am sorry Chakor.I realised how much I hurt you.Now I know what a person feels when he or she doesn't get loved by the person he/she loves.Because I fell in love with a girl.

Chakor was shattered hearing that Suraj fell for another girl.

Suraj:But she fell in love with my best friend.I tried to separate her from him by becoming a cheap friend.

Chakor was shocked to know that Suraj stooped that low.

Suraj:But their love was so strong that I failed.So I myself united them.

Chakor:I got angry hearing that you tried to separate lovers.But now I am glad that finally you realised your mistake and united them.

Suraj smiled emotionally.

Suraj:I understood your pain of love rejection when my love got rejected by the girl I loved.That's why I came here to apologize to you.Please forgive me for breaking your heart.

Chakor:You did not do anything wrong Suraj.You did not give me false hopes and betrayed me.You told me honestly that you don't love me.

Suraj:Still I behaved rudely with you without understanding your feelings.Please forgive me Chakor.

Chakor:I will forgive you only if you become friends with me again.

He smiled and held her hand:I promise you that I will be your best friend.

She smiled.

Neil and Avni smiled watching them secretly.

After 6 months....

Valentine's day party at Mumbai....

Chakor was wearing a red dress.Suraj could not take his eyes off her.

Chakor thought:Suraj looks so handsome that I am unable to take my eyes off him.

Suraj walked towards Chakor with a red rose.

Suraj:Chakor...I know that you have always loved me.But I had considered you only as a good friend.But in the course of time,my feelings for you changed and I realised that you are more than a friend for me Chakor.On this occasion of love I want to tell you that I love you a lot Chakor.

Chakor held his red rose and said emotionally:Suraj,you don't know how much happiness you gave me.I love you Suraj.

They shared a romantic emotional eye lock.

They took photographs together.

They had a romantic dance too.

Tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke
Tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke
Armaan huye poore dil ke
Aye meri jaan-e-wafa
Teri meri meri teri ik jaan hai
Sath tere rahenge sada
Tumse na honge juda

Tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke
Armaan huye poore dil ke

Mere sanam teri kasam
Chhodenge ab na yeh hath
Yeh zindagi guzregi ab
Humdam tumhare hi sath
Apna yeh vaada raha tumse na honge juda

Tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke
Arman huye poore dil ke
Aye meri jaan-e-wafa
Teri meri meri teri ik jaan hai
Sath tere rahenge sada
Tumse na honge juda

Tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke
Armaan huye poore dil ke

Maine kiya hai raat din bas tera hi intezar
Tere bina aata nahi ek pal mujhe ab karar
Humdam mera mil gaya hum tum na honge juda
Humdam mera mil ab hum tum na honge juda

Tumse milke
Tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke
Armaan huye poore dil ke
Aye meri jaan-e-wafa
Teri meri meri teri ik jaan hai
Sath tere rahenge sada
Ab hum na honge juda(Parinda).

Abhimanyu and Akshara exchanged artificial red hearts with each other and smiled.

Abhimanyu:Today is the day of love and again we exchanged our hearts with each other.

Akshara:We do that daily.Right?

Abhimanyu:Let us celebrate Valentine's day privately Akshara by going for a beach date.

She blushed.

Abhimanyu and Akshara went to the beach wearing red costumes.

They forget themselves and got immersed in a romantic dance.

Dhoop se nikhal ke
Chaaon se phisal ke
Hum mile jahan par
Lamha tham gaya
Aasmaan pighal ke
Sheeshe mein dhalke
Jam gaya to tera
Chehra ban gaya

Duniya bhulake
Tumse mila hun
Nikli hai dilse ye duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Haan nikli hai dil se ye dua
Ho rang de to mohe gerua

Ho tumse shuru tum pe fanaa
Hai sufiyaana yeh dastan
Main karwaan manzil ho tum
Jaata jaha ko har raasta
Tumse juda jo
Dil zara sambhalke
Dard ka wo sara
Kohra chhan gaya

Duniya bhulake
Tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ho ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua

Jis dinse tu daakhil hua
Ek jism se ik jaan ka
Tarja mujhe haasil hua
Haan phikke hai saare
Naate jahan ke
Tere sath rishta
Gehra ban gaya

· Duniya bhula ke
Tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Haan nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Ho rang de tu mohe gerua(Dilwale).

Neil-Arohi got married.

Later Suraj-Chakor got married.

Neil and Avni were very happy.

Neil:How happy our daughter is with Suraj.

Avni:They both love each other a lot now.

They smiled at each other.

Time passed....

All the couples are living happily with their kids.

After 25 years....

Neil:"Hello friends...I am Neil.Am I not looking young and dashing?Yes..I know that.But my wife Arohi keeps reminding me that I am not young.but the father of a grown up girl who is going to get married soon".

Arohi came calling him:Neil...come fast.It's our daughter's wedding.You are so slow.

Neil:Ya...I am coming darling.Friends...you know who our daughter is?She is Diya.

Diya sat on the mandap near her bride groom.

Neil:Friends...do you know who our daughter Diya's bride groom is?He is none other than Naksh and Nanda's son Ratan.

Diya and Ratan got married happily.

Neil-Arohi and Naksh-Nanda smiled happily clapping their hands.

Naksh:Who thought that our son will get married to Neil and Arohi's daughter?

Nanda:Life is full of surprises.

Naksh:Exactly.

They smiled.

Neil:Friends...one more couple is getting married.Bless them also.The bride groom is our hero and heroine Abhimanyu and Akshara's son Dhruv.

Dhruv sat on the mandap near his beloved bride.

Neil:Dhruv's bride is none other than Abhimanyu's best friend Suraj's daughter Tara.

Dhruv and Tara married each other and looked at each other romantically.

Abhimanyu-Akshara and Suraj-Chakor were very happy.

Akshara:I feel that just yesterday only our love story started.

Abhimanyu:But today our son got married.

Abhimanyu caressed her face romantically and said:But still our love story continues.

She smiled.

They embraced each other.

Chakor:I feel emotional that our daughter is going away from us.

Suraj:She is going to Abhimanyu and Akshara.She will get royal treatment from them.

Chakor:I know that.

All the newly married couples and their parents danced happily.

Phoolon Mein Khushboo Hai,
Is Dil Mein Ek Tu Hai,
Janmon Ke Saathi,
Hum Saath Saath Hain,
Nainon Mein Jyoti Hai,
Seepi Mein Moti Hai,
Janmon Ke Saathi,
Hum Saath Saath Hain…

Jaise Hanson Ke Sung Hansini,
Jaise Chanda Mein Hai Chandni,
Jaise Kaviyon Ki Ho Bhavana,
Jaise Man Mein Koi Kamana,
Diya Aur Baati,
Hum Saath Saath Hain,
Janmon Ke Saathi,
Hum Saath Saath Hain…

Jaise Aankhon Mein Ho Shokhiyan,
Jaise Hothon Pe Ho Surkhiyan,
Jaise Saawan Mein Jhoome Jiya,
Jaise Sajni Ke Sung Ho Piya,
Diya Aur Baati,
Hum Saath Saath Hain,
Janmon Ke Saathi,
Hum Saath Saath Hain…

Phoolon Mein Khushboo Hai,
Is Dil Mein Ek Tu Hai,
Janmon Ke Saathi,
Hum Saath Saath Hain,
Nainon Mein Jyoti Hai,
Seepi Mein Moti Hai,
Janmon Ke Saathi,
Hum Saath Saath Hain…

Jaise Hanson Ke Sung Hansini,
Jaise Chanda Mein Hai Chandni,
Jaise Kaviyon Ki Ho Bhavana,
Jaise Man Mein Koi Kamana,
Diya Aur Baati,

Hum Saath Saath Hain,
Janmon Ke Saathi,
Hum Saath Saath Hain…

Jaise Aankhon Mein Ho Shokhiyan,
Jaise Hothon Pe Ho Surkhiyan,
Jaise Saawan Mein Jhoome Jiya,
Jaise Sajni Ke Sung Ho Piya,
Diya Aur Baati,

Hum Saath Saath Hain,
Janmon Ke Saathi,
Hum Saath Saath Hain…(HSSH).

The end.

Thank you very much for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scenes,favourite jodies,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

Finally Suraj realized what he was doing was not love. It was selfishness.