FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 40

Nice update

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

I loved the slow depictions of Angad-Sahiba quality time! And Jasleen....the less said the better. I'm going back to reading it again! ❤️

Lovely one, Lizzy!

awesome update as always dearest author, eagerly looking forward to next update, much love to you <3

This was a roller coaster ride!! The details of emotions were spot on!! I loved Gurleen’s pov and thoughts!!! The backstory of why Darjee is against women working, the bad relationship between Inder and Darjee and of course Manbeer and Inder were very well described!!! I was shocked to read about Jasleen!!! She was that snake who would bite her own family, she didn’t even spare Garry , her own son!!! Garry really had toxic relationship growing up and made sense why he is the way he is today!!!!

Angad and Sahiba are growing as adults!!! I love how supportive Angad is to Sahiba!! You explained nicely why Sahiba is the way she is or why Angad is the way he is!!! I am so glad that you are showing shift in feelings first from Angad’s side and not Sahiba !!!

Once again you outdid yourself and love this part 💗

Thank you for tag PM, really appreciate it 🙂

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Lovely update dear 😘

Thank you, truly means a lot!!

You're welcome!

The chapter in itself was not a great experience to draft but the bits and pieces of the chapters when they were drafted were fun to write.

Please look forward to hopefully better chapters in future!

Originally posted by: 8Lucky88

Very detailed chapter portraying every character progress in current times. My favorite section was how Sahiba and Angad relationship is growing.

Angad is being silly, and Sahiba is being clueless at the moment. (I prefer to think so).

Would love to see a strong Sahiba return to India who can teach her sister and Jasleen a lesson.

I had something similar in my mind, but with how I changed this chapter, it would be something else perhaps.

Thanks for tagging

Great job! Continue soon

You're welcome, though there was a delay in posting all tags. I will try sooner this time.☺️

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Thanks for the tag

Beautiful update ❤️💞

Gurleen's pov was beautifully described 👏

The events which led to Manbir's misscariage was painful 😭

The reason for Manbir and Inderpal's fallout was tragic 😭

Loved the way you described the strong bond between Manbir, Inderpal, Gurleen and Jaspal

Felt sorry for Garry, he is like this because of his parents

Glad Seerat and Jasleen are getting their due punishment

Angad is a gentleman, loved the way he took care of Sahiba during her breakdown and helped her navigate her college life❤️

Sahiba unknowingly led Angad to cold showers😉

Angad is getting attracted to Sahiba while she considers him a friend 😊

Waiting for the time when Sahan will realise that they can be more than friends

You're welcome.

I am happy that you liked the chapter with all its ups and downs, and happier that you could feel the emotions of the characters. You are spot on about everything you have mentioned.

Angad is a nice person and has experience of dealing with stressed out college students thanks to his dependent cousins. So, he had easier time dealing with Sahiba's breakdown. That being said, they are still not emotionally on the same page.

I am hoping to write a better chapter update and post it on time, would love to read you opinion on that.

Hi. Thank you for motivating me. I would definitely try my best to update on time.

Originally posted by: mirai07

I loved the slow depictions of Angad-Sahiba quality time! And Jasleen....the less said the better. I'm going back to reading it again! ❤️

Lovely one, Lizzy!

Hi!!

Whenever someone tells me that they will re-read the chapter because they like it, my day is already made.

Mission accomplished! Means so much more in the context of this chapter. I will take it as compliment to my editing skills.

I hope your exams are over and maybe we can expect an update on your story as well. I cannot help but be excited for that.