DhruvTara:An eternal love story - Page 3

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Chakor samuh ne apna badla to le liya tha na unka aur humara moment kharab kr ke . Ab kahe ka bair nibha rahe h 😆

Hello , so this is the 3rd chapter of my FF , well it is the flashback which is much needed after my cliff hanger. Kindly ignore my grammatical mistakes. And I hope you all will like it.

Chapter -3

Flashback.

Chikitsak Dhruv aap thik to h ,ye aapne kya Kiya ,Tara screams.He has fallen unconscious and blood is falling from his stomach Senapati is still there . While Mahaveer is shocked is the prophecy is turning true. Dhruv's life is in now danger because of him .

Mahavir: Taru ! Shigrah inhe lekar chaliye , inhe upchaar ki avashyakta h . Dhruv ye aapne kya Kiya aapke praano ki raksha ke liye humne aap se itna durvyavhaar kiya aur aap ne humare liye apne upar talwaar le li .

They reached the Mahal .

Tara : Bhaiji ! Inhe jaldi vaidyashala le je chaliye , Inka upchaar hum karenge inhe kuchh nahi hone denge.

Tara with her medicinal plants and knowledge treats Dhruv,and is out of danger . She stays with him till the dawn when maharaj and maharani comes to see him . Keeping Dhruv in Maharani's observation, Tara goes to meet Mahavir .

Mahavir : Tara ! Aaj vo bhavishyavani yadi satya ho jaati to hum khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kr paate .

Tara : Aap chinta mat kijiye , bhaiji chikitsak Dhruv ab thik h , Aur vo bhavishyavani hum sach nahi hone denge . Parantu aaj jo senapati ji ne kiya h uske baad humne apna nirnay le liya h . Abhi chal kr pitashree ko saara satya batate hai.

They were about to go when senapati enters and blackmails them if they tell maharaj or anyone about his shadyantra. Then he will also tell him about the night stay of Tara in Dhruv's room after which maharaj will support him and Dhruv may be punished to death.

This was not acceptable to both of them so they accept senapati's condition.

In Dhruv's room.

Tara : Maa ab hum Beth Jaye Dr.Dhruv ke paas .

Maharani: Haa , bethiye Taru ,par ye haadsa hume samanya nahi lg Raha aap kuchh chhupa rahi h humse ?

Tara : Maa hum iss vishay mein aapko abhi kuchh nahi bata skte .

Maharani wanted to talk but seeing Tara's condition goes out of the room.

Tara (sits near Dhruv and holds his hand ) : Yadi tumhe aaj kuchh ho jata , tumhare , tumhare pita ke praan aaj humare kaaran sankat mein aa gaye the . (Crying ) Kyu kr rahe ho itne prayaas jab niyati hume Milana hi nahi chahti . Hum samay -sadi ko paar kr ke mile to avashya h lekin humara saath hona asambhav hai . Tumhare ye prayaas humare liye sab kitna kathin kr rahe h , tumhe.. tumhe aisi stithi mein hum nahi dekh paa rahe , agar aaj tumhe kuchh ho jaata to hum bhi marr jaate .

Suddenly a finger touches her lips to stop her from saying further .

Dhruv who has waken up by hearing her sobs has listened half of her conversation.

Dhruv: Tara ko ek kharoch bhi nahi aa sakti jab tak Dhruv uske saath h .

Tara looks towards him with tears in her eyes .

Dhruv: Itna pyaar krti ho to saath kyu nahi deti mera , humare pyaar ke liye .

Tara : Jo sambhav hi nahi uske prayaas krna chhod do samjha lo khud ko .

Dhruv: Kya tum khud ko samjha payi ho , tum ek baar koshish bhi nahi kr skti , main tumhare samay , Sadi ,maharaj, senapati sabse ladne ko taiyaar hu , kya tum apne darr se nahi lad skti (in a little angry voice )

Tara (in her mind : Hum bhi lad lete agar baat humari hoti , lekin humara Milan tumhare liye khatra h , aur vo hume swikaar nahi ) : Dhruv , in sab baato ke liye der ho chuki , tumne Aaj dekha ki senapati ne tumhare saath tumhare pita ko bhi jaan se maarne ki chesta ki , tumhara kartavya h , apne pariwar ke prati , tum kl ke kl apni Sadi vapas jaa rahe ho.

Dhruv : Baba ka dhyaan mein rakhunga , lekin tumhe saath liye Bina nahi jaunga , main maharaj se baat krne Jaa Raha hu .

Tara : Dhruv, Ruk jao... . Yadi tumne Aisa prayas kiya to hum apne praan le lenge ,she shouts with sword in her hand .

Dhruv : Kya bakwaas kr rahi hu. Ye koi mazaak nahi h. Chodo use abhi.

Tara : Hum bhi majaak nahi kar rahe h. Hum thak chuke h tumhare in prayaso se jo vyarth , tumhara pratyek asafal prayas hume bhi peeda deta h , jab jab tum apne praan daanv pr lagate ho .Hum aaj ye silsila khatm kar ke rahenge . Ab ye tum pr nirbhar krta h ki tumhe humara saath chahiye ya humara jeevan . Parso humara vivah h senapati Samrat Singh ke saath . Aur aap vaha upasthit nahi honge .

(Parso isliye kyunki shadi 1 din postpone ho gayi due to the accident vaise to jyada honi thi but machhar ne apni premika mandbuddhi maharaj ko mana liya , rajpurohit ke shubh tithi ki duhai deke )

Dhruv is hell bent shocked . Like someone has pulled the earth and his whole world is shaken . He trys to make her understand and take the sword but Tara is adament .

(Khud ki haalat thik nahi h pr Tara ko kuchh nahi hone dega )

Dhruv : Kya keh rahi ho tum us senapati se shadi karogi jisne mere aur baba ki jaan lene ki koshish ki ?

Tara : Humara vivah kisse hoga nahi hoga vo hum dekh lenge parantu tumhara aur humara Milan Sambhav nahi h , humari niyati mein jo likha h vahi hoga , humare jeevan ka nirnay hi chuka h ? Tumhara Prem chahkar bhi niyati nahi badal sakta. Tum kal yaha se chale jaoge anyatha hum abhi apne praan avashya tyaag denge ! (Saying this she turns the sword towards her stomach )

Dhruv : Thik h !!!! Tum jo chahti ho wahi hoga , chala jaunga mein yaha se, tum se , iss Sadi se duur vapas apne ghar , apni Sadi . Jab tumhe apne Prem pr vishwaas hi nahi to Mera bhi yaha koi kaam nahi .Parantu yadi tumhe mujh par itna hi vishwas h to

(In a stern voice ) Rajkumari Tarapriya Ji , main Vachan deta hu , jab tak aap khud mujhe nahi bulayengi mera naam nahi lengi , tab tak ye chikitsak Dr.Dhruv aapke yug ,aapke rajya , aapke pass nahi aayega chahe duniya idhar ki udhar hi kyun na ho jaaye .

( Dhruv takes the sword and throws it away)

Tara: ( hiding her tears ) Apne vachan ko bhulna mat (and leaves the room )

Imagine Dhruv Tara sad bgm (Vo hospital mein haath chudane vala , true fans to samajh jaenge par dusro ke liye Dhruv Tara - episode 5 hospital scene )

After some time in Tara's room

Tara : Anusuya, humne Aaj apne Prem ko khud hi samapt kr diya , Aaj humne dhruv ko khud se , apne jeevan se sabse durr kr diya .

Anusuya: Taru, royiye mat apne ye sab Chikitsak dhruv ki kushalta ke liye hi Kiya h ?

Tara :Humne unke Prem pr avishwas jataya , kaha ki hume unka Prem pr vishwas nahi h , kaise bataye unhe ki un par ,unke prem par hume itna vishwas ki uss par apni pratyek swaas de de . Parantu niyati unke praan maang Rahi h aur hume un par ek kharoch bhi aaye ye swikaar nahi h . Par unhe itni peeda de kar humare mann mein jo dukh h uska kya kare ?

Anusuya:Taru , sambhaliye khud ko !

Tara : Nahi , sambhal paa rahe anusuya, nahi sambhal paa rahe hum swayam ko , apne Mann ko , unse duri ko shayad sehen kr lenge , parantu unhe jo dukh Diya h , use anumaan krne ke prayaas bhar se jo peeda hoti , vo sehen nahi hoti anusuya.

Dhruv se durr hi hona tha , to ye Milan hua hi kyu . Kyu kanha ji ne hume samay Sadi paar kr milwaya , kyu vo prem kahani banayi , jisme hamara Milan asambhav h , jiska ant asambhav h .Kyu?

And Tears roll outs from Tara's eyes , who is now inconsolable.

Maharani comes to meet Dhruv.Dhruv tries to sit up .

Maharani: Ruk jaiye chikitsak Dhruv, aisi avashtha mein mat uthiye . Hum yaha aapse kshama mangne aaye h, hume maaf kr dijiye humare karaan aapke saath ye sab hua .Ravi ji .

Dhruv: Mujhe pata h , ki Ravi baba mere pita h , Tara ne bata diya h mujhe.

Maharani: Hume kshama kr dijiye , humare karaan aapko aapke parivaar ko itna dukh Mila , itne varsho tk ek putra ko apne pita se , ek patni ko apni pati se durr rehne ka kaaran bane h hum , him aapse nazre tk milane yogya nahi h .

Maharani folds her hands infront of Dhruv.

Dhruv: Nahi maharani ji , mujhe sharminda mat kariye , sach bolu to mujhe aap par bohot gussa aa raha tha , bura bhi laga tha ki maharaj aur apke kaaran meri maa ne itne saalo tk dard saha h , lekin ab naaraz nahi hu aapse , kabhi - kabhi kuchh cheeze humare bus mein nahi hoti ,chahe hum lakh koshishe kr le lekin haalaat humara saath nahi dete . Unhone aapki madad Kari aur yaha fas gaye , apne jarur puri koshish ki hogi unhe chudwane ki lekin nahi kr payi , isme aapki kya galti h , isliye main aap ko maaf krta hu , aur chinta mat kariye meri maa bhi sach Jaan apko maaf kar degi aap kisi guilt , ahh.. glani mein mat rahiyega ?

Maharani : Chikitsak Dhruv , Aap ne hume or maharaj ko kshama kr diya . Aap ka hriday kitna Vishal h , aur aapke sanskaar , aapki maata - pita ne Naa jane kaun se punya kiye h jo unhe aap jaisa putra mila h !

Dhruv : Maharani ji ! Maharaj ji ne jo kiya unke liye main unhe maaf nahi kr skta , unke bus mein sab tha lekin unhone ek Shak ke chalte itne logo ko dukh Diya , lekin haa ab vapas jaa raha hu to apne Mann mein unke liye naarazgi bhi nahi leker jaaunga .

Maharani :(shocked) Aap vapas jaa rahe h ,parantu achanak se ?

Dhruv : Maharani ji ! Ab Tara aur Samrat ki shaadi to nahi dekhni na , vaise bhi Rajkumari ji ne aadesh diya h lautna to padega .

Maharani recalls about the Maharishi 's epic bhavishyavani and understand the reason of Tara sending Dhruv back.

Maharani ji : Chikitsak Dhruv , kaash hum aapse keh paate ki ruk jaiye parantu yeh anuchit hoga , parantu hum ye avashya keh skte h ki ye humari putri ka durbhagya h ki unhe aap jeevansathi ke roop mein nahi mil paaye .Aap jaisa damaad pakar hum dhanya ho jaate .

Dhruv : Maharani ji ! Main aapka damaad nahi main to aapka beta hu , ab aap mujhe jaate waqt paraya kr rahi h .

Said Dhruv with a little angry face .

Maharani : Thik h . Parantu aap satya mein hume apni maa samaan samajhte h , to humari do baate manenge .

Dhruv : Ji boliye, kya baat h? Jarur manunga .

Maharani : To aaj se aap hume maharani nahi maa bolenge?

Dhruv: Achcha thik h ,main aapko Rani maa bolunga lekin aap bhi mujhe sirf Dhruv bolengi naki chikitsak Dhruv .Ok

Maharani : Thik h , aur dusri baat ye aap ke mann mein jo bhi dukh h , vo hume bataiye ,Aaj humari aapke saath aakhiri bhent h , humari god mein sar rakhiye aur mann mein jo bhi dukh , duvidha , peeda h bol dijiye , bhavnaye yadi mann mein reh jaaye to mann ko kabhi santushti nahi milti .

Dhruv gets emotional and puts her head in maharani's lap getting peace for some time .

(Taru ko console krne ke liye sab ready rehte h , lekin heartbreak Dhruv ko bhi to koi console krne wala chahiye na )

Next morning in the infirmary .Dhruv is packing his things when Sukanya comes there .

Sukanya: Chikitsak Dhruv ! Hume pata chala ki aapko chot lagi h , to hum bhaage bhaage aapse milne chale aaye , aap thik to h na ?

Dhruv : Ji , chot to lagi thi , par ab mai bilkul theek hu choti Rajkumari ji , ab aapke hote hue mujhe kuchh ho skta .He said with a sweet smile.

Sukanya sees his luggage and asks " Aap kahi jaa rahe h kya , ye saara saaman to aapka h na ?

Dhruv : Haa! Main apne rajya vapas jaa raha hu , Ravi baba ke saath , apne pariwar ke paas .

Sukanya stood silent for a second. She was sad that the only person whom she considers her family is leaving .

Sukanya : Aap jaa rahe h itni jldi ?

Dhruv senses her feelings: Haa jaa raha hu , shayad Rajkumari ji mere naseeb mein nahi h , lekin kya chhoti Rajkumari mere saath mere rajya chalna chahengi ?

Sukanya (excitedly) :Haa ,hum chalenge na aapke rajya , kitna anand aaega na , ... Suddenly she stops and says , "Hum aapke saath nahi jaa skte !

Dhruv : Kyu ? Kyu nahi chal skti aap mere saath ?

Sukanya : Dhruv ji , Hum Rajkumari Tarapriya jaisa Banna chahte h , unki tarah kushal yodhdha banna chahte h ,apne vallabhgarh ki seva krna chahte h , aap humare bade bhai jaise h lekin vallabhgarh to humara Ghar h na use kaise chhod kr jaaye ?

Dhruv : To aapka ye kaaran h , lekin aap mere saath jakr bhi to .. Then he realises: (Ye koi pados ka rajya nahi h Dhruv , samay Sadi ke paar jaana h , baar baar aane jaane ka risk nahi le skte , jaan ko khatra h , main aise sukanya ko saath nahi le jaa skta )

Thik h ,aap rehna chahti h , to main aapko nahi rokunga , par kya aap sach mein yahi rehna chahti h.

Sukanya : Haa! Dhruv Ji hum yahi rehna chahte h, lekin hume aapki bohot yaad aaegi .

Dhruv : Mujhe bhi aapki bohot yaad aaegi , meri best friend jo h aap .

Sukanya: best kya ?

Dhruv : Best friend arthat sabse pyaari dost , Mitra. Hai na aap meri !

Sukanya smiles .

Dhruv : Bus yahi to chahiye ,aise hi muskurate rahiye , thik h , achcha aap mera ek kaam karengi ?

Sukanya: boliye chikitsak Dhruv kya krna h ?

Dhruv : Khyal rakhna h apna aur Rajkumari Tarapriya Ji ka , jaanti h aap , vo apna dhyan bilkul nahi rakhti aur aap to unse jyadaa samajhdaar h , to ab aapko hi unka dhyan rakhna padega , rakhengi na ?

Sukanya: Bilkul rakhenge , parantu yadi nahi sambhal paye to ? To hum karenge ?

Dhruv : To aap mujhe bula lijiyega , main aa jaunga.

Sukanya : Sachchi ! Aap aaenge , parantu hum apko bulaenge kaise ?

Dhruv : Vo to main aapko baad mein bataunga , lekin usse pehle ek photo ho jaye .

Sukanya and Dhruv takes a selfie in the phone .

Flashback ends .

In the court ,

After the announcement of Dhruv leaving , all courtiers are giving him farewell gifts . Raj vaidya and mahaveer are also present feeling really sad about the departure .

Raj vaidya : Chikitsak Dhruv! Humne aap jaisa yogya aur nishthawan chikitsak pehli baar dekha h aur hume aapse bohot kuchh sikhne ko mila . Aap ka bohot dhanyawaad .

Mahaveer. : Chikitsak Dhruv , hum aap ke liye kuchh nahi kr paaye uska hume khed h . Lekin Aap ne humare praan bachaye , humare liye samay Sadi paar kr aaye uske liye aapka punha dhanyawaad.

Dhruv nods his head , and with Ravi heads towards Navrangvan.

Thanks for reading 👍🏼

I am back after long 8 hours 😆. So let's get to the review. Today's chapter was so emotional! Bas Senapati Aur Tara ki shaadi mat karvai. I liked Maharani aur Dhruv's scene the best. 👍🏼

Tara and her emotional blackmailing

Dhruv : Thik h !!!! Tum jo chahti ho wahi hoga , chala jaunga mein yaha se, tum se , iss Sadi se duur vapas apne ghar , apni Sadi . Jab tumhe apne Prem pr vishwaas hi nahi to Mera bhi yaha koi kaam nahi .Parantu yadi tumhe mujh par itna hi vishwas h to

(In a stern voice ) Rajkumari Tarapriya Ji , main Vachan deta hu , jab tak aap khud mujhe nahi bulayengi mera naam nahi lengi , tab tak ye chikitsak Dr.Dhruv aapke yug ,aapke rajya , aapke pass nahi aayega chahe duniya idhar ki udhar hi kyun na ho jaaye .

Ye wala part muze sabse achha laga👏 finally Dhruv 21st century jane ke liye ready ho gaya

Queen and Dhruv + Dhruv sukku scenes❤

Mai bhi loyal fan hu muze yad hai epi 5 wala DT separation scene 😆

Dhruv ne kaha shushi queen ko sach janne ke bad maf kar degi ye Asambhav hai 👎😂😂

So much emotional chapter 😢 kya sach ma uss machchar aur tara ki shaadi ho jayegi...

beautifully written and emotional good job

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

I am back after long 8 hours 😆. So let's get to the review. Today's chapter was so emotional! Bas Senapati Aur Tara ki shaadi mat karvai. I liked Maharani aur Dhruv's scene the best. 👍🏼

Dhanyawaad 😃

Don't worry mujhe machchru ki wedding mein bilkul interest nahi h😉

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Tara and her emotional blackmailing

Dhruv : Thik h !!!! Tum jo chahti ho wahi hoga , chala jaunga mein yaha se, tum se , iss Sadi se duur vapas apne ghar , apni Sadi . Jab tumhe apne Prem pr vishwaas hi nahi to Mera bhi yaha koi kaam nahi .Parantu yadi tumhe mujh par itna hi vishwas h to

(In a stern voice ) Rajkumari Tarapriya Ji , main Vachan deta hu , jab tak aap khud mujhe nahi bulayengi mera naam nahi lengi , tab tak ye chikitsak Dr.Dhruv aapke yug ,aapke rajya , aapke pass nahi aayega chahe duniya idhar ki udhar hi kyun na ho jaaye .

Ye wala part muze sabse achha laga👏 finally Dhruv 21st century jane ke liye ready ho gaya

Use bhejna jaruri kb tk shaadi shaadi gata rahega , apni Sushi se unke pati aur putra ka milan bhi karwana h

Queen and Dhruv + Dhruv sukku scenes❤

😃😃

Mai bhi loyal fan hu muze yad hai epi 5 wala DT separation scene

Vo to pehle se hi pata h 👍🏼

Dhruv ne kaha shushi queen ko sach janne ke bad maf kar degi ye Asambhav hai 👎😂😂

Kar degi twist Lana padega ,lekin maan jayegi 😉

Originally posted by: CutieShona20

So much emotional chapter 😢 kya sach ma uss machchar aur tara ki shaadi ho jayegi...

Thanks for reading .

Are nahi re , Unki shaadi karani hoti to main FF likhne se pehle hi machchar ka kaam tamam kr deti 😆

Awesome yaar, Tia 👏

I loved it

It is good to read such great work of fiction with regards to the comparable storyline ❤️

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