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Posted: 3 years ago
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Girl!!! Now this is worng! Again a damn cliffhanger ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ. But chalo koi nhi I will wait to read the next part.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Ohhhh God , this was an epic Tia , โค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘

Damn Sure , The cliffhanger will be positive , plz meri Aashaao ko dubaa na mat๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

She find that Dhruv is not in his room , then she asks the guards who told her that he has gone towards the vaidyashala ( Itni shudh Hindi sun li hai Ab English bhul gayi hu๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„ ) rakhiyega Varna b

Bold;
Sach me yr , Mere frndz k among kahi baar aesa ho jaata , aese aese hindi words nikl jaata ek dum high level waale..๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ


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Posted: 3 years ago
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I am happy that Dhruv is going back

Your kidnapping idea was stolen by writers , no problem, we will build his house in the hot sun as a punishment ๐Ÿ˜ก

The lines you write in brackets make me laugh๐Ÿคฃ

Where did this pigeon come from to carry the message from here to there๐Ÿง

Waiting for next part ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

Girl!!! Now this is worng! Again a damn cliffhanger ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ. But chalo koi nhi I will wait to read the next part.

Achcha sorry , vo likhte likhte cliffhanger apne aap chala aata h , par koi nai next time no cliff hanger.๐Ÿ˜Š

I will try to update soon.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: BUSH146

Ohhhh God , this was an epic Tia , โค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘
Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Damn Sure , The cliffhanger will be positive , plz meri Aashaao ko dubaa na mat๐Ÿคฃ

Pure positive genuine reason Dene ka try karungi , par agar galti se aashao pr Pani phir jaaye to mujhe mat duba dena , thoda sa manage kr lena aur feedback dena. Positive criticism are always welcomed.๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

I am happy that Dhruv is going back

Your kidnapping idea was stolen by writers , no problem, we will build his house in the hot sun as a punishment ๐Ÿ˜ก

Sachchi , Done agar help chahiye ho to zaroor bolna ,๐Ÿ˜ƒmera idea churaya us dusht writer ne ๐Ÿ˜ก

The lines you write in brackets make me laugh๐Ÿคฃ

Ab comedy ki kami thi story mein to maine socha vo Mai aise puri kar du , balance ban jayega ๐ŸคฃVaise vo likhne mein maza bada aaya .

Where did this pigeon come from to carry the message from here to there๐Ÿง

Jaise Tara ke paas khatre ke liye vishesh dhwani h jo Dharmendra ko bulane ke liye use ki thi , chakor ki dhwani ho Dhruv bulane ke liye use hoti h , vaise hi Tara ne pigeon bulane ke liye bhi use kr li ek dhwani , As in old days trained Pigeon was used as messenger to yaha bhi usse kaam krwa liya .


Waiting for next part ๐Ÿค—

Will try to update soon.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: CutieShona20

Amazing part dear & thanku for tagging me.....

Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

Mera man to kar raha tha ki iss machchhar ko masal doo ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก but why dhruv want to leave yr without tara๐Ÿ˜” I am curious to know how story gonna unfold update next part soon

Ab vo kaam hi maar khane wala krta h to kya kare , but aap apna khoon mata jalao .๐Ÿ˜Š

Dhruv kaise maana ye to aage ke part mein pata chalega , lekin laut kar to Tara ke paas hi aayega vo bhi full dhamake ke saath๐Ÿ˜Ž

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tia-life

Sachchi , Done agar help chahiye ho to zaroor bolna ,smiley4mera idea churaya us dusht writer ne smiley7

Writers ka address send karo baki tumhara badla mai le lungi ๐Ÿ‘

Ab comedy ki kami thi story mein to maine socha vo Mai aise puri kar du , balance ban jayega smiley37Vaise vo likhne mein maza bada aaya .

Aur hame padhne me bhi bohot aanand aaya ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Jaise Tara ke paas khatre ke liye vishesh dhwani h jo Dharmendra ko bulane ke liye use ki thi , chakor ki dhwani ho Dhruv bulane ke liye use hoti h , vaise hi Tara ne pigeon bulane ke liye bhi use kr li ek dhwani , As in old days trained Pigeon was used as messenger to yaha bhi usse kaam krwa liya .

Mat yad dilao Dhruv ne kitni gandi tarah se chakor ki aavaj nikali thi chakor samuh abhi bhi khafa hoga usse ๐Ÿ˜œ

Will try to update soon

Take your time koi jaldi nahi hai



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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Tia-life

Achcha sorry , vo likhte likhte cliffhanger apne aap chala aata h , par koi nai next time no cliff hanger.๐Ÿ˜Š

I will try to update soon.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

I WILL WAIT FOR THE UPDATE ๐Ÿค—. CLIFFHANGER BHI CHALE GA BUT DRAMATIC HONA TOH BANTA HAI NA ๐Ÿ˜†

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