RaYa SS : Polar Opposites[ Shot 2 Pg 7( 28/6/23)] - Page 6

Originally posted by: minakrish

Commented already.🤗 Also, your heading needs to be changed to Shot 2 instead of Shot 1.😳

Thanks, I have changed it and yes I did read your comment ❤️.Glad you liked it 🤗

This is the way you wrap up open ends to give the main leads their story. Please lend your brains to the writers dear

Awesome!!! I love this take

Absolutely loved this part..please continue soon❤️

I'm looking forward to a great time

I love Ram's reaction. I'm tired of wimpy, too-forgiving , easily fooled Ram, I mean mls. Also need more constructive eavesdropping for the good guys.

This made me happy. :)

ETA:

Writing this after I read the whole thing.

First off, I liked how Ram wasn't stupidly blinkered about Yuvi and unimpressed by Yuvi trying to act all hardworking.

Liked how you brought in Ram and Priya's convo in the car and the conversation itself.

Convenient for Yuvi and Kriti to be in the same building.🤣 That confused me (with Shardul there too), when I read the latest one first.

Such a relief to have the cheating discovered and confronted.

Still smiling at Dentist.

I read shot2 first, thinking I'd read the first part, but I couldn't remember certain references, so I decided to confirm.🤣🤣🤣

I enjoyed this! Now I get Priya's demeanor and the Dentist ref, which I like very much for some reason.

Hope you'll keep going!

Brilliant update!! I loved it..🤩🤩🤩

Maybe it is the sadist in me, but I really want Ram to absolutely destroy both kriti and yuvi... 😈😈😈

I am interested.

beautifully written and continued.

Originally posted by: HpTheChosenOne

Brilliant update!! I loved it..🤩🤩🤩

Maybe it is the sadist in me, but I really want Ram to absolutely destroy both kriti and yuvi... 😈😈😈

That would be nice actually. I am with you 😊