His last good bye migrated (link in pg 21) - Page 13

Originally posted by: umawanderer

You know what?

I think I am just over thinking it...

Please do give me a genuine feedback... Should I continue doing this or am I being extra cautious?

Yes please 🥺

Originally posted by: umawanderer

You know what?

I think I am just over thinking it...

Please do give me a genuine feedback... Should I continue doing this or am I being extra cautious?

Originally posted by: Criticiser

Please don’t over think dear you are doing an excellent job with this much better than the actual writers of this show, you can do whatever makes you feel comfortable ❤️

Oh I was not talking about me not continuing the story... I should have been more clear..

Rest assured.. I never leave a story half way.. even if I get super irritated by my schedule😆😆

I was talking about the dark theme chapter segregation...

I think mickey also had the same confusion.

No no i got it. I meant continue with this theme.

Maybe give a warning for people who are not prepared.

As usual very well written parts. I am intrigued to know what happened to Abhinav if he contacted abhira 3 years ago where was he from last 9 years i guess.

Looking forward for Abhira too. How they got together again. Overall everything 😅

Originally posted by: umawanderer

Oh I was not talking about me not continuing the story... I should have been more clear..

Rest assured.. I never leave a story half way.. even if I get super irritated by my schedule😆😆

I was talking about the dark theme chapter segregation...

I think mickey also had the same confusion.

I personally don’t have a problem with such themes as I find them interesting but I’m sure people will hence you should put a disclaimer just to alert them 😊

Originally posted by: umawanderer

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I understand Abhir. I would not have forgiven them either

I understand the hurt and pent-up frustration. When you are unable to express yourself because you are scared to hurt somebody, sacred to be left alone. The resentment keeps building up until you explode

Parth is a monster. The last thing he ever did for his son was to ruin him completely.

I love this story. You are doing great

Originally posted by: chaipaani

No no i got it. I meant continue with this theme.

Maybe give a warning for people who are not prepared.

As usual very well written parts. I am intrigued to know what happened to Abhinav if he contacted abhira 3 years ago where was he from last 9 years i guess.

Looking forward for Abhira too. How they got together again. Overall everything 😅

Most of my stories have dark themes and vile characters.

I skip dark themes in IF though... I almost wanted to start an original work (dark twisted and complex)in IF fanfiction place, but then I thought better of it and did not publish it. IF just doesn't give me that vibe.

Thanks for appreciating my work.

But just a heads up! There will be no explanation of Abhira reunion. I just assumed they will come back together. That's it. And Abhinav will retreat. No flashback. It just happens.🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

I am doing that because I never understood their reason for falling in love with each other the first time. So, I may not be able to show their reunion properly without understanding the essence of their love.

To be fair... I started writing this story after Abhir's surgery. I never thought Ak's feelings for Abhinav or Abhimanyu. As I said in the first chapter.. this was mostly the story of Abhir and Abhinav. As that was what attracted me to this show.

Abhira's explanation will be there. But again that is based on my understanding of their characters as individuals and not their love story.

Just telling you that...

Originally posted by: umawanderer

Most of my stories have dark themes and vile characters.

I skip dark themes in IF though... I almost wanted to start an original work (dark twisted and complex)in IF fanfiction place, but then I thought better of it and did not publish it. IF just doesn't give me that vibe.

Thanks for appreciating my work.

But just a heads up! There will be no explanation of Abhira reunion. I just assumed they will come back together. That's it. And Abhinav will retreat. No flashback. It just happens.🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

I am doing that because I never understood their reason for falling in love with each other the first time. So, I may not be able to show their reunion properly without understanding the essence of their love.

To be fair... I started writing this story after Abhir's surgery. I never thought Ak's feelings for Abhinav or Abhimanyu. As I said in the first chapter.. this was mostly the story of Abhir and Abhinav. As that was what attracted me to this show.

Abhira's explanation will be there. But again that is based on my understanding of their characters as individuals and not their love story.

Just telling you that...

Makes Sense. although a short para on what happened with Abhinav would really be great.

@bold for me they just fell in love, however toxic they both were to eachother, mistakes, issues one thing was there LOVE. so even always thought they will eventually get back together. Like once said in a comment that for me the heart wants what it wants. Choices of heart doesn't make sense.

Even in real life if you ever realised when two people who love eachother breaks up whatever reason it maybe It hurts. That is they both for me Abhimanyus's mistake that they are not together, she didn't want that yet it hurts both of them immensely. One of the reason I am not able to connect with Akshara now coz at the moment it feels like Abhimanyu never exist, the love wasn't there. People do fall in love again but you can not just erase the past. The relationship they had, they have(parents of Abhir) there should be basic courtesy between atleast which i find missing from Akshara.

I am just not a romantic person 🤷‍♀️

I rarely felt touched by romance in fiction... But I could understand some.... But Abhira I never understood...I never felt anything about AbhiM or Ak. They were just not much interesting or likable to me.

Guess it can't be helped...

That is my wiring in brain afterall. 😜😜

Yeah Abhinav whole flashback will be there 😊