FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 28

Hey Lizzy, welcome back. was waiting for this update for long

I loved how Sahiba and Angad's relationship is evolving. there is no force, no abuse as well as no rush to make them fall in love. seems so organic and natural.

Both of them are still a bit hesitant around each other, still not sure of other's reactions to certain things but still getting comfortable enough to get ready together and help each other. loved that part of reception day

The speech was angad was very well done. he showed his ruthless side to baweja's at the same time making sure Sahiba gets the required welcome and respect in his home

truly this is how it should have been shown in show. to dekhana majedar hota

keep writing such beautiful chapters

Bilkul, waise bhi aur bohot zehrili cheezein hai, mujhse TMD nahi jhil raha Ghum toh bilkul bhi nahi jhilega. EDT dekhi hai maine. Samajh aa gaya hai ki Vankar ke shows kaise hain🤣

When I read a good story based on a show on IF, I always think that I wish the writers of the show reading this story, they could have done better job in creating their own show but that’s just 😏

I am not VJ or Himanshi’s fan, to be honest I have literally watched 3 episodes after their marriage and only following short clips on YouTube because honestly I personally do not like their acting or what they are showing!! So for me your story is a great story because I love logic in love stories and you have shown it in every way so keep going, I will be around till the end 🙂

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Hey Lizzy, welcome back. was waiting for this update for long

❤️

I loved how Sahiba and Angad's relationship is evolving. there is no force, no abuse as well as no rush to make them fall in love. seems so organic and natural.

Both of them are still a bit hesitant around each other, still not sure of other's reactions to certain things but still getting comfortable enough to get ready together and help each other. loved that part of reception day

Maine ye chapter likhna yahin se shuru kiya tha. But then I thought ki ye itna organic nahi ho pa raha hai, then I went back to writing a week later. Created the entire chapter from scratch, then realized ki kaafi dragging and slow ho raha hai. Then I sat down to combine two sections together and revising the final version.

The speech was angad was very well done. he showed his ruthless side to baweja's at the same time making sure Sahiba gets the required welcome and respect in his home

truly this is how it should have been shown in show. to dekhana majedar hota

Sahi mein, mujhe show mein yahi dekhna tha. At least Ishqbaaz mein kabhi kabhi PH meherbaan ho jaate the. Yahan toh poora drought pada hai. They are being vampires, read to suck female lead's dignity. I think, at this point, I am just channeling my disappointment with the show to pen the preferred scenarios through this.

keep writing such beautiful chapters

I will. This time, you won't have to wait too much.😊

Oh bhai bande ki alag fetish hai, usko devar bhabhi jija sali sab main affair dikhana hai. Uska bas chale toh woh saas bahu main bhi affair dikha de 😂

Originally posted by: arshisimple

When I read a good story based on a show on IF, I always think that I wish the writers of the show reading this story, they could have done better job in creating their own show but that’s just 😏

I am not VJ or Himanshi’s fan, to be honest I have literally watched 3 episodes after their marriage and only following short clips on YouTube because honestly I personally do not like their acting or what they are showing!! So for me your story is a great story because I love logic in love stories and you have shown it in every way so keep going, I will be around till the end 🙂

Phew,

Going by the discussion (by some people) on the forum, I thought I am only one who is disappointed in the acting skills of the leads. Initially, I thought the production house alone is responsible for the mess of the show because I have seen some of the senior cast's work and they have done a great justice to their characters. But then I went to check VJ's work and was barely impressed. His characters are mostly same and his acting appears bland to me. So, I felt that he along with the female lead is contributing their share of the mess. It might be partly because they don't understand the storyline and their characters anymore or they feel lost when they see the script... But even in those situations, usually, for the leads, it takes only one improvised scene to make the audience get hooked to their show. Here I do not see happening.

And I think, there must be an inherent logic in fiction regardless of their genre. Even if the audience/readership is going to willingly suspend its disbelief when consuming fiction, the audience/readership would still need to hold onto logic to make sense of the story. Otherwise, fiction would appear like random scenes clubbed together at its best.

Kaafi shaukiya banda hai aur kaafi khatarnaak fetishes hain. Isko industry mein family drama production ka kaam kisne diya? No wonder isko sabka sir-dard karna hai.

Agar iske aur bhi shows hai jo mujhe avoid karne chahiye toh please bata dena.

Baki ka toh idk par Ghum ganja zaroor avoid karna . Mental health aur blood pressure sahi rehta hai 😂

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Phew,

Going by the discussion (by some people) on the forum, I thought I am only one who is disappointed in the acting skills of the leads. Initially, I thought the production house alone is responsible for the mess of the show because I have seen some of the senior cast's work and they have done a great justice to their characters. But then I went to check VJ's work and was barely impressed. His characters are mostly same and his acting appears bland to me. So, I felt that he along with the female lead is contributing their share of the mess. It might be partly because they don't understand the storyline and their characters anymore or they feel lost when they see the script... But even in those situations, usually, for the leads, it takes only one improvised scene to make the audience get hooked to their show. Here I do not see happening.

And I think, there must be an inherent logic in fiction regardless of their genre. Even if the audience/readership is going to willingly suspend its disbelief when consuming fiction, the audience/readership would still need to hold onto logic to make sense of the story. Otherwise, fiction would appear like random scenes clubbed together at its best.

I feel the actors have also lost heart in the show. They must have been given the GC storyline which had lots of interesting plots etc. But the way serial has turned it would be a wonder if they actually enjoy doing these scenes or can relate to the character

Loved the chapter your character essence is amazing the logical approach to a positive and healthy relationship without any portrayal of forceful anger and abuse like in the show actually attracts audience here readers show mai to ab actors bhi bore ho rahe hai l feel like they are just waiting for the torture to end

Hopefully we get to see more of ur works and chapter is. worth rereading again and again just to enjoy the development camaraderie b/w sahan