FF: Ishq-e-Watan *Chapter 78 Posted* - Page 80

Chapter 60:

Monami-Karan convo was relaxing and I sightful for Monami. Again, I hope it doesn't bring in a sense of pity. Awaiting Monami and Siddhart's realisation of the life of a soldier with Param's arrival (you had earlier mentioned).

Karan ka kya hi kahe. Sach me gussa aa raha hain mujhe, don't know why. I really want him to get an earful amd possibly a punishment for ignoring his health.

Sanjana ne sach hi kaha, they need to talk. Confront or simply talk.

Liked the conversation between Karan-Koel.

Subject ka aur relation ka doubt clear toh hogaya uske saath Karan ka diagnosis bhi hua. But fayada🤦🏻‍♀️.

Kitne rang pyaar ke: Sanjana-Siddhart ka naya naya ehsaas, Monami-Karan ka anjaana sa aur Faizi-Koel ka uljha sa. Finally Param-Barkha ka ideal couple.

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

nahi kiya re.. I was talking about something else 🤣

Theek ho?

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Theek ho?

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Chapter 59:

Bala's opening line 😆.

I love Bala's one liners. He is such a goofball at times.

Karan clueless (in the matter of their love story), Faizi guilty, Sanjana lovestruck.

Karan toh apni love story mein bhi blank hi hai, auron ki toh chodh hi do. Faizi, more than guilty, is conflicted about his feelings and emotions. His heart wants something and his mind is pointing him to the other direction.

Siddhart-Sanjana convo and mini attempted date was cute and nice.

Pehla pehla pyaar waali feels.

The Rani-wala dialogue kaha se tha? Did I miss it?

Way way pehle. Chapter 6. Jab Monami pehle aakar training room mein baith jaati hai and asks Karan why he calls her Rani Sahiba.

Param's re-institution to service was shown well, his anxiety, self-doubt, self-assurances.

I am glad. I am so nervous to write Param. I had wanted to show him in action par honestly, beyond a few things, I am not sure how to use him.

I really want to see their (Param and Karan) interactions on job.

Param brings in experience and a new perspective, also by staying away from active service must have given him a new dimension.

Also, the burden of work would always be lesser on Param since he is not going to be a trainer and he cannot be on field. Toh his main job and majority of the energy is going to be utilized with strategy work and picking up clues.

Was Karan contemplating using the cadet network? So, when Param proposed it, he wasn't quite surprised.

Maybe. He did have it in the back of his mind but I doubt I had put it in anywhere in written text.

Actually, the cadets don't really need to know they are part of a mission. The trio can only disclose what they are looking to get. This way, there is still secrecy but there is minimal risk of disclosure.

Half information can lead to speaking things they pick up on but aren't supposed to tell. Moreover, if the spy thinks that the cadets know something and the cadets aren't on their guard, they can be in serious trouble.

Monami and Siddhart will take some time to get used to Param being around. The other option is a full fledged Confrontation.

Even with a full fledged confrontation, they would need to let go of their anger towards him, and accept him.

And pleeeeeease Monami,Siddhart: Never pity a soldier.

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

nahi kiya re.. I was talking about something else 🤣

You are supposed to clarify warna toh sabko shock hi lagega, na? Aisi baatein bolkar chodh nahi dena hota.

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Chapter 60:

Monami-Karan convo was relaxing and I sightful for Monami. Again, I hope it doesn't bring in a sense of pity.

It won't. She acknowledges the pain he must have felt, giving up his duty but she is not going to pity him on it.

Awaiting Monami and Siddhart's realisation of the life of a soldier with Param's arrival (you had earlier mentioned).

It will be a mixture of things happening. Param's arrival, particularly, would force them to realize that they need to work together with him even if they have unresolved feelings. There are going to be a few more events that are going to put some more things in perspective for them though.

Karan ka kya hi kahe. Sach me gussa aa raha hain mujhe, don't know why. I really want him to get an earful amd possibly a punishment for ignoring his health.

He will! He is going to get a verbal thrashing from Param when he wakes up and is in good enough health. Had that planned out for weeks.

Sanjana ne sach hi kaha, they need to talk. Confront or simply talk.

They do need to talk, and it will be more of a talk than a confrontation. Sid and Monami, no matter their anger, will remember that in the academy, he is their senior.

Liked the conversation between Karan-Koel.

Subject ka aur relation ka doubt clear toh hogaya uske saath Karan ka diagnosis bhi hua. But fayada🤦🏻‍♀️.

Karan is stubborn and pushes himself too much. He does need to take time to sort himself out.

Kitne rang pyaar ke: Sanjana-Siddhart ka naya naya ehsaas, Monami-Karan ka anjaana sa aur Faizi-Koel ka uljha sa. Finally Param-Barkha ka ideal couple.

❤️

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

yus yus. I was talking about something like 5ish years ago 🤣

Ok.

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

You are supposed to clarify warna toh sabko shock hi lagega, na? Aisi baatein bolkar chodh nahi dena hota.

When are you updating next part?

Originally posted by: chco

When are you updating next part?

Soon! Probably today or tomorrow. I am almost done with the chapter. Just a scene or two left.