It is always a relief to see the readers finding parts or the chapter or the entire chapter as their favorite!!! It definitely made my day.
I felt there was no option other than going the organic way, otherwise we all have witnessed what crap they are pulling in the show. Now I feel even the actors are losing their interest in the work since they cannot make sense of the story or their characters. But yeah, for my characters, they were pointed out the fact that all marriages work the same way. And seeing that way, for my characters, their learning arc would be to understand this lesson that any good marriage depends on the coordination and not on the choice of the partner (if the latter is not going to put in the effort).
I dislike the way in which show's character uses forceful manner to impose orders. At least, Riddhiman's actor would give us sneak peak into the maturity of the character enough to make his viewers believe he was smart. The best way it was done by showing 2 opposite logics for any action. Riddhi would deploy it to show how practical he is. I remember when he brings Khori to his room, he claims one thing in front of the family and another to justify it in front of Khori while his real intention was to figure out whether Khori is lying to him about her disinterest in him or not. Contrary to that Angad's character offers a badly tapered box in the name of practicality and great business acumen. Sorry to say this, if you are VJ's fan, but the onus lies on bad acting too. There is no way, the actors do not get to improvise on the spot, he too could do it make his character coherent but all I could see is half-hearted acting post-reception. So yeah, all this goes in my head, when I write his lines.
For Sahiba, I just go by imagining this: to what extent she is rattled by another forced responsibility and what would she do if she is offered help or sharing her burden. Given that she has been managing responsibilities for a long time, she might not explicitly take up the offer or completely be on board. At least, she can depend on the other person enough to take a short break from the responsibility.
Hell yeah!! this is what sensible Angad would have done to save his business and teach the idiots a lesson in the show. But since we did not get to see it in the show, here we are.
I am already drafting outline for the next part.😆 Would Love to see you around soon.