Kasam- Dhruv Tara SS--- Part 5 pg 14 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

I love it that you love it Chinu ... Can I call you Chinu? 😬

Ji jarur muze achha lagega agar tum pyar se chinnu bologi

Thank you Chinu 🤗

Haan na yaar, show me humara Dhruv itna pareshan ho raha hai, toh yaha pe Tara ko bhi thoda pareshan karna banta hai na

Ha aur pareshan karo use

Jarur

Yes I love Dhruv Sukku bond ☺

Me too they are so adorable cuties

Haan na yaar I am also waiting for a Dhruv in my life

Muze Dhruv nahi mila to mai sanyas lekar Himalaya jaungi

Arre itni bhi kya jaldi hai.. pehle show pura dekh lo fir chale jayenge 😆

Ohhh... Tumhe samajh me aa gaya ki Dhruv ne Tara ke liye odhani li hai

Ha Odhni aur DT ka connection pata hai muze bhi

😳

Thank you my dear ... I was a bit apprehensive about writing the story in this form of past and present ... But abhi tumne bol diya you can connect to mujhe accha laga 😊

Ha kyunki ye idea different hai but achha hai aur is form me story samjhne ke liye puri read karni padti hai koi bhi part skip nahi kar sakte

Ohh maine itna soch ke nahi likha tha 😆

Is part ko thoda time lag sakta hai, I will try to upload soon

Take your time dear 😊

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Thank you Chinu 🤗

Arre itni bhi kya jaldi hai.. pehle show pura dekh lo fir chale jayenge 😆

Welcome Nikki 🤗

OK agar Dhruv nahi mila to hum jarur jayenge😉

Finished 2 chapters on one go.😃

Loved your writing and the pace. Glad you didn't wrap it up in 3 shorts.

But mere dhruv ko abhi Tak hosh nai aya.🥺

Beautiful write up dear ...

I always wanted DT outing ... timeout from responsibilities ... understand each other more as individually ...

While taking care of D .. loved the way u shifted to FB were lovely moments ...

You made sure not to overpower Dhruv's feelings kept it subtle ... Tara trying to touch her inner feelings .. I guess will have to wait till the moment she fears of losing him ...

Brought in Sukanya ... it was soo cute gesture by D .... these moments are nailing deep down in Tara feelings ... Hope she catches them before it's too late ....

Hat's off to D for being soo much in patience and not trying to force his feelings on her ...

A chotu request ..

It will helpful if You upload earlier stories page linked with the current one ... anyone if they want to go directly to the any of the stories can easily find one on the same page ...

They dont have to search for them ..

Liked ..

Part 1 link

Part 2 link

..so on ... current one ... Just a suggestion ..

Will be eagerly waiting for the next one ... 🤗

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Welcome Nikki 🤗

OK agar Dhruv nahi mila to hum jarur jayenge😉

Avashya jayenge 😉

Originally posted by: abhe

Finished 2 chapters on one go.😃

Loved your writing and the pace. Glad you didn't wrap it up in 3 shorts.

But mere dhruv ko abhi Tak hosh nai aya.🥺

Thank you so much dear... Yeah I realized that I could not complete the story in 3 parts

Arre sabar karo, uska hosh me ana hi to story ka sabse bada highlight hoga 😆

Originally posted by: shridharg

Beautiful write up dear ...

I always wanted DT outing ... timeout from responsibilities ... understand each other more as individually ...

While taking care of D .. loved the way u shifted to FB were lovely moments ...

You made sure not to overpower Dhruv's feelings kept it subtle ... Tara trying to touch her inner feelings .. I guess will have to wait till the moment she fears of losing him ...

Brought in Sukanya ... it was soo cute gesture by D .... these moments are nailing deep down in Tara feelings ... Hope she catches them before it's too late ....

Hat's off to D for being soo much in patience and not trying to force his feelings on her ...

A chotu request ..

It will helpful if You upload earlier stories page linked with the current one ... anyone if they want to go directly to the any of the stories can easily find one on the same page ...

They dont have to search for them ..

Liked ..

Part 1 link

Part 2 link

..so on ... current one ... Just a suggestion ..

Will be eagerly waiting for the next one ... 🤗

Thank you so much dear 🤗

I have not thought of writing about the outing scenes first... but then I realised that they were necessary for linking the story

Yeah .... I think it's high time Tara realises the importance of Dhruv in her life and her feelings towards him in the show as well

Yup I like Sukanya .... she is very cute

I hope I will be able to keep Dhruv this patient in the upcoming parts too

I was thinking of doing the same

I will upload the links of the previous chapters

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Thank you so much dear 🤗

I have not thought of writing about the outing scenes first... but then I realised that they were necessary for linking the story

Yeah .... I think it's high time Tara realises the importance of Dhruv in her life and her feelings towards him in the show as well

Yup I like Sukanya .... she is very cute

I hope I will be able to keep Dhruv this patient in the upcoming parts too

I was thinking of doing the same

I will upload the links of the previous chapters

@ BOLD ... Thanks a ton .. will be great help for anyone who wants to read previous ones ... gets connected ... ❤️

Am afraid DT ka dard ka rishta na ban jaaye ...

Eagerly waiting for the next part ... 😳😃

Originally posted by: shridharg

@ BOLD ... Thanks a ton .. will be great help for anyone who wants to read previous ones ... gets connected ... ❤️

Am afraid DT ka dard ka rishta na ban jaaye ...

Eagerly waiting for the next part ... 😳😃

Hey,

I have posted the links in the first post but I guess they are not working

Can you help me understand how to make the links work?

Please give us some chupke chupke romance please!!☺️