Kasam- Dhruv Tara SS--- Part 5 pg 14 - Page 7

Originally posted by: shridharg

No dear ..I was just kidding ...You have put all your heart and soul while writing we can at least do the same to read it ... Kaafi kuch seekh ne ko milega ...Was eagerly waiting for the Post .... ❤️ will get back to u soon ... Let me enjoy ..

I was also kidding my dear 😁

As Dhruv's nani said... Hindi bohot hi sundar bhasha hai, aur ye hume padhna ana hi chahiye 😆

Ohhh... I am so happy to see your excitement 😃

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

OMG I love the way the story is progressing......so Dhruv has started believing in Kanha Ji due to Tara.....awww that's was so sweet of Dhruv to take laddoos for Bhaiji and Sukanya...... hahahaha Sukanya is such a cutie

Finally Tara has started questioning her feelings..... and she thinks that Dhruv loves some other girl..... jealous Tara

I am very sorry for not commenting on the previous chapter.....I was a bit occupied.

Please don't stop writing......I am very excited for the upcoming parts

Thank you so much dear 😳

Yes, I think even in the show if ever Dhruv starts to believe in God, it will be due to Tara and her love only.

Yup... Dr. Dhruv taking care of saale sahab 😆

And Sukanya is a cutie😊

Ab jealousy ho ya confusion at least she has started thinking about Dhruv and her own feelings 😅

It's ok dear... Of course I am gonna continue... As a writer I won't be in peace if the story is kept hanging😬

It's just that readers comments are a motivation to write more 🤗

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

I'll read later. Pehle wala aadha padha hai. 👍🏼

Okay Dear 😊

Originally posted by: CutieShona20

It's so beautifully written yr when I was reading I thought that it is playing in front of my eyes so portrayed each science very beautifully .... Plz do update the next part soon I can't wait that how the story gonna fold....

Ohh thank you so much😳

I am glad you like it

I will try to update soon 😊

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Chinmayi ji taiyyar ho jaiye ek aur shuddha hindi se bhara chapter padhne ke liye 😆

Mai to ready hu 😃

SS ka matlab Short Story... a story that contains four or more parts.

Ok👍🏼

Abhi tak socha toh nahi marne ka... par dekhte hai aage kya hota hai 😆

Originally posted by: shridharg

Woh toh Taiyyar baiti hai ... Hume apna kamar kass lena padega ... 😃

Are kaha mai to ghode bechkar so rahi thi abhi uthi hu thoda time lagega read karne me

Ek request hai ... aap saath mein vocabulary bhi add kar dena ... hum gareebo ke liye ... 🤔😒😔 ....Aatma trupt ho jaayegi ... 😃

Aapka alag hi chal raha hai 😆

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Koi na aaram se padho 😁😁

I just love it Nikki ❤️

Dhruv ke wapas jane ke khayal se hi Tara pareshan hai sahi hai ab Dhruv jaisa friend milne ke liye bhi bhagy chahiye Tara is so lucky aur sukku bhi 👍🏼 Dhruv sukku ke liye bhi Prasad lekar aaya and the way he called little sukku as Sukanya ji so cute 😳yaar ek Dhruv to hum bhi deserve karte hai 😉

Dhruv ne Tara ke liye Odhni li, I wish ye scene hame show me bhi dekhne ko mile 😃

Jis tarah se tumne ye story past aur present me divide ki hai flashback yaad karke Tara ka happy hona aur present me Dhruv ki situation dekhkar rona it helps me to feel connected with Tara 🤗

Waiting for next part and thanks for tag dear ❤

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

I just love it Nikki ❤️

Dhruv ke wapas jane ke khayal se hi Tara pareshan hai sahi hai ab Dhruv jaisa friend milne ke liye bhi bhagy chahiye Tara is so lucky aur sukku bhi 👍🏼 Dhruv sukku ke liye bhi Prasad lekar aaya and the way he called little sukku as Sukanya ji so cute 😳yaar ek Dhruv to hum bhi deserve karte hai 😉

Dhruv ne Tara ke liye Odhni li, I wish ye scene hame show me bhi dekhne ko mile 😃

Jis tarah se tumne ye story past aur present me divide ki hai flashback yaad karke Tara ka happy hona aur present me Dhruv ki situation dekhkar rona it helps me to feel connected with Tara 🤗

Waiting for next part and thanks for tag dear ❤

I love it that you love it Chinu ❤️... Can I call you Chinu? 😬

Haan na yaar, show me humara Dhruv itna pareshan ho raha hai, toh yaha pe Tara ko bhi thoda pareshan karna banta hai na 😆

Yes I love Dhruv Sukku bond ☺

Haan na yaar I am also waiting for a Dhruv in my life 😳

Ohhh... Tumhe samajh me aa gaya ki Dhruv ne Tara ke liye odhani li hai 😉

Thank you my dear 🤗... I was a bit apprehensive about writing the story in this form of past and present ... But abhi tumne bol diya you can connect to mujhe accha laga 😊

Is part ko thoda time lag sakta hai, I will try to upload soon

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

I love it that you love it Chinu ❤️... Can I call you Chinu? 😬

Ji jarur muze achha lagega agar tum pyar se chinnu bologi 🤗

Haan na yaar, show me humara Dhruv itna pareshan ho raha hai, toh yaha pe Tara ko bhi thoda pareshan karna banta hai na 😆

Ha aur pareshan karo use😛

Yes I love Dhruv Sukku bond ☺

Me too they are so adorable cuties ❤️

Haan na yaar I am also waiting for a Dhruv in my life 😳

Muze Dhruv nahi mila to mai sanyas lekar Himalaya jaungi 😉

Ohhh... Tumhe samajh me aa gaya ki Dhruv ne Tara ke liye odhani li hai 😉

Ha Odhni aur DT ka connection pata hai muze bhi 😆

Thank you my dear 🤗... I was a bit apprehensive about writing the story in this form of past and present ... But abhi tumne bol diya you can connect to mujhe accha laga 😊

Ha kyunki ye idea different hai but achha hai aur is form me story samjhne ke liye puri read karni padti hai koi bhi part skip nahi kar sakte 👍🏼

Is part ko thoda time lag sakta hai, I will try to upload soon

Take your time dear 😊