Kasam- Dhruv Tara SS--- Part 5 pg 14 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Forum ki Taru ji aap itne mushqil shudh hindi words kaise likh leti hai muze to padhne me bhi difficult lag rahe hai 😆

BTW, 2nd part interesting hai good job 🤗

Machhar ka gala daba do planning plotting kar raha hai nalayak kahi ka 😡

Shant ghode ka nam toofan mast hai 🤣

Chinmayi ji... ab kya kare story ki demand hai toh likhna toh padega aur aapko padhna bhi padega ...😆 Dhruv ki nani ke shabdon me itani sudar bhasha hai...sabko bolni chahiye 😆

Haan the story is turning out to be longer than I thought 😳.... Pata chale likhte likhte TS ko SS me convert karna pade 🤣

Vaise maine is story me macchar ke bare me jyada socha nahi hai 🤔

Haanji maine socha show ka tradition follow kar lu, toh Madhavi aur Bhayankar ke baad Toofan 🤣

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Chinmayi ji... ab kya kare story ki demand hai toh likhna toh padega aur aapko padhna bhi padega ...😆 Dhruv ki nani ke shabdon me itani sudar bhasha hai...sabko bolni chahiye 😆

Ji avashy hum bhi pura prayas karenge shudh hindi me vartalab karne ka 🤗

Haan the story is turning out to be longer than I thought 😳.... Pata chale likhte likhte TS ko SS me convert karna pade 🤣

Ye SS kya hota hai?

Vaise maine is story me macchar ke bare me jyada socha nahi hai 🤔

Machhar ko mar do kachhuya jalao agarbatti se 😡

Haanji maine socha show ka tradition follow kar lu, toh Madhavi aur Bhayankar ke baad Toofan 🤣

Achha socha 😃🤭

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Chinmayi ji taiyyar ho jaiye ek aur shuddha hindi se bhara chapter padhne ke liye 😆

SS ka matlab Short Story... a story that contains four or more parts.

Abhi tak socha toh nahi marne ka... par dekhte hai aage kya hota hai 😆

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Chinmayi ji taiyyar ho jaiye ek aur shuddha hindi se bhara chapter padhne ke liye 😆

SS ka matlab Short Story... a story that contains four or more parts.

Abhi tak socha toh nahi marne ka... par dekhte hai aage kya hota hai 😆

Woh toh Taiyyar baiti hai ... Hume apna kamar kass lena padega ... 😃

Ek request hai ... aap saath mein vocabulary bhi add kar dena ... hum gareebo ke liye ... 🤔😒😔 ....Aatma trupt ho jaayegi ... 😃

Originally posted by: shridharg

Woh toh Taiyyar baiti hai ... Hume apna kamar kass lena padega ... 😃

Ek request hai ... aap saath mein vocabulary bhi add kar dena ... hum gareebo ke liye ... 🤔😒😔 ....Aatma trupt ho jaayegi ... 😃

Sorry... ab toh post kar diya 😆..... agli baar yaad rakhungi 😃

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Sorry... ab toh post kar diya 😆..... agli baar yaad rakhungi 😃

No dear ..I was just kidding ...You have put all your heart and soul while writing we can at least do the same to read it ... Kaafi kuch seekh ne ko milega ...Was eagerly waiting for the Post .... ❤️ will get back to u soon ... Let me enjoy ..

OMG I love the way the story is progressing......so Dhruv has started believing in Kanha Ji due to Tara.....awww that's was so sweet of Dhruv to take laddoos for Bhaiji and Sukanya...... hahahaha Sukanya is such a cutie

Finally Tara has started questioning her feelings..... and she thinks that Dhruv loves some other girl..... jealous Tara

I am very sorry for not commenting on the previous chapter.....I was a bit occupied.

Please don't stop writing......I am very excited for the upcoming parts

I'll read later. Pehle wala aadha padha hai. 👍🏼

It's so beautifully written yr when I was reading I thought that it is playing in front of my eyes so portrayed each science very beautifully .... Plz do update the next part soon I can't wait that how the story gonna fold....