Pal Pal dil ke pass - Page 13

Thanks a lot for the feedback😍👍

LOVED IT !!! It is such a beautiful chapter. I absolutely love the way you've written Dev and Vidhi. A little background of Vidhi in this chapter was nice too. With every update the curiosity for the next chapter is increasing manifolds. Going to read it once again. :D

Originally posted by: Name_sake101

LOVED IT !!! It is such a beautiful chapter. I absolutely love the way you've written Dev and Vidhi. A little background of Vidhi in this chapter was nice too. With every update the curiosity for the next chapter is increasing manifolds. Going to read it once again. :D

Thanks for the feedback... Pls go to page 1 .

I have given a brief intro on all characters.

That was so cute 🥰🥺 Can't wait for the next part .. Thank you for tagging me.

Originally posted by: LadyGaga123

That was so cute 🥰🥺 Can't wait for the next part .. Thank you for tagging me.

Thank you for the feedback 😊

absolutely loved it. Pls next part bhi jaldi upload karna, can't wait for videv's next conversation.

Originally posted by: Angel_Shweta

absolutely loved it. Pls next part bhi jaldi upload karna, can't wait for videv's next conversation.

Thank you. Sure😊

Hi Minami_koi, I was finally able to read all parts!

Loved how the story progresses! It's beautifully written.

The kiss in the elevator was Hawt! But most importantly how they are organically falling for each other and the complexities of coming to terms and accepting it is written well. The age gap also comes across subtlety without trying too hard.

Keep up the good work my friend.

Can't wait for the next part!!

Thank you for the feedback, Helios.

Pls find time and give us your National Geographic videv.

Most of us have been longing to see to them. 😍

Mein naa shuru se padti hun. Time milne pe yaar. Uske baad comment karti hun..