Kasam- Dhruv Tara SS--- Part 5 pg 14 - Page 3

Originally posted by: dhun.laagi

Thanks for the tag! Enjoyed reading this part!

Wonderfully showcased the relationship between Bhaiji and Taaru 👍🏼

Waiting on the next part where we find out what Dhruv and Tara are upto

Welcome dear

Thank you 😳

Dhruv and Tara are not upto anything.... "Bohot Sanskari bacche hai"😆

Originally posted by: shridharg

Beautiful write up dear ... ❤️

Tara ka vachan will be with her forever ... 😃

Felt like am watching one more epi of DT ... 🤗

Looking forward for next ... Senapati se kuch seva mewa karva lo ... free me attitude detha hai ..kahi toh kuch kaam aaye ..bechara ... 🤣

Thank you so much ❤

Ohh I am glad I could make you feel like watching an episode😳

Originally posted by: CutieShona20

First part is awesome but happen with dhruv jarur us senapati na hi kuch kiya hoga...Now I am damn excited for the next part as how story gonna unfold...

Thank you dear ☺

Arre use kya hua ye toh ab tumhe next part me hi samjhega 😃

Great start❤️. Dhruv ko kya hua?

Bhaiji seemed to know that something is brewing between these two. 😆

Waise what is TS?

TS is Two Shot or Three, depending on the story. OS is one shot. 😳 basically a story that finishes in one chapter or two or three.

Beautifully written! Loved the way you used Taru's shuddh Hindi ❤️👏 it isn't very difficult but not everyone does it properly, especially with transliteration. It was a treat to read.

Tara in fiery mode to treat Dhruv. Mahaveer helping her out was cute! Ooofff they're my favourite siblings ❤️

Maharaj is also shocked and agreed to her wishes. Hoping that he sees her true potential as a doctor.

Take your time in writing, no hurries. We shall wait patiently 😳

Beautiful update

Wondering what would be maharaj and senapati's reaction after knowing tara was in dhruv's room at night😆

Would love to read more

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Tum is forum ki Taru ho🤗 kitni shudhh aur swachh Hindi me dialogues likhe hai 😆

1st part to bohot achha hai jis tarah se Princess Tarapriya ne confidently maharaj ko back answers diye good 👍🏼I hope jarurat padne par show me bhi Tara apne aur Dhruv ke liye maharaj ke samne stand le 👍

Waiting for next part jitna time lena hai lo aur achhe se likhna all the best 🤗

Awww.... Thank you mujhe forum ki Tara bolne ke liye😳🤗

Haan maine socha Hindi me dialogues thoda feel denge story ka 😁😁

I too so wish ki Tara Maharaj ko show me bhi aise hi confidence se jawab de

I will try to write sood yaar... Par college academics demanding ho gaye hai abhi

Originally posted by: abhe

Great start❤️. Dhruv ko kya hua?

Bhaiji seemed to know that something is brewing between these two. 😆

Waise what is TS?

Thank you dear❤️... Dhruv ko kya hua wo agle part me pata chalega 😁😁

Haan ji I want Bhaiji to support these two in show as well 😆

TS means two shot or three shot

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

Beautifully written! Loved the way you used Taru's shuddh Hindi ❤️👏 it isn't very difficult but not everyone does it properly, especially with transliteration. It was a treat to read.

Tara in fiery mode to treat Dhruv. Mahaveer helping her out was cute! Ooofff they're my favourite siblings ❤️

Maharaj is also shocked and agreed to her wishes. Hoping that he sees her true potential as a doctor.

Take your time in writing, no hurries. We shall wait patiently 😳

Thank you so much ☺.... I thought the Hindi will keep the feel of the story.... Aww thanks 🙈☺

Yup... Tara is hell worried for Dhruv 😁.... Yes those siblings are so cute

Maharaj is supposed to be shocked by her directness... I wish show me bhi aise hi confidence dikhaye 😅😅

Thank you dear... I will try to make it as soon as possible 😳