Pal Pal dil ke pass - Page 6

The story is going in such a beautiful and natural way.. just love it! Can't wait to see jealous Dev in action ;)

Thank you all for taking time to give your valuable feedbacks 😊👍

Originally posted by: Minami_koi

Chapter-5 First Heartbreak

I am in love with the morning walks and study room conversations. Its like Vidhi Dev having those private moments that no one knows about and it is their place of solace away from the madness in their lives.

So nicely written and thanks for the pics, makes imagining them easier

Looking forward to the next part

Originally posted by: hmhss

I am in love with the morning walks and study room conversations. Its like Vidhi Dev having those private moments that no one knows about and it is their place of solace away from the madness in their lives.

So nicely written and thanks for the pics, makes imagining them easier

Looking forward to the next part

Thanks for the feedback😊👍

Yay! A new chapter ❤️ loved the update minami - I really love the slow burn you’re depicting here. It is going at a wonderful pace.

I am not fond of this Arjun - because of his immaturity - but that’s the beauty of this story - you’ve provided a beautiful contrast between Arjun’s immaturity and dev’s depth. And vidhi is starting to see that too! And the cliffhanger! Can’t wait to see how you take this forward 😄

Originally posted by: sns23

Yay! A new chapter ❤️ loved the update minami - I really love the slow burn you’re depicting here. It is going at a wonderful pace.

I am not fond of this Arjun - because of his immaturity - but that’s the beauty of this story - you’ve provided a beautiful contrast between Arjun’s immaturity and dev’s depth. And vidhi is starting to see that too! And the cliffhanger! Can’t wait to see how you take this forward 😄

Thanks a lot for the feedback.. It means a lot to me😍

Waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Chinie

Really liking this ff so far.waiting for next part😍

Thank you😊

The warm fuzzy feeling when she held him tight while sobbing,the warmth of her tears against his skin her dainty little face against his chest and the delicate smell of her hair..

Their first hug! So beautifully described🥺 i started feeling all warm and fuzzyy🙈

Lovely update!

Loved the way Dev asked Vidhi to bring a closure to her conflict with Arjun rather than avoiding it.. the OG wise Dev Raichand

Loved the party looks of both Vidhi and Dev and their park and reading sessions too😍😍 what a cliffhanger. Waiting for the next one😊