FF - Main Toh Tere Nal Hi Rehna Ji [Chapter One updated] - Page 2

I also like the casting for youngest sister in TMD better than the OG. In the story, I feel, her ability to school people comes from her very under developed bonds with the family members unlike Sahiba (who luckily was loved by her taya-tayi's family) and Seerat (who was the princess of the house). So, yeah she is perfect for me to write a passionate story on. She is a fireball!

Hehe. Even I was thinking that I might take some time, but I was excited to write about it.

Keerat's scene today motivated me. I kept wondering how everything would have sorted itself beautifully had Angad married Keerat... Sabko line par le ana tha usnei.

Anyway, I started formulating the plan and the prologue looked good enough to me. I thought why not post it right away when I am excited about it.

Will tag you in the next updates!❤️

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

I also like the casting for youngest sister in TMD better than the OG. In the story, I feel, her ability to school people comes from her very under developed bonds with the family members unlike Sahiba (who luckily was loved by her taya-tayi's family) and Seerat (who was the princess of the house). So, yeah she is perfect for me to write a passionate story on. She is a fireball!

In show keerat comes as the most ignored child in the Monga family. Apart from Sahiba none cared for her genuinely. As you said keerat is someone with so much fierceness and passion. Yes even I like keerat better than Boni. In that case veer is a better written character than Kunal. The characters are well written in this show but alas they are not utilised properly. Anyways thanks for the story

Oh this was a perfect start! I would love to see how things turn around for both Keerat and Veer! Love your writing as always 💕

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Not to increase everyone's expectations, I am trying to write slightly mature spin-off but only if I am certain about the FF rules on mature content.

I definitely want something passionate for Keerat. In the show, she is introduced as such a vibrant character and given that she is the youngest, I imagine she has more freedom because of the collective ignorance towards her... She must be the black sheep especially the way she scolded Manbir and Hansraj at the Brar mansion.

I agree Keerat is vibrant. She is hardly 19 - 20 & veer must be 23 - 24. So that makes them a bit more enthusiastic towards intimacy than others. Looking forward for your story.

Yes Yes Yes ~~~~~

Did I say I loved it? I loved it!

Can't wait for more! It's in the future timeline of your story right? ❤️

Eagerly waiting for more loved the veerat prologue show mai to unhe bhul hi Gaye hai u r the only salvation

Maine kya gunah kiya thha jo mujhe tag nahi kiya... wo bhi itni beautiful story pe? 😭

Behen suno, tum FF likho, OS likho, TS likho... Drabble likho... mujhe tag kar dena please... FOMO ho gaya thha mujhe ek second ke liye 😭

I'm SAAAAADDD.... YOU NO TAG ME! (Needy Meow Alert!) 😲

PS... Drama apna pura hai, but back to business! 🐷

Bahut hie amazing story hai! Love, love, love it soooo much already! Please tag both your stories as Mature then, don't leave out the last one... (besharam alert too, with RED siren) 🤪🤗

Thank you all for the love and support! This spin-off was so abruptly planned. 😆

Show se kya hi ummeed rakkhe. Ye 3 couples ki kahani nahi, sirf Garry ki story hai ya phir 100 reasons to discuss private life of a couple in the living hall. @Soldierindia

❤️🤗Thank you! Yes, the story spans across several years. @mirai07

In my story Keerat is barely 18 years old, so much younger than shown in the show. She is yet to go to college. @Devtacholic

Thank you @arshisimple and @javeria3991 for giving this spin-off a chance. I am excited to hear your views on the upcoming updates.