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Posted: 3 years ago

Lovely updates. Well thought storyline... Even if the foundation is same, the essence is different. Waiting for other chapters like a hungry cat ๐Ÿคชit will be interesting to see SahAn in this story fall in love... And Angad feeling like a fool even more so


Seerat ka murder kar sakte hain kya? ๐Ÿ˜ต

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress

Lovely updates. Well thought storyline... Even if the foundation is same, the essence is different. Waiting for other chapters like a hungry cat ๐Ÿคชit will be interesting to see SahAn in this story fall in love... And Angad feeling like a fool even more so


Seerat ka murder kar sakte hain kya? ๐Ÿ˜ต


Hi.

Thank you for giving this story a chance. I am happy that you enjoyed it.

The updates are still under progress. I just had a weird week and the writing slowed down. I will try to update today or else on the upcoming Thursday. Sorry for the unforeseen delay.

For the love story, I am way more nervous since I have never written romance.


Seerat ka murder kar lo. There are few more characters jinka murder ho sakta hai. Unka bhi murder kar lena

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Hi.

Thank you for giving this story a chance. I am happy that you enjoyed it.

The updates are still under progress. I just had a weird week and the writing slowed down. I will try to update today or else on the upcoming Thursday. Sorry for the unforeseen delay.

For the love story, I am way more nervous since I have never written romance.


Seerat ka murder kar lo. There are few more characters jinka murder ho sakta hai. Unka bhi murder kar lena


Hey that's absolutely okay! I guess most of us had a very weird week... Blame the energies around ๐Ÿคท๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ And you need not be sorry at all... Update when you can... Will be eagerly waiting. I think, you'll do a great job at the romance too ๐Ÿคฉ


I guess, the two episodes have kind of sealed the deal... Either CVs turn over the tables or I am discontinuing watching this show and rather read the sensible storylines here... And you are right ek ek karke bahut logon ka murder karna hai ab to ๐Ÿ˜ต


Keep writing you amazing, woman โค๏ธ

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Posted: 3 years ago

So I read all the chapters in one go and this was a fantastic read ๐Ÿ‘ I love the portrayal of Sahiba and Angad! I love that you made them very practical and ruthless to some extent! I am so glad that Sahiba sold Seeratโ€™s things to payoff the loan for her wedding! I love that she didnโ€™t give in to emotional blackmailing! I love Angad too, he was angry but calculating ! For me the best conversation was between Angad and his dad! Compromise was the best chapter for me and you put Sahibaโ€™s thoughts spot on when she said that she was at the loosing end and her sisters will win! She had to sacrifice herself in order to save Keerat and it was unfair to her but she went ahead and did it! Seerat is bimbo with pea size brain and no remorse, in other words she is useless! But I want Sahiba to treat her as a useless person ! I am so looking forward to next chapters! Very well done and loved your writing style although I am not good at understanding Punjabi as much but I gathered the emotions so far!

Brilliant ๐Ÿ‘

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress


Hey that's absolutely okay! I guess most of us had a very weird week... Blame the energies around ๐Ÿคท๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ And you need not be sorry at all... Update when you can... Will be eagerly waiting.

Thanks for motivating! I had the onslaught of tasks at my workplace since last week; I seriously think the energies need to shoulder the blame, [why did everyone schedule everything for last week?] it was madness!

I am already working on the updates before I succumb to writers' block and add that to the circus of my life.


I think, you'll do a great job at the romance too ๐Ÿคฉ

I hope so... honestly I am nervous. My only experience in writing romance is saying something unexpected. I have been told that does not count much. So, let's see.


I guess, the two episodes have kind of sealed the deal... Either CVs turn over the tables or I am discontinuing watching this show and rather read the sensible storylines here...

Agreed. The pacing is so lame... build-up ke liye bhi build up hai inka. Show mein sab kuch thaka thaka sa lagta hai.

And yeah, more than TMD, I liked Gaatchora's pacing and stories on the forum.

And you are right ek ek karke bahut logon ka murder karna hai ab to ๐Ÿ˜ต

Hehehe.

Keep writing you amazing, woman โค๏ธ

Awww Thank You

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Posted: 3 years ago

I can only imagine what it must be like... Workplace can be a hell altogether sometimes and they would still blame you for their shi**y behaviour! Been there done that and finally decided to become my own boss after 2019!


But hey, I see a warrior in you and I'm sure you will sail through this, beautiful human. Holding so much space for you. โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ


And sahi mei yaar, thakela hie ho gaya hai sab kuch... I don't even want to watch TMD anymore... But the thing is, if it goes, so does this forum and I'm not ready to let go of this place and people. So I hope, CVs do realise the gravity of it all and make some sensible changes and do the necessary spring cleaning of their brains if need be! ๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿฅฑ


Romance naa, bas nikal jata hai... Maybe, you could visualise your own ideal life in terms of being together with your better half and jot it all down! Even if it's just ideal, it is absolutely okay! I can count on you to deliver it! Rest, ham sab to hain naa for you to help you sail through this.


Sending so much love to you ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress

I can only imagine what it must be like... Workplace can be a hell altogether sometimes and they would still blame you for their shi**y behaviour! Been there done that and finally decided to become my own boss after 2019!

Agreed. I am glad that you are now working independently. Private sector is the worst. I actively avoid the sector. And my workplace is more funny than nasty; everyone has turned into John Snows because of major changes. We are trying our best to change this as quickly as possible but we lack time and hands. Mostly, everyone is clueless with deadlines and no time to be nasty to anyone.๐Ÿค“

But hey, I see a warrior in you and I'm sure you will sail through this, beautiful human. Holding so much space for you. โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

I am. ๐Ÿ˜† Though I am the youngest in my department, I am rarely bothered because I speak up. This really melts my heart. (I am probably gonna come back to this whenever I feel low.)๐Ÿค—

And sahi mei yaar, thakela hie ho gaya hai sab kuch... I don't even want to watch TMD anymore...

Aaj ka episode is okay. Seerat had realisation. She turned into Sahiba for a moment - bas wahi major action tha.

But the thing is, if it goes, so does this forum and I'm not ready to let go of this place and people. So I hope, CVs do realise the gravity of it all and make some sensible changes and do the necessary spring cleaning of their brains if need be! ๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿฅฑ

Same, this forum and its people have carved a space in my heart even though I joined this quite recently.โค๏ธโค๏ธ However, I think this is too much of an expectation from the show. smiley36

Romance naa, bas nikal jata hai... Maybe, you could visualise your own ideal life in terms of being together with your better half and jot it all down! Even if it's just ideal, it is absolutely okay! I can count on you to deliver it! Rest, ham sab to hain naa for you to help you sail through this.

โ˜บ๏ธThanks. I will try to channel it. Although, I am very sarcastic and a resident clown, so it might appear more than anything else. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Sending so much love to you ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿค—

Recieved. Warm hugs are the cutest! You are an angel!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Posted: 3 years ago

So I just want to say, bigggggg hugs to you! This was what I read before I slept last night, and seriously it took away all the tiredness of the day! โ˜บ๏ธ


So happy to know your workspace is so great. You shine on woman, shine on... Be so bright that it blinds people who do not resonate with your frequency! ๐Ÿฅณ


And just know, you have a huge family here to share whatever part of your life you can to hold big space for you always... Kya bolun... Apne to happy wala rula hie diya rab di saun ๐Ÿฅน


Only an Angel can find wings in others, so you are that... what you see in me. Thank you for sharing so much love through words... ๐Ÿฅน


Psst... Sarcastic people are the most romantic and caring in their own sweetly weird ways! I'm elder sister two such cute nutcases, and a best friend to a diamond just like you ๐Ÿ˜† but damn! You guys live a different genre of life all together, I wish, I was that cool ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ™ˆ... Lot of pyaar and dulaar... And sorry for spamming your story with my blatant lauuuuu phor youuuuu! ๐Ÿคช


Hi, I am OLAF and I love giving and recieving warm hugs, Yassss! โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress

So I just want to say, bigggggg hugs to you! This was what I read before I slept last night, and seriously it took away all the tiredness of the day! โ˜บ๏ธ

I am happy to have helped you. The world is already a shitty place, I am all in for small comforts. No matter how insignificant they might be, everyone deserves these moments. smiley31

So happy to know your workspace is so great. You shine on woman, shine on... Be so bright that it blinds people who do not resonate with your frequency! ๐Ÿฅณ

Thank you! This is the reassurance that one needs at the end of the day when they have stood up for things unsupported. โค๏ธsmiley31

And just know, you have a huge family here to share whatever part of your life you can to hold big space for you always... Kya bolun... Apne to happy wala rula hie diya rab di saun ๐Ÿฅน

Of course! I wish the forum continues and we all hang around spreading comfort and peace. Aur hum sab happy wala regularly rote rahe, bohot ho gaya sad wala. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Only an Angel can find wings in others, so you are that... what you see in me. Thank you for sharing so much love through words... ๐Ÿฅน

I have been called a mouse, a rabbit, a bull, a penguin so far. Angel is first. ๐Ÿ˜ณ You are always welcome to chat here or in dm - whichever is comfortable for you.

Psst... Sarcastic people are the most romantic and caring in their own sweetly weird ways! I'm elder sister two such cute nutcases, and a best friend to a diamond just like you ๐Ÿ˜† but damn! You guys live a different genre of life all together, I wish, I was that cool ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ™ˆ... Lot of pyaar and dulaar... And sorry for spamming your story with my blatant lauuuuu phor youuuuu! ๐Ÿคช

You remind me of my dear friends, they look at me like I am their youngest sibling. They say the exact same thing as you did in this post - I cannot believe! I am sure you are as cool as my friends are. They are smarter and more social than I am.

Now that the world is all hell bent on being a spoil sport, there is no need to apologize for spreading love, sunshine and positivity. We all can do with a little bit of it and a dash of validation wherever we get it. And I am sure, someone else would also feel comforted with these messages posted in between the chapters. Never ever apologize for spamming here. This means so much! ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ

Hi, I am OLAF and I love giving and recieving warm hugs, Yassss! โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿค—

This means so much! OLAF is the cutest and a real fam! smiley31

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Posted: 3 years ago


The only thing that is coming to my mind right now is 'Pyaar le lo, ekdum drum bhar ke' ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿฅณ

You ze bestest... a little emotional right now, seeing I have as crazy people around here, like me... so doing my little happy dance party in my head!


I am going to be spamming here a lot then... kuch nahi toh, people can read our conversation and have fun! Good way to wait out on chapters, naa! ๐Ÿคฃ(JKR *hides face*)


Waiting for you to update the next chapter soonest so I can get some chaain and sukoon in my hriday! Oh, and you are very precious! Not to forget, I almost fell down laughing on Penguin! I've been called penguin too ๐Ÿคฃ but for me, I will stick to Angel... not that rabbit and penguins are any different... they are two of many of my favourite animals anyway... but you, well, you are a walking sunshine and I hope you just keep spreading it like confetti wherever you go!


Love, hugs and kisses (now that you have mentioned younger sibling... I am gonna be beshram in showing my lauuu phor you) ๐Ÿ˜†โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—

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