Ek Ladki Ko Dekha Toh Aisa Laga - A SaiYa OS

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Ek Ladki Ko Dekha Toh Aisa Laga


Attraction is a fickle thing. It creeps into you without a hint and refuses to leave. It pours magic into a gaze and electrifies a touch. Every sound is suddenly Beethoven's piece and every smell is that of freshly bloomed Jasmine. And the most important characteristic of attraction would be the object of attraction itself.


Here's a disclaimer, All the features exist only around that object and turn your world upside down.


And if you ask Dr. Satya Adhikari - debonair extraordinarie, he'd say the number one feature of attraction is somehow wanting to see one Dr. Sai Joshi, every waking minute of the day. Unfortunately for him, the lady has a sharp tongue and even sharper wit, making it impossible to charm her. Then again, they were the cause of his attraction in the first place.


He remembers their first meeting vividly. The concentration in her eyes as she examined the patient in the car and the fire in her eyes, scolding him for being an internet-sourced medical prodigy. What a sweet moment it was, Dr. Sai Joshi being proven wrong. Her pouting face and sulky voice would forever be etched in his memory.


Satya would be a fool if he said that holding her close when she tripped hadn't evoked something in him. Something, that he had buried under layers of indifference and lightheartedness. The sense of her soft body in his arms and her fragrance messed up the wiring in his brain.


Oh, what idiocy it was to drop her !!

Just when he was about to classify all the weird sensations as some inane crush, his mind had to go ahead and make her sit behind him on a bike. Some knight-in-armour syndrome, he must say. And then he had to faint and become the the damsel in distress in the arms of the very woman he intended to save.


Oh, and what a lucky day it was !!


He was out of his senses and yet, his trained "masala brain" remembered it all. The gentle fragrance of jasmine and sandalwood that engulfed him and anchored him. The undertone of spicy cinnamon ignited a fire in him, a fire that continues to grow at every glimpse of her.


Oh, what a mess he'd be in, if the lady in question got to know his thoughts.


Satya jolted out of his very 'problematic-for-him-if-Sai-gets-to-know' thoughts and heard the commotion that was happening outside. Anticipating an emergency, he walked out of his cabin, only to bump into Sheetal.


"Sheetal, what happened ? What's with the all the noise?", he questioned.


"It's raining outside Dr. Adhikari. The season's first rain and everyone is just happy. You must join us", the enthusiastic nurse urged him.


"What do you mean by 'everyone' ? Even the doctors ?", he enquired, trying very hard to hid his curiosity about Sai.


"Everyone means EVERYONE", Sheetal chimed, "And that includes Dr. Sai, if you are curious"


"What rubbish !" he scoffed, "Why would I be curious about Sa-, I mean, Dr. Joshi"


"Oh, let it rest, Dr. Satya." she smirked, "The whole hospital has a bet on both of you. Well, mostly you."


"WHAT ??"


"Okay, enough of all the questions. Believe me, you'd regret not coming with me", she advised him and dragged him along before he could ask another question.


And by the time they reached their destination, he could not be more thankful to Sheetal.


Dr. Sai Joshi - with her innumerable qualifications and all her eccentricities was dancing in the rain and boy, was she dancing.


Clad in a yellow saree, she jumped like a child in the rain and his heart jumped along with her. Caring less about her apron, she danced and danced.


Satya observed her every sway of her waist and every nod of her head. His heart skipped a beat every time her hair flipped. There were others around her in the rain, yet his eyes only found her. The yellow saree that clung to her ?


Definitely didn't help the Raveena Tandon fanboy-teen in him.


And then, she turned around. Met his eyes. The world around him vanished and all he could feel were the eyes that held him in a trance. The eyes that beckoned him forward to them and the eyes that held the secrets of his universe.


She stood in the rain, no longer moving. Yet, she danced. Her eyes danced with his and he swayed along with them. Satya walked forward, feeling the rain drench him slowly. And then he ran.

"Dr. Satya !!!" he heard Sheetal call " Where are you going ?"


"To earn people in the hospital some money, Sheetal !!!" he yelled, laughing and ran towards Sai.


Standing in the rain and smiling softly, Sai Joshi reminded him of that Ghalib's Shayari -

Ishq par zor nahin ye vo ātish Ghālib

ki lagāe na lage aur bujhāe na bane

A/N

Gahhh !!! What did I write ? I have no idea. Just had to put all these clustered ideas in words and after since @Nja91 suggested the idea, I had to it. This is just an experiment and very much open for more ideas and prompts.

Tell me what you feel..

Tagging only the ones that I can remember and recognise from age old days.

Also, I can't believe that my first ever SaiRat story had rain in it and so does SaiYa. What does this mean ??? Lol

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you for the tagg!! ❤❤❤ 🤗


Loved the rain day!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Omg! Thank you so much for obliging. I love how Satyas feelings are described as if its a magnetic attraction to Sai. But I want him though to be as taken by Sai the professional, the doctor and the intellectual too as much as he is by her contradictions, her childlike behavior, her beauty. After that scene where Sai made a missed diagnosis, i have been hoping for a scene where Sai saves the day and Satya plays 2nd fiddle. They didn't quite show that in the dhaba scene where Satya fainted. Presumably she did save the day but we did not see it. For me personally, the most attractive thing is to see people in their work space doing something they are passionate about and how they interact with their peers, juniors and seniors. And I want Satya to observe Sai in that way and be even more impressed than just by her sharp wit or ability to talk back.

I look forward to more chapters or OS exploring SaiYa some more.... Pretty please 🙏😍

Again, thanks for this!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nja91

Omg! Thank you so much for obliging. I love how Satyas feelings are described as if its a magnetic attraction to Sai. But I want him though to be as taken by Sai the professional, the doctor and the intellectual too as much as he is by her contradictions, her childlike behavior, her beauty. After that scene where Sai made a missed diagnosis, i have been hoping for a scene where Sai saves the day and Satya plays 2nd fiddle. They didn't quite show that in the dhaba scene where Satya fainted. Presumably she did save the day but we did not see it. For me personally, the most attractive thing is to see people in their work space doing something they are passionate about and how they interact with their peers, juniors and seniors. And I want Satya to observe Sai in that way and be even more impressed than just by her sharp wit or ability to talk back.

I look forward to more chapters or OS exploring SaiYa some more.... Pretty please 🙏😍

Again, thanks for this!

I'll be honest...I originally thought of writing something along the lines of that. Then I realised I know jackshit about medicine and I can only write a professional law environment. By then, I had already started and it felt criminal to stash away all those feelings of Satya..😆

Now that you have elaborated, might as well make this the next one. But I guess I need to watch some Grey's Anatomy. Also, why do people make every hardworking FL a doctor ? Why do they never think that people who write Fanfictions can't keep up.

Sai being a lawyer would have made Virat's life hell, ngl. I would have loved to see that

I am very attracted to new things, so SaiYa it is, for a while. 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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haha. After watching shows like ghkkpm ruin medicine and doctors with ZERO research anything you write even with "jackshit" knowledge as you call it- that will be an upgrade.

If you have specific medical questions, I can respond by DM. lol. but greys anat is good for dramatic inspiration. lol. they definitey show heroism. haha

Also, I would love another AU tale where Sai is a lawyer.

I also wished that Sai wouldnt hesitate to take V and CN to court and actually fight the case and blow him to smithereens. I was disappointed when the Vinu matter went to court but nothing came of it because Sai decided she didnt want kid to be dragged to court. ITV cliches - the unfortunate ones. Which means VP get away with their criminal crap.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful... this is one SaiYa OS I know I would love since you are the writer ❤️

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Originally posted by: Moor278

Beautiful... this is one SaiYa OS I know I would love since you are the writer ❤️

You are very generous with your compliments and honestly, I would love to see you write one for them as well ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I have more requests/prompts for FFs or oneshots -these arent romantic. These are more slice of life ones. But these scenarios can include grudging admiration from V, Satya, other CN folks too. Lol

I would love to read something about Sai and kids where she teaches them to have a scientific bent of mind, how to question things and doing fun with science- even just basic chemistry lessons in the kitchen that we have all seen/done- like volcano with baking soda and acid. Teaching them about surface tension by doing that flipping a card and glass of water. Basically fun science things. And then when P tries to tell some ridiculous evil jadugarni story kids should shut her down with their logic.

Also, would love to see Sai stress on them being away from gadgets for few hours everyday and encouraging their reading habits, going outside to play, gardening, taking them to the library or to naag nadi, astronomy (which they touched upon in the show), making stuff with scrap. And kinda a compare and contrast of P vs Sai in the parvarish and kids gravitating towards Sai because they realize she is fun, knowledgeable, genuinely caring and kids doing well in school all because of Sai's parvarish.

Sai teaching her kids basic life skills in a gender neutral way. Making sure Vinu and Savi learn the same things - whether cooking or riding a cycle or any other activity

Also would love to see Sai stun the conservative CN losers by making Vinu and Savi comfortable about subjects like menstrual hygiene, good touch vs bad touch and educating them about these things in a way that does not make them taboo conversations and BK being uncomfortable but kids schooling her with their straightforwardness and innocence.

I dunno if you find these scenarios interesting enough....if you dont, no hard feelings. :)

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Originally posted by: Nja91

I have more requests/prompts for FFs or oneshots -these arent romantic. These are more slice of life ones. But these scenarios can include grudging admiration from V, Satya, other CN folks too. Lol

I would love to read something about Sai and kids where she teaches them to have a scientific bent of mind, how to question things and doing fun with science- even just basic chemistry lessons in the kitchen that we have all seen/done- like volcano with baking soda and acid. Teaching them about surface tension by doing that flipping a card and glass of water. Basically fun science things. And then when P tries to tell some ridiculous evil jadugarni story kids should shut her down with their logic.

Also, would love to see Sai stress on them being away from gadgets for few hours everyday and encouraging their reading habits, going outside to play, gardening, astronomy (which they touched upon in the show), making stuff with scrap. And kinda a compare and contrast of P vs Sai in the parvarish and kids gravitating towards Sai because they realize she is fun, knowledgeable, genuinely caring and kids doing well in school all because of Sai's parvarish.

Sai teaching her kids basic life skills in a gender neutral way. Making sure Vinu and Savi learn the same things - whether cooking or riding a cycle or any other activity

Also would love to see Sai stun the conservative CN losers by making Vinu and Savi comfortable about subjects like menstrual hygiene, good touch vs bad touch and educating them about these things in a way that does not make them taboo conversations and BK being uncomfortable but kids schooling her with their straightforwardness and innocence.

I dunno if you find these scenarios interesting enough....if you dont, no hard feelings. :)

I find the whole Sai teaching her kids interesting ngl. Especially if it’s about breaking the gender barrier, all the taboo issues and maybe we could have some lessons on homosexuality too. All 21st century toolkit. Now as for, showing it in comparison with Pakhi alone, I’d rather show it in comparison with Chavans as a whole and especially Virat.

No love for Pakhi but I don’t want even a tiny chance of blood vs non-blood relation debate. Because I remember someone generalising blood is blood on forum from a whole load of discussion on Pakhi v Sai as mothers, and I really wanna avoid that.

But serious stuff aside, I’d love to imagine scandalised Chavans. Especially Ashwini. Man that lady has been getting in my nerves. Sooooooo much. A little Omi and Sonali fun might also work

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: KaalaCoat

You are very generous with your compliments and honestly, I would love to see you write one for them as well ❤️

I might if I see what's happening next week.


I'll be honest... I don't want another majboori Wali shaadi for Sai. How this promo pans out will tell me if I am skipping or seeing henceforth 😆

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