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Posted: 3 years ago

Once again, as your writing draws me to the story, I liked how you have paid attention to the minute details, actions and explained the implications. I am specifically talking about implication that Daarji is at fault. And he is. No one can deny that. Generally, people in such situations keep saying that elders are not at fault, to avoid being the bad person and keeping their respect as elders. But I liked how Sahiba did not deny Daarji's words, implying it subtly but putting the message across. Great Going! I am really looking forward to more writing from you!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hello everyone…

Thank you so very much for your lovely support to my work until now. I am here with the next update…

Will let you all dive straight into it..without further delay…

This is a longer update..couldn’t pause..in the flow of it prior…you will know what I mean…when you read the update…😃

Will let you dive into it without further delay….🤗

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Take 9 – Justice Served


Anger..

Horror…

Betrayal…

Hurt…

Disbelief…

The above mentioned intense emotions continued to engulf every member of the Brar family – as they simply continued to gape at Seerat – as she finished narrating her side of the tale.

Another bit they were all involved in collectively – was to continue looking to and fro in between from Seerat to Garry as well – and the fact that Garry simply stood shocked and stunned as if he were just hit by a landslide on his being – was a silent answer to everyone already…as he couldn't look at Seerat in her eye.

Sahiba Kaur Monga could sense it. Sense what? The bit – that every member of the Brar family in the room was simply devastated by the knowledge of the truth they were listening. She could sense Veer+ Angad still fuming in anger across still glaring at Garry. And she could also sense that it had taken every ounce of strength and courage for her elder sister to stand up with the truth in front of all- this way taking full responsibility for her mistakes. Yes, Seerat di had committed a lot of blunder, she had deeply wronged the Brar’s as well…but the fact that…she was finally owning up to it in black and white in front of all…surely needed a lot of courage from her end.Sahiba is right on that thought – when she sees Nancy gesture to her now that it was her cue to get out with her side of the truth..

Intense angry disbelief silence engulfs the room once again as Seerat finishes talking and as Jasleen is still thinking of a cunning plan in her head to save herself – everyone in the room now hears Nancy add broken as she glares at Garry hard – “ Seerat spoke her side of it…you all heard it…so only fair you hear my side of it too…now I figure that Garry was only using me as a pawn…to get back not just at Angad..perhaps? but all of you…the Brar family…for if that were not the case…why would he ask me to be at the center front of all the media Hungama caused around all of you in all these days…why would he leak me the news on the wedding day that Angad's bride had run away? Why would he ask me or rather feed my mind in with stirring questions to instigate rukus around you all – specially with Angad and Sahiba at their reception the other day…or at the time of their arrival post wedding outside the brar mansion...."

WHATTTTTTTT?

WHAT DID THEY JUST HEAR NOW???

JUST AS EVERYONE IN THE BRAR FAMILY THOUGHT THAT THEY WERE RECOVERING FROM AN EMOTIONAL BOMBING BETRAYAL WITHIN – after listening to all that they had – this just felt like another solid BOMB on them…

At that everyone’s hands once again reach to their jaws in horrific gasps as Prabhjyot and Gurleen gape at Garry in shock as they ask their tones quivering in anger – posing their question to Nancy again – “ whattttttt?what did you just say?? Garry is behind the media instigation??all the while??”

All the men in the gathering – Inder, Chachaji, and surprisingly even Prabhjyot’s husband, and including Daar ji is now feeling their anger reach mountain peaks…

Angad and Veer simply continue to glare at Garry hard knowing that he could not weave his way out of here for sure without justice being served to him for his actions. Seerat and Sahiba upfront – just watched on in an intense silence – in the moment…

Jasleen and Kiara are exchanging panic looks with Kiara shooting her mom a look that says – Mom think of something…save bro…and Jasleen giving her the look…I am thinking Kiara..thinking…

If looks could kill – manbir’s dagger eyes would have inflicted the same upon Garry already…

Garry is about to muster something now in his defence – “ Nancy…yeh…”

But in surprise to all – Nancy scoffs as she hold out her hand gesturing Garry to just stop and she wipes a tear of anger + part vengeance from her eye as she says – “ knew it…knew it Garry…that you will still try to turn tables around at me...which is why…I came here with proof too…..,”and at that – everyone watches Nancy nod at Veer and Veer instantly says to all pressing the next button on the remote in his hand – “ what you will all see now up on screen are texts from Garry to Nancy…about everything she just mentioned….”and he begins to get the slide rolling.

Nancy hands her phone to Prabhjyot first to move along as she says – “ so that you all think..this is not fabricated…I am handing you my phone…opened my chat with Garry…you all can also scroll through and see…that the projector screen is showing exactly what is there in my phone from his end…you can clearly see…this is Garry’s number only…,”And at that Nancy finally looks up at the shocked Garry as she gives him the look – You are so Done for Garry Baweja…So Done for…how dare you try to use me as a pawn in your game coz of my job as a reporter….????????

And as – Prabhjyot circulated nancy’s phone around to all post seeing it all herself on the phone screen – plus projector screen - Whatever the highest form of adjective equaled the highest vibe off horrified and petrified – would be the analogy to explain the atmosphere that now engulfed the banquet as everyone simply couldn’t believe the levels at which Garry had stooped so low…

By the time – Daar ji and Bebe finished comprehending it all – it finally hit Daar ji hard in his being that Garry was pretty much like the version of a poisonous snake that they had nurtured in their very own house and now that very snake had come around to bite each one of them…hard…

Jasleen finally speaks now to all frazzled glaring at Garry in intense accusation herself now – “ Garry?????? Yeh kya?? Yeh kya chehra saamne aagaya tera???(what face of yours has come to light) What is all this that you have done???? Look at the levels you have gone down to??? So much hatred in your heart? for your own maternal family? For angad?? First you backstab Angad in the back and elope with Seerat and then…you instigate the media to ruin our family’s image??? How could you do this? Garry? How could you???? is this what I have taught you? is this what I have raised you to become??? How could you do any of this…oh how ashamed I am to call you my son….today..simply ashamed…,..how could you do any of this...”And she looks at Daar ji and Bebe cunningly faking heartbreak and then looks at Angad and Manbir Parjayi as she states – “ I simply cannot believe what all I’v heard today…never in my imagination could I think of my own son doing this to all of you…..I swear…to you all…I’v always taught Garry and Kiara to love Angad, Veer, Ekam, prince as their very own….as their very own…oh Garry you disgust me…you simply disgust me…I am ashamed to call you my son today...,”and she glares at Garry at that and yells with fake tears leaving her eyes – “ Daar ji …bebe…haven’t said a word yet coz they are in shock still…but I will tell you Garry…your punishment for your deeds…you will never step a foot at home…I mean…in brar mansion ever again…you hear me???? Even I dont want anything to do with you anymore....how could you hurt your own maternal family ...angad....like this???”

GARRY BAWEJA PALES INTO A GHOST AT THAT...A STAB SO DEEP PEIRCES HIS HEART...

Now that from Jasleen – instantly hits Angad and Veer hard AS WELL.... as they share a look of further disbelief and horror for they knew the truth anyway right? That Jasleen bua was a part in the hatred/vengeance too – but never in their dreams could they have imagined that in order to save herself she’d simply turn the tables around at her own son??? Like was this the level she could stoop down too ?? Angad thinks hard in his head – oh a woman who couldn’t be her son’s what could be expected out of her for others? She was legit in the middle of cornering her own son – just to save herself…

Veer looked at Angad aghast as did Angad back at him. The only other two people who shared the same expressions amongst themselves for they were aware of Jasleen’s truth was Sahiba and Seerat – obviously…they couldn’t believe the same as well…that Jasleen was trying to turn it all on Garry now…

Another two people who couldn’t STILL believe what they had just heard from Jasleen as she glared at Garry right now in front were none other than her own CHILDREN- Kiara and Garry.

Stabbed.BUTCHERED. Betrayed..

Both Kiara and Garry felt simply stabbed/butchered/betrayed in their hearts in the moment finally – as they gaped at their mother in shocking disbelief comprehending what was it that she was trying to do here.

Garry Baweja for the first time in his life – felt as if someone had stabbed his gut/soul so hard and he was bleeding everywhere non-stop.He had never imagined that his own mother just to save herself would blame it all on him framing him as the main villainous culprit…when hatred and vengeance seeds were all she had ever nurtured in his and Kiara’s mind against the whole family…herself..

Uptil now – he’d been feeling trapped in the truth of his deeds. But at the moment as Garry Baweja gaped at his own mother in heartbreaking disbeleif as she tried to frame him so that her stay at Brar mansion would not get compromised – for the first time ever – in his heart he felt so ripped momentarily – that he felt like.. perhaps it would have been better – if he had simply been an orphan???

Oh certain betrayals/truths can awaken/ignite the spark of reality in any human’s being/consciousness and the face Garry Baweja saw of his own mother just now – did it for him…simply did it for him…and flipped his switch hard and How!!!! And his brain simply continued to go into an overdrive as realisation strikes him that all along…his own mother had been using him and kiara/her own children as pawns to – to get back at her own family and now when everyone was seeing the truth of his deeds – very conveniently she was trying to escape out of it….????

Oh the maximum a sons could break - Garrys heart broke…his soul injured…as he realisation cemented that…his own mother…the one that had given him birth…was now trying to play him – in this gut wrenching moment…

Another person who was feeling the same in the attendance? At Jasleen’s words? Was her own daughter – Kiara as she took in the anguished/hurt expression in her brother’s eyes as he gaped at their mother in shock and horror in sheer silence…like everyone else….

Kiara felt like she couldn’t take it. She simply couldn’t. If her own mother could only think about saving herself and sacrifice her brother as the culprit then sooner or later…she could do the same to her…as well…Kiara thought..for this is when she’s always felt her mother was partial to bro always…and if this was her way of showing love for Garry – then perhaps – she never really loved them like any normal mother would?Kiara thought...

And all the instances from childhood till now began – bombarding itself in Kiara’s mind – where in Jasleen had instigated both Garry and her – against everyone else in the house…..especially angad..veer..and ekam...

Noooo…she wouldn’t allow her mother to frame her brother…in this alone…..if there was anyone she loved more than herself was her brother...Garry. Her mother had been a part of that list too uptil this very gut wrenching/soul shakening moment...

And so finally - with tears of betrayal now streaming down her face now – Kiara shocks everyone by banging her fist on the table as she glares at Jasleen hard aghast/petrified and says out or rather yells out loud ....words leaving her mouth on its own accord – “ Bass Mom…bass…enough…how can you think of framing Garry bro in this completely??? How??? when…you were the one to instruct him to instigate the media against the family? He was acting on your instructions all the while in this accord…atleast…I am aware….wow..mom..wow…you are sick…in order to save yourself…you thought…lets label just Garry the culprit? He is your son…mom…he is your son…and I am your daughter….you stand here right now in front of all trying to fake innocence…asking bro if this is what you taught him…if hate and vengeance is what you taught him….then I’ll be the one to confess to all…that yes…yes…hate, vengeance, revenge, greed, selfishness, is exactly what you have sowed the seeds for... in both our minds since day 1…ever since childhood…ever since we came to live in the brar mansion…you were the one instigating us both against angad paaji, veer, ekam, manbeer tayji,gurleen chachi…always seeding it in us….that they never…looked at us as one family…when it is so very clear to me now - that it is you who never looked on them as one family….and today…you are ready to turn the tables at your own son…just to save yourself? Pathetic mom…pathetic…”

Did Kiara just say what she did in her outburst?? Oh yes she did...

And ..THAT OUTBURST FROM KIARA – DEVASTATES EVERYONE…DEEP..FURTHER…as they look at Jasleen with accusation in their eyes..

Angad and Veer exchange a knowing anguished look and sigh on the lines taking in the sight of Kiara weeping – Oh, we were about to bring Jasleen bua’s truth to light…but looks like life is in the mood to serve her some justice itself which is why..her very own blood decided to speak up…and do that very deed for us…

Sahiba and Seerat and Nancy are watching on shocked as well…

JASLEEN IS GAPING AT KIARA HORRIFIED AND AGHAST – JUST LIKE EVERYONE IN THE HALL IS GAPING AT HER…THEY COULDN’T BELIEVE WHAT THEY’D JUST HEARD FROM KIARA’S MOUTH…..Still....

Jasleen looks at the accusation in everyone’s eyes and she says to Kiara – “ chup kar kiara…maine..kab yeh sab sikhaya tum dono ko..you both lost the way yourself…along the way…why blame me??”( shut up kiara..when did I teach you both all this negative stuff? Somewhere along the way you both lost your own way..now blaming me??)

Angad and Veer exchange a even more aching look of shock..seems like there wasn’t any level to which Jasleen bua could fall down too…she was simply the worst…she had surrendered her inner self/consciousness to doom...perhaps?

Angad and Veer did not need to speak up – neither did Garry who was still looking at his mother heartbroken and devastated and for it was Kiara who roared again gaping at her mother in anguish as she felt another stab go through her being at that - “ really??? Mom?? Really? bro and me lost ourselves along the way?? really???? or was it you? who brainwashed us down this way??? haan haan…haan...yes yes...yes...…you..never taught us anything despite anger, grudge, greed, revenge, hatred...given that you were burning in it yourself….never taught us to stand up to righteousness…never scolded us for our blunders..instead..only edged us on….you only taught us all this cunning…plotting..planning…lying…so much so that you clapped every time we succeeded in a cunning misleading plot...,”and Kiara’s frantic outburst continues as deep realisation continues to dawn at her hard – “ you wanted us to become like this...since day 1...we did what we did blindly for your approval/ appreciation.....oh I don’t know about garry bro yet…but I feel sick to be your daughter today..sick to look at my ownself in the eye for…I’m a cheater too…aren’t I?? lying…plotting…cheating…angad paaji…for all these years…and not once…did you stop me from doing the same mom knowing it all... instead only edged me on…saying…do what you want Kiara…just that angad or daarji or anyone else in the family shouldn’t ever know….”

WAIT…

WAIT…

WHAT?????

AS IF A PANDORA’S BOX OF TROUBLES HAD JUST OPENED UP FOR JASLEEN – SHE SIMPLY WIDE EYES – KIARA TO STOP HER FLUSTERING RANT…

And now it is turn for everyone in the brar clan + Sahiba+ Seerat+ Nancy to look from Garry to Kiara as Angad asks her shocked and shaken yet again – “ kya??? What did you just say? Kiara?even you have been cheating me?all these years?? Howwww?????”

Tears of frantic frenzy continue to roll down Kiara cheeks now driven by the deeper shades off betrayal she was feeling too within at the hands of her mother and she confesses guiltity now – “ I’v been cheating you at work..for years…now….angad paaji…all those best seller..jewellry designs…our best selling collections that we’v received awards for in the last two years…were never mine to begin with…never mine…I used to buy those designs...through a man called…Sandeep shukla from the old bazaar..who used to source it from some local artisan’s..for me…..I just used to take the credit of it all…when that work was never mine…all I used to do…is change the colour of the precious stones…here and there…but the core design was never mine…it never could be mine..for…I can’t even sketch a jewellry piece…as detailed as you like to see in the first cut core sketch drawings…Angad paaji…..”

ANOTHER SHOCKING FULL TOSS – HITS THE BRAR’S IN THEIR FACES AT THAT ESPECIALLY Angad…as he gapes at Kiara in shocking disbelief along with Veer – “ whatttt??? Kiara?? What did you jusy say???those designs were never yours???”

And even though Sahiba didn’t want to say anything in such a heavy intense family confrontation amidst everyone– her head went into a collective overdrive as she heard the name – Sandeep Shukla – for this was the man who had bought her designs regularly for a long time now.Could it be that Kiara had brought one of her designs? Changed the precious stones colours around it and called it as hers????

Sahiba decided to keep quiet not wanting to add more fuel to the already raging fire but to her shock she hears Seerat Di exclaim out loud to all as her forehead puckered into thoughtful lines– “ kiara…did you just say the name? Sandeep Shukla?? You bought those designs from a man called…Sandeep Shukla??from the old bazaar???”

Everyone looks at Seerat at that puzzled and Veer asks instantly shocked on everyone’s behalf – meanwhilst as Sahiba tugged on seerat’s hand to keep quiet – “ why do you sound like you know him??Seerat?? Do you????”

And Seerat at that exclaims to all in disbelief as destiny’s strings finally start to become more clear to her eye – “ yes I think I know…him…and not just me….even Sahiba knows him…for Sandeep Shukla is the name of the man…whose been buying Sahiba’s jewellery designs for years now…..for she’s been doing everything through her art in all these years to sustain us…right?,”and at that she looks at Sahiba and says – “ Sahiba…bol na…tell them….Sandeep Shukla is the name of the fellow right? I met him once…I remember... the only one time I came by the art shop and he was there to buy the designs from you…..”

THAT FROM SEERAT – HITS ANGAD HARD IN HIS BEING…

WHAT?

CHANCES WERE THAT THOSE DESIGNS HE’D LOVED? MANUFACTURED AND PRODUCED AT HIS WORK?The designs that had won brar jewellers awards back to back – could be Sahiba’s?????

Everyone gapes at Sahiba at that now – momentarily distracted from Garry’s heartbroken frame still coz of the sudden news come to light.

Sahiba musters to all glaring at Seerat di not meeting Angad’s gaze as he tries to meet hers shocked from across – “ Yeh koi waqt nai iss baat ka seerat di…chup kar..”( this is not the time for this topic…seerat di…quiet...please...)

And at that - Daar ji’s heart, mind and soul was anyway gripped in anguished pain and revelations of bombed truths back to back just like bebe’s – he states to Sahiba – “ yahi waqt hai …iss baat ka puttar.. Sahiba…yahi waqt hai…tu bata…kya woh designs tere hain? Hamari previous best selling awarded collection se??”( this is the time for this talk Sahiba…one second…you tell us the truth…are these designs …yours?from our previous best selling…collection…)

Sahiba finally musters to everyone still not wanting this to become the center topic at this moment – and even Manbir is unable to believe what she is hearing now too – “ I’v designed and sold a lot of my jewellery sketches in these years daarji in order to keep meeting ends back at home…I don’t remember clearly…I’d need to look back at the copy of my core sketches to answer that to you…and I don’t have my design book here…..so...better...we don't get into this...right now..."

And now it is clear to everyone that Sahiba was only saying this because her intention was not to add fuel to already raging confrontational fire...

But Kiara looks down at her feet guiltiy though - " nai...aaj sab bahar aa hi jaaye toh acha hai...sab raaz khulne do.." ( no let it all come out..let all secrets come out...)

Jasleen is statued in shock – as it keeps hitting her over and over again that her own daughter just did what she did…

But Angad Singh Brar wanted to know the answer to this too as soon as possible just like Daar ji did so he says to all - quickly taking out his phone to show some of the bestselling designs from their previous awarded collection to all - “ I have the pictures of the core sketches Kiara got me first….i always keep the first cut of the core sketches in my folder…,”and walking upto Sahiba now with shaking legs at realising that he could be one of those who’s always admired her jewellry design talent – “ Sahiba…see the first cut of these core designs…tell me…are these yours? just tell me…are these designs yours?? Have you sketched them?? I need to know…I need to know now…please answer me godammit........now....”

And even though Sahiba recognises the designs on Angad’s phone as hers now – before she can react or say anything she hears Seerat di exclaim to Angad – “ haan…yeh Sahiba ke hi designs hai…dekhe hai maine….kyunki inme se ek ki photo toh mere pass bhi hai….i’d taken it…coz I loved it so much….dreaming…to be wearing it myself one day….”( yes…these designs are Sahiba’s….i know coz I have seen them…for one of these pics I have too for I’d clicked it coz I loved the design so much…dreaming it to be wearing it myself one day…” – and at that before Sahiba can stop Seerat – Seerat simply shows the same core design picture to Angad – in her phone as she says – “ this is Sahiba’s…work..Anga..d…it is her’s…..so as twisted as it seems now...it seems...its Sahiba's work and talent that has somehow made its way to your business's shelves......”

Angad looks straight at Sahiba now zapped at that once again at that and asks now reading her expressions– “ you know these designs are yours...you know they are...just like this is..this is too.." and he scrolls through few more core designs and as he sees Sahibas eyes widen as if she recognised it too but she stays silent still he asks frazzled - " say something??? Please???why won’t you say anything …Sahiba????? ?”

Sahiba exclaims to Angad and all finally – “ yes…yes…yes…these designs are mine only…the core cut of these designs is all mine….yes….but I was quiet on it because…this is not the time to highlight this…matter…Angad…what’s wrong with you???don't you get it??? This is not the time to get this in context...."

And as Daar ji hears that from Sahiba he finally states to all out loud closing his tearfuk eyes – “ nai…sahiba puttar..yahi waqt hai…iss baat ka..kyunki yeh baat bhi isi taraf ishara karti hai…ki anjaane mein hi sahi...par...rab ne toh kabse teri dor…hum sab se jod rakhi hai…hum brar’s se…angad se…”( no…this is the time…to bring this up coz this truth is another signal of Babaji only that…unknowingly only...he’s already got yours strings attached with…our family…the brar’s …angad…since a long time….)

And at that from Daar ji – destiny’s strings finally become more clearer to Seerat Kaur Monga too as it hits her over again. Yes, she’d done too many blunders – but she’d be dammed if she wouldn’t make the amends she had set out too making the effort to balance out her wrongs.

Seerat finally shocks everyone further as she looks at the shaken frame of Angad who was looking at her sister in some sort off awe and wonder almost now – “ haan…bilkul sahi keh rahe hai…aap…daar ji…shayad aap bilkul sahi hi keh rahe hai…rab ne shayad…meri behen sahiba ki dor hi baandhi hui thi aap sab se…angad se..kab se….main toh beech mein aise hi aagayi lalach mein…mere irrade kabhi nek nai the…shuru mein…par iske…iradee…hamesha se nek hi the/nek hi hain/aur nek hi rahenge…aap sab log jaante hai? Woh saari baatein jo maine aap sab se kari thi? Uss din?jab main aapke ghar aayi thi apna jhumka lene? Woh sab shabd…toh kabhi mere the hi nai…sahiba ke hi toh the…jo usne mujhe batayae…yeh life lessons samjhaye…sab wahi the…infact…jab aap sab massi ke ghar mujhe dekhne aaye…woh khana bhi maine nai banaya tha jo aap sab ko itna pasand tha..…sahiba ke haath ka tha…woh...aur baaki saab baatein jo aap logon ko mere andar ki mujhmein pasand aayi thi…woh toh kabhi meri thi hi nai…sahiba ke hi thi…kyunki shayad mere zameer ko pata tha….andar mein…ki main jaisi hun…asliyat mein…aap logon ko kabhi na bhaye…toh issliye…maine…sahiba ki baton ka sahara liya shuru se…toh asliyat mein to phir yahi baat sach hui na….ki aap sab ko bhi shuru se anjaane mein hi sahi…sahiba hi pasand aayi thi…aur shayad..angad…tumhe bhi…kyunki jo main dikha rahi thi tumhe…woh main kabhi thi hi nai…woh sahiba ki reflection thi…”

(Eng : “ Yes you are right Daar ji…infact..now you are mostly right…now that I think of it in retrospect…Babaji has always perhaps tied your familys/angad’s string with my sister Sahiba only…long ago…I just came in the middle with my intention of greed …my intentions were never honest in the beginning…but my sister…sahiba’s intentions were…always honest and pious…always have been and always will be that way….do you all know?all those talks I did with you all on the day I came to collect my jhumka? Those words were never mine…they were Sahiba’s…only…all the life lessons…she’s talked to me about…infact the day you all came to see me at masi’s the food you all loved…was not cooked by me..it was made by Sahiba…all those talks/virtues that you all thought you liked in me were never mine to begin with ever…it was all sahiba’s reflection coz perhaps deep within I knew if you all saw me for who I was within you wouldn’t like me….which is why I always used Sahiba’s reflection as cover….so if you were to look it as with another perspective now – perhaps…you always liked Sahiba only indirectly and not me..for what I was potraying to you all was…her reflection…not mine at all….the same goes for you…Angad..."


AND – AT THAT FROM SEERAT – IT WAS ONCE AGAIN ANGAD SINGH BRAR’S TURN TO FREEZE INTO A STAUTE AS HIS MIND PROCESSED IT ALL…trying to catch Sahiba’s eye once again as she gaped at Seerat and clutched onto Seerat’s hand and spoke – “ Seerat…di…chup..kar…chup kar…yeh kya…tu…”( seerat di…shut up…please??”)

Sahiba Kaur Monga had not expected Seerat to say any of this at all...oh perhaps in her efforts to make amends/ correct her wrongs...Seerat was simply flowing out with all shades of truth???? Sahiba wonders now?

And needless to say - everyone in the Brar’s clan had there head go into an overdrive at that nonetheless as realisation from Seerat’s words began sinking in and Angad could only gape at Sahiba in awe+ wonder+ Part shock as could Veer from across..

Angad was hit solid within…as his head bombarded…with the bit..oh it had always been Sahiba then? Sahiba’s reflection?Sahiba’s words?Sahiba’s talent?? – that had left a deep impact on his being…so perhaps- was it that in reality – he had fallen for the essence that was simply Sahiba’s wrapped in Seerat’s looks….??????

Manbir’s head in overdrive too as realisations begin to hit her hard one by one – too….

Same for Inder...prabhjyot and her husband...

Angad is still on that above thought within his head when he hears Sahiba whisper to Seerat di - " seerat di..bass...chup...aur kuch na bol..."

Seerat gapes at Sahiba as she states - " ab nai bolungi toh kab bolungi Sahiba...ab nai bolungi...toh ghut jaaungi apne hi andar...bolne de bass mujhe...toh aap sab phir se jaan le...iss sab syaape mein garry mere sath shamil tha...sahiba nai...kabhi bhi nai...meri chota behen sahiba anmol hai...woh toh kabhi galat ho hi nai sakti...uuse kabhi bhi koi idea hi nai tha..meri harkaton ka....."( if I don't talk now ..say now..then when will I talk Sahiba...if I don't speak up now..I will suffocate within...just let me speak...so you all just know that all along in this run away plotting it was garry who was with me never Sahiba...for my sister can never be in the wrong...she is priceless...she simply never had any clue about my plotting...deeds...)

And that from Seerat - everyone's attention comes back to glaring at Garry and Jasleen ...hard...

A minute later - Bebe finally recollects herself and say now angrily wiping her own furious anguished tears as she walks upto Jasleen finally – “ joo..maa…apne saage…bachon ki nai ho saki…usko main apni beti kaise…bol lun…yeh tune kya kar diya hai jasleen..garry ko culprit banae ki koshish mein?? Usko aisa dhakka laga hai ki woh tab se kuch bol hi nai paya…”( the mother who can never be loyal with her own kids…how do I call her my daughter from now on?haan??did you really try to trap and frame Garry alone? Look he’s been in such a shock that he hasn’t spoken a word out…)

Jasleen still tries to cunningly say to Bebe still ignoring Garry’s broken frame next to her – “ bebe nai…kiara and garry are just trying to put it on me….I didn’t seed all this hatred in their head…I am not the root cause of it all…”

And that – Angad Singh Brar feels like he’s had it enough so he finally turns around after looking at Sahiba way too intensely in emotion than he ever did before and and roars in front of all – “enough…bua…enough…how dare you?try to get away with this? and just frame garry alone? I know the truth…I overheard you and garry the other day to begin with…that is how this mirror of betrayal came to my eye in the first place..and if you think…I’d have done nothing to collect proof against you too…in these last couple of days…you are wrong…for I have proof…Veer and me both have proof…”

Veer chips in determined – “ yes we do..showtime again…everyone…look who fixed camera’s in your room’s foyer..and your room…day before…bua…I did? And look who has the clear footage of your active participation in plotting and scheming?? We do??? ,”And at that Veer plays the video on projector screen again and everyone sees the sight off Jasleen in her evil cunning controversy planning with Garry in the video( at many instances in the last two days) – constantly instigating him against Angad saying things like – you must do more to make Angad more miserable Garry..even though he is already miserable…think of something more…so what of our media plan failed…do something more….garry …think of something more to ruin him/displace his honour in daar ji’s eyes so deeply…that he hands over the business reins to you…..

Further on couple of more minutes of video footage comes up – off Jasleen – in her attempts to brainwash both Garry and Kiara against everyone in the family – from the last couple of days – given that it was a regualr habbit for her…

Once the video stops playing – and everyone feels like they’v simply been hit with another nuclear bomb again – Angad finally takes a deep breathe and tells everyone what he had heard out of his bua’s mouth the other day….

And now this time around – it was Jasleen Baweja’s turn to feel completely trapped in front of all…that she simply thumps on her seat with tears of fury/anger streaming down her face as she glared at Angad hard – realising his plan was to trap her as well from before only and in her attempt to frame Garry to save herself – she’d not only lost all sense of respect in her family eyes but she’d lost it in her own children’s eyes for Garry and Kiara were simply looking at her heartbroken and aghast and butchered still..

And now - Garry Baweja finally musters the words out given that their whole game had been exposed and for the first time he was feeling pain like he never did as he looked at Angad heartbroken, anguished before he looked at Daar ji and folded his hands upfront to both angad and daarji – “ I am your culprit…angad…I am…like I am for the family’s..daarji……I’v done grave misdeeds…which is why…life has given me such a heartbreaking tight slap of reality today…a stab…that my own mother was ready to frame me as the main culprit just to save herself….issi badi saaza kya hi hogi kisi bete ke liye…ki uski khud ki maa…uske peeth mein khanjar bhoke….kahan se seekha maine yeh sab?chaal baazi?Dagabaazi? apni khud ki mom se hi …aur aaj…khud ko bachane ke liye…unhone…sirf mujhe villain bana diya…haan…hoon main villain…types…par yeh meri mom...koi kam nai…”( what more bigger punishment will be there for a son to know that in order to save herself the mother ccan backstab her own son? Just to save herself tried to potray me as a main villain…yes my deeds have been villainous…but she has been a part of it…too...she is no less....)

Angad looks away in sheer disgust from Garry at that. He was in no mood to pay heed to him right now just like everyone else....

And as Garry catches everyone look at him in sheer disgust still with most of the family members eyes burning like black thunderous coals in anger – the most being Daar ji and Bebe’s - Garry adds heartbroken to Jasleen now as tears of his son’s heartbreak truly leave his eyes – “ main toh sabki nazron mein gir hi gaya mom…aaj…hamesha ke liye shayad…par pata hai kya…aaj aap…meri aur kiara ki nazron se bhi hamesha ke liye gir gaye…iske baad…main aur kiara hai…ek dusre ke saath…ek dusre ko sambhalne ke liye…par…aaj..se aap…akele ho mom….main nai…aapke saath…na hi kiara…”( I know I fell down in everyone’s eyes today…for good..forever perhaps…Mom..but you know what? you simply fell off in my and Kiara’s eyes today for good…post here…kiara and me will only have each others back…but you will be alone…”

A boulder finally hits Jasleen Hard. Hard in her head at that – that her own deeds had finally come back to bite her in her face hard right now. As if…Karma…Life…were serving…justice in her plate…boiling hot! Finally her stony heart suffered a break as it saw the level off disgust in Garry+ Kiara’s eyes for her just now. Desperate she tries to touch Garry’s cheek – “ Garry…mai…n…su..no…”

Garry instantly shoves her hand away as he states getting up – “ I’v heard you enough mom..heard you enough..since childhood…not anymore…your constant instigation…to get back at angad…hate angad…did really make me do the worse of things…,sahi toh keh rahi hai seerat..( she is right)....maine use use kiya...nancy ko use kiya..( i used her and nancy both...) in my quest to take Angad down...all bevause that is what you'v always chanted in my ears mom...bring angad down...break him...garry break him...and for your approval...your love...i was ready to go to ny length to do so...not realising how deep down the cliff i had fallen ...so much so...that i simply lay shattered here in the peices of my own misdeeds......”and at that he simply looks at Seerat but unable to meet her eyes or nancy's– knowing he didn’t have to say anything further to all…

Everyone now understood the implication…Garry…had finally accepted to all…as dejection/anguish consumed his frame.

Seerat finally states now walking teary eyed in front of Garry – her resolve determined though - “ once i step out of here with Sahiba.....you….you will never show me your face ever again…do you get that Garry Baweja?? Oh.

What a fool I was…blinded by greed….then…but not anymore..not anymore…I want nothing…just about nothing to do with you ever again…do you understand?? Iv learnt my lessons the hard way....but you bet I freaking have....”

And before Garry can say anything to that – it is Nancy who stomps upto him and says the same…

Seerat turns to all and folds her hands now – “ meri galti maafi ke layak nai hai..mujhe pata hai…par ho sake…toh aap sab mujhe maaf kardena….”( I know my mistake isn’t worth an apology…but see..if you all can try to forgive….please forgive me one day for this…)

Manbir breaks down in her position at that finally – as realisation hits her that blinded by prejudice and hate/anger – she’d been in massive wrong too and all of her wrongdoings had been channelised towards none other than the innocent one amidst all of this - Sahiba…

Oh realisation hits Manbir hard and how as she breaks down her shoulders shaking - Inder simply held onto her in support – his head connecting the remaining dots too….

Daar ji finally gulps the bouts of pain, anger and hurt that seemed like momentary poison on account off Jasleen/Garry and Kiara - and he finally announces to all his final verdict on the whole debacle post evaluating everything in his head – “ aaj yahan bahut kuch dekha gaya..suna gaya…bahut se baatein saamne aayi…sabse zaroori sach saamne aagaya…jabjot..tune sach hi kaha…jo maa…apne bachon ki na ho saki…usse…apni…beti kaise keh le hum???” ( a lot has been said here today..a lot has been seen…most importantly…the truth came to light….you were right…jabjot…when you mentioned….the mother who couldn’t be her own childrens..how do we call her our daughter…)

Jasleen looks at Daar ji horrified and she is about to say something but Daar ji holds his hands up to her – “ itni zulm kiye tumne mere parivaar par Jasleen…kabhi khud…kabhi apne…bachon ko kathputli banake…..insaaf toh mujhe aaj karna hi padega…shayad yeh mujhe bahut pehle hi kar lena chahiye tha…tujhe kabhi ghar mein wapas aane dena hi nai dena chahiey tha jab maine nafrat ki aag tere andar dekh hi li thi..meri hi galti hai shayad…tujhe…uss zehreele saanp ki tarah apne ghar mein panapne diya…toh phir shayad…yahi hona tha…parr bass ab aur nai…aaj se…tera…mujhse…humse…iss ghar se koi wasta nai..jasleen…na hi tere bachon ka…uss ghar mein…na toh tu..garry…ya kiara kabhi kadam rakhenge….main tum teeno ko hum sab ki zindagi se bedhakal karta hun…”( you have inflicted so much pain on the rest of my family members Jasleen sometimes directly..sometimes through your children…so I have to do justice here as the head of the house…infact I think I should have done this long before….should have never let you in the house post spotting the spark of hatred in you anyway…I only nurtured you in my house …as if nurturing a posinous snake…so it was obvious that all of this devastation to happen…but enough…not anymore…now listen to my verdict….i disown you…you and your children…I disown you from my family/all of us/our house…never again will you be allowed to step into our home or our lives ever again…)

Feeling insulted to her very core – Jasleen looks at her mother for some sympathy as everyone else nods their head in collective affirmation as if they agreed to daarji’s verdict – “ bebe….where will I go??where will we go??where will my children go?garry and kiara go??”

And at that to everyone’s surprise it is Garry who speaks solemnly wiping his heartbreaking tears – “ aapka toh pata nai…par main aur kiara khud hi chale jaayenge…kal ke kal….canada……shayad hamara yahan se dur jaana hi thik hoga….haina kiara?shayad waqt aagaya hai…mom ki parchayi se koso dur rehne ka…??”( don’t know where you will go…but me and kiara will go by ourselves to Canada as soon as possible …right Kiara?perhaps it is simply about time we both have to live somewhere super far from our mom’s shadow….)

Kiara nods at that in agreement at that instantly heartbroken and Jasleen looks at the two in horror – “ Canada jaaoge tum? Apne uss dad ke pass? Jisne hum teeno ko …kab ka choda??”( Canada? You will go to Canada?to your dad? Who left us..long ago??)

Garry nods as his soul grips in anguish – “ haan..coz..now I realise….perhaps..he left you mom…never his children...perhaps you did not allow him to co-parent in the first place..he must have seen your toxic true colours like we have today….and all our lives…we as in kiara and me….never even tried to see things from his perspective... for we were completely brainwashed by you on his angle too…perhaps…it is time to set course on a journey..that will give Kiara and me a lot more answers with regards to this truth of our lives clearly...….with regards to our father….this time we will not beleive it when you say he never wanted anything to do with us....we will go seek him and ask him the same...chances now are that you could have betrayed us on this too..."

Kiara nods…instantly in agreement with Garry…

Jasleen goes into panic mode Into another level now for she knows if Garry and Kiara go to Canada to meet their dad...they would never see her face again...coz she had always been the one to keep the man away from the children manipulating both ways telling the kids he never wanted anything to do with them and likewise to the man - that the kids hated him...

Daar ji says now as Jabjot looks at him anguished in her mothers heart – “ pata hai…jabjot ka dil toot raha hai abhi…toh bass sun Jassi..tujhe sirf hamara dili wala flat de raha hun…jaa chali jaa wahan….aur wahi reh..akele….kuch paise pahuch jayenge tere pass har mahine…bass…sirf kyunki tujhe humse paise hi chahiye the na…hamesha….toh le le…har mahine kuch paise lele…apni zindagi kaat ne ke liye…parr bass…apni shakal mat dikhana…kabhi….hum mein se kisi ko….teri yahi saza hai ab…akele reh…sirf akele…yeh jaante hue…ki hum aur tere khud ke bachon ko bhi sirf tujhse ab ghin hi aati hai…aur aaj bhi tum ghar waapas nai aaogi…kisi bhi hotel mein jaao…tumhara samman bhej diya jaayega tumhe…”

(eng : I know jabjot’s heart is breaking right now..so listen this Jassi…all I am giving you now is our delhi flat where you can go live alone…you will also receive…some money every month to live by with…that’s all given that money was all you always wanted from us…right? but just don’t show us your face anymore….ever again….this is your punishment….jassi..this is your punishment…live alone…knowing…that we all and even your own children live away on the other side from you feeling nothing but disgust in our beings for you….and even today..right now…you will not set your foot in again…you stay in a hotel…your stuff will be sent to you….)

PIN DROP ANGUISHED SILENCE…CONTINUES TO VIBE THE AIR – AS EVERYONE EXCHANGES A KNWOING LOOK AT ONE ANOTHER AT THAT – agreeing with Daarji's verdict..

Garry Baweja is the first one to react and move now – as he finally simly nods at everyone remorseful and shooting Angad and Seerat a last look of deep guilt he finally walks away with Kiara outta the hall – without looking at his mother in the face even once..for Babaji knew …for the first time in his life…Garry Baweja felt like he truly couldn’t stand there and look at anyone in the eye...at the moment...

Jasleen begins howling to herself now because – Garry has walked past her and out holding Kiara’s hand – and she instantly gets up her spot now and follows her children out running behind them calling out there names – “ Garry…Kia..ra…don.;t..leave me….do..n’t…go..”

And everyone in the banquet is left standing in the banquet simply engulfed in devastating silence…just like any place would be…post its wreckage after a massive thunderstorm…

And this hadn’t been just a thunderstorm..right??

It had been a High Intensity Tornado of Truth…

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Now that Nancy finally walks away crying – as well – post Jasleen, Garry and Kiara’s departure – Sahiba observes the heavy silent devastating painful anguished vibe that has consumed all off the Brar’s .

Sahiba clutches on Seerat di’s hand now as she whispers - “ chal di..chal…we have no business being here now…our job is done…the truth is out…in the open..everyone knows….everything...lets just go now..m”

Seerat nods at that simply not having it in her to stand there longer too her own heart getting too heavy with the anguish of all that she’d been through in the roller coaster of misdeeds + trying to make amends…for a second…all she wanted to do was….go to her home…put her head in her mother’s lap..sahiba’s lap..and cry.She also know an anguished confrontation with her own family was also awaiting her at home..

Everyone is too consumed in anguished vibe now tattered – but it is Manbir who notices Sahiba simply trying to leave from there silently with seerat now…

Manbir wipes her own ghostly tears of remorse now and stops her as she says out loud – “ ruko….sahiba…..ruko…ek second ruko…”

And even though Sahiba had instantly turned around in her spot and was about to get out with Seerat – she stops in her tracks in shock. Why? Because for the first time she’d heard Manbir call out to her by her name.

Sahiba turns around and whispers stunned – “ aapne…mujhe…Sahiba bola??”( you just called me by my name???)

Wait... what? Sahiba was trying to leave? That sends angad’s alarm buzzing as he turns around instantly as well from hugging onto Bebe who was weeping hard - to look at Sahiba and he feels shaken with intense unfamiliar emotions as he hears his mother walk up to Sahiba and say now keeping a hand on her arm – “ haan…Sahiba bola….kyun jaa rahi ho tum? Abh toh sab prove hogaya na hum sab ke aage…toh ab kuch kahogi nai??”( yes…I called you Sahiba….why are you going? now that truth has finally been proven to all…won’t you say something?why walk out of here in silence??)

Sahiba looks at Manbir straight at that briefly before she looks up at Daar ji and Bebe , Veer, Angad and Gurleen chachi across – “ kyunki mujhe ab kuch bolne ki zarrort hi nai....kyunki... jab sach ki awaaz finally goonjti haina…kisi aur ko bhi kuch bolne ke zaroorat nai hoti …”( I was walking out of her silently coz I dont feel the need to say antyhing....for...when truth roars in revelation in all its mighty glory in front of all....no one needs to say anything or state the obvious again…)

Daar ji nods at Sahiba as does Bebe and Veer.

Angad tries to hold her gaze yet again as a fresh tsunami of waves stir in him for Sahiba…as all that he’d heard from Seerat today continued to sink in further.He’d indirectly always liked her…it had always been about Sahiba in the shadows…

No, he couldn’t let her leave…he’d beg her for forgiveness..get down on his knees..stay statued there for days/months …if need be…but he couldn’t let her leave….

Angad is right on that thought as Manbir surprises everyone by starting to fold out her hands in front of Sahiba now as tears of remorse due to her own misconduct with Sahiba – leave her eyes – “ I have wronged you too…punished you for no fault of your’s…sahiba…forgive me…please?forgive me for this…one day if you can…the fault was your sister’s …your mothers…but not yours…I see that clearly now…....forgive me...please???”

And that sight – Sahiba instantly acts on her compassionate gut instinct and holds onto Manbir’s hand in an intense silence shaking her head asking her not to fold her hands in front of her given that she was elder – but at the same time Sahiba’s inner self respect doesn’t allow her to utter the words of forgiveness towards Manbir for her emotional misconduct towards her just yet and so Sahiba simply just gestures Manbir to keep her hands back to herself…at that….and looks at her in one long intense silence…before gazing at everyone..in a familiar way….everyone but Angad….and post that... she finally turns around…and walks away holding onto her Seerat's hand…leaving everyone simply stunned and overwhelmed in deep thoughts to reflect on.. …especially Angad…

Why?

Because…even though this time around... Sahiba Kaur Monga had walked out…saying nothing at all…through her mouth…her eyes and that one long intense look towards all but angad… had said out a lot…on her behalf…yet again….

That one look of her eye had been enough of a gesture to relay to all - that all she had ever cared about after being trapped into this mess since day 1 was to bring the truth out in front of all – and now that the truth had seen the light of the day….Sahiba Kaur Monga simply had no interest in being around the Brar’s any longer…especially their precious Angad Singh Brar....

And did this realisation once again - hit /hurt/stab Angad Singh Brar - excruciatingly deep – like the deepest - in the moment….?

Oh.... you bet it did…..

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Tadaaaa!!

Howwazaatttt guys??? Hope you all enjoyed reading this chapter…dhamekedaar episode...types..it felt whilst writing...😃


Imp Authors Note -

So yes, as most of you would have guessed post reading the chapter – that I plan to take the arc of my story here on quite differently from what they will/might continue showing in the show.On ITV they show a lot of extremes especially on the negative side…and I don’t want to go that line in my fiction…but explore through shades of grey where in individuals actually realise and repent…over there misdeeds…and give themselves a second chance to resurrect from the ashes of their misconduct...

Now that the truth is finally out – Manbir finally knows it all –and she’s realising it all too. And Angad knows with deep clarity yet again that it was always Sahiba’s shadow inwardly he was into…. Being just blinded by Seerat’s beauty on the out…

Everyone in the brar mansion( not just daar ji, bebe, veer) - like everyone now finally knows – the diamond they lost – in the form of Sahiba walking out….

Now - Coming to Seerat to begin within – From where I plan to take her arc – she most surely doesn’t want anything to do with Garry post this level of cunning/cheating from his end... yup…she had been blinded by greed prior ...but yes has surely learnt her lesson now..she most surely is on her path to redemption…..

Coming to Garry – Yes, he too has truly been hit the hardest by the way his mom was trying to frame him…and he feels quite broken from the same…serves him right sort off..but for now he does just want to get away out and away from Ludhiana to figure things out in a deep reflective mode…and the same goes for Kiara..

As for Jasleen remorseful realisation…hmmm…ill say..wait to read further…to know if that’s completely come around or not yet…but yes atleast her true face is out in front of all....

Next Update : Take 10 : The Aftermath( Will do my best to post tomorrow night…) - actually I do want to post a couple more updates on this aftermath bit by Monday night coz then I am not there in between 4- 9th... am travelling and I want to build this up to certain point before that.....

Awaiting your precious feedback in comments guys...

Thanks guys..once again...

Much love * Infinite gratitude

Now and always

Prachi

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: TheFluffyCactus

I must say, Amazing Writing! The best part about your story? - Focus on the trauma and Self respect of Sahiba. What these ITV writers lack the most is a realistic perspective. However, in this so called creativity they fail to realize that they are disregarding the trauma a person, especially a woman would feel when literally getting such a rape threat. They just push it under the carpet to make the Female lead mahaan and to push the story towards a romantic angle. However, I loved it, that you chose to showcase the trauma in an extremely realistic manner, while still maintaining the characters of Angad and Sahiba and others as well. Great Going! Are you on wattpad as well? Would love to follow you there.


Hellloooo ji....thank you so very much for your lovely feedback...I simply loved reading it...brought a smile to my face...😃 yup...yaar I did want to show that Sahiba simply cannot just brush that grave misconduct from angad ...under the carpet ( from where I see it/ beleive in my head ) - for no matter the anger/ ache at any sane man's end...he cannot threaten physical assault to a woman.. and not like realise repent and grovel for forgiveness...like here they were showing angad in a particular image which in the show they totally butchered ( according to me) by not making him realise the very same next instant...and go down the road of victim blaming...like how many hate crimes like these we see happen in our country/ all around the world against women...she doesn't like me back/said no to me...throw acid on her...I am in pain coz of her...let me physically try to power her...disgusting..this narrative is..and i do feel its high time they stop normalising it on TV...

As for Sahiba...even though she is selfless and very compassionate...from where I see it.. she cannot suffocate her soul and not stand up to this...for certain trauma and wounds need handling/ dealing with/ healing properly rather than simply brushing it under the carpet...so yup..that is my aim..in penning it all down this way...


So yup thanks for appreciating my work so very much❤️

Yup I am on wattpad...I am a huge arnav×khushi fan from back in the day and I write a lot on them...all of work on arshi is on Wattpad only.. mostly...my username on wattpad is - mysticaltales11111

Would love to have your support to my work..going forward..❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Dwanstar

Amazing update

finally garry ka sach saamne aagya.....I hope you have something planned for Kiara as welll...


And the way seerat took stand for herself is commendable plus angad telling his mother to not call sahiba that girl is also sweet something which should have been done in the show as well...



Can't wait to read what you have planned next.


Thank you so very much ji.for your feedback.....so glad you enjoyed reading garry's expose...I have just updated the next chapter also....

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Hey it was a mind blowing update yaar , awesome Angad had made sure to trap him frm all sides, loved how Angad claimed to be sahiba husband even for namesake 😘😘.


Eagerly waiting for the next part, pls try to update it by tomorrow night 😍

Thank you so very much ji....❤️ Yup...angad has trapped him from all ends indeed...

I also just updated the next chapter ji...❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Anons4

Wow, truly nice.


And then we will get episode 2mrw and later which will be like hmm Kash kuch alag dikhaya hota.

They should show this, what you are writing here. Fir break bhi nai lena padta for a month, atleast that's the plan, from the serial.


Keep writing this is really good.


Thank you so very much ji...❤️ glad you enjoyed reading this..

I just updated the next part too..😃

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: piyushi

mazaa aa gayaaaaa👏🤪🥳🤗


Yayiiiieee...thank you ji....🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Dhamakedaar exposure. Angad and veer are on roll today. Jasleen and Kiara are next I guess


Manbeer abhi Tak sudhari nahi hai. I hope she realises she is wrong at some point.


Angad's repentence and remorse is genuine and now he think he has a rebound on sahiba when all along he has loved her qualities which Seerat copied


Thank you so very much ji..for your precious support.❤️

Bass ji I just updated the next update...usme you will get all these answers ji...😉

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kalavathi5

Wow fabulous update!!! Just a completely planned and thorough ambush on Garry and Jasleen (and hopefully Kiara)❤️❤️❤️👏👏

I love that all details were planned and everyone (apart from the four) had no clue at all!!!

Thank you so very much ji...am super glad you enjoyed reading garrys expose...😎

I just updated the next part....as well...😃

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NidhaA

People like Garry - who considers themselves the smartest does take a great fall like this eventually. Glad to see Daarji is angry and not on the verge of a breakdown.


Well crafted Prachi ❤️


Thank you so very much ji....❤️

Yup garrys fall is like - a deep tumble down the cliff indeed...

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