FF - SHATTERED - (Angad* Sahiba) - Aurhors note imp -9/4/23 - Page 11

Wow, truly nice.

And then we will get episode 2mrw and later which will be like hmm Kash kuch alag dikhaya hota.

They should show this, what you are writing here. Fir break bhi nai lena padta for a month, atleast that's the plan, from the serial.

Keep writing this is really good.

mazaa aa gayaaaaa👏🤪🥳🤗

Dhamakedaar exposure. Angad and veer are on roll today. Jasleen and Kiara are next I guess

Manbeer abhi Tak sudhari nahi hai. I hope she realises she is wrong at some point.

Angad's repentence and remorse is genuine and now he think he has a rebound on sahiba when all along he has loved her qualities which Seerat copied

Wow fabulous update!!! Just a completely planned and thorough ambush on Garry and Jasleen (and hopefully Kiara)❤️❤️❤️👏👏

I love that all details were planned and everyone (apart from the four) had no clue at all!!!

People like Garry - who considers themselves the smartest does take a great fall like this eventually. Glad to see Daarji is angry and not on the verge of a breakdown.

Well crafted Prachi ❤️

Sim ppl my lives every bit of it! Has Angad started to feel for Sahiba! At least he told Manveer to stay in place.

It was fantastic! Loved it! Basically you showed that Angad has brains and he is not fool which was the best part 👏 I really want to read what you planned for Jasleen 😉

Awesome

Love it

Cont soon

Good one! Gary is trapped and above all, Jasleen will be the next one. What kind of a mother she is in trying to save her own self over her son's? Not to mention Kiara is still left! I loved it! ❤️

I must say, Amazing Writing! The best part about your story? - Focus on the trauma and Self respect of Sahiba. What these ITV writers lack the most is a realistic perspective. However, in this so called creativity they fail to realize that they are disregarding the trauma a person, especially a woman would feel when literally getting such a rape threat. They just push it under the carpet to make the Female lead mahaan and to push the story towards a romantic angle. However, I loved it, that you chose to showcase the trauma in an extremely realistic manner, while still maintaining the characters of Angad and Sahiba and others as well. Great Going! Are you on wattpad as well? Would love to follow you there.