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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Beautiful 😍 🤩

Too good.....I must be really tiny😭👍🏼

Loved it...Vinu should do it for his aai

Just came to mind, indeed parents never go anywhere....they stay with you forever...in you...in you kids' features n habits. Read it somewhere....aise hi yaad aa gya

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely write-up....

You didn't tag me 🙃🙃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is lovely, now i am sure Vankar will steal your idea and Stretch Vinu calling Sai aai on Mother's day celebration.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you everyone! Sorry if could not tag you all.

This has been there for long time in the drafts.

The idea is to capture vinu’s thoughts from the time he saw his mother. I wanted to keep savi as the key in the poem. He bonded with savi first and always wanted the love she was getting from sai.

First part is how he spent few days with sai in KK

Then his heartbreak that she lost him. I added sibling rivalry here

Third stanza is how he will realize sai can never lose him. So he kind of apologized for the hurt he caused her by making it all about him and giving clean chit to his aai


Finally he will say he is happy and thriving only because of her! So in future too it will be his mistake if he loses her. His mother can never lose him. Losing his aai could be due to some misunderstandings that happens between parent and child. He is trying to say I will find a way(correct my mistakes) and reach you. That means in future whatever difficulties we go through, i will not leave you. I will always come to you. 👍



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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiltl

Thank you everyone! Sorry if could not tag you all.

This has been there for long time in the drafts.

The idea is to capture vinu’s thoughts from the time he saw his mother. I wanted to keep savi as the key in the poem. He bonded with savi first and always wanted the love she was getting from sai.

First part is how he spent few days with sai in KK

Then his heartbreak that she lost him. I added sibling rivalry here

Third stanza is how he will realize sai can never lose him. So he kind of apologized for the hurt he caused her by making it all about him and giving clean chit to his aai


Finally he will say he is happy and thriving only because of her! So in future too it will be his mistake if he loses her. His mother can never lose him. Losing his aai could be due to some misunderstandings that happens between parent and child. He is trying to say I will find a way(correct my mistakes) and reach you. That means in future whatever difficulties we go through, i will not leave you. I will always come to you. 👍




You 3 @-sadiltl, sherry, moor. should definitely co-write a FFs. I bet we all will read it everyday 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is beautiful 😍 .please send this to vankar on insta.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gems.musingsRN

This is beautiful 😍 .please send this to vankar on insta.

I m not on insta. Nethra can send it. But isn’t Mother’s Day too far ?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiltl

I m not on insta. Nethra can send it. But isn’t Mother’s Day too far ?

Difficult to send such a long poem via Insta story...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so so beautiful and touching❤️

I want this to really happen. And if does, I will be crying through the scene.


@Nethraa - You know what to do right?😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sherry24

This is so so beautiful and touching❤️

I want this to really happen. And if does, I will be crying through the scene.


@Nethraa - You know what to do right?😉

What should I do? 🤔

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