Originally posted by: sadiltl
Thank you everyone! Sorry if could not tag you all.
This has been there for long time in the drafts.
The idea is to capture vinuâs thoughts from the time he saw his mother. I wanted to keep savi as the key in the poem. He bonded with savi first and always wanted the love she was getting from sai.
First part is how he spent few days with sai in KK
Then his heartbreak that she lost him. I added sibling rivalry here
Third stanza is how he will realize sai can never lose him. So he kind of apologized for the hurt he caused her by making it all about him and giving clean chit to his aai
Finally he will say he is happy and thriving only because of her! So in future too it will be his mistake if he loses her. His mother can never lose him. Losing his aai could be due to some misunderstandings that happens between parent and child. He is trying to say I will find a way(correct my mistakes) and reach you. That means in future whatever difficulties we go through, i will not leave you. I will always come to you. đ