FF : Yeh Dooriyaan *SahAn + Veerat* (Updated 10/06) - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi!

Beautifully written story. I liked how all the characters are portrayed so well in your story. However my favourite portion is obviously Keerat & Veer parts. Thankfully you are giving us a lot of Veerat & veer, Keerat individual parts which unfortunately the makers are not giving us. A special like for No Santosh sindy baby drama & Garry Sindy love part. Waiting for next part I hope Sahiba doesn’t sell those earrings. Hopefully Keerat Some how will manage to stop her . So fingers crossed 🤞 for next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely story!! I am really enjoying the time you are spending on Sahiba and Keerat❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was absolutely lovely! The cold realization that both Sahiba has and Keerat as well. They know their mom is scamming everyone left and right.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wonderful update 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for commenting again 😍 What was your favourite part? Any scenes you would want to see?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Hi!

Beautifully written story. I liked how all the characters are portrayed so well in your story. However my favourite portion is obviously Keerat & Veer parts. Thankfully you are giving us a lot of Veerat & veer, Keerat individual parts which unfortunately the makers are not giving us. A special like for No Santosh sindy baby drama & Garry Sindy love part. Waiting for next part I hope Sahiba doesn’t sell those earrings. Hopefully Keerat Some how will manage to stop her . So fingers crossed 🤞 for next part

Thank you so much. I am glad you are enjoying it. 😍

You think characters are well portrayed? I try my best. Here I was thinking they are perhaps are not making any sense that's why people are not commenting.😅

@Bold - Those are my favourite parts too! We get so less scenes of these two people! I would have enjoyed their bantering or partnership instead of cringe scenes of Sindy-Garry.

@Purple - They will be there in the story 😅 Just not now.

@Orange - Those earrings will have a very important role to play in future parts. That's all the hint I am willing to give. 😉 I will update soon. The next part is almost ready. 🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: kalavathi5

Lovely story!! I am really enjoying the time you are spending on Sahiba and Keerat❤️

@Bold - Thank you! 🥰

@Blue - I am enjoying writing them too; Sahiba and Keerat's one-liners are the only balm to the current dragging of drama. Abhi tak toh reception bhi nehi aya!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: averma4583

This was absolutely lovely! The cold realization that both Sahiba has and Keerat as well. They know their mom is scamming everyone left and right.

@Red - 😍

@Bold - That was immensely needed! Sahiba needs that electric shock to rewire her brain into standing up to her mother and sister and stop letting them walk all over her. Abhi bhi aur realizations aney wale hai.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Absolutely amazing..

Thanks! 😍 Any favourite parts? Or any scenes you would want to see?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: eishe10

Wonderful update 😃

Thanks 😍 Hope you enjoyed till now. Any favourite parts or any upcoming scenes you would like to see in the story?

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