New Beginnings (OS) - Page 4

Awesome !! Very well written. I definitely love this Anuj and Maaya.

Can I leave a tiny feedback ? Apologies in advance if I hurt you. Your writing is again astounding ! No doubt.

Maaya is shown (atleast with the backstory from the show) to have failed at a relationship as she was immature. After that , it was all trauma for her to be living the life of pr*stitute. So , her assertiveness over relationships and love in general are not matching up. 🤔

Tbh , I am a hundred percent sure if she had a different back story , this would align very well.

Looking forward to thr next update. 😊😊

Originally posted by: STPrincess

Awesome !! Very well written. I definitely love this Anuj and Maaya.

Can I leave a tiny feedback ? Apologies in advance if I hurt you. Your writing is again astounding ! No doubt.

Maaya is shown (atleast with the backstory from the show) to have failed at a relationship as she was immature. After that , it was all trauma for her to be living the life of pr*stitute. So , her assertiveness over relationships and love in general are not matching up. 🤔

Tbh , I am a hundred percent sure if she had a different back story , this would align very well.

Looking forward to thr next update. 😊😊

Nope, you did not hurt me. In my personal experience, a failed relationship and trauma can teach many things only if one is willing to learn. At least I did. Again, everyone has their own views. I will keep this in mind and try to write something about Maaya after I complete this. 😊

Even Anuj was so sensible but look at that dhakkan now 🤣

Originally posted by: strancho

Nope, you did not hurt me. In my personal experience, a failed relationship and trauma can teach many things only if one is willing to learn. At least I did. Again, everyone has their own views. I will keep this in mind and try to write something about Maaya after I complete this. 😊

Even Anuj was so sensible but look at that dhakkan now 🤣

Oh yes , he is super dhakkan now. And a big clown in the name of a successful business tycoon running multinational empire 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: STPrincess

Awesome !! Very well written. I definitely love this Anuj and Maaya.

Can I leave a tiny feedback ? Apologies in advance if I hurt you. Your writing is again astounding ! No doubt.

Maaya is shown (atleast with the backstory from the show) to have failed at a relationship as she was immature. After that , it was all trauma for her to be living the life of pr*stitute. So , her assertiveness over relationships and love in general are not matching up. 🤔

Tbh , I am a hundred percent sure if she had a different back story , this would align very well.

Looking forward to thr next update. 😊😊

If you don't mind me pitching in; now that I think about it, that is a good point. Her version of Maaya does touch upon how love can destroy your existing beliefs so you rebuild your conclusions, and overall her characters exude so much sensibility that it goes in that flow, but maybe considering Maaya's backstory, along with her self-assuredness and clarity about life, some amount of vulnerability can be shown....?

Originally posted by: SoulSpiller

If you don't mind me pitching in; now that I think about it, that is a good point. Her version of Maaya does touch upon how love can destroy your existing beliefs so you rebuild your conclusions, and overall her characters exude so much sensibility that it goes in that flow, but maybe considering Maaya's backstory, along with her self-assuredness and clarity about life, some amount of vulnerability can be shown....?

True ! She cannot be very sure of how relationships work. She is sort of broken in one way and Anuj the other way. They can therefore help each other on their vulnerabilities and in the process fall for each other ! So very exciting it will be . They will find a very good home with each other and little Anu will only make it complete 🥰🥰🥰

"Unconditional love does not mean unconditional tolerance"

^One of the many observations that have been a delight to read, Pompy.

Originally posted by: STPrincess

True ! She cannot be very sure of how relationships work. She is sort of broken in one way and Anuj the other way. They can therefore help each other on their vulnerabilities and in the process fall for each other ! So very exciting it will be . They will find a very good home with each other and little Anu will only make it complete 🥰🥰🥰

Ah that sounds beautiful to me! A kind of relationship where there is no unhealthy dependence on each other yet they slowly heal each other...!

But somehow I also feel this hesitation to give this kind of feedback to a writer when I feel writing can be such a personal thing. When I write, it's so spontaneous, it feels like the characters are whispering instructions in my ear and they are so stubborn I can't usually force them to do anything I want them to!

Do you write btw?

Originally posted by: STPrincess

Oh yes , he is super dhakkan now. And a big clown in the name of a successful business tycoon running multinational empire 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: SoulSpiller

Ah that sounds beautiful to me! A kind of relationship where there is no unhealthy dependence on each other yet they slowly heal each other...!

But somehow I also feel this hesitation to give this kind of feedback to a writer when I feel writing can be such a personal thing. When I write, it's so spontaneous, it feels like the characters are whispering instructions in my ear and they are so stubborn I can't usually force them to do anything I want them to!

Do you write btw?

Totally. Which is why I was hesitating to give feedback but then I couldn't resist myself and I deeply apologize again !

Yes, I do write. I actually have published one story over a TV serial (my rendition) and now I am writing my very own story which is actually based on second chance for both of them 😀

Originally posted by: STPrincess

Totally. Which is why I was hesitating to give feedback but then I couldn't resist myself and I deeply apologize again !

Yes, I do write. I actually have published one story over a TV serial (my rendition) and now I am writing my very own story which is actually based on second chance for both of them 😀

Whoa I don't think you need to apologize so much! The person who wrote this story seems like a person who'd appreciate honesty.

Ah so you do write! You sound like you'd have a lot of empathy in real life as well as for the characters you write, I feel like your stories would be lovely.