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Posted: 3 years ago

Hiii...Tnx for pm.

Epilogue toh bohot hi achhi lagi mujhe. Ariya ne ekbaar phir se twins ko janam diya aur sab log badi khusi se apni zindegi eksaath guzaar rahe hai. Par mujhe bhi yeh janna tha ki Arjun aur Riya ne Ayan ko kaise manaya, Ayan ne kab aur kaise Arjun ko as his father khushi khushi accept kiya aur sab saath mein Rawte mansion mein rehne lage.... jo ki maine iss epilogue mein expect kiya tha, lekin tumne woh part diya nahi. Aur ha, mujhe hindi written script samajh mein nahi aati hai, issliye jis gaane pe Ariya ne dance kiya, woh gaane ka lyrics mujhe samajh nahi aaya. Anyway, all's well that ends well. Har ek kahani kabhi na kabhi khatam hoti hi hai. Aur, yeh story bhi aaj ek achhe note pe khatam ho gayi. But, mujhe tumhari agli story ka intezaar rahega. Lastly, tumhari exams ke liye wishing you best of luck. Achchhe se padhai karo aur exams mein achchhe marks laate raho.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ohh my god 4 bachhe jyada nahi ho gaye kya .... 😂😂😂 Koinsa mujhe sambhalna h ..... Mere to do hi saitan h 🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago

Suprise.... So it's the epilogue 2. Sorry I wanted to post it before but got busy with exams so couldn't get the time to complete it. I hope you enjoy it.

Epilogue 2

After 2 days Riya was discharged from hospital. Arjun was helping Riya in changing while the twins were with Shreeza. The elder siblings were at home with their uncles and aunts preparing for the welcome of Riya and the babies. Ariya comes out of the changing room. Arjun took Sana from Shree while Lisa gave Samar to Riya. After completing the formalities they leave for Rawte mansion.


In Rawte mansion.


The house was bustling with happiness and brightness. Ayan, Arya, Ahana and Prachi are the happiest. Whole house was decorated with pink, blue and white colour balloons. A big 'WELCOME' was written with golden metallic balloons. Sakshi and Roshan were present too. Ayesha was making ready 'pooja ki thali' while Priya and Sakshi were looking after some other things. A car pull in driveway. announced their arrival. All rush to the main door to welcome the youngest members of the family and their parents.


As soon as the door opened Ariya and the kids were welcomed by loud cheers of welcome. Ayesha did the aarti and put tilak on all of their foreheads and welcomed them inside. Shreeza took the kids from Ariya. As soon as Samar was in Lisa's hand Riya was enfluged in a group hug by Ayesha, Priya and Sakshi. After parting from the hug Ariya settled on the couch while the elder twins ran and sat on their father's lap.


Ayan : Papa aapko pata hai hum log kabse aapka wait kar rahe the?


Arjun: Kyu??


Arya : Ohh hoo buddhu papa. Aap bhul gaye kal school mein father's day celebration hai aur hum teeno (Arjun and the twins) perform karne wale hai toh practice karni hai.


Arjun : I'm sorry babies mein bhul gaya tha. Ek kaam karte hai aapki mumma aur dono babies ko room mein drop karte hai aur practice karne jaate hai.


Ayesha : Hmm... Arjun tum chale jao bacho ke saath hum log hai na Riya aur bachi ke paas.


Arjun : Par....


Riya : Arjun main thik hu tum jao.


Arjun : Okk... (To kids) Toh chalo practice karte hai.


A+A : Aye aye captain.


All laugh while Arjun leaves from there with the kids. Riya was in happy tears. All noticed it and understood her condition.


Riya : (overwhelmed) Aaj kitna sukoon mil raha hai mujhe yeh sab dekh kar. Mere bache apne papa se utna hi pyaar karte hai jitna mujhse karte hai.


Sameer : (sitting beside her) Hum jante hai tu kaisa feel kar rahi hai. Aakhir iss din ka hum logo ne kitna wait kiya hai specially tu ne.


Riya : Agar us din hum logo ke saath wo nahi hua hota toh shayad hum log aaj ka din dekh hi nahi pate.


Saying she went back to her memory lane.


Flashback.


After Ayan's discharge they took him home. Sameer and Chotu tried to talk to him about Arjun. He used to cry or went to sleep saying he was tired. Only good thing that happened in this period of time was Ahana and twins bonding. The trio was happy to have each other. Arya and Arjun mingled well. Arjun was still staying with Sakshi and Roshan.


One day all were present in the living room of Mukharjee mansion. All were thinking of the idea to convince Ayan. Kids were playing in the garden.


Shree : Lisa waise toh tumhara dimag bahut chalta hai, kuch idea socho na.


Sakshi : Haan behan koi khurafati idea dhond na.


Lisa : Are yaar ruko na kuch sochne do na. (Thinking).... yeh mil gaya idea.


All : Kya??


Lisa : Thoda risky hai par kaam aayega.


Chotu : Tum bolo toh sahi.


Lisa : Arjun bhaiya aur Riya bhabhi ko natak karna hoga.


Riya : Kaisa Natak?


Lisa : Dekho Ayan ko yahi lagta haina ki Arjun bhaiya ko aapki aur un dono ki fikar nahi hai. Toh humein usse yeh dikhana hoga ki wo galat sochta hai.


Ayesha : Aur wo hum log kaise karenge?


Lisa : Hum log na kuch logo ko hire karenge aur unko bolenge ki goons ki acting kare aur aap logo pareshan kare and Arjun bhaiya aap jakar unhe bacha lena. Bolo kaisa laga plan??


Everyone looked shocked.


Arjun : Shree ek baat bata.


Shree : Haan bhai bolo.


Arjun : Tujhe jaise gadhe ne itni intelligent ladki ko pata kaise liya??


Lisa : Ummm.... Bhai wo Shree ne nahi maine usse propose kiya tha.


All : What??


Lisa : Umm yeh sab baatein baad mein kare hum log aur boliye ba plan kaisa hai?


Shree : Sakshi di please mujhe bataiye ki aapki mom ne kya khaya tha isko birth dete waqt?


Sakshi : Wo toh mujhe bhi nahi pata Shree.


Lisa : Yeh bakwas band karo and bolo ki plan kaisa hai.


Arjun : Plan toh acha hai par kuch gadbad ho gayi toh??


Lisa : Bhaiya when Lisa is here why to fear. Mera ek friend hai yaha ki theatre mein wo kuch help kar sakta hai.


All nodded at her in approval of her plan. After evening snacks Sakshi, Rohan, Shreeza along with Arjun left for their house. After having dinner Lisa informed all that she had arranged the goons. All slept thinking about tomorrow.


Next day.


Outside Mukharjee mansion.


Riya along with Ayan was waiting for Arjun as they had to go for a checkup. Ayan doesn't know that they are going with Arjun.


Ayan : Mumma hum log kiska wait kar rahe hai??


Riya : Abhi pata chal jayega bacha.


Just as she finished Arjun stopped the car in front of them. Seeing Arjun, Ayan got angry.


Ayan : Mumma yeh yaha kya kar rahe hai??


Riya : Bacha wo kya haina ki driver uncle chuti par hai. And dono mamu busy hai toh humein papa ke saath hi jana hoga doctor ke paas.


Ayan : But ..


Riya : Please beta...


Having no other option he agreed. Riya made him sit at the back while she took the passenger's seat. They tried to talk to him but he kept quiet. They reached the hospital and the doctor did Ayan's checkup.


Doc : Yeh toh bahut achi baat hai ki Ayan bahut jaldi recover ho gaya hai. Ab tension ki baat nahi hai ab Ayan wapas se school join kar sakta hai.


Riya : Thank you doctor par iski davai continue rakhni hai??


Doc : 2 din aur continue kijiye.


They thanked the doctor and left for home. On the way back home they were stopped by 2-3 goons. They had knives and steel chains. The road was aloof so there wasn't another vehicle around. Their car was surrounded by the goons. Arjun hoonked and told them to be a side but they didn't listen and came towards the car. They forcefully opened the door and pulled them out.


Other hand,


Shreeza were with Arya and Ahana who were playing in the garden. Suddenly Lisa's phone rang. He picked up the call.


Lisa : Hello...


Other side : ..........


Lisa : What par aise kaise ?? Humein aap logo ko paise diye hai.


Other side : .......


Lisa : Areee par.....


The line went dead. Tension lines from on her forehead. Shree who was watching all this asked.


Shree : Kya hua itni pareshan lag rahi ho??


Lisa : Pareshani ki hi toh baat hai. Wo toh actors hum logo ne hire kiye the plan ke liye un logo ne aane se mana kar diya hai.


Shree : What the...!! Ab hum kya karege.


Lisa : Wahi toh main soch rahi hu.


Shree : Pehle toh tum Bhai aur bhabhi ko call karo.


Lisa : Thik hai.


She called Riya but Riya was not picking up the call.


Lisa : Bhabhi utna nahi rahi hai.


Shree : Shayad doctor ke pass hoge.


Lisa : Hmm...


With Ariya.


One goon hai captivated Ayan while the other were holding Riya.


Goon 1 : Agar in dono ki salamati chahta hai toh chup chap hum logo ko Sara Paisa aur yeh gadi de de.


Arjun : Dekho main keh raha hu chod do meri biwi aur bache ko nahi toh chodu ka nahi.


Goon 2 : Ayee Hera jayada herogiri mat dikha aur jitna bola hai utna kar samjha warna.... (Placed knife on Ayan's neck)


Arjun : nahi nahi main kar karta hu unhe kuch mat karna.


Arjun took out his wallet and all the expensive things he had. One of the goon who was holding Riya came forward and took it as a chance. She kick the second one he fell down. She quickly got hold of herself and snatched Ayan from the goon. Arjun too started beating them. She ran away with Ayan while Arjun was busy fighting. A goon was going to harm Arjun with a knife when Ayan shouted.


Ayan : Papa peeche dekho.....


Arjun turns and grabs his hand and throws the knife away. Arjun was again going to beat the hell out of them but they ran away. Riya and Ayan come running towards him. They hug him and Ayan started crying.


Ayan : Pa.....pa aap ...... Thik..... toh...hai....na?


Arjun : Haan beta mein thik hu. Chalo ghar chalte hai.


Arjun tried to break the hug but Ayan held him more tightly. They understand that Ayan was afraid to let it be. Riya took the driver's seat while Arjun took the co-passenger's seat with Ayan in his lap. He was continuously saying sweet things in his ears. Soon they reached Mukherjee mension. Ayan run towards his room while others were sitting in the living room.


As soon as Ariya came Lisa said.


Lisa : I'm sorry bhaiya bhabhi...


Riya : Kyu kya hua Lisa?


Lisa : Bhabhi wo.... And told them that how at last minute the actor refuse to come there and do their work.


Ariya : What??


Sameer : Kya hua tum log itne shocked kyu ho??


Arjun : Kyunki Bhai..... He narrated to them the whole incident that took place sometime before.


All were shocked to know about the event.


Ayesha : tum dono thik hona??


Riya : Hum thik hai par Ayan thoda shock mein hai.


Lisa : I'm once again sorry bhaiya bhabhi.


Arjun : Ab kyu sorry bol rahi ho tum Lisa?


Lisa : Bhale hi wo actors nahi aaye par... Par agar wo aate toh kya pata Ayan ko aise hi shock lag jata.


Arjun : Nahi Lisa iss mein tumhari koi galti nahi hai. Jo hona tha wo ho gaya. Aur aap sabko pata hai Ayan ne mujhe pehli baar papa bulaya.


All : Kya sachi??


Ariya : Haan.


Ayan : Papa .....


Ayan comes running from his room holding a card with him. He hugged Arjun tightly. Arjun picks him up in his arms.


Arjun : Kya hua beta dar lag raha hai aapko?


Ayan : Nahi.


Riya : Toh aap aise bhag kar kyu aaye?


Ayan : Mujhe papa ko yeh dena tha.(Showing a handmade sorry card to them.)


Arjun : Yeh kya hai beta? Aap sorry card kyun de rahe ho?


Ayan : I'm sorry papa maine aapko bahut pareshan kiya na. Jab mein hospital mein tha tab bhi aur ghar aane ke baad bhi isliye sorry card. Aaj ke baad mein kabhi aap se gussa nahi karunga. I love you papa.


Arjun's eyes welled up hearing this. He was craving for this moment from the time he got to know about his kids. He hug Ayan more tightly and replied.


Arjun : I love you too beta.....


All others were just admiring the father son duo. Riya was the happiest. The last transe of guilt was also gone from her mind. This was the most beautiful scene she had ever seen. Their moment was distributed by two cute yet angry voices.


Voices : Saara pyaar sirf Ayan/bhaiya ko aur hamara kya??


The turn and saw Arya and Ahana standing there with hands on their waist with an angry pout. All chuckle looking at them while Riya signals them to come near them. They obey her signal and come near them. Shr kissed their foreheads and picked them up. They all had a family hug.


Flashback ends.


Riya : Uss din ke baad se toh zindagi ek sapna ban gai hai jo maine kabhi dekha hi nahi tha.


Chotu : Akhir yeh sab toh hona hi tha. Tera aur Arjun ka pyar sacha hai aur sache pyaar ki hamesha kadi pariksha hoti hai.


Roshan : Haan aur jeet hamesha pyaar ki hi hoti hai.


All agree with him.


The end.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow wt A beautiful ending luvd it finally Ariya life lots of happiness with kids thanks for pm dear waiting for ur nxt story

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved it Riya

Allls well that ends well

Kids home coming was sweet 😍 finally Ayan too got relived & he has no complaints with Arjun 😊

Beautiful end to a wonderful journey✈️

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing✍️✍️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you ☺️☺️

Are wo kya haina I was confused thi ki is baar kya hoga ladka ki ladki toh bich ka solution nikal diya 😁😁


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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you ☺️☺️

Big and happy family 🎉💟

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: riyuuu33

Thank you ☺️☺️

Are wo kya haina I was confused thi ki is baar kya hoga ladka ki ladki toh bich ka solution nikal diya 😁😁


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Achcha kiya. Classic example: Roger Federer.

Nice story. Waiting to read of your stories.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you ☺️☺️

I wanted to write more but mere exams aa rahe hai toh I have to take break from writing and I didn't wanted to keep you all waiting.

Answer 1 :- you will get to know about it in epilogue 2.

Answer 2 :- it was a typing error by me sorry.

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Thank you ☺️☺️

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