Abhira OS series (Chapter 2 up on page 2)

Hello guys trying to be active here again.

Sprry for not replying to the tags but life sucks and it still is sucking the life out of me. Ek to health kharab uper se busy schedule and the kachra story to pucho hi mat.

Here is my try on the current scenarios of the Show.

Madhu do the taggings please.

Index

Link to chapter 1 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162462737

Link to chapter 2- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162470768

YEH KYUN KIYA KHUDA

(AN ABHIRA FF)

(CHAPTER 1)

So I know guys
Like you all
Even I am frustrated with the ongoing track of Yrkkh. We expected more from Abhimanyu as he was our dream man. But what to say ITv and it's traits of always muting the male lead.

So here I am starting this new story to vent all my frustration.

Story starts with Manjari blaming Akshara for Neil's death and Abhimanyu being the silent spectator of all those verbal violence against his wife.

Akshara looks at the entire hall of her so called sasural and not even one person is in her favour except her Bade Papa and Badi Mumma. Akhilesh was always for Aarohi so she least expected his support. But her Kairav Bhaiya was also looking at her as if she was the one guilty here.

Ak : Ek baar pehle bhi aisa hua tha. Tab bahut chhoti thi main. Khud ko defend karna aata nahi tha isiliye ilzaam lagaya gaya mujhpe aur main bhi uske guilt me chali gayi. Us waqt jab doctor Abhimanyu ko ye sab pata chala ki mere panick attacks ke peeche ki wajah kya hai tab unhe bahut bura laga tha lekin aaj jab unki khud ki maa mere saath wahi kar rahi hai to unhe ek baar bhi galat nahi lag raha hai. Actually haa ab to mere heart ki halat bahut achhi ho gayi hai right doctor Abhimanyu. Khair jis ghar me meri kadar hi nahi hai us ghar me mere hone na hone par kisi ko kya hi farq padega. Doctor Abhimanyu ki life me to unki bike ki bhi priority hai bas unki wife pata nahi priority list ke kis number me aati hai. Last bhi hai ya nahi. (To shefali) Bhabhi ab aap bataiye kya main Neil ko concert ke liye leke gayi thi.

S : Nahi tumhe to maine hi bheja tha kyu ki tumhe bahut jor se pain ho raha tha cramps ki wajah se. Tum to jaa bhi nahi rahi thi phir Neil aur maine hi tumhe jabardasti bheja. Aur Birla Hospital ke paas bahut traffic tha isiliye wo tumhe City Hospital leke gaya.

Everyone got shocked even Abhimanyu who was till now very sure that Akshara broke her promise for concert.

Ak : Agar phir bhi confirm hona hai to City Hospital ke reception me phone kar ke pata kar lijiye aap log ki waha par Akshara Birla ke naam ki entry hai ya nahi. Gynaecologist se bhi pata kar sakte hai aap log ki main waha apna check up karwane gayi thi ya nahi. Hum log waha se wapas aa rahe the. Mujhe un bachhiyo ka call aaya ki unka kidnap ho raha hai. Call log check kar sakte hai aap log (giving her phone) ye raha mera phone aur usme recording bhi hai. Ab aap log bataiye kya ye sab dekhne aur sunne ke baad kya kar sakte. Neil ne bola ki bhabhi police ko aane me kam se kam aadha ghanta lag jaayega aur tab tak un bachhiyo ke saath kya hoga isiliye hum log waha gaye. Ab aap log bataiye main kis tarah se jimmedar huyi. (To Manjari) Aur aapse Mam aapse main kya hi kahu. Humesha aadhi baat sunti hai aur apna situation bana leti hai. Aur sabke paas ek hi to insaan hai jiske uper blame laga ke khud ke guilt ko kam kiya jaa sake. To ek baar phir Akshara jimmedar. Aur doctor Abhimanyu ne ek baar phir prove kar diya ki koi second chance kuch bhi nahi hota. Inhone mujhse promise kiya tha ki ab ye mujhpe trust karenge lekin trust aur Abhimanyu ek saath nahi chal sakte.

Ma : Chal beta. In logo ke saamne kuch bhi kehne ka koi fayda nahi hai.

Ak : Haa Bade Papa main bhi ab in logo ke saath koi conversation nahi karna chahti aur naahi KOI RISHTA RAKHNA HAI MUJHE IN LOGO SE. (Forwarding her hand) Ek cheez wapas karungi to ek cheez lungi bhi aapse. Please mera bracelet mujhe wapas kar dijiye taaki is baar hume connect karne wali koi nishani aapke paas na ho. Is baar kisi bhi tarah ka koi connection nahi chahiye mujhe naahi aapse naahi aapke pariwar se. (Opening her nuptial chain) Aur ye rahi humare khokhale rishte ki nishaani jo wapas karke jaa rahi hu. Ab wapas se kabhi ise mere paas lekar mat aana. Aur haa ek aur baat do din ke andar divorce papers mil jaayenge aapko. Sign karke mere paas bhijwa dena khud aane ki jarurat nahi hai. Main papera fast track pe submit karwaungi taaki jitni jaldi ho sake is rishte se ajadi mil jaaye mujhe bhi aur aapko bhi.

Ka : Akshu beta ye kya keh rahi hai.

Ak : Ab tak jis tarah se shaant the please ab bhi shaant rahiye. Ya phir yoon kahu jaaiye aapki behan ko aapki jarurat hai usne apna pati khoya hai bahut toot gayi hai wo. Wo behan jisne apne fayde ke liye apne bhai ka sauda kar diya tha Anisha ke case me.

Ma : Akshu ye kya keh rahi hai beta.

Ak : Sach hi to keh rahi hu Bade Papa. Jab main Kairav Bhaiya ke saath Mauritius me thi tab Mrs Aarohi Birla ek ek information Goenka house ki Mahima Mam ko paas out karti thi aur wo bhi kis liye kyu ki Mahima mam ne uska licence renew karwa diya tha. Main us waqt apne is bhaiya ke saath thi mera rishta bhi daav pe lag gaya us wajah se. Asli wajah peeche chhut gayi sabko ye laga ki unhi ke support ke liye main bhaagi thi phir bhi main aaj galat hu aur ye sab ke nazar me mahaan hai. As usual Aarohi kabhi galat nahi hoti na. Aaj yaha sabne kuch na kuch khoya hai. Kisi ne apna pati , kisi ne apna beta , kisi ne apna Bhai aur mera kya maine to kuch bhi nahi khoya hai na. Jo mere pet me tha wo bhi mera kuch nahi tha aur naahi Neil se mera kuch rishta tha. Meri galti kya hai meri galti ye hai ki mujhe pain ho raha tha to ho raha tha. Pain me rehte rehte mar jaana chahiye tha maine kyun Shefali Bhabhi ko bataya ki mujhe pain ho raha hai. Aaj pata hai kya lag raha hai. Aaj lag raha hai Kaash main Naira Mumma ke saath hi khatam ho gayi hoti to aaj ye kahani nahi hoti.

Ma : Bas meri bachhi. Chal ab yaha se.

Ak : Bade Papa mera samaan hai wo sab leke aa jaati hu. Ab yaha apni ek bhi yaad nahi chhodna chahati taaki in logo ko mujhe bad dua dene ka mauka mile. Aaj se Akshara Goenka apni kismat khud likhegi aur strong banke dikhayegi sabko.

She went upstairs and took all her belongings. She came back again and forwarded her hands towards Abhimanyu.

Ak : Ye raha wo Star jo aapne mujhe gift giya tha. (She threw that star in the hall) Jab rishta hi nahi to gift ka kya matlab aur ab mujhe mera bracelet lauta dijiye.

Abhimanyu was crying but was unable to say anything. Because he was shattered today he lost three of his most important relations one his kid brother, his kids and his life Akshu. Two because of situation and other one because of his lack of trust. He silently gave that bracelet to her.

Man : Akshu beta

Ak : Akshara Mam Akshara. Main Akshu nahi hu ab. Aaj yaha Akshu ki bhi death ho gayi. Aaj se Akshara Goenka ka naya janm hua hai. Ab tak jis ladki ke liye uska rishta sab kuch hua karta tha aaj us ladki ne apna sab kuch Neil ke saath hi jala ke khatam kar diya. Ab se koi rishta , koi bond mere liye kuch bhi nahi hai. Ek nayi Akshara hu. Aur aap logo ke liye Akshara bhi nahi hu. Anjaan logo Miss Goenka hi bula sakte hai mujhe.

Ma : Chal meri bachhi.

Ak : Bade Papa ek request karu.

Ma : Haa meri bachhi bol na.

Ak : Mujhe kuch din Naira Mumma ke kareeb rehna hai. Please main us jagah jaa sakti hu jaha Naira Mumma ki yaadein basti hai. Aur waise bhi Goenka House me mere mute bhaiya honge aur unhe apne saamne dekh paana ab mujhse nahi ho paayega. Jab bhi jarurat huyi wo mere liye shaant the to ab mujhe unse koi wasta nahi rakhna.

Ma : Beta tujhe is halat me akele chhodne ka dil nahi kar raha hai. Koi baat nahi tu waha Jaa thode time me hum bhi waha apna samaan lekar aa jaayenge. Main driver ko keh deta hu ki tujhe waha drop kar de aur hum taxi lekar chale jaate hai Goenka House.

Ak : Ji Bade Papa.

Saying this Akshara left from there.

Man: Abhi beta Akshu jaa rahi hai. Rok le use.

Ab : Jaa rahi hai to nikala bhi to aapne hi hai. Jab use dhakka diya tab nahi samajh aaya. Har baar ki tarah aadhi baat pata thi aapko aur wahi aadhi baat aapne mujhe batayi. Ab mujhe Akshu ki situation samajh aa rahi hai. Sirat Maa ki death ke baad wo kyun Aarohi ke har ek matter me uske saath rehti thi isliye nahi kyu ki wo guilty thi balki isliye kyu ki usne waada kiya tha apni Marti huyi maa se aur aaj main bhi apne marte huye Bhai se kiye waade ki wajah se bandh gaya. Haadse me apna Bhai aur apne bachhon ko to kho hi diya maine aur mujhse meri jindagi chheen li aap logo ne. Apne Bhai se kiye waade ki wajah se main aisa bandh gaya ki galat ko galat bhi nahi keh paa raha. Khair Akshu ko to maine apni khud ki wajah se khoya hai. Mujhe us par trust karna chahiye tha lekin main nahi kar paaya. Sach hi kaha usne maine use kabhi prioritise nahi kiya apni life me. Kabhi behan ke liye , kabhi bhai ke liye , kabhi maa ke liye. Har baar use second choice hi rakha. Wo jab tak mere hisaab se chalti thi use apna maana aur jaha wo thoda bhi idhar udhar huyi maine hi use akela kiya. Ab jab sab kuch kho chuka hu tab samajh aa raha hai ki kitna akela hu main. (To Aarohi) Galti tumne bahut saari ki hai. Maine apne Bhai ko waada kiya hai isliye Aaj se tumhare bachhe ki saari responsibility meri hai par usse jyada mujhse kuch expect mat karna.

Saying this he left from their. And with this all ended.

I can't even read fanfic about them. The show has ruined Abhira.

Akshara sirf IF pe hi bolti hai 👍🏼

thanks for the tag love ❤️

Loved it 😍I hope they would hv shown something like this in the serial.looking forward to more 💖

Awesome story

Atleast you should have shown that one of their kid is alive

Then Birlas especially abhi and manjiri will be more guilty

Wow this is something I want to see in the show also. But our bad luck 🤔

I really love your story nidz dear 🤗the way Akshu gave back to all including mute bhaiya 😆

Amazing😉

Yeh kyun kiya khuda

Chapter 2

Akshara reached Singhaniya Mansion and after sometime even Manish and Suwarna reached there along with Mimi. They found Akshu engrossed in Kaira and all others pics.

Ak : Mimi aapne bataya tha ki Mumma Papa ki life me bhi bahut separation aaye the. Badi Mumma aapne to Mumma ko ghar se nikala tha na Shubham chachu ke death ke baad. Sayad Mumma ki kismat hi mili mujhe bhi. Jab bhi Mumma ko jarurat padi Papa ne unka saath nahi diya aur mere saath bhi wahi hua. Trust ka majaak bana diya , second chance ka majaak bana diya , mere dukh ka majaak bana diya , humare rishte ka majaak bana diya are ek tarah se meri jindagi ka hi majaak bana diya Birla family ne. Ab mujhe Birla family ka ek bhi member apni life me nahi chahiye. Aaj Akshu ne khud ko kho ke naya janm paaya hai. Ab ye Akshu kisi ko khud ka fayda uthane nahi degi. Kisi ko bhi khud par ilzaam laga ke paar hone nahi degi. Ab is Akshu se jo bhi takrayega use uske kiye ka anjaam bhugatna padega. Aaj Neil ki chita ki aag me family lover Akshu bhi jal gayi.

Mi : Akshu beta sambhaal khud ko. Dekh teri tabiyat theek nahi hai. Chal tu thoda araam kar le.

Su : Akshuuuuuuuu..........

They saw Akshu loosing consciousness. Manish immediately called the doctor. In some time doctor came and did Akshu's check up.

D : Lagta hai bahut jyada stress le liya hai inhone. Aap sab ko khayal rakhna chahiye na. Aap log itne bade hai aapko to pata hona chahiye aisi halat me kitne care ki jarurat hoti hai.

Su : Aisi halat. Matlab Doctor sahab.

D : Aisi halat matlab aapki beti pregnant hai aapko pata nahi hai kya.

Ma : Kya. Lekin abhi aaj hi to doctor ne kaha ki Akshu ka miscarriage ho gaya.

Till then Akshu came to consciousness.

Ak : Kya hua doctor.

D : Akshara ji aapko apna dhyaan rakhna chahiye. Aap pregnant hai aur itna stress lekar baithi hai.

Ak : Doctor par ye kaise possible hai. Mujhe aaj subah bahut jor se dard ho raha tha to maine gynaecologist se check up karwaya unhone bataya ki babies ab nahi rahe.

D : Pure achhe se check up kiya unhone.

Ak : Haa unhone kaha ki heart hearts missing hai babies ki.

D : Are mera kehne ka matlab hai ki unhone bade dhyaan se check up kiya kyu ki kai baar aisa hota hai ki shock ki wajah se thodi der ke liye heartbeat missing ho jaati hai lekin iska matlab ye bilkul bhi nahi hota hai ki babies miscarry ho gye hai.

Ak : Iska matlab mere babies bilkul sahi salamat hai.

D : Ji, Aur aapko to pata hi hai aapko khud ka khayal kaise rakhna hai. Ye kuch medicines likh de raha hu. Inko le lijiyega stress ki wajah se jo bhi weakness aap feel kar rahi hai wo kam ho jaayegi.

Manish dropped Doctor till the door. And then he came back to the room where Akshara was resting.

Su : Agar babies sahi salamat hai to Abhimanyu ko iske baare me pata hona chahiye na. Aakhir wo in bachho ka baap hai.

Ak : Nahi Badi Mumma, doctor Birla sirf sperm donator hai. Aap sab ko meri kasam hai. Mere bachhe sahi salamat hai is baat ki khabar bas hum chaaron tak hi rehni chahiye. Naahi other Goenka's ko pata chalni chahiye aur naahi Birla's me kisi ko. Main apne bachhon pe kisi ko haq jatane nahi dungi. Wo to Kanha ji ka sukra hai ki mere babies theek hai.

Guys one thing even though Aarohi lost her husband. But for me she is an evil lady and all the kaands she had done till now is unredeemable.

From here story takes a leap of six years.

In this six years Akshu ke babies are five years old. They are much more intelligent than her age and know how to give back to those who are bad to them. They hated their father to the core as they have learnt that their father never stood for their mother. And this things they got to know not because Akshu told them but because they heard Badi Mumma talking to Bade Papa. Mimi died 5 years back and at that time Akshu was in Mumbai to do her recording so Birla's and other Goenka's came to funeral but never got to know about the babies. Akshu got the news of Mimi's demise and was very saddened she wanted to come back but Bade Papa was with her in her decision so he forbid her to come back as her coming back will give the Birla's insight of her pregnancy and then they will start their drama.

Akshu named her kids : Ahaan Goenka and Aadiya Goenka. Both the kids loved their Mumma very much and was very close to their Bade Nanu and Badi Nani. Akshu is now a very famous singer and songwriter. Currently she is living in Mumbai with her kids and Nanny who became her dearest friend.

Ak (coming back from work) : Ahu , Adu kaha hai mere babies dekho Mumma aapke liye kya leke aayi hai.

Both the babies came running to her and hugged her waist.

Babies together: Haa Mumma bolo na kya laaye ho aap.

Ak : Pehle aap log batao kya aap log good babies the Rashi Maasi ke saath ya aaj bhi aap dono ne mil ke unhe pareshan kiya.

Ba : Nahi mumma hum ek dam achhe babies the aur humne Rashi maasi ko bilkul pareshan nahi kiya.

Ak : Okk to surprise ye hai ki hum sab matlab Adu , Ayu , Mumma aur Rashi maasi sab Udaipur jaa rahe hai aapke Bade Nanu aur Badi Nani se milne.

Ba : Yaaayyyyyy !!!!! (Both the kids started dancing in the excitement they forgot everything )

Next day was their flight to Udaipur. Manish and Suwarna arranged a Puja for Mimi as it is five years since her demise. Akshu reached Singhaniya Mansion. Both the kids ran inside without waiting for Akshu. Akshu along with Rashi came at the entrance to see the shocking view in front of her. Everyone from Birla as well as Goenka present in the hall with Mimi ka with garland in the middle. The truth which she kept hidden till long is now infront of everyone. But what to do agar ab sab saamne aana hi hai to aa hi jaaye she will not try to be understanding.

Ak : Bade Papa aapne bataya nahi ki sab aa gaye hai. Mujhe to laga ki bas hum sab honge. Oh haa mera phone off tha na flight me. Bachhe itne excited the aane ke liye Nanu Papa ke paas ki kal unhone raat bhar na hi mujhe sone diya Naa hi khud soye. Puri raat masti Kari aur usme main phone charge karna hi bhul gayi.
Chaliye puja shuru karte hai Bade Papa.

Man, Abhimanyu , Aarohi , Kairav (together) : Akshu

Akshu completely ignored all. And headed with Bade Papa towards the photo of Mimi. She took flowers in her hand and showered it on Mimi's photo.

Ak : 5 saal ho gaye Mimi. Aapke humse door gaye. Aisa lag raha hai sadiya beet gayi aapko dekhe. Kitni khush huyi thi aap mere babies ki news sunke aur dekhiye na isse pehle aap mere babies ko dekh paati kanha ji ne aapko apne paas bula liya. Mimi aap jaha bhi ho aap waha se hume dekh rahi ho na. Humare uper apna aashirwad banaye rakhna.

Everyone in the Birla's as well as other Goenka's were shell shocked to see Akshara with two babies. Abhimanyu was shattered that Akshara never told him about their kids. Manjari was emotional to see her grand kids in front of her. Aarohi who was guilty because the one thing she thought she can use to manipulate Manjari against akshara was lost. She was manipulating Manjari that she should think marrying her with Abhimanyu was walking lost in her dreams and slipped from stairs resulting in her miscarriage. And from then Manjari is taunting her for not taking care of her Neil's aakhiri nishani. Now she is left with no one with her as all her attention gaining tricks went down the lane. And she got to know that Manjari is no one's saga. What she did to Akshu comes back to her once she lost the only hathiyar to manipulate all. Now she wants Akshu back in Birla House at any cost as that will only be able to save her from this life threatening guilt.

Ma : (To the kids who were still hugging his legs) Are mere pyaare pyaare bachhe aa gaye tum log. Akshu beta aane me koi dikkat to nahi huyi na.

Ak : Nahi bade papa sb theek tha. Rashi bhi saath me thi na.

Ar : Akshu

Kids : Ae Bitch jo bhi ho aap. Meri mumma ko Akshu sirf nanu papa , Nani mumma aur hum bula sakte hai. Strangers ko allowed nahi hai to dhyaan se okk.

Man :( lovingly) Bachho wo aapki maasi aur chachi hai. Ye sab aapko kisne seekha diya hai. Aise baat karte hai kya apne bado se. Aur main aap dono ki daadi.

Kids : Haa chudail. Daadi mt boliye khud ko.

Ak : Ayu , Adu kya laga rakha hai. Maana ki aapki maasi Bitch aur so called daadi chudail hai lekin aapko unhe muh pe nahi bolna na beta. Mumma ne aapko bado ki respect sikhayi hai na.

Ab : Akshu ye kaisi language sikha rhi ho tum mere bachho ko.

Ayaan : (To Abhi) Aapko kya alag se samjhana hoga ki Mumma ko Akshu nahi bol sakte aap. (To Akshu) Yes Mumma hum aapke best kids hai sab samjhte hai lekin agar bade beech me tokenge to unhe batana hoga ki hum bhi bachhe nahi hai sab jaante hai ki humari Mumma ke saath kya kya hua hai. Humari so called daadi ne aapko dhakka diya aur so called daddy dear mute bane dekhte rahe.

Ak : Rashi bachho ko unke room me leke jaao please.

Rashi took the kids to there room. Here in the hall. Birla's tried to talk sweetly with Akshu.

Man : Akshu beta kaisi hai.

Ak : Mam it's A. Rockstar A for you all. Mujhe Akshu jaisa ki mere bachho ne kaha sirf mere apne bulate hai aur aap log wo nahi hai to next time apni limit cross karne ki galti mat karna warna mujhe legal notice dena hoga apne naam ki copyright wala kyu ki main kuch keh doon aur aap log seedhi tarah se wo maan le aisa to hone wala nahi hai. Aap log me to thodi si bhi self respect nahi hai rishta khatam kar liya aap logo se phir bhi muh utha ke chale aaye is ghar ko bhi apni selfishness se ganda karne. Khair Mimi ke liye puja thi isiliye maine kuch nahi kaha. Ab puja sampanna huyi aap sab jaa sakte hai yaha se. Main kaafi time baad aayi hu yaha to APNI FAMILY ke saath time spend karna chahti hu.

Ab : Akshu naraaz thi samajh aata hai lekin itni nafrat karne lagi mujhse ki humare bachho ke baare me bhi kuch nahi bataya tumne.

Ak : Number 1. Humare nahi mere. Jaake kahi bhi kisi bhi legal paper me dekh lo mere bachho ke kahi bhi apna naam nahi paaoge. Mere bachho ke liye main kaafi hu. Doctor Birla aap apni MAA ki haa me haa milaiye aur mujhe aur mere bachho ko jeene dijiye. And Number 2. Sirf sperm donate kar dene se koi kisi ka father nahi ban jaata. Are aapke paas to itna bhi time nahi tha ki aap jaake gynaecologist se ek baar confirm bhi karte ki usne mera sahi se check up Kara hai ki nahi. Mujhe medical terms nhi samajh aate the aapko to aate the na. Lekin us waqt aap mumma's boy banne me busy the. Neil ki death sabke liye sadma thi mere liye bhi Bhai maana tha use maine lekin aapki maa ne mujhe uske liye blame kiya aur aap chup chap khade the to ab jis kone me us waqt the usi kone me wapas chale jaaiye request hai. Bina wajah ke rishta jatane ki jarurat nahi hai. Kyu ki aap logo ka sach jaan ne ke baad jitni nafrat mere bachhe aapse karne lage hai na wo pyaar me is janam me to nahi badal sakta. Bekaar ki koshish karke koi fayda nahi. Chaliye izzat se nikal jaaiye yaha se warna dhakke maar ke bhi nikal sakti hu main wo kya hai na experience hai mujhe.

And then Birla's left from their. Akshu who was seething in anger took water from the table and gulped it in a go.

To be continued..........

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Wow this is something I want to see in the show also. But our bad luck 🤔

I really love your story nidz dear 🤗the way Akshu gave back to all including mute bhaiya 😆

Amazing😉

Thank u bhavs for always encouraging me

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Awesome story

Atleast you should have shown that one of their kid is alive

Then Birlas especially abhi and manjiri will be more guilty

Kids are alive yaar. Both the kids are alive. 🤣🤣🤣🤣