Wo Lamhe S#2/pt 22/23/24-pg 49/50/52- 11 dec - Page 12

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi Priya

thanks for updating


Part 10

Splendid update.... brilliantly written

oh so Maan does not like to see Geet sad nor close to Dev

well he holds Geet

Geet as affected by his touch

Dev was amazed seeing Maan hold Geet

of cos Geet questions Maan

she is indeed stunned seeing him smile

liked that Maan introduced Geet as a family friend

Dev was clearly shocked with Meera's rudeness

great that he confronted her

seems like she was about to reveal that she likes him

alas Maan arrived

Maan was again upset when Geet hold Dev's hand

loved this jealous and possessive Maan

glad that he makes an excuse and asks Geet to go with him

Geet's response was reasonable

but Maan was angry

Dev's reaction was justified

Maan had no answer!

he has yet to realise that he is falling for Geet

at least Geet went to meet the clients

as expected Maan was relieved when Geet said she has no one in her life

so Geet apologised to Maan

her confusion with his behavior is understandable

pleased that Geet is falling for Maan

Meera's thoughts well portrayed

will she understand that she loves Dev?

good that Dev wants Meera to confide in him

Dev and Meera are surprised seeing Maan and Geet together

Geet does not like when someone drinks

Gosh Maan and Geet argue again

wow Maaneet lost in each other


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Prologue

The girls are being selected for Maan and Dev.

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Posted: 3 years ago

part 1

Meera is older, so they probably will match her with Maan and Geet with Dev.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Geet called Maan a driver. That will not make him very favorable towards her.

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Maan is seeing red. Red from anger and red from danger.

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Posted: 3 years ago

They have a plan to scare the girls with ghost stories.

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Dev is slipping a little. But Maan is there to control him.

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Posted: 3 years ago

The boys are thinking they are old fashioned. The ladies are impressed. Both are probably under the wrong impression.

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Posted: 3 years ago

part 2

They managed to scare the girls. So far they escaped.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Now Maan is planning to have the girls leave the job soon.

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